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[Fan Fiction]  Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (BBB OC Story) (Completed Until Further Notice)

Oct. 14, 2021  11:39 PM
 
(Oct. 14, 2021  11:26 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: Will Athena become #1? also I’d kinda like Valt to be #1 while Athena is champion kinda like Aiga and Valt during sparking- sincerely a valt fan, also we are frowned upon in this community cause of some of us

Can't really answer that without spoiling anything key to the story. Aigas title as champion will stay as Athena has no interest in the title of world champion and has other plans on her agenda.

Valt has appeared more in the recent chapters but I won't say anything else until more of the story progresses.
Oct. 15, 2021  12:16 AM
 
Ok I got it
And btw I’m ok with spoilers so maybe a pm or something
Oct. 15, 2021  8:23 PM
 
New Adeona Evolution

Sovereign Adeona.Barrage.8A

Sovereign Ring (Sv) - A Right Spin Sparking Ring that has 4 large and thick blades that have rubber for absorbing and dealing strong attacks. It also has 4 smaller blades for dealing follow up attacks.

Adeona IV (Ad4) - Unlike its Dual Spin Predecessors, Adeona IV is a right spin only chip that features an Adeona motif. The chip has Metal in it followed by a blue metal chip Core, the chip also features a Burst Stopper just like Belial2

8A Chassis - An attack single chassis that features a sharp design and a very heavy weight

Barrage' Driver (Ba') - A driver with an integrated disk built into it. The driver has a POM semi flat as a primary contact point on a Strong launch. When the bey slows down, two tabs retract and the semi flat tip retracts to a rubber hole plate which resembles Almights tip which makes the bey more mobile and fast

User: Athena Valhalla

Special Moves: Sovereign Symphony, Barrage Dance
Athenas Fight Song: Bring It On!
Spoiler (Click to View)
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Thoughts?
Oct. 16, 2021  6:47 AM
 
That seems pretty good! Love the rhymes and word choice Smile
Oct. 16, 2021  11:36 AM
 
I love the song so much! Now where have I heard that before?
Oct. 18, 2021  2:52 AM
 
I'll be reading this chapter very shortly...
Oct. 19, 2021  5:07 AM
 
S2 Chapter 22
https://www.wattpad.com/1143300405-story...lade-burst
Oct. 19, 2021  6:04 PM
 
New Lucifer Evo

Dark Matter Lucifer.Dropper

Dark Matter Lucifer Layer (dLc) - A right spin layer with a Lucifer motif. The layer is incredibly bulky and a similar shape to a right spin Dread base. The gimmick is when on a strong shoot, 2 cyan colored blades will extend and it activates burst stoppers. The layer also features 2 symmetrical metal blades on it and it has a metal center.

Dropper Driver (Dp) a Fused driver that has a very heavy weight featuring a ball tip which is shaped exactly like Massive but made of metal which is surrounded by a POM Ring which is separated from the ball, The gimmick is when on a strong shoot; The POM Ring is raised and is stationary when on a weak/moderate shoot, the ring is lowered and is free spin . The driver also has pretty tight spring which makes the bey nearly unburstable.

Owner: Lane Valhalla

Special Moves: Dark Matter Break, Dark Matter Wall, Dark Matter Disaster, Dark Matter Press
Oct. 25, 2021  1:52 AM
 
New Episode out soon, its more of a training/filler episode but i think it'll still be enjoyable.
S2 Chapter 23
https://www.wattpad.com/1145994319-story...lade-burst
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Ratings/reviews are much appreciated
Oct. 25, 2021  5:00 PM
 
New Hyperion and Helios Coming to the series: Inferno Hyperion.Metal Xceed+X.7A and Laser Helios.Metal Zone+Z.4B. Full Info on them soon.
Oct. 25, 2021  5:03 PM
 
trust me balanced meta
Oct. 25, 2021  10:33 PM
 
I’d Like To suggest A Valkyrie Evolution
Chip: Valkyrie 2- weight 6.7 g: A chip with a Lot of metal on it and a metal chip core
Ring: Champion- Weight 13.8 grams: A three winged ring with 3 rubber blades
Chassis: 9A- weight 51.2 grams: 2A but with more metal
Driver: Xtreme’

Virtual Stats: Valkyrie 2 Attack:3, Defense:0, Stamina: 0, Champion Attack:5, Defense:1, Stamina: 1, 9A: Attack:5, Defense:0, Stamina:0, Xtreme’ Attack:3, Defense:0, Stamina:0
Oct. 25, 2021  11:04 PM
 
(Oct. 25, 2021  10:33 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: I’d Like To suggest A Valkyrie Evolution
Chip: Valkyrie 2- weight 6.7 g: A chip with a Lot of metal on it and a metal chip core
Ring: Champion- Weight 13.8 grams: A three winged ring with 3 rubber blades
Chassis: 9A- weight 51.2 grams: 2A but with more metal
Driver: Xtreme’

Virtual Stats: Valkyrie 2 Attack:3, Defense:0, Stamina: 0, Champion Attack:5, Defense:1, Stamina: 1, 9A: Attack:5, Defense:0, Stamina:0, Xtreme’ Attack:3, Defense:0, Stamina:0

Valt isn't getting an Evolution this season, sorry.
Oct. 26, 2021  10:14 PM
 
When will he is it for lane and Athena to outshine valt or something
Oct. 26, 2021  10:44 PM
 
(Oct. 26, 2021  10:14 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: When will he is it for lane and Athena to outshine valt or something

That is literally not the point.

Lanes goal is to be the king of the Blading world while also have his Flare reach as high as it can get but in a very dangerous manner.

Athenas goal is to save her brother from ruining himself due to his overwhelming power and that has pretty much been set in stone since the very first episode.

While for Lane it makes sense because he is the villain and he needs strong opponents in order to grow his Flare but for Athena, it doesn't fall under her main objective. Sure she needs people to battle so she gets stronger but outshining them and taking their spotlight is not what she cares about in the end.

Valkyrie getting an Evolution just doesnt make sense and just doesn't fit when Valt has played the role of supporting character from the start of the story.

Hope this answered your question.
Oct. 26, 2021  11:55 PM
 
Thanks DeltaZakuro
I just wanted some bey imporvements
*improvements
Oct. 29, 2021  3:17 AM
 
New Chapter will hopefully be out Sunday or Monday, not sure yet but I should have it out around that time frame.
Oct. 29, 2021  12:13 PM
 
Ok got it✅
Oct. 31, 2021  3:44 AM
 
New Episode coming out tomorrow after my halloween party, definitely some new lore and some fun stuff coming.
Season 2 Chapter 24: Final Stage! Adeonas True Awakening!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1146368787-story...lade-burst
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Oct. 31, 2021  2:32 PM
 
(Oct. 31, 2021  3:44 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: New Episode coming out tomorrow after my halloween party, definitely some new lore and some fun stuff coming.
Season 2 Chapter 24: Final Stage! Adeonas True Awakening!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1146368787-story...lade-burst
UnseenBurst GenesisBlader

amazing chapter! it kinda shows how strong athena can get! however, as my ducky boi once said... "ratings are overrated" lol. also pretty hyped for the next arc!
Oct. 31, 2021  2:51 PM
 
No! Shu how could you! You are insulting Spriggan’s Name!
Oct. 31, 2021  2:55 PM
 
(Oct. 31, 2021  2:32 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote:
(Oct. 31, 2021  3:44 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: New Episode coming out tomorrow after my halloween party, definitely some new lore and some fun stuff coming.
Season 2 Chapter 24: Final Stage! Adeonas True Awakening!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1146368787-story...lade-burst
UnseenBurst GenesisBlader

amazing chapter! it kinda shows how strong athena can get! however, as my ducky boi once said... "ratings are overrated" lol. also pretty hyped for the next arc!

(Oct. 31, 2021  2:51 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: No! Shu how could you! You are insulting Spriggan’s Name!
oh yeah i forgot shu might be turning evil again
Oct. 31, 2021  4:34 PM
 
Shu you traitor!! Your Mother should be very disappointed in you. In all seriousness, it was kind of a shock when Shu admitted that he was going to go down the same Path Lean did just to bring him back. Shows you how much Shu cares about others and less about himself and his intentions
Oct. 31, 2021  6:50 PM
 
shu turning evil is a nice plot element
Well I started a new page
Nov. 02, 2021  4:19 AM
 
Also congrats unseen for participating in a tournament for the first time also you got decent br points
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