I updated my first post (Again)

This is what I added (And I'll add more)

Characters:

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1) Drake Kazeryu

"Viking Dragoon is going to be the strongest bey in the World!!"

Appearance: He has black hair and blue eyes. Drake wears a white shirt which has a big letter "D" on it. And a Sky Blue jacket (which a dragon on the back), A black jeans, a belt (which has beyblade logo) and white Shoes.

Height: 138 cm

Personality: He has long green hair and brown eyes. He's very overconfident and strategic type of blader. Once he decides something to do, He gets it done in less time. He has a unbreakable bond with Dragoon, both Drake and Dragoon consider themselves as partners. He thinks Aiger is not worthy to be the World Champion. He is always in sync with Dragoon which helps both of them to unleashe their full potential.

Beyblade: Viking Dragoon .Breeze Instinct Quick' -Wind. (Left-Spin Attack Type).

2) Aiden Sumeragi

"Viking Ares is gonna rule the world of Beyblade!!"

Appearance: He wears a Half-Sleeves Red Shirt, a Grey coat (Which has a fire symbol on the back and and a small fiery dragoon on the front left of his coat), blue jeans, a belt(Which has a big letter "I") and black shoes.

Height: 165 cm


Personality: He's a greedy guy and want to become the emperor of beyblade no matter what. He always fakes his nice self to everybody. He's very jealous of Valt and the other stronger bladers.

Beyblade: Viking Ares .Treble Instinct Destroy -Nullify


3) Ben Sumeragi

"You're looking at the World's Strongest Blader!"



Appearance: His hair is white and eyes are yellow. He wears a Black Shirt with a blue tie, a half sleeves purple jacket (Which has a demon on the back), brown jeans and black shoes.

Height: 162 cm

Personality: Ben is a hard-working Blader who trains more than anyone else. He has a great connection with his bey. He looks down on his opponents (No matter who it is). He developed an interest for Drake, as he was in complete sync with his bey in every battle.

Beyblade: Magic Baldur .Cease 10 Atomic -Obstruct.

Upcoming Chapters (I did some changes)

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Chapter 15: The Dragon of Arakawa!

Chapter 16: Thunderstorm! Lightning Jupiter!!

Chapter 17: The Turbo Festival Begins!!

Chapter 18: The Soul Keeper! Meteo Aqen!!

Chapter 19: Twin Dragon Strategy! Beat'em all!!

Chapter 20: Fly Once Again! Redux Phoenix!!

twin dragon? Is it a upgrade for Dragoon? Or a team battle?

Upcoming Chapters (I did some changes)

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Chapter 15: The Dragon of Arakawa!

Chapter 16: Thunderstorm! Lightning Jupiter!!

Chapter 17: The Turbo Festival Begins!!

Chapter 18: The Soul Keeper! Meteo Aqen!!

Chapter 19: Twin Dragon Strategy! Beat'em all!!

Chapter 20: Fly Once Again! Redux Phoenix!!

twin dragon? Is it a upgrade for Dragoon? Or a team battle?

You’ll get to know when I’ll release it.

Me likely the name of de episode!

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   "From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

Tag team special move maybe?

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Rank 0th means I'm better than 1st

Lightning Jupiter .Quint Element Pulse -Nebula

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It's a right-spinning Defense Type


VS Chip: Jupiter, the lord of thunder.

VS Blade: Lightning, The blade has 4 blades covered with metal in a semi-circular shape to improve the stamina, defence and balance of the bey. The blade has rubber burst stoppers, but the burst stoppers can be clicked through, I mean they won't make it immune to burst but instead increases burst resistance.

VS Core: Quint, The core has 5 huge metal points, 3 on one side and 2 on the other side.

Forge Disc: Element, The disk has a oval shape and has plastic wings on the outer side which pops out when the bey is launched hardly.

Driver: Pulse, a very sharp tip to improve the defense and it has two plastic blades which are free-spining. Whenever the bey gets off-balanced it will increase LAD.

VS Weight: Nebula, If the Bey is hard launched, it will surround the layer with a circular ring (Improved version of 2D), (And when the ring is worn down, it will be awakened. Then it'll be more circular for improved defense and stamina).

The Beyblades of Olympus: (A thing I planned for third arc)

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Disaster Minokawa (Balance)
Hallow Terra (Attack)
Sol Phoebus (Defense)
Lunar Diana (Stamina)
You can search these names, It's a reference to something.

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1) Jupiter's gimmick, I decided to make it more gimmick-ish,

Lightning Blade: The blade has rubber burst stoppers, but the burst stoppers can be clicked through, I mean they won't make it immune to burst but instead increases burst resistance.

Nebula Weight: So I changed it's gimmick. If the Bey is hard launched, it will surround the layer with a circular ring (Improved version of 2D), (And when the ring is worn down, it will be awakened. Then it'll be more circular for improved defense and stamina).

2) There will be a 1 week time-skip between chapter 13 and 14.

3) Aqen is going to be dual-spin Attack type

4) I removed Red Eye from the tournament.

5) About Chapter 19, It will be a team battle, Drake and Aiden VS Valt and Hyde.

That's all

The Beyblades of Olympus: (A thing I planned for third arc)

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Disaster Minokawa (Balance)
Hallow Terra (Attack)
Sol Phoebus (Defense)
Lunar Diana (Stamina)
You can search these names, It's a reference to something.

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Update:

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1) Jupiter's gimmick, I decided to make it more gimmick-ish,

Lightning Blade: The blade has rubber burst stoppers, but the burst stoppers can be clicked through, I mean they won't make it immune to burst but instead increases burst resistance.

Nebula Weight: So I changed it's gimmick. If the Bey is hard launched, it will surround the layer with a circular ring (Improved version of 2D), (And when the ring is worn down, it will be awakened. Then it'll be more circular for improved defense and stamina).

2) There will be a 1 week time-skip between chapter 13 and 14.

3) Aqen is going to be dual-spin Attack type

4) I removed Red Eye from the tournament.

5) About Chapter 19, It will be a team battle, Drake and Aiden VS Valt and Hyde.

That's all  

You're using roman names... That's smart.
Anyways, for those who will not search: 

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Terra = Gaia (aka Mother Earth)
Phoebos = Apollo
Diana = Artemis
Minokawa = A big dragon-like bird from philippine legends

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Rank 0th means I'm better than 1st

The Beyblades of Olympus: (A thing I planned for third arc)

Spoiler (Click to View)

Disaster Minokawa (Balance)
Hallow Terra (Attack)
Sol Phoebus (Defense)
Lunar Diana (Stamina)
You can search these names, It's a reference to something.

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Update:

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1) Jupiter's gimmick, I decided to make it more gimmick-ish,

Lightning Blade: The blade has rubber burst stoppers, but the burst stoppers can be clicked through, I mean they won't make it immune to burst but instead increases burst resistance.

Nebula Weight: So I changed it's gimmick. If the Bey is hard launched, it will surround the layer with a circular ring (Improved version of 2D), (And when the ring is worn down, it will be awakened. Then it'll be more circular for improved defense and stamina).

2) There will be a 1 week time-skip between chapter 13 and 14.

3) Aqen is going to be dual-spin Attack type

4) I removed Red Eye from the tournament.

5) About Chapter 19, It will be a team battle, Drake and Aiden VS Valt and Hyde.

That's all  

You're using roman names... That's smart.
Anyways, for those who will not search: 

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Terra = Gaia (aka Mother Earth)
Phoebos = Apollo
Diana = Artemis
Minokawa = A big dragon-like bird from philippine legends

There's a lil bit more

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Minokawa lives in outer space which can devour the sun and the moon, and would try to do the same with the earth.

I can see the plot.... So Aiden will be irrelevant in 3rd arc?

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and now Jupiter's a defense type?

I can see the plot.... So Aiden will be irrelevant in 3rd arc?

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and now Jupiter's a defense type?

Yeah I decided to make it a defense type. And Aiden will be relevant until the end.

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As it was a 1 week timeskip, Every blader, except Drake, Ben, Aiden and Yuito will wear different clothes


Valt

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I can see the plot.... So Aiden will be irrelevant in 3rd arc?

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and now Jupiter's a defense type?

Yeah I decided to make it a defense type. And Aiden will be relevant until the end.

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As it was a 1 week timeskip, Every blader, except Drake, Ben, Aiden and Yuito will wear different clothes


Valt

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Is there going to be Roman version vs Greek version thing? (Zeus vs Jupiter; Artemis vs Diana; etc...)

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Rank 0th means I'm better than 1st

Yeah I decided to make it a defense type. And Aiden will be relevant until the end.

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As it was a 1 week timeskip, Every blader, except Drake, Ben, Aiden and Yuito will wear different clothes


Valt

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Is there going to be Roman version vs Greek version thing? (Zeus vs Jupiter; Artemis vs Diana; etc...)

No that's not going to happen. Taking Zeus in means bringing Zac back (Zeus is Zeutron) And same goes for Artemis.

Yeah I decided to make it a defense type. And Aiden will be relevant until the end.

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As it was a 1 week timeskip, Every blader, except Drake, Ben, Aiden and Yuito will wear different clothes


Valt

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Is there going to be Roman version vs Greek version thing? (Zeus vs Jupiter; Artemis vs Diana; etc...)

That would be cool if that happened!

Is there going to be Roman version vs Greek version thing? (Zeus vs Jupiter; Artemis vs Diana; etc...)

No that's not going to happen. Taking Zeus in means bringing Zac back (Zeus is Zeutron) And same goes for Artemis.

I mean, in a world where you can create your own bey and it becomes legal to use, anyone can have a evolution of Zeus... (same for the others).

But you do you, it's your fanfic after all

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Rank 0th means I'm better than 1st

No that's not going to happen. Taking Zeus in means bringing Zac back (Zeus is Zeutron) And same goes for Artemis.

I mean, in a world where you can create your own bey and it becomes legal to use, anyone can have a evolution of Zeus... (same for the others).

But you do you, it's your fanfic after all

I guess I'll add Zac himself, But the arc 3 is a little different and I guess the battle btw Phoebus VS Apollo and Diana VS Artemis might not happen.

Ya know It'll be interesting to see a battle between zuetron and jupiter.

The Ranking

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Aiger: #1

Shu: #2

Valt: #5

Free: #6

Lui: #7

Aiden: #12

Drake: #25

Ben: #30

Yuito: #35

The Ranking

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Aiger: #1

Shu: #2

Valt: #5

Free: #6

Lui: #7

Aiden: #12

Drake: #25

Ben: #30

Yuito: #35

when did shu become stronger than Valt

nice rankings!

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"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

Teaser of my new fan-fic (I discontinued WOLD)

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Beyblade Burst: Kiwami
The main character is Ichiban Dojima, The name Ichiban means No.1

Teaser of my new fan-fic (I discontinued WOLD)

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Beyblade Burst: Kiwami
The main character is Ichiban Dojima, The name Ichiban means No.1

holy heaven pegasus, this is awesome!!!

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"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

Chapter 14 preview:

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Hanami: Ok!! Boys and Girls! The Ranking battle between Drake Kazeryu and Xavier Bogard is going way more intense!!

(The crowd goes wild)

(The Board shows that Drake has one point and Xavier has 0 points)

Ref: Second Battle!

Xavier: You got lucky that time, but (Shows Breaker Xcalius to Drake) the real hero's going to win!

Drake: You're right! (Takes his launching stance) but the I'm the real hero!

Ref: Ready, Set!!

Drake/Xhan: 3! 2! 1! Let it Rip!!

(Dragoon lands on the stadium and began to attack Xcalius ferociously)

Xavier: (Everythings going as planned...)

(Xcalius's disc shifts twice and the five sword points aligns together)

Xavier (Unleashed his aura): Xcalius!!

(Xcalius appears from the blazing aura, and dodges from Dragoon's attacks)

Xavier: Blow him away!

(Xcalibur knocks Dragoon into the wall)

Drake (Smiles): I know what're up to.

Xavier: Saber Wall!!

(Xcalius then delievers a heavy blow and pins Dragoon between itself and the wall, which sends Dragoon flying)

Chapter 14 will release on Thursday

Chapter 14 preview:

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Hanami: Ok!! Boys and Girls! The Ranking battle between Drake Kazeryu and Xavier Bogard is going way more intense!!

(The crowd goes wild)

(The Board shows that Drake has one point and Xavier has 0 points)

Ref: Second Battle!

Xavier: You got lucky that time, but (Shows Breaker Xcalius to Drake) the real hero's going to win!

Drake: You're right! (Takes his launching stance) but the I'm the real hero!

Ref: Ready, Set!!

Drake/Xhan: 3! 2! 1! Let it Rip!!

(Dragoon lands on the stadium and began to attack Xcalius ferociously)

Xavier: (Everythings going as planned...)

(Xcalius's disc shifts twice and the five sword points aligns together)

Xavier (Unleashed his aura): Xcalius!!

(Xcalius appears from the blazing aura, and dodges from Dragoon's attacks)

Xavier: Blow him away!

(Xcalibur knocks Dragoon into the wall)

Drake (Smiles): I know what're up to.

Xavier: Saber Wall!!

(Xcalius then delievers a heavy blow and pins Dragoon between itself and the wall, which sends Dragoon flying)

Chapter 14 will release on Thursday

Ok I knkw this move, xhan did it on aiger

Picture of Dragoon Chip and Breeze Core. (It's just a picture, the gimmick of Breeze works in fic)

Picture of Dragoon Chip and Breeze Core. (It's just a picture, the gimmick of Breeze works in fic)

Breeze's gimmick is teeth hardening?