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[Fan Fiction]  Beyblade burst blazing redo 14+(on break)

Sep. 22, 2020  10:04 PM
 
Part 3
Chapter 30
The new beginning
Chapter 31
Maiden evolution
Chapter 32
Twin sun Dimitri kurenai
Chapter 33
The mistake
Chapter 34-35
Shun vs Dimitri
Chapter 36
Lane vs Dimitri
Sep. 22, 2020  10:09 PM
 
This is very cool
Sep. 22, 2020  10:10 PM
 
(Sep. 22, 2020  10:09 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: This is very cool

Thanks. I wanted shun to marry gwynn but thing are gonna change(spoiler)
Sep. 22, 2020  10:23 PM
 
oh ok thats cool
Sep. 23, 2020  5:32 PM
 
where r the chapters? w/out the chapters from my pov this fanfic seems like a cool concept, but a serious mess.
Sep. 23, 2020  11:42 PM
 
(Sep. 23, 2020  5:32 PM)The Blacknight Wrote: where r the chapters? w/out the chapters from my pov this fanfic seems like a cool concept, but a serious mess.
I can't post him. There not kid friendly. I can just summarize them
Sep. 24, 2020  12:18 AM
 
(Sep. 23, 2020  11:42 PM)kai edits Wrote:
(Sep. 23, 2020  5:32 PM)The Blacknight Wrote: where r the chapters? w/out the chapters from my pov this fanfic seems like a cool concept, but a serious mess.
I can't post him. There not kid friendly. I can just summarize them

wattpad or smth?
Sep. 24, 2020  12:37 AM
 
(Sep. 24, 2020  12:18 AM)The Blacknight Wrote:
(Sep. 23, 2020  11:42 PM)kai edits Wrote: I can't post him. There not kid friendly. I can just summarize them

wattpad or smth?

I have it in my pink notebook
Sep. 24, 2020  12:46 AM
 
(Sep. 23, 2020  11:42 PM)kai edits Wrote:
(Sep. 23, 2020  5:32 PM)The Blacknight Wrote: where r the chapters? w/out the chapters from my pov this fanfic seems like a cool concept, but a serious mess.
I can't post him. There not kid friendly. I can just summarize them

Then what’s the point of the 14+ warning? And why aren’t they kid friendly? Like, what makes them not kid friendly
Sep. 24, 2020  12:55 AM
 
(Sep. 24, 2020  12:46 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Sep. 23, 2020  11:42 PM)kai edits Wrote: I can't post him. There not kid friendly. I can just summarize them

Then what’s the point of the 14+ warning? And why aren’t they kid friendly? Like, what makes them not kid friendly
It has cussing
Sep. 24, 2020  12:57 AM
 
(Sep. 24, 2020  12:55 AM)kai edits Wrote:
(Sep. 24, 2020  12:46 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Then what’s the point of the 14+ warning? And why aren’t they kid friendly? Like, what makes them not kid friendly
It has cussing

Put a warning and place the chapter in a spoiler tag then.
Sep. 24, 2020  1:00 AM
 
(Sep. 24, 2020  12:57 AM)GreenK9148 Wrote:
(Sep. 24, 2020  12:55 AM)kai edits Wrote: It has cussing

Put a warning and place the chapter in a spoiler tag then.
Like really bad cursing
Sep. 24, 2020  1:00 AM
 
(Sep. 24, 2020  1:00 AM)kai edits Wrote:
(Sep. 24, 2020  12:57 AM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Put a warning and place the chapter in a spoiler tag then.
Like really bad cursing
Like how bad from 1-10?
Sep. 24, 2020  1:01 AM
 
(Sep. 24, 2020  1:00 AM)GreenK9148 Wrote:
(Sep. 24, 2020  1:00 AM)kai edits Wrote: Like really bad cursing
Like how bad from 1-10?
10
Sep. 24, 2020  1:04 AM
 
I mean, you can ask people if they really want to read it. Then pm them.
Sep. 24, 2020  1:05 AM
 
(Sep. 24, 2020  12:55 AM)kai edits Wrote:
(Sep. 24, 2020  12:46 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Then what’s the point of the 14+ warning? And why aren’t they kid friendly? Like, what makes them not kid friendly
It has cussing

There’s a censor system
Sep. 24, 2020  1:05 AM
 
(Sep. 24, 2020  1:04 AM)GreenK9148 Wrote: I mean, you can ask people if they really want to read it.  Then pm them.

I can just make it friendly to post here. I have the original copy in my pink notebook(yes I like pink)
Sep. 24, 2020  1:05 AM
 
(Sep. 24, 2020  1:05 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Sep. 24, 2020  12:55 AM)kai edits Wrote: It has cussing

There’s a censor system

Lemme try it, jk I'm not
Sep. 24, 2020  1:05 AM
 
(Sep. 24, 2020  1:05 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Sep. 24, 2020  12:55 AM)kai edits Wrote: It has cussing

There’s a censor system
I can just make a PG version
Sep. 24, 2020  1:06 AM
 
(Sep. 24, 2020  1:05 AM)kai edits Wrote:
(Sep. 24, 2020  1:05 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: There’s a censor system
I can just make a PG version

Okay then. Your choice
Sep. 24, 2020  1:06 AM
 
(Sep. 24, 2020  1:05 AM)kai edits Wrote:
(Sep. 24, 2020  1:04 AM)GreenK9148 Wrote: I mean, you can ask people if they really want to read it.  Then pm them.

I can just make it friendly to post here. I have the original copy in my pink notebook(yes I like pink)

I guess you could, also why would I judge you by liking a color?
Sep. 24, 2020  1:31 AM
 
(Sep. 24, 2020  1:06 AM)GreenK9148 Wrote:
(Sep. 24, 2020  1:05 AM)kai edits Wrote: I can just make it friendly to post here. I have the original copy in my pink notebook(yes I like pink)

I guess you could, also why would I judge you by liking a color?
People called me a girl in school lol
Sep. 24, 2020  1:42 AM
 
(Sep. 24, 2020  1:31 AM)kai edits Wrote:
(Sep. 24, 2020  1:06 AM)GreenK9148 Wrote: I guess you could, also why would I judge you by liking a color?
People called me a girl in school lol

bcause u like pink, or look slightly like a girl? those are insecure losers.
Sep. 24, 2020  1:48 AM
 
(Sep. 24, 2020  1:31 AM)kai edits Wrote:
(Sep. 24, 2020  1:06 AM)GreenK9148 Wrote: I guess you could, also why would I judge you by liking a color?
People called me a girl in school lol

oh ok.
Sep. 24, 2020  1:53 AM
 
(Sep. 24, 2020  1:42 AM)The Blacknight Wrote:
(Sep. 24, 2020  1:31 AM)kai edits Wrote: People called me a girl in school lol

bcause u like pink, or look slightly like a girl? those are insecure losers.
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