[Fan Fiction]  Beyblade burst apocalypse(15+) (part 7 ongoing)

Does it seem like a coincidence the main character keeps on winning every time or no?
(Nov. 01, 2020  1:54 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: Does it seem like a coincidence the main character keeps on winning every time or no?

I think what he's trying to do is that since Shun wins every time its gonna create some character development when she loses.
(Nov. 01, 2020  2:03 AM)SacredXcalibur Wrote:
(Nov. 01, 2020  1:54 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: Does it seem like a coincidence the main character keeps on winning every time or no?

I think what he's trying to do is that since Shun wins every time its gonna create some character development when she loses.

I just hope Shun doesnt get corrupted
Part 3 chapter 3 shun goes crazy?!/maiden vs spriggan!
During training with shu.
Shun collapses to her knees and coughs up a bit of blood.
Shun:is that all you got.
Shun wipes the blood off with hand.
Shu:no it's not. spriggan!
Spriggan hits maiden repeatedly.
Shun:ahhhhhhhhh.
Shun coughs up more blood.
Shun:more more increase my power. My mark burns with each attack that increases my flare. Keep attack more let me consume more power.
Shu:what wrong with you shun?
Maiden breaks free from spriggans attacks.
Shun:go maiden! Maidens collection!
Maiden hits spriggan and drains its spin and power.
Shu:what? Shun what are you doing.
Shun:increasing my flare.
Shu:shun get a grip of your self.
Shun:maiden!
Maiden hits spriggan once more.
Shun:die! Maidens recollection!
A huge explosion hits spriggan.
Shu:what?
Shun:arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
A random bey invades the attack and Maiden bursts.
???:looks like I made it in time.
It was Alice kurenai.
Alice:shun.
Rose Pegasus hits the wall and lands in Alice's hand.
Shun:what happened.
Shun puts her hand over her scar.
Shu:you lost control again.
Alice:you could of hurt yourself badly sis.
Shun:thank you very much i-
Shun collapses onto the floor suddenly.
Later.
Alice:I can't believe shun put so much into her battles.
Alice holds rose Pegasus tightly.
Alice:I guess I have to do the same.
Alice poses like Joseph joestar.
Alice:it's my time to help shun!
Chapter end
(Nov. 01, 2020  9:54 AM)kai edits Wrote: Part 3 chapter 3 shun goes crazy?!/maiden vs spriggan!
During training with shu.
Shun collapses to her knees and coughs up a bit of blood.
Shun:is that all you got.
Shun wipes the blood off with hand.
Shu:no it's not. spriggan!
Spriggan hits maiden repeatedly.
Shun:ahhhhhhhhh.
Shun coughs up more blood.
Shun:more more increase my power. My mark burns with each attack that increases my flare. Keep attack more let me consume more power.
Shu:what wrong with you shun?
Maiden breaks free from spriggans attacks.
Shun:go maiden! Maidens collection!
Maiden hits spriggan and drains its spin and power.
Shu:what? Shun what are you doing.
Shun:increasing my flare.
Shu:shun get a grip of your self.
Shun:maiden!
Maiden hits spriggan once more.
Shun:die! Maidens recollection!
A huge explosion hits spriggan.
Shu:what?
Shun:arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
A random bey invades the attack and Maiden bursts.
???:looks like I made it in time.
It was Alice kurenai.
Alice:shun.
Rose Pegasus hits the wall and lands in Alice's hand.
Shun:what happened.
Shun puts her hand over her scar.
Shu:you lost control again.
Alice:you could of hurt yourself badly sis.
Shun:thank you very much i-
Shun collapses onto the floor suddenly.
Later.
Alice:I can't believe shun put so much into her battles.
Alice holds rose Pegasus tightly.
Alice:I guess I have to do the same.
Alice poses like Joseph joestar.
Alice:it's my time to help shun!
Chapter end

nice chapter
Part 3 chapter 4 bloom my flower awaken rose Pegasus!
Alice:shu is shun is going to be alright.
Shu:I think so. Why did heard something familiar what shun said. Her flare?
Shu looks at Alice in shook.
Alice:it can't be!
Shu:Lane did this.
Later.
Alice:Lane battle me.
Lane:why would i?
Alice:or are you scared of losing to me.
Lane:your on.
3 2 1 go shoot.
Lane:go Lucifer.
Lucifer goes into the center.
Alice:go Pegasus!
Pegasus hits Lucifer and breaks through the barrier.
Lane:what?
Alice:go Pegasus! Rose recollection!
Pegasus hits Lucifer once more then Lucifer was hit with a massive explosion.
Lane:lucifer!
Alice:it's over!
Lucifer burst midair then Lucifers chassis snaps into two.
Lane:why did you that?
Alice:you put shun in coma by transfers some of your flare into her bey.
Lane:she was about to lose her match and won it with my flare. I wanted her to win more.
Later.
Alice picks up shun's locket.
Alice:I wonder what's in here.
It was a picture of shun and free.
Alice:I will forever love this picture. This is all I have left of you shun.
Tears run down Alice's face.
Later.
Alice:I hope shun wakes up.
Shun:where am i?
Akira and alice:your in the hospital.
Shun:who are you?
Chapter end
When will blacknight’s character be showcased? Also what will happen to the rest of the characters?
(Nov. 01, 2020  10:41 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: When will blacknight’s character be showcased? Also what will happen to the rest of the characters?
Soon in part 4 or 6
(Nov. 01, 2020  9:41 PM)kai edits Wrote: Part 3 chapter 4 bloom my flower awaken rose Pegasus!
Alice:shu is shun is going to be alright.
Shu:I think so. Why did heard something familiar what shun said. Her flare?
Shu looks at Alice in shook.
Alice:it can't be!
Shu:Lane did this.
Later.
Alice:Lane battle me.
Lane:why would i?
Alice:or are you scared of losing to me.
Lane:your on.
3 2 1 go shoot.
Lane:go Lucifer.
Lucifer goes into the center.
Alice:go Pegasus!
Pegasus hits Lucifer and breaks through the barrier.
Lane:what?
Alice:go Pegasus! Rose recollection!
Pegasus hits Lucifer once more then Lucifer was hit with a massive explosion.
Lane:lucifer!
Alice:it's over!
Lucifer burst midair then Lucifers chassis snaps into two.
Lane:why did you that?
Alice:you put shun in coma by transfers some of your flare into her bey.
Lane:she was about to lose her match and won it with my flare. I wanted her to win more.
Later.
Alice picks up shun's locket.
Alice:I wonder what's in here.
It was a picture of shun and free.
Alice:I will forever love this picture. This is all I have left of you shun.
Tears run down Alice's face.
Later.
Alice:I hope shun wakes up.
Shun:where am i?
Akira and alice:your in the hospital.
Shun:who are you?
Chapter end

WAIT WHAT NOOOOOO NOT HER MEMORIES MAN this story has improved sice you started and now im in pain
(Nov. 01, 2020  11:09 PM)kai edits Wrote:
(Nov. 01, 2020  10:41 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: When will blacknight’s character be showcased? Also what will happen to the rest of the characters?
Soon in part 4 or 6

Cool, what will happen to those characters that weren’t selected? Will they ever debut or are they just history?
(Nov. 01, 2020  11:16 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote:
(Nov. 01, 2020  11:09 PM)kai edits Wrote: Soon in part 4 or 6

Cool, what will happen to those characters that weren’t selected? Will they ever debut or are they just history?
It's a surprise.
(Nov. 01, 2020  11:34 PM)kai edits Wrote:
(Nov. 01, 2020  11:16 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: Cool, what will happen to those characters that weren’t selected? Will they ever debut or are they just history?
It's a surprise.

Also, I know that for my character I gave you this long dramatic backstory, but I would like it if you choose that (keep the bio the same, just mold the backstory to you liking).
(Nov. 01, 2020  11:39 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote:
(Nov. 01, 2020  11:34 PM)kai edits Wrote: It's a surprise.

Also, I know that for my character I gave you this long dramatic backstory, but I would like it if you choose that (keep the bio the same, just mold the backstory to you liking).
Ok.
Here a teaser for what's going to happen to shun.
Shun:where am I?
4 voices speak out of no where.
???:Your one of us now a personality!
(Nov. 01, 2020  11:40 PM)kai edits Wrote:
(Nov. 01, 2020  11:39 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: Also, I know that for my character I gave you this long dramatic backstory, but I would like it if you choose that (keep the bio the same, just mold the backstory to you liking).
Ok.
Here a teaser for what's going to happen to shun.
Shun:where am I?
4 voices speak out of no where.
???:Your one of us now a personality!

That’s pretty random
(Nov. 01, 2020  11:45 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote:
(Nov. 01, 2020  11:40 PM)kai edits Wrote: Ok.
Here a teaser for what's going to happen to shun.
Shun:where am I?
4 voices speak out of no where.
???:Your one of us now a personality!

That’s pretty random

It's a huge hint. If watch tokyo ghoul it's a huge reference since kaneki has multiple person syndrome. Try to put the pieces today and you have what happens to shun.
(Nov. 01, 2020  11:47 PM)kai edits Wrote:
(Nov. 01, 2020  11:45 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: That’s pretty random

It's a huge hint. If watch tokyo ghoul it's a huge reference since kaneki has multiple person syndrome. Try to put the pieces today and you have what happens to shun.

Wait, so all the submitted characters are going to be personalities of Shun?
no take mine out i dont want my character to be a personality
(Nov. 01, 2020  11:53 PM)beykid44 Wrote: no take mine out i dont want my character to be a personality

Hold your horses, we don’t know yet. It was just a bit of speculation

Everyone’s favorite fanship, Shun x Free is back.
No your submissions are not the personalities.

Sneak peek for next episode title
Part 3 Chapter 5 shun's personality

Part 3 chapter 5 shun's personality!
Shun:so who are you guys?
Akira:I am your little sister.
Alice:I am your big sister.
Shun:so I have siblings?
Alice:yes you do.
Shun puts her hand over her scar.
Shun:why does this feel familiar.
Akira:are you ok.
Shun:it seems I lost my memories again.
Alice:again?
Later training with shu!
Shu:hey are you alright?
Shun:I lost my memory.
In shun's head.
Kisara:shun your personality broke in 4 people.
Shun:that's why I lost my memories?
Sarah:yes that's right shun.
Erica:thats exactly what's going on.
Shun:what's going on I don't even remember how I am arghhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
Back in the real world.
A bright light comes from shun.
Kisara:much better!
Shu:kisara what happened to shun?
Kisara:the flare that came from Lucifer broke her personalities into 4 people including myself.
Shu: that's why she lost her memory.
Later.
Alice:fix shun's memory or I will break every body in your body.
Lane:jeez I just need to make contact with her bey long enough to drain the flare out of her body.
Alice:tell me will her personalities become one or stay split.
Lane:I don't know.
Alice grabs lane by the shirt and push him against the wall.
Alice:this better work or I send you to heal.
Alice let's go of her grip.
Lane:I will fix this issue please don't hurt me.
Alice:thats what I thought.
Alice walks away.
Later at shun's hospital room.
Free:shun are you awake.
Shun:who's shun?
Free:that's you. Your memories still have not returned. I guess you will remember this.
Free kisses shun on the lips.
Shun: what was that for.
Free:that did not make you remember?
Shun:I remember we kissed at beautiful sunset on our first date i-
Shun grabs her head.
Free:what's wrong shun.
Shun:ow my head hurts.
Free:try not to force yourself to remember.
Shun:i- love you.
Shun falls asleep.
Alice:she is asleep.
Alice smiles.
Free:she is in bad shape.
Alice:I hope she gets her memory back in time.
Alice puts something next to shun.
Alice:take care sis see you later.
Tears run down Alice's cheeks.
Chapter end.
I wonder what will happen next. This story has definitely come a long way
Part 3 chapter 6 Maidenvs Lucifer!/shun is back!
In shun's mind.
Shun:how is this going to work out?
Sarah:I guess you can be in control for now the rest of us will just stay here.
Shun:alright thanks.
Back in the real world.
Shun wakes up.
Akira:good morning shun!
Shun:good morning.
Shun gets out of bed.
Shun:what?
Shun collapses onto the floor.
Akira:shun you ok.
Shun:who's shun?
Akira:it's you.
Later.
Lane:Alice I need shun to battle me.
Alice:she is in no condition to battle. Maybe if kisara takes over shun's body it might work.
Later.
Alice grabs shun.
Alice:I need to take you somewhere.
Shun:wait where?
Alice:it's a surprise.
Lane:shun we meet again.
Shun:who are you? And who's shun?
Lane:battle me!
Shun:sure but I don't remember how to beyblade.
A bright light comes from shun.
Kisara:alright! I am back! Lets go lane.
3 2 1 go shoot
Lucifer hits maiden.
Lane:go Lucifer! flare drain!
Lucifer drains the flare from shun's bey.
Kisara:what? What's going on.
Kisara unfuses.
Shun:am I back?
Akira:shun are you ok.
Shun:yes I am akira.
Alice:she's back.
Shun:good grief. Go maiden!
Maiden knocks Lucifer into the air.
Shun:take on my birthright! Maidens recollection release element.
A huge burst of energy hits Lucifer.
Shun:this is my power!
Lucifer burst midair.
Alice:you won.
Shun looks at her hands.
Shun:i- i- don't know who I am really.
Tears run down shun's cheek.
Alice:shun you ok.
Shun runs away.
Alice:I guess she done.
Alice smiles.
Lane:happy now. Their is a small piece of my flare in shun's bey still.
Lane laughs.
Lane:it's too late shun is going to lose her memory again.
Alice punchs lane in the face really hard.
Alice:pathetic as always. I can't believe shun wanted to marry such a man like your self.
Lane:it's your fault for not protecting her. I-.
Alice punchs Lane hard enough to knock him off his feet.
Alice:don't mess with my family or I will end you.
Alice throws something at lane.
Alice:bye Lane.
Alice poses like Joseph joestar.
Chapter end.
(Nov. 02, 2020  1:15 PM)kai edits Wrote: Part 3 chapter 6 Maidenvs Lucifer!/shun is back!
In shun's mind.
Shun:how is this going to work out?
Sarah:I guess you can be in control for now the rest of us will just stay here.
Shun:alright thanks.
Back in the real world.
Shun wakes up.
Akira:good morning shun!
Shun:good morning.
Shun gets out of bed.
Shun:what?
Shun collapses onto the floor.
Akira:shun you ok.
Shun:who's shun?
Akira:it's you.
Later.
Lane:Alice I need shun to battle me.
Alice:she is in no condition to battle. Maybe if kisara takes over shun's body it might work.
Later.
Alice grabs shun.
Alice:I need to take you somewhere.
Shun:wait where?
Alice:it's a surprise.
Lane:shun we meet again.
Shun:who are you? And who's shun?
Lane:battle me!
Shun:sure but I don't remember how to beyblade.
A bright light comes from shun.
Kisara:alright! I am back! Lets go lane.
3 2 1 go shoot
Lucifer hits maiden.
Lane:go Lucifer! flare drain!
Lucifer drains the flare from shun's bey.
Kisara:what? What's going on.
Kisara unfuses.
Shun:am I back?
Akira:shun are you ok.
Shun:yes I am akira.
Alice:she's back.
Shun:good grief. Go maiden!
Maiden knocks Lucifer into the air.
Shun:take on my birthright! Maidens recollection release element.
A huge burst of energy hits Lucifer.
Shun:this is my power!
Lucifer burst midair.
Alice:you won.
Shun looks at her hands.
Shun:i- i- don't know who I am really.
Tears run down shun's cheek.
Alice:shun you ok.
Shun runs away.
Alice:I guess she done.
Alice smiles.
Lane:happy now. Their is a small piece of my flare in shun's bey still.
Lane laughs.
Lane:it's too late shun is going to lose her memory again.
Alice punchs lane in the face really hard.
Alice:pathetic as always. I can't believe shun wanted to marry such a man like your self.
Lane:it's your fault for not protecting her. I-.
Alice punchs Lane hard enough to knock him off his feet.
Alice:don't mess with my family or I will end you.
Alice throws something at lane.
Alice:bye Lane.
Alice poses like Joseph joestar.
Chapter end.

It seems like Lane messed with the wrong girls
(Nov. 02, 2020  3:45 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:
(Nov. 02, 2020  1:15 PM)kai edits Wrote: Part 3 chapter 6 Maidenvs Lucifer!/shun is back!
In shun's mind.
Shun:how is this going to work out?
Sarah:I guess you can be in control for now the rest of us will just stay here.
Shun:alright thanks.
Back in the real world.
Shun wakes up.
Akira:good morning shun!
Shun:good morning.
Shun gets out of bed.
Shun:what?
Shun collapses onto the floor.
Akira:shun you ok.
Shun:who's shun?
Akira:it's you.
Later.
Lane:Alice I need shun to battle me.
Alice:she is in no condition to battle. Maybe if kisara takes over shun's body it might work.
Later.
Alice grabs shun.
Alice:I need to take you somewhere.
Shun:wait where?
Alice:it's a surprise.
Lane:shun we meet again.
Shun:who are you? And who's shun?
Lane:battle me!
Shun:sure but I don't remember how to beyblade.
A bright light comes from shun.
Kisara:alright! I am back! Lets go lane.
3 2 1 go shoot
Lucifer hits maiden.
Lane:go Lucifer! flare drain!
Lucifer drains the flare from shun's bey.
Kisara:what? What's going on.
Kisara unfuses.
Shun:am I back?
Akira:shun are you ok.
Shun:yes I am akira.
Alice:she's back.
Shun:good grief. Go maiden!
Maiden knocks Lucifer into the air.
Shun:take on my birthright! Maidens recollection release element.
A huge burst of energy hits Lucifer.
Shun:this is my power!
Lucifer burst midair.
Alice:you won.
Shun looks at her hands.
Shun:i- i- don't know who I am really.
Tears run down shun's cheek.
Alice:shun you ok.
Shun runs away.
Alice:I guess she done.
Alice smiles.
Lane:happy now. Their is a small piece of my flare in shun's bey still.
Lane laughs.
Lane:it's too late shun is going to lose her memory again.
Alice punchs lane in the face really hard.
Alice:pathetic as always. I can't believe shun wanted to marry such a man like your self.
Lane:it's your fault for not protecting her. I-.
Alice punchs Lane hard enough to knock him off his feet.
Alice:don't mess with my family or I will end you.
Alice throws something at lane.
Alice:bye Lane.
Alice poses like Joseph joestar.
Chapter end.

It seems like Lane messed with the wrong girls
Yeah 😂😂😂😂
Alice beats Lane lol
Man in Sparking Lane has plot armour.
But in Apocalypse Lane gets beykicked
(Nov. 02, 2020  3:53 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Man in Sparking Lane has plot armour.
But in Apocalypse Lane gets beykicked
What's better sparking or beyblade burst apocalypse?