[Fan Fiction]  Hollow's Beyblade fic thread

Aaaaaaaa
And deleted, tada
Chapter 6 is here, and is 1 page longer. Quality wise, i'd say it's better. Normally, the beginning of a fic is bad, but then it gets better over time (there are exceptions, and I'm not one of them). Also, 'LJ-Blader' Character is here (Hyto is going to have his "moment"(pun intended) on the next chapter). If anyone wants to get pinned on new chapters, please let me know!

(So yeah, deleted chapters are fun. Sorry if you want to read to original source but it is pretty bad imo. Maybe because I have high standards or smth)

I rushed a little bit at the end due to irl stuff. (from the hyto battle to the end)
nice episode! for it to be "rushed" it was good and i enjoyed it!
Awesome! You did Hyto really well. I am excited to see how this story expands!
(Aug. 21, 2021  10:59 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: Awesome! You did Hyto really well. I am excited to see how this story expands!

I'm going to be honest with you. I'm also excited to see how the story turns out. (I'm unpredictable, even for myself (but I have a general idea on plot))

Anyways, now that I have a 3d printer. I'll spent some time on 3d modeling. So I can think of 1 chapter per week (for garanteed good quality)
Here, have a character.
Character:
.
His bey:
If someone have already seen this character, I'll say that my original plan was using it here.
Bad chapter? Nah, only got a bit rushed.

(Chapter? I don't see any *Ignores Unseen reply*)
(Aug. 27, 2021  9:50 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Bad chapter? Nah, only got a bit rushed.


Hollow are you calling me out for doing your character dirty? Lol! This chapter was awesome, I'm going to assume that they're going to meet Percy sooner or later since well he's the World Champion, I'm kinda shocked that nobody said anything or mentioned him yet lol, (Percy will dominate all of them and laugh as he bursts all of their beys with Brine Poseidon)
(Aug. 27, 2021  9:57 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Aug. 27, 2021  9:50 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Bad chapter? Nah, only got a bit rushed.


Hollow are you calling me out for doing your character dirty? Lol! This chapter was awesome, I'm going to assume that they're going to meet Percy sooner or later since well he's the World Champion, I'm kinda shocked that nobody said anything or mentioned him yet lol, (Percy will dominate all of them and laugh as he bursts all of their beys with Brine Poseidon)

Percy will appear on arc 3 (I think, not sure, maybe earlier). And Clio only said that because he's an [redacted], if you get what I mean. Also, yeah, he will dominate, but I'm planning on add close calls.
(Aug. 27, 2021  9:59 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:
(Aug. 27, 2021  9:57 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Hollow are you calling me out for doing your character dirty? Lol! This chapter was awesome, I'm going to assume that they're going to meet Percy sooner or later since well he's the World Champion, I'm kinda shocked that nobody said anything or mentioned him yet lol, (Percy will dominate all of them and laugh as he bursts all of their beys with Brine Poseidon)

Percy will appear on arc 3 (I think, not sure, maybe earlier). And Clio only said that because he's an [redacted], if you get what I mean. Also, yeah, he will dominate, but I'm planning on add close calls.

I know I say this a lot but you're seriously doing an awesome job making a Spin-Off for Beyjitzu, you've covered everything I've wanted to see in a spin-off and more! Also, anyone is able to make a Spin Off of my fanfics that you find interesting, just please, don't claim the whole thing as yours and let me know like Hollowmind did
(Aug. 27, 2021  10:04 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Aug. 27, 2021  9:59 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Percy will appear on arc 3 (I think, not sure, maybe earlier). And Clio only said that because he's an [redacted], if you get what I mean. Also, yeah, he will dominate, but I'm planning on add close calls.

I know I say this a lot but you're seriously doing an awesome job making a Spin-Off for Beyjitzu, you've covered everything I've wanted to see in a spin-off and more!  Also, anyone is able to make a Spin Off of my fanfics that you find interesting, just please, don't claim the whole thing as yours and let me know like Hollowmind did

Nice and thank you. Anyways, what I'm about to say is for everyone:

I love doing little references, so I want to say that some of my other characters also exist in reso
(Aug. 27, 2021  10:17 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:
(Aug. 27, 2021  10:04 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I know I say this a lot but you're seriously doing an awesome job making a Spin-Off for Beyjitzu, you've covered everything I've wanted to see in a spin-off and more!  Also, anyone is able to make a Spin Off of my fanfics that you find interesting, just please, don't claim the whole thing as yours and let me know like Hollowmind did

Nice and thank you. Anyways, what I'm about to say is for everyone:

I love doing little references, so I want to say that (at this exact moment) all my characters exist in Resonance (almost, I'm not sure of one). That means that all my entries to other fics are spoilers (kinda, not sure about it yet)
hmmm interesting 

i see you've gotten a bit unique with it my ducky pal! 😏👌
Oh shoot, I had another day to do the chapter... Well, too late. Anyways, I'd say maybe a short tomorrow?
Annabeth, quote to Percy Jackson?
(Aug. 27, 2021  10:39 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: Annabeth, quote to Percy Jackson?

That was pure coincidence.
Only some will get the reference:

*There's none, deleted, gone, MUAHAHAHAHAHAHHAH*
Ignore Unseen's reply btw
(Aug. 28, 2021  10:14 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Only some will get the reference:


Hey... Thats familiar lol
(Aug. 28, 2021  10:23 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote:
(Aug. 28, 2021  10:14 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Only some will get the reference:


Hey... Thats familiar lol

I wonder if someone else knows the music.
(Aug. 28, 2021  10:14 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Only some will get the reference:


yes! i recognize it from  t i k i t y   t o k
So, here's a system. You're free to use it but you will have to credit me:

Gemini System:
And I'll let you guys guess this combo:

S-A Md.Artemis Mn. Op'
(Sep. 01, 2021  8:09 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: So, here's a system. You're free to use it but you will have to credit me:

Gemini System:
And I'll let you guys guess this combo:

S-A Md.A Mn. Op'

I guess it's Operate driver, dunno about the rest.
(Sep. 01, 2021  8:31 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote:
(Sep. 01, 2021  8:09 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: So, here's a system. You're free to use it but you will have to credit me:

Gemini System:
And I'll let you guys guess this combo:

S-A Md.A Mn. Op'

I guess it's Operate driver, dunno about the rest.

Oop, I need to edit the chip name, else it's the same as Apollo. And yes, it's Operate', but it's an attack type bey.

Edit: if I try to abbreviate, it just turns into another part, so here's the chip name:
Driver: Operate'

That's all I got lol
(Sep. 01, 2021  8:57 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Driver: Operate'

That's all I got lol

Big Hint: It's basically Apollo combo but with Artemis theme
(Sep. 01, 2021  9:15 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:
(Sep. 01, 2021  8:57 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Driver: Operate'

That's all I got lol

Big Hint: It's basically Apollo combo but with Artemis theme

ECLIPSE!