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[Fan Fiction]  Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (BBB OC Story) (Completed Until Further Notice)

Oct. 26, 2020  5:11 PM
 
(Oct. 26, 2020  5:10 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Oct. 26, 2020  4:03 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: This is so cool. Man I liked the part where Lane had to help out Athena and she was embarassed.
ngl, that part was honestly my favorite thing ive ever wrote... EVER

Lane having to helps his sister out. Probally the nicest thing Lane has done ever after feeding Harry lol
Oct. 26, 2020  7:43 PM
 
Brief Summary For Chapter 5: White Sun! Angelic Burst!
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Oct. 26, 2020  7:44 PM
 
(Oct. 26, 2020  7:43 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Brief Summary For Chapter 5: White Sun! Angelic Burst!
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nice
Oct. 26, 2020  11:55 PM
 
Chapter 2: How Beys Are Meant To Battle!
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Oct. 27, 2020  2:25 AM
 
(Oct. 26, 2020  11:55 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Chapter 2: How Beys Are Meant To Battle!
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Oh god. They are bullying Athena. Man now that was what I call a true chapter
Oct. 27, 2020  2:57 AM
 
Chapter 3: The Great Legend Battle!
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Oct. 27, 2020  3:01 AM
 
(Oct. 27, 2020  2:57 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Chapter 3: The Great Legend Battle!
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Very nice story. But it is sad to know Poor Athena had been affected by Lean's evilness and flare
Oct. 27, 2020  10:00 PM
 
Chapter 4: Upgrade! Angelic Adeona!
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Lanes battle with Sisco is going to be awesome!
Oct. 28, 2020  4:54 PM
 
Mid Series Villain
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Oct. 28, 2020  4:55 PM
 
(Oct. 28, 2020  4:54 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Mid Series Villain
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Ooh this is gonna be interesting.
Oct. 28, 2020  11:33 PM
 
So like G Warriors, there will be a bey contest

User will be decided by me and will more than likely be a boy

Rules

~Bey must be creative (meaning no pre-existing bey evolutions)~

~must be a SuperKing bey (No Limit Break System Beys)

~must specify type and parts (preferably no abbreviations like Ev', please type the full name out)~

~You can put requests in this thread or you can PM to me with the title "Athena's Story Bey Request"~

~Deadline is November 9th~

~Winner will be announced on November 10th 7:00PM CST~


Excited to see what beys you come up with
Oct. 29, 2020  12:14 AM
 
(Oct. 28, 2020  11:33 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: So like G Warriors, there will be a bey contest

User will be decided by me and will more than likely be a boy

Rules

~Bey must be creative (meaning no pre-existing bey evolutions)~

~must be a SuperKing bey (No Limit Break System Beys)

~must specify type and parts (preferably no abbreviations like Ev', please type the full name out)~

~You can put requests in this thread or you can PM to me with the title "Athena's Story Bey Request"~

~Deadline is November 9th~

~Winner will be announced on November 10th 7:00PM CST~


Excited to see what beys you come up with

kai kimidori brother of quon kimidori and Aquos Kraken 3s its like proof but better eternal stamina type
Aqua counter when knocked of balence the 3s chassis makes the bey recover aqous spear is like sheild crash
he was a snake pit member but learned from valt the true way of blading he was once euoropean champ
Oct. 29, 2020  12:19 AM
 
(Oct. 29, 2020  12:14 AM)beykid44 Wrote:
(Oct. 28, 2020  11:33 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: So like G Warriors, there will be a bey contest

User will be decided by me and will more than likely be a boy

Rules

~Bey must be creative (meaning no pre-existing bey evolutions)~

~must be a SuperKing bey (No Limit Break System Beys)

~must specify type and parts (preferably no abbreviations like Ev', please type the full name out)~

~You can put requests in this thread or you can PM to me with the title "Athena's Story Bey Request"~

~Deadline is November 9th~

~Winner will be announced on November 10th 7:00PM CST~


Excited to see what beys you come up with

kai kimidori brother of quon kimidori and Aquos Kraken 3s its like proof but better eternal stamina type
Aqua counter when knocked of balence the 3s chassis  makes the bey recover aqous spear is like sheild crash
he was a snake pit member but learned from valt the true way of blading he was once euoropean champ

Im deciding the character and what is the Driver?
Oct. 29, 2020  12:22 AM
 
(Oct. 29, 2020  12:19 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Oct. 29, 2020  12:14 AM)beykid44 Wrote: kai kimidori brother of quon kimidori and Aquos Kraken 3s its like proof but better eternal stamina type
Aqua counter when knocked of balence the 3s chassis  makes the bey recover aqous spear is like sheild crash
he was a snake pit member but learned from valt the true way of blading he was once euoropean champ

Im deciding the character and what is the Driver?

oh sorry Aquos kraken 3s eternal
could i show you some stuff im working on Smile
do you think the bey i made was creative and may i change my driver DeltaZakuro
Oct. 29, 2020  12:46 AM
 
Note: You're requests will be graded based on these categories.

Creativity
Part Choices
Detail Of Bey Description
How It Appeals To Me
Gimmicks

Total: /25
(Oct. 29, 2020  12:22 AM)beykid44 Wrote:
(Oct. 29, 2020  12:19 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Im deciding the character and what is the Driver?

oh sorry Aquos kraken 3s eternal
could i show you some stuff im working on Smile
do you think the bey i made was creative and may i change my driver DeltaZakuro
Sure, if you want.
Oct. 29, 2020  1:01 AM
 
Starlight Amaterios Crystal' 5A, more coming on that soon.
Oct. 29, 2020  1:01 AM
 
ok aquos kraken 3s Switch switch is a stamina type driver which is esentialy infinite achilles but a driver it has a free spining plate which removeable it has a metal outer plate pom plate and plastic. the kraken super chip is very special it adds two extra teeth for increased burst resistanceplus dual spin capabilities. the aquos ring has many gimmicks one of its  gimmiks is the ability to use its locking mechanis to change its spin pattern which only works with the switch driver. 3s is the proof frame but better. the bey is also blue because aquos=aqua plsu give your opinion DeltaZakuro
Oct. 29, 2020  1:17 AM
 
(Oct. 29, 2020  1:01 AM)Valtryek Aoi Wrote: Starlight Amaterios Crystal' 5A, more coming on that soon.
5A is on Xcalibur and is a Single Chassis.

Do you mind if I add a disk to Amaterios?
Oct. 29, 2020  1:18 AM
 
Raider Dragoon Destroy' 6A
Oct. 29, 2020  2:10 AM
 
(Oct. 29, 2020  1:17 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Oct. 29, 2020  1:01 AM)Valtryek Aoi Wrote: Starlight Amaterios Crystal' 5A, more coming on that soon.
5A is on Xcalibur and is a Single Chassis.

Do you mind if I add a disk to Amaterios?

Oh crud, 5A would have been the perfect number for this. Well, I'll go to 6A then.

Edit: Nevermind, 7A it is.
Starlight Amaterios Crystal' 5(7)A

Amaterios- Standard Sparking chip, pretty chill, a little bit of Gold with a Rainbow Helm and a Golden/Rainbow Sword with a diamond blue hilt
Starlight- 5 bladed ring that's outer perimeter is somewhat circular with five main contact points, each shaped differently for a different type of attack. Inner part has a little bit of gold metal, just a pinch.
5A, not 5A, %A, I mean 7A- Has five contact points that lines up with the ring, each being shaped like the ring to maximize the effects of each color. There are five colors, red, orange/yellow, green, blue, and purple all in a circle. I will go further into the specific effects later. 10 bladed mode is not that necessary. Rare chassis has the same rainbow colors but with gold colored metal in the center of it.
Crystal'- Basically Ultimate Reboot', but the semi-flat is made out of a crystallized material that makes the bey glide on the stadium surface like Universe, giving it stamina and speed in trade for raw power. After the bey 'reboots' the blue rubber comes into contact, giving the bey a friction-filled boost of speed, faster than the first mode, but with a lot less stamina.

Now, the specific colors, (each color has the same amount of space on the ring and chassis)
Purple or Amethyst- 3 small edges for barrage attack
Red or Ruby- 2 small edges for barrage attack
Green or Emerald- upper attack blade
Blue or Sapphire- smash attack blade
Orange or Jasper- straight attack blade

Meh, I wrote too much. There are more details if you pick me I guess.
Oct. 29, 2020  4:10 AM
 
oh DeltaZakuro did i meantion its dual spin and can use its switch driver to actuallty switch spins in the end of a battle for more lad the zombie lad thing is optional for story i dont want it to be op
Oct. 29, 2020  10:09 PM
 
Bey Contest rules have been added to first post!
Oct. 29, 2020  10:24 PM
 
Mystery Deathscyther 1A' Hunter'
Toxic Kerbeus 1D' Around Atomic'
Oct. 29, 2020  10:28 PM
 
(Oct. 29, 2020  10:24 PM)BladerUmarWBO Wrote: Mystery Deathscyther 1A' Hunter'
Toxic Kerbeus 1D' Around Atomic'

your bey needs to be ORIGINAL/CREATIVE!

meaning no pre-existing bey evolutions.

edit: Ken and Daigo are also not in this.
Oct. 29, 2020  10:30 PM
 
DeltaZakuro You forgot to place me on the list of participants
Never mind that was a different fanfic
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