(Aug. 06, 2021  2:05 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Finally, I'm doing it. feel free to ask (almost) any question!
Also, the fic takes place after Beyjitzu ( by UnseenBurst ).

Characters:

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To be drafted, just wait

Beys:

Spoiler (Click to View)

 To be drafted, just wait

Chapters:

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Will take a while

Sparking-II explained (It isn't the main system, just an additional one):

Spoiler (Click to View)

 
Sparking-II is composed of:

Chip: A normal sparking chip but incompatible with normal sparking.
Ring: A normal sparking ring but incompatible with normal sparking.
Disc Chassis: Double chassis fused with each numbered forge disc (i.e. Chassis-II: 1 being incredible unbalaced, etc...)with a gimmick, incompatible with normal sparking.
Driver: Normal driver

Order: Ring - Chip - Driver - Chassis-II

note: it's double chassis only

Character contest info here, it might end in 12-14 days.

Spoiler (Click to View)

 
+Almost any system is allowed (you can use a fanmade system, but don't use Cho-z and below).
+don't do characters related to legends.
+You can do a evolution to an existing bey into any system.
 

That's about it for now.

(Aug. 06, 2021  2:05 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Finally, I'm doing it. feel free to ask (almost) any question!
Also, the fic takes place after Beyjitzu ( by UnseenBurst ).

Characters:

Spoiler (Click to View)

Callum 

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Name: Callum.......Surname: ?
Age: 14 (by his height you say its 12)
Gender: Male
Nationality: Irish

Physical Appearance : he's a little bit skinny, has brown eyes, black hair, has a black hoody with a purple fire pin on it, black trousers, boots-like shoes, gloves and uses a wood mask like the shy guy from mario, but it's not painted white and theres a black silk-like thing, making impossible see his eyes and mouth, but he can see with almost no difference, it also has a crack from one eye to all the way down.

Personality Traits: shy; doesn't give up easily when focused on something; isn't too much into beyblade, for him is like a hobby else than a competitive thing, but he's very good at it; doesn't show emotions for not revealing weakness (both physically and psychologically); rarely speaks except for close friend (sometimes when needed) and family (except near people he doesn't know, in this case he uses his hands to speak); he has very good stealth abilities too (hes good at not making sound and nobody notices his absence either), also he has a little bit of insomnia, so he sleeps often on free time and sometimes mid-battle, but only if he couldn't sleep on the day/free time.

(nothing really important, just some info about him, you can ignore it) Relations: He has a twin sister that lives with him on their grandmother house, both his parents are alive but lives very far because of their jobs. Kiaru Yofutoremi is his friend (PinkRose made this true (I wonder why), so maybe they both live at the same area and/or go to the same school idk). He's the "cursed blader" because people call him that, the reason is: he gives really creepy vibes for those who don't know him, he doesn't like this name very much tho.

Bey: Swirl Caribdis - Balance type

Launcher:  he has a custom clockwise-only launcher, but since his left arm is weaker, he placed a smaller gear that connects to the launching gear when launching with the left arm, making it spin at the same power, but he only do that on not official events, instead he uses a normal launcher.

Beys:

Spoiler (Click to View)

 
Swirl Caribdis Polish' Depth 4D

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Ring - Swirl: It's a defense ring that has 7 defense blades (like kraise kerbeus) with a gap with the same size between them and a circle on the bottom. The gimmick of the ring is that you can rotate it (like hell salamander) and fill the gaps with more blades, that was inside the first 7 blades, making it a circular bey. It also has OWD because of the metal position on the layer.

Chip-Caribdis: a standard right sparking chip that have 5 teeth (the first 2 are short, the 3 and 4 are medium and the last is long), it has the Caribdis mouth in the centre (go search again if you didn't remember)

Chassis - 4D: Similar to 1D, except It has better teeth and it's heavier.

Forge disk-Polish': its a forge disk with a plastic piece around that increases LAD. It has a little bit of CWD. (Also is the ' version of polish, is a bit wider (it touches the floor else than the layer) and has more metal)

Perfomance tip - Depth: Is a driver that has a free-spinning ball(½ the size of atomic) on the bottom and a free-spinning plate stuck on the top(making no contack with the floor, when is in defense mode, the plate doesn't come down, on stamina mode the plate comes down and the ball gets locked.

1° special move- ocean guarding: activates when is in pure defense mode, blocks attacks and deals increased knockback.

2° special move- swirling dash: activates when the driver is in stamina mode and layer in defense, it tilts and leans on the free-spinning plate (but stands still like bearing), dealing increased dmg.

3° special move- wave resistance: activates when is in pure stamina mode, inclines and let the enemy bey hit the forge disk instead of the layer. If it touches the floor, it dashes through the arena like crazy losing loads of stamina but gaining absurd attack power.

4° special move- tide breaker: activates when the layer is in stamina and driver in defense, because of its circular shape on stamina mode, it blocks all the attacks on the layer and only layer.

5° special move- direction change (it's a "defect", wasn't supposed to happen): activates randomly depending of luck, sometimes the free-spinning plate can go down and the other 5 blades hide or appears mid-battle.

Chapters:

Spoiler (Click to View)

Will take a while

Sparking-II explained (It isn't the main system, just an additional one):

Spoiler (Click to View)

 
Sparking-II is composed of:

Chip: A normal sparking chip but incompatible with normal sparking.
Ring: A normal sparking ring but incompatible with normal sparking.
Disc Chassis: Double chassis fused with each numbered forge disc (i.e. Chassis-II: 1 being incredible unbalaced, etc...)with a gimmick, incompatible with normal sparking.
Driver: Normal driver

Order: Ring - Chip - Driver - Chassis-II

note: it's double chassis only

Character contest info here, it might end in 12-14 days.

Spoiler (Click to View)

 
+Almost any system is allowed (you can use a fanmade system, but don't use Cho-z and below).
+don't do characters related to legends.
+You can do a evolution to an existing bey into any system.
 

That's about it for now.

(Aug. 06, 2021  2:25 PM)BladeKingX Wrote:

(Aug. 06, 2021  2:05 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Finally, I'm doing it. feel free to ask (almost) any question!
Also, the fic takes place after Beyjitzu ( by UnseenBurst ).

Characters:

Spoiler (Click to View)

To be drafted, just wait

Beys:

Spoiler (Click to View)

 To be drafted, just wait

Chapters:

Spoiler (Click to View)

Will take a while

Sparking-II explained (It isn't the main system, just an additional one):

Spoiler (Click to View)

 
Sparking-II is composed of:

Chip: A normal sparking chip but incompatible with normal sparking.
Ring: A normal sparking ring but incompatible with normal sparking.
Disc Chassis: Double chassis fused with each numbered forge disc (i.e. Chassis-II: 1 being incredible unbalaced, etc...)with a gimmick, incompatible with normal sparking.
Driver: Normal driver

Order: Ring - Chip - Driver - Chassis-II

note: it's double chassis only

Character contest info here, it might end in 12-14 days.

Spoiler (Click to View)

 
+Almost any system is allowed (you can use a fanmade system, but don't use Cho-z and below).
+don't do characters related to legends.
+You can do a evolution to an existing bey into any system.
 

That's about it for now.

AYYYYYYYYYYY MY DUCKY BOI HOLLOW DECIDED TO DO A FANFIC!?! NOW THATS REAL POGGERS

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here are some characters
Orisi Vanaru
Taneki Jotaru
Lastor Amakari

Valorant Odysseus
Lightning Thor
Everlasting Loki

ik the names are kinda bad but im kinda out of ideas

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(Aug. 06, 2021  2:05 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Finally, I'm doing it. feel free to ask (almost) any question!
Also, the fic takes place after Beyjitzu ( by UnseenBurst ).

Characters:

Spoiler (Click to View)

Callum 

Spoiler (Click to View)

 
Name: Callum.......Surname: ?
Age: 14 (by his height you say its 12)
Gender: Male
Nationality: Irish

Physical Appearance : he's a little bit skinny, has brown eyes, black hair, has a black hoody with a purple fire pin on it, black trousers, boots-like shoes, gloves and uses a wood mask like the shy guy from mario, but it's not painted white and theres a black silk-like thing, making impossible see his eyes and mouth, but he can see with almost no difference, it also has a crack from one eye to all the way down.

Personality Traits: shy; doesn't give up easily when focused on something; isn't too much into beyblade, for him is like a hobby else than a competitive thing, but he's very good at it; doesn't show emotions for not revealing weakness (both physically and psychologically); rarely speaks except for close friend (sometimes when needed) and family (except near people he doesn't know, in this case he uses his hands to speak); he has very good stealth abilities too (hes good at not making sound and nobody notices his absence either), also he has a little bit of insomnia, so he sleeps often on free time and sometimes mid-battle, but only if he couldn't sleep on the day/free time.

(nothing really important, just some info about him, you can ignore it) Relations: He has a twin sister that lives with him on their grandmother house, both his parents are alive but lives very far because of their jobs. Kiaru Yofutoremi is his friend (PinkRose made this true (I wonder why), so maybe they both live at the same area and/or go to the same school idk). He's the "cursed blader" because people call him that, the reason is: he gives really creepy vibes for those who don't know him, he doesn't like this name very much tho.

Bey: Swirl Caribdis - Balance type

Launcher:  he has a custom clockwise-only launcher, but since his left arm is weaker, he placed a smaller gear that connects to the launching gear when launching with the left arm, making it spin at the same power, but he only do that on not official events, instead he uses a normal launcher.

Beys:

Spoiler (Click to View)

 
Swirl Caribdis Polish' Depth 4D

Spoiler (Click to View)

Ring - Swirl: It's a defense ring that has 7 defense blades (like kraise kerbeus) with a gap with the same size between them and a circle on the bottom. The gimmick of the ring is that you can rotate it (like hell salamander) and fill the gaps with more blades, that was inside the first 7 blades, making it a circular bey. It also has OWD because of the metal position on the layer.

Chip-Caribdis: a standard right sparking chip that have 5 teeth (the first 2 are short, the 3 and 4 are medium and the last is long), it has the Caribdis mouth in the centre (go search again if you didn't remember)

Chassis - 4D: Similar to 1D, except It has better teeth and it's heavier.

Forge disk-Polish': its a forge disk with a plastic piece around that increases LAD. It has a little bit of CWD. (Also is the ' version of polish, is a bit wider (it touches the floor else than the layer) and has more metal)

Perfomance tip - Depth: Is a driver that has a free-spinning ball(½ the size of atomic) on the bottom and a free-spinning plate stuck on the top(making no contack with the floor, when is in defense mode, the plate doesn't come down, on stamina mode the plate comes down and the ball gets locked.

1° special move- ocean guarding: activates when is in pure defense mode, blocks attacks and deals increased knockback.

2° special move- swirling dash: activates when the driver is in stamina mode and layer in defense, it tilts and leans on the free-spinning plate (but stands still like bearing), dealing increased dmg.

3° special move- wave resistance: activates when is in pure stamina mode, inclines and let the enemy bey hit the forge disk instead of the layer. If it touches the floor, it dashes through the arena like crazy losing loads of stamina but gaining absurd attack power.

4° special move- tide breaker: activates when the layer is in stamina and driver in defense, because of its circular shape on stamina mode, it blocks all the attacks on the layer and only layer.

5° special move- direction change (it's a "defect", wasn't supposed to happen): activates randomly depending of luck, sometimes the free-spinning plate can go down and the other 5 blades hide or appears mid-battle.

Chapters:

Spoiler (Click to View)

Will take a while

Sparking-II explained (It isn't the main system, just an additional one):

Spoiler (Click to View)

 
Sparking-II is composed of:

Chip: A normal sparking chip but incompatible with normal sparking.
Ring: A normal sparking ring but incompatible with normal sparking.
Disc Chassis: Double chassis fused with each numbered forge disc (i.e. Chassis-II: 1 being incredible unbalaced, etc...)with a gimmick, incompatible with normal sparking.
Driver: Normal driver

Order: Ring - Chip - Driver - Chassis-II

note: it's double chassis only

Character contest info here, it might end in 12-14 days.

Spoiler (Click to View)

 
+Almost any system is allowed (you can use a fanmade system, but don't use Cho-z and below).
+don't do characters related to legends.
+You can do a evolution to an existing bey into any system.
 

That's about it for now.

callum is the main character huh?

(Aug. 06, 2021  2:39 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:

(Aug. 06, 2021  2:25 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: AYYYYYYYYYYY MY DUCKY BOI HOLLOW DECIDED TO DO A FANFIC!?! NOW THATS REAL POGGERS

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here are some characters
Orisi Vanaru
Taneki Jotaru
Lastor Amakari

Valorant Odysseus
Lightning Thor
Everlasting Loki

ik the names are kinda bad but im kinda out of ideas

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callum is the main character huh?

Nop, I'm just drafting some characters, also @BladeKingX I've updated the info on the contest.

(Aug. 06, 2021  5:06 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: So I'm using the Kiwami System (A system I used in my fic)



Name: Zhao Mishima

Nationality: Japanese

Appearance: Zhao's outfit consists of a leather jacket over a printed black and orange button down shirt, grey knee shorts over a pair of black tights, and high top black and white leather sneakers. Hair color is brown and eye color is purple.

Personality: He's a very chill guy, he wanna become the world's best blader and he has a great sense of justice. He always gives his best it doesn't whoever his opponent is. And respects those who are stronger than him and gives advices to weak bladers.

Beyblade: Typhoon Zephyrus .99 Squall Sprint -Q


Kiwami Core: Zephyrus, The God of West Wind.

Kiwamk Blade: Typhoon, It has 6 spear shaped Blades (similar to Burn) which have little bjt of metal on it to increase attack power.

Kiwami Weight: 99, It's shape is like 2 Nines, one 9 on upper side and second one on the lower side.

Kiwami Armor: Quad, It has 4 wings which improves the Center of Gravity and when used in lower mode, the attack power is increased because of the weight.

Neo Disk: Squall, Disk has 2 wing shaped blades which have rubber on them.

Driver: Sprint, The driver has the shape of jaggy, but is made of metal. The driver has so much metal on it. And it rushes insanely fast.

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There ya go

(Aug. 06, 2021  5:34 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:

(Aug. 06, 2021  5:06 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: So I'm using the Kiwami System (A system I used in my fic)



Name: Zhao Mishima

Nationality: Japanese

Appearance: Zhao's outfit consists of a leather jacket over a printed black and orange button down shirt, grey knee shorts over a pair of black tights, and high top black and white leather sneakers. Hair color is brown and eye color is purple.

Personality: He's a very chill guy, he wanna become the world's best blader and he has a great sense of justice. He always gives his best it doesn't whoever his opponent is. And respects those who are stronger than him and gives advices to weak bladers.

Beyblade: Typhoon Zephyrus .99 Squall Sprint -Q


Kiwami Core: Zephyrus, The God of West Wind.

Kiwamk Blade: Typhoon, It has 6 spear shaped Blades (similar to Burn) which have little bjt of metal on it to increase attack power.

Kiwami Weight: 99, It's shape is like 2 Nines, one 9 on upper side and second one on the lower side.

Kiwami Armor: Quad, It has 4 wings which improves the Center of Gravity and when used in lower mode, the attack power is increased because of the weight.

Neo Disk: Squall, Disk has 2 wing shaped blades which have rubber on them.

Driver: Sprint, The driver has the shape of jaggy, but is made of metal. The driver has so much metal on it. And it rushes insanely fast.

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There ya go

Is it a clockwise attack type?

(Aug. 06, 2021  10:09 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: So, chapter 1 is out, Idk if it's long enough but It has the length of 3 A4 paper sheets, so I think it's okay. You can find the chapter at the main post. i'd like some feedback. (the chapter seems very smol but believe me)

(Aug. 06, 2021  10:09 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: So, chapter 1 is out, Idk if it's long enough but It has the length of 3 A4 paper sheets, so I think it's okay. You can find the chapter at the main post. i'd like some feedback. (the chapter seems very smol but believe me)

(Aug. 06, 2021  10:15 PM)BladeKingX Wrote:

(Aug. 06, 2021  10:09 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: So, chapter 1 is out, Idk if it's long enough but It has the length of 3 A4 paper sheets, so I think it's okay. You can find the chapter at the main post. i'd like some feedback. (the chapter seems very smol but believe me)

nice chapter! didn't really see the biggest mistakes

(Aug. 06, 2021  10:17 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:

(Aug. 06, 2021  10:09 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: So, chapter 1 is out, Idk if it's long enough but It has the length of 3 A4 paper sheets, so I think it's okay. You can find the chapter at the main post. i'd like some feedback. (the chapter seems very smol but believe me)

Ok so, I recommend making a post for every chapter you release becuase once you start creating more chapters, it'll be hard to just scroll back for the chapter, I also feel bad for Max since she lost to Hikaru and Drum.

(Aug. 06, 2021  10:18 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:

(Aug. 06, 2021  10:15 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: nice chapter! didn't really see the biggest mistakes

On pc it doesn't seem that long, that's why I'm asking If it's length is good (also I might drop Sarah info tomorow)

(Aug. 06, 2021  10:21 PM)BladeKingX Wrote:

(Aug. 06, 2021  10:18 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: On pc it doesn't seem that long, that's why I'm asking If it's length is good (also I might drop Sarah info tomorow)

oh, it's length is longer than all 3 of my Destiny episodes combined, so uh there's that

(Aug. 06, 2021  10:23 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:

(Aug. 06, 2021  10:21 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: oh, it's length is longer than all 3 of my Destiny episodes combined, so uh there's that

Tbf I write plot at a slower rate (like, it was the first chapter, you said that its triple the size of 3 destiny chapters and I still only made 1 battle)

(Aug. 06, 2021  10:25 PM)BladeKingX Wrote:

(Aug. 06, 2021  10:23 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Tbf I write plot at a slower rate (like, it was the first chapter, you said that its triple the size of 3 destiny chapters and I still only made 1 battle)

are you insulting me? oh thats the answer

(Aug. 06, 2021  10:27 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Nice chapter! And haven't Kevin ever heard of the beyjitzu system? Lol

(Aug. 06, 2021  10:36 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Lol, I'm so glad you made a sequel to Beyjitzu! Maybe add some other characters in Beyjitzu.