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[Fan Fiction] Hollow's Beyblade fic thread
I'll think of a bey, just need some time.
(Aug. 06, 2021 2:05 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Finally, I'm doing it. feel free to ask (almost) any question!
Also, the fic takes place after Beyjitzu ( by UnseenBurst ).
Characters:
Beys:Spoiler (Click to View)
Chapters:Spoiler (Click to View)
Sparking-II explained (It isn't the main system, just an additional one):Spoiler (Click to View)
Character contest info here, it might end in 12-14 days.Spoiler (Click to View)
That's about it for now.Spoiler (Click to View)
AYYYYYYYYYYY MY DUCKY BOI HOLLOW DECIDED TO DO A FANFIC!?! NOW THATS REAL POGGERS
here are some characters
Orisi Vanaru
Taneki Jotaru
Lastor Amakari
Valorant Odysseus
Lightning Thor
Everlasting Loki
ik the names are kinda bad but im kinda out of ideas
(Aug. 06, 2021 2:05 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Finally, I'm doing it. feel free to ask (almost) any question!
Also, the fic takes place after Beyjitzu ( by UnseenBurst ).
Characters:
Beys:Spoiler (Click to View)
Chapters:Spoiler (Click to View)
Sparking-II explained (It isn't the main system, just an additional one):Spoiler (Click to View)
Character contest info here, it might end in 12-14 days.Spoiler (Click to View)
That's about it for now.Spoiler (Click to View)
callum is the main character huh?
Sweet! Character coming soon!
(Aug. 06, 2021 2:25 PM)BladeKingX Wrote:Nop, I'm just drafting some characters, also @BladeKingX I've updated the info on the contest.(Aug. 06, 2021 2:05 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Finally, I'm doing it. feel free to ask (almost) any question!
Also, the fic takes place after Beyjitzu ( by UnseenBurst ).
Characters:
Beys:Spoiler (Click to View)
Chapters:Spoiler (Click to View)
Sparking-II explained (It isn't the main system, just an additional one):Spoiler (Click to View)
Character contest info here, it might end in 12-14 days.Spoiler (Click to View)
That's about it for now.Spoiler (Click to View)
AYYYYYYYYYYY MY DUCKY BOI HOLLOW DECIDED TO DO A FANFIC!?! NOW THATS REAL POGGERS
here are some characters
Orisi Vanaru
Taneki Jotaru
Lastor Amakari
Valorant Odysseus
Lightning Thor
Everlasting Loki
ik the names are kinda bad but im kinda out of ideas
(Aug. 06, 2021 2:05 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Finally, I'm doing it. feel free to ask (almost) any question!
Also, the fic takes place after Beyjitzu ( by UnseenBurst ).
Characters:
Beys:Spoiler (Click to View)
Chapters:Spoiler (Click to View)
Sparking-II explained (It isn't the main system, just an additional one):Spoiler (Click to View)
Character contest info here, it might end in 12-14 days.Spoiler (Click to View)
That's about it for now.Spoiler (Click to View)
callum is the main character huh?
Name: Hyto Watanabe
Age: 13
Appearance: He has dark brown hair and wears a purple polo and gray nice shorts
Personality: A last born from a mid class family, he loves his older brothers and they are his role models. He first discovered Beyblade when his brother brought him a Valkyrie V3. He loved watching the legends and on a trip to Egypt he discovered his partner, Horus.
Beyblade: Whirlwind Horus Sky’ CH-ll: 7 (left spin attack type)
Chip: Horus, Has a metal falcon on it
Ring: Whirlwind, Has two green blade Khopeshs (look it up if you don’t know) on the sides with bumps between.
Chassis-ll: 7, seven disk as a chassis, all metal.
Chassis Frame: looks live seven but made of rubber.
Driver: Sky’, Destroy’ at a lower height and when the spin decreases it jumps up to destroy’s normal height
Special Moves:
Whirlwind Force: Blast the other bey back
Whirlwind Wip: The winds whip the opponent back
Twister Break: Slams into the opponent into the side of the stadium
Double Crown Break: Like Twister Break but hits it again against the wall of the stadium.
Khopesh Slash: Cuts through the opponent with his blade
Sky’s Reign!: Dread Gravity but with a left spin
Sky’s the Limits!: Horus jumps and lands on his opponent
Pyramid Launch: Holds the launcher so it points up at a diagonal, pulls the string down diagonally to his right and pushes the launcher flat.
Age: 13
Appearance: He has dark brown hair and wears a purple polo and gray nice shorts
Personality: A last born from a mid class family, he loves his older brothers and they are his role models. He first discovered Beyblade when his brother brought him a Valkyrie V3. He loved watching the legends and on a trip to Egypt he discovered his partner, Horus.
Beyblade: Whirlwind Horus Sky’ CH-ll: 7 (left spin attack type)
Chip: Horus, Has a metal falcon on it
Ring: Whirlwind, Has two green blade Khopeshs (look it up if you don’t know) on the sides with bumps between.
Chassis-ll: 7, seven disk as a chassis, all metal.
Chassis Frame: looks live seven but made of rubber.
Driver: Sky’, Destroy’ at a lower height and when the spin decreases it jumps up to destroy’s normal height
Special Moves:
Whirlwind Force: Blast the other bey back
Whirlwind Wip: The winds whip the opponent back
Twister Break: Slams into the opponent into the side of the stadium
Double Crown Break: Like Twister Break but hits it again against the wall of the stadium.
Khopesh Slash: Cuts through the opponent with his blade
Sky’s Reign!: Dread Gravity but with a left spin
Sky’s the Limits!: Horus jumps and lands on his opponent
Pyramid Launch: Holds the launcher so it points up at a diagonal, pulls the string down diagonally to his right and pushes the launcher flat.
(Aug. 06, 2021 2:39 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:(Aug. 06, 2021 2:25 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: AYYYYYYYYYYY MY DUCKY BOI HOLLOW DECIDED TO DO A FANFIC!?! NOW THATS REAL POGGERSNop, I'm just drafting some characters, also @BladeKingX I've updated the info on the contest.
here are some characters
Orisi Vanaru
Taneki Jotaru
Lastor Amakari
Valorant Odysseus
Lightning Thor
Everlasting Loki
ik the names are kinda bad but im kinda out of ideas
callum is the main character huh?
alrighty then i'll make a character sooner or later
Nice, I'll add a character later.
So I'm using the Kiwami System (A system I used in my fic)
Name: Zhao Mishima
Nationality: Japanese
Appearance: Zhao's outfit consists of a leather jacket over a printed black and orange button down shirt, grey knee shorts over a pair of black tights, and high top black and white leather sneakers. Hair color is brown and eye color is purple.
Personality: He's a very chill guy, he wanna become the world's best blader and he has a great sense of justice. He always gives his best it doesn't whoever his opponent is. And respects those who are stronger than him and gives advices to weak bladers.
Beyblade: Typhoon Zephyrus .99 Squall Sprint -Q
Kiwami Core: Zephyrus, The God of West Wind.
Kiwamk Blade: Typhoon, It has 6 spear shaped Blades (similar to Burn) which have little bjt of metal on it to increase attack power.
Kiwami Weight: 99, It's shape is like 2 Nines, one 9 on upper side and second one on the lower side.
Kiwami Armor: Quad, It has 4 wings which improves the Center of Gravity and when used in lower mode, the attack power is increased because of the weight.
Neo Disk: Squall, Disk has 2 wing shaped blades which have rubber on them.
Driver: Sprint, The driver has the shape of jaggy, but is made of metal. The driver has so much metal on it. And it rushes insanely fast.
There ya go
Name: Zhao Mishima
Nationality: Japanese
Appearance: Zhao's outfit consists of a leather jacket over a printed black and orange button down shirt, grey knee shorts over a pair of black tights, and high top black and white leather sneakers. Hair color is brown and eye color is purple.
Personality: He's a very chill guy, he wanna become the world's best blader and he has a great sense of justice. He always gives his best it doesn't whoever his opponent is. And respects those who are stronger than him and gives advices to weak bladers.
Beyblade: Typhoon Zephyrus .99 Squall Sprint -Q
Kiwami Core: Zephyrus, The God of West Wind.
Kiwamk Blade: Typhoon, It has 6 spear shaped Blades (similar to Burn) which have little bjt of metal on it to increase attack power.
Kiwami Weight: 99, It's shape is like 2 Nines, one 9 on upper side and second one on the lower side.
Kiwami Armor: Quad, It has 4 wings which improves the Center of Gravity and when used in lower mode, the attack power is increased because of the weight.
Neo Disk: Squall, Disk has 2 wing shaped blades which have rubber on them.
Driver: Sprint, The driver has the shape of jaggy, but is made of metal. The driver has so much metal on it. And it rushes insanely fast.
There ya go
(Aug. 06, 2021 5:06 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: So I'm using the Kiwami System (A system I used in my fic)Is it a clockwise attack type?
Name: Zhao Mishima
Nationality: Japanese
Appearance: Zhao's outfit consists of a leather jacket over a printed black and orange button down shirt, grey knee shorts over a pair of black tights, and high top black and white leather sneakers. Hair color is brown and eye color is purple.
Personality: He's a very chill guy, he wanna become the world's best blader and he has a great sense of justice. He always gives his best it doesn't whoever his opponent is. And respects those who are stronger than him and gives advices to weak bladers.
Beyblade: Typhoon Zephyrus .99 Squall Sprint -Q
Kiwami Core: Zephyrus, The God of West Wind.
Kiwamk Blade: Typhoon, It has 6 spear shaped Blades (similar to Burn) which have little bjt of metal on it to increase attack power.
Kiwami Weight: 99, It's shape is like 2 Nines, one 9 on upper side and second one on the lower side.
Kiwami Armor: Quad, It has 4 wings which improves the Center of Gravity and when used in lower mode, the attack power is increased because of the weight.
Neo Disk: Squall, Disk has 2 wing shaped blades which have rubber on them.
Driver: Sprint, The driver has the shape of jaggy, but is made of metal. The driver has so much metal on it. And it rushes insanely fast.
There ya go
(Aug. 06, 2021 5:34 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:(Aug. 06, 2021 5:06 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: So I'm using the Kiwami System (A system I used in my fic)Is it a clockwise attack type?
Name: Zhao Mishima
Nationality: Japanese
Appearance: Zhao's outfit consists of a leather jacket over a printed black and orange button down shirt, grey knee shorts over a pair of black tights, and high top black and white leather sneakers. Hair color is brown and eye color is purple.
Personality: He's a very chill guy, he wanna become the world's best blader and he has a great sense of justice. He always gives his best it doesn't whoever his opponent is. And respects those who are stronger than him and gives advices to weak bladers.
Beyblade: Typhoon Zephyrus .99 Squall Sprint -Q
Kiwami Core: Zephyrus, The God of West Wind.
Kiwamk Blade: Typhoon, It has 6 spear shaped Blades (similar to Burn) which have little bjt of metal on it to increase attack power.
Kiwami Weight: 99, It's shape is like 2 Nines, one 9 on upper side and second one on the lower side.
Kiwami Armor: Quad, It has 4 wings which improves the Center of Gravity and when used in lower mode, the attack power is increased because of the weight.
Neo Disk: Squall, Disk has 2 wing shaped blades which have rubber on them.
Driver: Sprint, The driver has the shape of jaggy, but is made of metal. The driver has so much metal on it. And it rushes insanely fast.
There ya go
Oh yeah, I forgot to mention it.
I'll use a system I made up
Destruction System
Name: Ben Kendo
Age: 13
Height: 5'7
Hair Color: Brown\
Eye Color: Blue
Beyblade Name: Rey Necromancer
Destroyer Core: Necromancer
Destroyer Blade: Rey
Disc: Nexus
Driver: Zeta+Z
Moves: Rey Slash, Rey Dive, Rey Balance, Shining Attack, and and Rey Block.
Destruction System
Name: Ben Kendo
Age: 13
Height: 5'7
Hair Color: Brown\
Eye Color: Blue
Beyblade Name: Rey Necromancer
Destroyer Core: Necromancer
Destroyer Blade: Rey
Disc: Nexus
Driver: Zeta+Z
Moves: Rey Slash, Rey Dive, Rey Balance, Shining Attack, and and Rey Block.
YOOO I'll add a character later!
@HollowMind8
Name: Jimi Womack
Gender: Female
Height: 5'2'
age: 14
Eye Color: Green
Hair Color: Black ish green
Personality: Jimi is a Silent girl and does not Talk The much she is only open to family and close friends!
Appearance: https://ibb.co/DMDc25c
Beyblade: Savage Jintel Awake Travel
Core: Jintel: Jintel has a hexagon shape and has a unique color (Gold Red and Green)
Savage Blade: The savage blade has 2 metal blades and 2 plastic blade.
Chassis: Awake: is a glowing chassis that glows in the dark and has a click where to blades come out.
Driver: Travel: Travel is a driver that has a square shape. It helps with dodging and it has a Spark tip to
@HollowMind8
Name: Jimi Womack
Gender: Female
Height: 5'2'
age: 14
Eye Color: Green
Hair Color: Black ish green
Personality: Jimi is a Silent girl and does not Talk The much she is only open to family and close friends!
Appearance: https://ibb.co/DMDc25c
Beyblade: Savage Jintel Awake Travel
Core: Jintel: Jintel has a hexagon shape and has a unique color (Gold Red and Green)
Savage Blade: The savage blade has 2 metal blades and 2 plastic blade.
Chassis: Awake: is a glowing chassis that glows in the dark and has a click where to blades come out.
Driver: Travel: Travel is a driver that has a square shape. It helps with dodging and it has a Spark tip to
So, chapter 1 is out, Idk if it's long enough but It has the length of 3 A4 paper sheets, so I think it's okay. You can find the chapter at the main post. i'd like some feedback. (the chapter seems very smol but believe me)
(Aug. 06, 2021 10:09 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: So, chapter 1 is out, Idk if it's long enough but It has the length of 3 A4 paper sheets, so I think it's okay. You can find the chapter at the main post. i'd like some feedback. (the chapter seems very smol but believe me)
nice chapter! didn't really see the biggest mistakes
(Aug. 06, 2021 10:09 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: So, chapter 1 is out, Idk if it's long enough but It has the length of 3 A4 paper sheets, so I think it's okay. You can find the chapter at the main post. i'd like some feedback. (the chapter seems very smol but believe me)
Ok so, I recommend making a post for every chapter you release becuase once you start creating more chapters, it'll be hard to just scroll back for the chapter, I also feel bad for Max since she lost to Hikaru and Drum.
(Aug. 06, 2021 10:15 PM)BladeKingX Wrote:(Aug. 06, 2021 10:09 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: So, chapter 1 is out, Idk if it's long enough but It has the length of 3 A4 paper sheets, so I think it's okay. You can find the chapter at the main post. i'd like some feedback. (the chapter seems very smol but believe me)
nice chapter! didn't really see the biggest mistakes
On pc it doesn't seem that long, that's why I'm asking If it's length is good (also I might drop Sarah info tomorow)
(Aug. 06, 2021 10:17 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:(Aug. 06, 2021 10:09 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: So, chapter 1 is out, Idk if it's long enough but It has the length of 3 A4 paper sheets, so I think it's okay. You can find the chapter at the main post. i'd like some feedback. (the chapter seems very smol but believe me)
Ok so, I recommend making a post for every chapter you release becuase once you start creating more chapters, it'll be hard to just scroll back for the chapter, I also feel bad for Max since she lost to Hikaru and Drum.
lol, don't worry she will... ops, I almost gave a spoiler. anyways, about the scrolling part: you can click on "go to page 1" and all the chapters will be there
(Aug. 06, 2021 10:18 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:(Aug. 06, 2021 10:15 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: nice chapter! didn't really see the biggest mistakes
On pc it doesn't seem that long, that's why I'm asking If it's length is good (also I might drop Sarah info tomorow)
oh, it's length is longer than all 3 of my Destiny episodes combined, so uh there's that
(Aug. 06, 2021 10:21 PM)BladeKingX Wrote:(Aug. 06, 2021 10:18 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: On pc it doesn't seem that long, that's why I'm asking If it's length is good (also I might drop Sarah info tomorow)
oh, it's length is longer than all 3 of my Destiny episodes combined, so uh there's that
Tbf I write plot at a slower rate (like, it was the first chapter, you said that its triple the size of 3 destiny chapters and I still only made 1 battle)
(Aug. 06, 2021 10:23 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:are you insulting me? oh thats the answer(Aug. 06, 2021 10:21 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: oh, it's length is longer than all 3 of my Destiny episodes combined, so uh there's that
Tbf I write plot at a slower rate (like, it was the first chapter, you said that its triple the size of 3 destiny chapters and I still only made 1 battle)
(Aug. 06, 2021 10:25 PM)BladeKingX Wrote:(Aug. 06, 2021 10:23 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Tbf I write plot at a slower rate (like, it was the first chapter, you said that its triple the size of 3 destiny chapters and I still only made 1 battle)are you insulting me? oh thats the answer
No afaik, I kinda said that I write plot slower than you, which means that this fic might have 3 seasons (which means I'll be stuck with resonance for a long time) Might be
Nice chapter! And haven't Kevin ever heard of the beyjitzu system? Lol
Lol, I'm so glad you made a squeal to Beyjitzu! Maybe add some other characters in Beyjitzu.