[Fan Fiction]  Beyblade burst apocalypse(15+) (part 7 ongoing)

(Nov. 02, 2020  8:28 PM)kai edits Wrote:
(Nov. 02, 2020  8:20 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Free will probally get his deer to take care of the child

Lol free is the dad but he wants to back out

Come on. This is going to ruin everyone’s favorite fanship, free x shun
Free is still to young to be a dad. He is only 18
(Nov. 02, 2020  8:31 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote:
(Nov. 02, 2020  8:28 PM)kai edits Wrote: Lol free is the dad but he wants to back out

Come on. This is going to ruin everyone’s favorite fanship, free x shun
It was a joke.

Part 3 chapter 7 the perfect tag team Alice and Delta!
In Alice's dream.
Alice: Delta is that you.
Delta:yes it is.
Alice opens the door slowly.
Delta:Alice your here.
Delta kisses Alice in the lips.
Alice:um.
Alice blushes till she turns red.
Alice: Delta i-.
Alice wakes up.
Alice:dang it I hate it when I wake up in the middle of my dream.
Later.
Match 1 Delta and Alice vs Alexander and shu.
Alice:big brother I won't go easy on you even if we are family.
Delta:let's go Alice to the finals!
Alice:right!
3 2 1 go shoot.
Delta:go death Diabolos! Death shoot!
Diabolos hits dragoon towards Pegasus.
Delta:go Alice!
Alice:I got it. Go Pegasus! Rose collection!
Pegasus drains dragoon spin.
Delta:let's finish this go Diabolos!
Valkyrie blocks the attack.
Valt:you forgot about me?
Alice:are you sure about that?
Valkyrie is sent flying.
Valt:nani this power.
Alice:shun is not the only one can stop time you know.
Diabolos hits valkyrie then valkyrie bursts.
Alexander:go dragoon! Venom flow!
Diabolos and Pegasus dodges the attack.
Delta:go Alice let's show them our new move.
Alice:right.
Delta and Alice:burning recollection!
Both diabolos and Pegasus hit dragoon.
Alice:go Pegasus!
Delta:go Diabolos! Turn to ash!
Dragoon bursts.
Delta:we did it Alice.
Alice:yes we did.
Delta kisses Alice on the lips.
Chapter end
Skit 1
Shun:whoa whoa back up. Why she gets to be in episode and not me!
Free:your having issues remember.
Shun:to bad. Kai edits listen to me put me in the next episode or no more maiden for you.
Kai edits:sure thing shun.

(Nov. 02, 2020  8:33 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Free is still to young to be a dad. He is only 18

New episode is out!
(Nov. 02, 2020  8:51 PM)kai edits Wrote:
(Nov. 02, 2020  8:31 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: Come on. This is going to ruin everyone’s favorite fanship, free x shun
It was a joke.

Part 3 chapter 7 the perfect tag team Alice and Delta!
In Alice's dream.
Alice: Delta is that you.
Delta:yes it is.
Alice opens the door slowly.
Delta:Alice your here.
Delta kisses Alice in the lips.
Alice:um.
Alice blushes till she turns red.
Alice: Delta i-.
Alice wakes up.
Alice:dang it I hate it when I wake up in the middle of my dream.
Later.
Match 1 Delta and Alice vs Alexander and shu.
Alice:big brother I won't go easy on you even if we are family.
Delta:let's go Alice to the finals!
Alice:right!
3 2 1 go shoot.
Delta:go death Diabolos! Death shoot!
Diabolos hits dragoon towards Pegasus.
Delta:go Alice!
Alice:I got it. Go Pegasus! Rose collection!
Pegasus drains dragoon spin.
Delta:let's finish this go Diabolos!
Valkyrie blocks the attack.
Valt:you forgot about me?
Alice:are you sure about that?
Valkyrie is sent flying.
Valt:nani this power.
Alice:shun is not the only one can stop time you know.
Diabolos hits valkyrie then valkyrie bursts.
Alexander:go dragoon! Venom flow!
Diabolos and Pegasus dodges the attack.
Delta:go Alice let's show them our new move.
Alice:right.
Delta and Alice:burning recollection!
Both diabolos and Pegasus hit dragoon.
Alice:go Pegasus!
Delta:go Diabolos! Turn to ash!
Dragoon bursts.
Delta:we did it Alice.
Alice:yes we did.
Delta kisses Alice on the lips.
Chapter end
Skit 1
Shun:whoa whoa back up. Why she gets to be in episode and not me!
Free:your having issues remember.
Shun:to bad. Kai edits listen to me put me in the next episode or no more maiden for you.
Kai edits:sure thing shun.

(Nov. 02, 2020  8:33 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Free is still to young to be a dad. He is only 18

New episode is out!

I see Delta X Alice
(Nov. 03, 2020  1:32 AM)EarthHelios Wrote:
(Nov. 02, 2020  8:51 PM)kai edits Wrote: It was a joke.

Part 3 chapter 7 the perfect tag team Alice and Delta!
In Alice's dream.
Alice: Delta is that you.
Delta:yes it is.
Alice opens the door slowly.
Delta:Alice your here.
Delta kisses Alice in the lips.
Alice:um.
Alice blushes till she turns red.
Alice: Delta i-.
Alice wakes up.
Alice:dang it I hate it when I wake up in the middle of my dream.
Later.
Match 1 Delta and Alice vs Alexander and shu.
Alice:big brother I won't go easy on you even if we are family.
Delta:let's go Alice to the finals!
Alice:right!
3 2 1 go shoot.
Delta:go death Diabolos! Death shoot!
Diabolos hits dragoon towards Pegasus.
Delta:go Alice!
Alice:I got it. Go Pegasus! Rose collection!
Pegasus drains dragoon spin.
Delta:let's finish this go Diabolos!
Valkyrie blocks the attack.
Valt:you forgot about me?
Alice:are you sure about that?
Valkyrie is sent flying.
Valt:nani this power.
Alice:shun is not the only one can stop time you know.
Diabolos hits valkyrie then valkyrie bursts.
Alexander:go dragoon! Venom flow!
Diabolos and Pegasus dodges the attack.
Delta:go Alice let's show them our new move.
Alice:right.
Delta and Alice:burning recollection!
Both diabolos and Pegasus hit dragoon.
Alice:go Pegasus!
Delta:go Diabolos! Turn to ash!
Dragoon bursts.
Delta:we did it Alice.
Alice:yes we did.
Delta kisses Alice on the lips.
Chapter end
Skit 1
Shun:whoa whoa back up. Why she gets to be in episode and not me!
Free:your having issues remember.
Shun:to bad. Kai edits listen to me put me in the next episode or no more maiden for you.
Kai edits:sure thing shun.


New episode is out!

I see Delta X Alice
Yup I can't make shun x Delta but I sure can do Delta x Alice!
Can you guys predict what's going to happen now in the story?
(Nov. 03, 2020  1:34 AM)kai edits Wrote:
(Nov. 03, 2020  1:32 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: I see Delta X Alice
Yup I can't make shun x Delta but I sure can do Delta x Alice!
Can you guys predict what's going to happen now in the story?

Idk
How you guys like delta's appearance?
(Nov. 03, 2020  2:16 AM)kai edits Wrote: How you guys like delta's appearance?

Awesome
How you guys like the new ship ?
Alice x Delta
(Nov. 03, 2020  2:20 AM)kai edits Wrote: How you guys like the new ship ?
Alice x Delta

Nice
Part 3 chapter 8 shun and free vs Alice and Delta!
Alice:that was amazing Delta!
Delta:that move we did?
Alice tackles Delta to the floor.
Alice: Delta I love you.
Alice kisses Delta on the lips.
Later in shun's mind.
Shun:so who is going to battle?
Kai:I mean I can.
Kisara:I can battle.
Erica:it's up to choice is yours.
Sarah:let shun pick.
Shun:Kai you can battle but when I will when we're about to lose.
In the real world.
Free:shun are you awake.
Shun:yes I am.
Shun walks out of her room and walks to free.
Free:shun you alright?
Shun:yes.
Shun was wearing all pink.
Free:shun are wearing all pink.
Shun realizes it.
Shun:um.
Shun blushes till she turns red.
Later at the tournament.
Alice:let's do our best Delta.
Delta:right.
Shun:let's go free let's show them how we battle.
Free:right.
3 2 1 go shoot.
Shun:go maiden!
Maiden speeds up and hits Diabolos into the air.
Delta:hmmm are you sure your going to win. Dual phantom!
Free:i will take on Alice you take on Delta.
Shun:right. Maiden! Maidens ignition!
Diabolos hits maiden and the min bey.
Shun:what?
Delta:die! Shining cross!
Maiden is knocked into the air.
Shun:I am about to lose. Lose? Lose? I will win win I will win.
A dark aura forms around shun and maiden.
Shun:do not cross me!
Delta:what?
Alice:go Pegasus! Rose recollection!
Pegasus hits maiden but the attack fails.
Shun:I will win.
A bright light comes from shun.
Kai:alright! Go maiden! Guardian's barrier!
Diabolos and Pegasus attacks maiden.
Alice:nice trick. Pegasus! Rose's time!
*time stops*
Kai:maidens time!
Alice:go Pegasus! Rose overdrive!
Pegasus hits maiden.
Kai:you thought you can stop time and stop me?
Pegasus is sent flying.
*time resumes*
Alice:I was waiting for that! Go Pegasus! Rose finish!
Pegasus hits maiden while in the air.
Kai:what?
Maiden bursts.
Kai:this can't be?
Kai unfuses.
Shun:maidens redo!
Time goes back before maiden bursts.
Shun:go maiden! Maidens recollection!
Alice:break through Pegasus!
Maiden and Pegasus were sent flying.
Free:go fafnir!
Fafnir hits maiden back in play.
Shun:thanks free.
The mark of maiden glows red.
Shun:let's go free.
Free:right.
Delta:your too slow. Diabolos! Burning upper.
Diabolos knocks fafnir into the air.
Free:what?
Fafnir bursts.
Shun:go maiden!
A aura appears around shun flickering in and off.
Delta:go Diabolos!
Shun:GO MAIDEN! MAIDENS FUSION!
A bright light comes from shun.
Kisara:alright! Heaven's nova!
Delta: Diabolos! Burning slash!
Both beys hit each other.
Delta:arghhhhhhhhhhhh!
Kisara:arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Alice:go Pegasus!
Maiden hits the wall. And kisara unfuses.
Shun:you did it.
Shun laughs.
Alice:go Delta.
Diabolos hits maiden one last time.
Shun:you did it now. Maidens recollection!
Shun smirked. A huge explosion hits Diabolos.
Alice:go Pegasus! Rose recollection!
Two huge explosion hits each other.
Alice:go now!
Maiden bursts midair.
Shun:you did it big sister.
Shun laughs.
Shun:you increased my flare.
Chapter end
(Nov. 03, 2020  1:24 PM)kai edits Wrote: Part 3 chapter 8 shun and free vs Alice and Delta!
Alice:that was amazing Delta!
Delta:that move we did?
Alice tackles Delta to the floor.
Alice: Delta I love you.
Alice kisses Delta on the lips.
Later in shun's mind.
Shun:so who is going to battle?
Kai:I mean I can.
Kisara:I can battle.
Erica:it's up to choice is yours.
Sarah:let shun pick.
Shun:Kai you can battle but when I will when we're about to lose.
In the real world.
Free:shun are you awake.
Shun:yes I am.
Shun walks out of her room and walks to free.
Free:shun you alright?
Shun:yes.
Shun was wearing all pink.
Free:shun are wearing all pink.
Shun realizes it.
Shun:um.
Shun blushes till she turns red.
Later at the tournament.
Alice:let's do our best Delta.
Delta:right.
Shun:let's go free let's show them how we battle.
Free:right.
3 2 1 go shoot.
Shun:go maiden!
Maiden speeds up and hits Diabolos into the air.
Delta:hmmm are you sure your going to win. Dual phantom!
Free:i will take on Alice you take on Delta.
Shun:right. Maiden! Maidens ignition!
Diabolos hits maiden and the min bey.
Shun:what?
Delta:die! Shining cross!
Maiden is knocked into the air.
Shun:I am about to lose. Lose? Lose? I will win win I will win.
A dark aura forms around shun and maiden.
Shun:do not cross me!
Delta:what?
Alice:go Pegasus! Rose recollection!
Pegasus hits maiden but the attack fails.
Shun:I will win.
A bright light comes from shun.
Kai:alright! Go maiden! Guardian's barrier!
Diabolos and Pegasus attacks maiden.
Alice:nice trick. Pegasus! Rose's time!
*time stops*
Kai:maidens time!
Alice:go Pegasus! Rose overdrive!
Pegasus hits maiden.
Kai:you thought you can stop time and stop me?
Pegasus is sent flying.
*time resumes*
Alice:I was waiting for that! Go Pegasus! Rose finish!
Pegasus hits maiden while in the air.
Kai:what?
Maiden bursts.
Kai:this can't be?
Kai unfuses.
Shun:maidens redo!
Time goes back before maiden bursts.
Shun:go maiden! Maidens recollection!
Alice:break through Pegasus!
Maiden and Pegasus were sent flying.
Free:go fafnir!
Fafnir hits maiden back in play.
Shun:thanks free.
The mark of maiden glows red.
Shun:let's go free.
Free:right.
Delta:your too slow. Diabolos! Burning upper.
Diabolos knocks fafnir into the air.
Free:what?
Fafnir bursts.
Shun:go maiden!
A aura appears around shun flickering in and off.
Delta:go Diabolos!
Shun:GO MAIDEN! MAIDENS FUSION!
A bright light comes from shun.
Kisara:alright! Heaven's nova!
DeltaGriniabolos! Burning slash!
Both beys hit each other.
Delta:arghhhhhhhhhhhh!
Kisara:arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Alice:go Pegasus!
Maiden hits the wall. And kisara unfuses.
Shun:you did it.
Shun laughs.
Alice:go Delta.
Diabolos hits maiden one last time.
Shun:you did it now. Maidens recollection!
Shun smirked. A huge explosion hits Diabolos.
Alice:go Pegasus! Rose recollection!
Two huge explosion hits each other.
Alice:go now!
Maiden bursts midair.
Shun:you did it big sister.
Shun laughs.
Shun:you increased my flare.
Chapter end

I can tell she is going to go insane. Wow this battle was intense
(Nov. 03, 2020  2:57 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:
(Nov. 03, 2020  1:24 PM)kai edits Wrote: Part 3 chapter 8 shun and free vs Alice and Delta!
Alice:that was amazing Delta!
Delta:that move we did?
Alice tackles Delta to the floor.
Alice: Delta I love you.
Alice kisses Delta on the lips.
Later in shun's mind.
Shun:so who is going to battle?
Kai:I mean I can.
Kisara:I can battle.
Erica:it's up to choice is yours.
Sarah:let shun pick.
Shun:Kai you can battle but when I will when we're about to lose.
In the real world.
Free:shun are you awake.
Shun:yes I am.
Shun walks out of her room and walks to free.
Free:shun you alright?
Shun:yes.
Shun was wearing all pink.
Free:shun are wearing all pink.
Shun realizes it.
Shun:um.
Shun blushes till she turns red.
Later at the tournament.
Alice:let's do our best Delta.
Delta:right.
Shun:let's go free let's show them how we battle.
Free:right.
3 2 1 go shoot.
Shun:go maiden!
Maiden speeds up and hits Diabolos into the air.
Delta:hmmm are you sure your going to win. Dual phantom!
Free:i will take on Alice you take on Delta.
Shun:right. Maiden! Maidens ignition!
Diabolos hits maiden and the min bey.
Shun:what?
Delta:die! Shining cross!
Maiden is knocked into the air.
Shun:I am about to lose. Lose? Lose? I will win win I will win.
A dark aura forms around shun and maiden.
Shun:do not cross me!
Delta:what?
Alice:go Pegasus! Rose recollection!
Pegasus hits maiden but the attack fails.
Shun:I will win.
A bright light comes from shun.
Kai:alright! Go maiden! Guardian's barrier!
Diabolos and Pegasus attacks maiden.
Alice:nice trick. Pegasus! Rose's time!
*time stops*
Kai:maidens time!
Alice:go Pegasus! Rose overdrive!
Pegasus hits maiden.
Kai:you thought you can stop time and stop me?
Pegasus is sent flying.
*time resumes*
Alice:I was waiting for that! Go Pegasus! Rose finish!
Pegasus hits maiden while in the air.
Kai:what?
Maiden bursts.
Kai:this can't be?
Kai unfuses.
Shun:maidens redo!
Time goes back before maiden bursts.
Shun:go maiden! Maidens recollection!
Alice:break through Pegasus!
Maiden and Pegasus were sent flying.
Free:go fafnir!
Fafnir hits maiden back in play.
Shun:thanks free.
The mark of maiden glows red.
Shun:let's go free.
Free:right.
Delta:your too slow. Diabolos! Burning upper.
Diabolos knocks fafnir into the air.
Free:what?
Fafnir bursts.
Shun:go maiden!
A aura appears around shun flickering in and off.
Delta:go Diabolos!
Shun:GO MAIDEN! MAIDENS FUSION!
A bright light comes from shun.
Kisara:alright! Heaven's nova!
DeltaGriniabolos! Burning slash!
Both beys hit each other.
Delta:arghhhhhhhhhhhh!
Kisara:arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Alice:go Pegasus!
Maiden hits the wall. And kisara unfuses.
Shun:you did it.
Shun laughs.
Alice:go Delta.
Diabolos hits maiden one last time.
Shun:you did it now. Maidens recollection!
Shun smirked. A huge explosion hits Diabolos.
Alice:go Pegasus! Rose recollection!
Two huge explosion hits each other.
Alice:go now!
Maiden bursts midair.
Shun:you did it big sister.
Shun laughs.
Shun:you increased my flare.
Chapter end

I can tell she is going to go insane. Wow this battle was intense
Who shun is going insane? The battle was epic.
cant wait until eda comes in lol
(Nov. 03, 2020  3:00 PM)kai edits Wrote:
(Nov. 03, 2020  2:57 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: I can tell she is going to go insane. Wow this battle was intense
Who shun is going insane? The battle was epic.

Yeah Shun
(Nov. 03, 2020  3:29 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:
(Nov. 03, 2020  3:00 PM)kai edits Wrote: Who shun is going insane? The battle was epic.

Yeah Shun
Her multiple personality disorder is going crazy.
(Nov. 03, 2020  3:33 PM)kai edits Wrote:
(Nov. 03, 2020  3:29 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Yeah Shun
Her multiple personality disorder is going crazy.

Not as crazy as her love for Free
(Nov. 03, 2020  3:34 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:
(Nov. 03, 2020  3:33 PM)kai edits Wrote: Her multiple personality disorder is going crazy.

Not as crazy as her love for Free

Yeah can you imagine how much she loves free.
(Nov. 03, 2020  3:46 PM)kai edits Wrote:
(Nov. 03, 2020  3:34 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Not as crazy as her love for Free

Yeah can you imagine how much she loves free.

It is true
How you guys like the story so far?
BuilderROB and DeltaZakuro can you guys rate the story so far

Part 3 chapter 9 Awaken shun's new personality!/shu discovery!
Free:shun are you awake?
Shun:I am up free.
Free kisses shun on the lips.
Free:I love you shun.
Shun:I love you too.
I'm shun's mind.
Sarah:shun your wearing pink underwear again.
Shun blushes.
Erica:shun you need to figure out how we are all going to go back in to one personality again.
Shun:I like having you guys here with me.
Kisara:this is pretty boring shun.
Kai:I agree with kisara.
Shun:it's going to take awhile.
In the real world.
Shun sighs.
Free:what's wrong shun.
Shun:my other personalities want to be one again.
Free looks at shun shocked.
Free:you still haven't fully recovered. I sense their is still a bit of lanes flare in you.
Shun:it's fine I like having multiple personalities it's fine.
Free:ok just get some rest.
Later during training with shu.
Shu:shun you improved alot since the flare injury split your personality in two 5 people.
Shun:well it was kisara idea to stay like this.
Shu:can I talk to her.
Shun:sure.
A bright light comes from shun.
Kisara:you wanted to talk big brother?
Shu:so your ok with being like this?
Kisara:sure I don't mind. You know what?
Kisara kisses shu on the lips.
Kisara:if I am here with you I will be glad to stay.
Shu:ok kisara.
Kisara:see you later.
Kisara unfuses.
Shun:well?
Shu:looks like we're good to go. To start your new training.
Later
Shun:let's go shu!
3 2 1 go shoot.
Shu:go spriggan!
Spriggan hits maiden.
Shun:argh!
Shun grabs her chest.
Shu:are you ok shun.
Shun:yes I am.
???:shun be gone.
The mystery personality posses shun's body.
Lana:much better. shun's body is insanely strong.
Maiden hits spriggan into the air.
Lana:go maiden! Maidens control.
Spriggan moves weirdly in the stadium.
Chapter end
part 3 chapter 10 Lana vs shu/a new girl in town Mary Aizen!
Lana:dance dance spriggan!
Lana laughs as spriggan is moving closer to the edge of the stadium.
Shu:not good. Go spriggan!
Spriggan flys into the air.
Lana:I win! Maidens recollection control art!
A huge explosion hits spriggan.
???:mine if I drop in.
A beyblade knocks both spriggan and maiden out of the stadium.
???:weak as always.
Lana:who are you?
Mary:I am Mary aizen!
Lana releases shun from her control.
Shun:Mary you said?
Mary:yes why?
Akira runs into the room.
Akira:are you ok shun.
Mary:are you akira kurenai.
Akira:yes why.
Mary kisses akira on the lips.
Mary:I missed you.
Akira:I don't know you.
Flashback.
Mary:akira come on.
Akira:Mary hold on.
Akira pulls out a locket.
Mary:akira it's alright. Your ex will regret leaving you I promise.
Mary kisses akira on the lips.
Chapter end
(Nov. 05, 2020  1:05 AM)kai edits Wrote: part 3 chapter 10 Lana vs shu/a new girl in town Mary Aizen!
Lana:dance dance spriggan!
Lana laughs as spriggan is moving closer to the edge of the stadium.
Shu:not good. Go spriggan!
Spriggan flys into the air.
Lana:I win! Maidens recollection control art!
A huge explosion hits spriggan.
???:mine if I drop in.
A beyblade knocks both spriggan and maiden out of the stadium.
???:weak as always.
Lana:who are you?
Mary:I am Mary aizen!
Lana releases shun from her control.
Shun:Mary you said?
Mary:yes why?
Akira runs into the room.
Akira:are you ok shun.
Mary:are you akira kurenai.
Akira:yes why.
Mary kisses akira on the lips.
Mary:I missed you.
Akira:I don't know you.
Flashback.
Mary:akira come on.
Akira:Mary hold on.
Akira pulls out a locket.
Mary:akira it's alright. Your ex will regret leaving you I promise.
Mary kisses akira on the lips.
Chapter end

Nice chapter. But one question: Who is Mary
(Nov. 05, 2020  1:06 AM)EarthHelios Wrote:
(Nov. 05, 2020  1:05 AM)kai edits Wrote: part 3 chapter 10 Lana vs shu/a new girl in town Mary Aizen!
Lana:dance dance spriggan!
Lana laughs as spriggan is moving closer to the edge of the stadium.
Shu:not good. Go spriggan!
Spriggan flys into the air.
Lana:I win! Maidens recollection control art!
A huge explosion hits spriggan.
???:mine if I drop in.
A beyblade knocks both spriggan and maiden out of the stadium.
???:weak as always.
Lana:who are you?
Mary:I am Mary aizen!
Lana releases shun from her control.
Shun:Mary you said?
Mary:yes why?
Akira runs into the room.
Akira:are you ok shun.
Mary:are you akira kurenai.
Akira:yes why.
Mary kisses akira on the lips.
Mary:I missed you.
Akira:I don't know you.
Flashback.
Mary:akira come on.
Akira:Mary hold on.
Akira pulls out a locket.
Mary:akira it's alright. Your ex will regret leaving you I promise.
Mary kisses akira on the lips.
Chapter end

Nice chapter. But one question: Who is Mary

A special character that Jupiter requested. Mary is gonna be a important character now.