[Fan Fiction] Beyblade Burst: VS

Kiryu Kazuma · Jul. 25, 2021 2:13 PM

There will be two antagonists, first is Aiden and the second is

GenesisBlader · Jul. 25, 2021 2:34 PM

(Jul. 25, 2021 2:13 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: There will be two antagonists, first is Aiden and the second is

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Red Eye

RED EYE?! NANI!?! he's returning?

"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

Kiryu Kazuma · Jul. 25, 2021 2:35 PM

(Jul. 25, 2021 2:34 PM)BladeKingX Wrote:
(Jul. 25, 2021 2:13 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: There will be two antagonists, first is Aiden and the second is

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Red Eye

RED EYE?! NANI!?! he's returning?

*She*, Kurenai Shu's young sister

GenesisBlader · Jul. 25, 2021 2:41 PM

(Jul. 25, 2021 2:35 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote:
(Jul. 25, 2021 2:34 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: RED EYE?! NANI!?! he's returning?

*She*, Kurenai Shu's young sister

wait shu's sister's name is kurenai? sick

"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

Kiryu Kazuma · Jul. 25, 2021 2:42 PM

(Jul. 25, 2021 2:41 PM)BladeKingX Wrote:
(Jul. 25, 2021 2:35 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: *She*, Kurenai Shu's young sister

wait shu's sister's name is kurenai? sick

No, actually I miss-typed I was typing Shu Kurenai her name won't be revealed right now.

GenesisBlader · Jul. 25, 2021 2:48 PM

(Jul. 25, 2021 2:42 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote:
(Jul. 25, 2021 2:41 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: wait shu's sister's name is kurenai? sick

No, actually I miss-typed I was typing Shu Kurenai her name won't be revealed right now.

oh alright!

"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

LegendJustice · Jul. 25, 2021 2:55 PM

Shu... You are ALWAYS involved in dark stuff

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

Kiryu Kazuma · Jul. 26, 2021 10:36 AM

Redux Phoenix .Diminute Variance(Driver + Disc) -Secure

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Plus that's this is the new Red Eye. (It took me 2 hours to edit it)

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GenesisBlader · Jul. 26, 2021 1:15 PM

(Jul. 26, 2021 10:36 AM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Redux Phoenix .Diminute Variance(Driver + Disc) -Secure

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VS Chip: Phoenix

VS Layer: Redux, It has eight blades, just like Revive Phoenix, but these are more thick.

VS Core: Diminute, It is aligned with the eight blades of Redux Layer.

Disc+Driver: Variance, It has a lot of metal on it, It's used to make the layer more heavier and the driver has two modes, defence mode and counter mode. In Defence mode, The tip has a free-spinning metal ball, and in counter mode, It's a free-spinnning rubber ball,(The modes can be switched)

VS Weight: Secure, It has two modes, one for prevent the armor from falling and the second to make it fall from the layer.
Plus that's this is the new Red Eye. (It took me 2 hours to edit it)

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dang bruh nice job with both of the characters the new red eye looks cool

"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

Kiryu Kazuma · Jul. 27, 2021 3:27 PM

Chapter 12 came out of nowhere

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GenesisBlader · Jul. 27, 2021 3:35 PM

(Jul. 27, 2021 3:27 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Chapter 12 came out of nowhere

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Chapter 12: The Pledge of Demon! Obstruct Wall!!

~At Inferno Corp.~

Ben: The True VS System.....

[Fashback Starts]

Aiden: Treble Snap!!

(Dragoon Bursts)

[Flashback Ends]

Ben (Smiles): Now you got me fired up, Aiden.

Aiden (While sitting on the couch): Fired up? You really liked the upgrade huh?

Ben (Holds Baldur): Yeah, I'll make Baldur even stronger than before.

(Baldur surrounds itself with a bright purple aura).

Aiden (Stands up and walks away): Do as you wish.

~At BC Sol~

(Drake came back at BC Sol)

Valt: Oh you're back!

Drake: Yeah...

Valt: Did something happened there?

(He told Valt everything about what happened there)

Valt: I see.... So what are you gonna do now?

Drake: I'm gonna upgrade Dragoon too!

Valt: Just like Ares's parts?

Drake: Nope, I'm gonna make my bey different. I'm not a copycat like him!

Valt: Why don't you use the lab?

Drake: Sure!

(Drake runs away to BC Sol's lab)

Drake (While looking at Viking Dragoon's Layer): You're already look perfect.... What upgrade should I give you?

Drake: Besides, You already have 3 Beys abilities...

(Drake looks closely at Viking Layer's 3 blades)

Drake: These blades looks a lil bit short.... Alright! I've got an idea!

(Drake begins to create the VS Weight and VS Core)

~At Inferno Corp.~

Ben (while holding his upgraded bey): It's ready.

Yuito: It looks so different than before....

Ben (Points his finger at Yuito): You'll be Baldur's first prey, Yuito.

Yuito: Don't look down on me! I'm stronger than I look!

Ben (Smiles): Is that so?

(A Drone came out of nowhere)

Drone: First Battle!

(Ben and Yuito takes their launching stance)

Drone: Ready, Set!

Ben/Yuito: 3!2!1! Let it Rip!!

(Baldur takes the center)

Yuito: I'll send your bey flying!

(Yuito's bey keeps on hitting Baldur, but it couldn't even move it)

Ben: Obstruct Wall!!

(Baldur's eyes glows and it created a purple barrier around itself)

Yuito: That won't stop me!

(Yuito's bey hits the purple barrier and gets destroyed in pieces)

Yuito: No Way....

Drone: Magic Baldur, Burst finish!!

(Yuito picks up his Bey's shattered pieces)

Ben: Your bey wasn't strong enough to withstand that attack.

Yuito: You'll pay for this!!

Ben: Don't cry like a wimp, I didn't did that on purpose, Go and get yourself a new one.

(Ben walks away)

~At BC Sol~

Drake (While holding Breeze Core and Wind Weight): Alright, It's finished!

Valt (Walks towards him): It looks great!

Drake (Attaches the parts on the layer and assembles Dragoon): It looks more powerful than before!

Valt (Holds Valtryek on his hand): Let's test your Bey's power then.

Drake (Smiles): Yeah, why not!

(Both of them reached the stadium)

Drake (Takes his launching stance): Ready?

Valt (Takes his launching stance): Yeah!

Drake/Valt: 3!2!1! Let it Rip!!

Drake: Dash Launch!

(Dragoon uses the slops of the stadium and tries to attack Valtryek)

Valt: Valtryek!

(Valtryek dodges Dragoon's attack with the help of the evolution driver, Dragoon hits the wall of the stadium)

Drake: It's not over yet! Viking Boost!!

(Dragoon boosts it's speed with the help of the wall)

Valt (emits a bright blue aura which surounds him): Valtryek!!

(Valtryek appears piercing through the aura)

Valt: Turbo Valtryek Whip!!

(Valtryek's blades began to shine and hits Dragoon, knocking it out from the stadium)

Drake (Picks up Dragoon): Things will be different this time!

Valt: (How did it didn't burst..?)

Valt (Takes his launching stance): This time Valtryek will burst Dragoon!

(Valt surrounds himself by a glowing blue aura and Valtryek appeared behind him)

Drake: Valt...

Drake (Takes his launching stance and his aura surrounds him): I won't let you, Dragoon will be victorious!

Drake/Valt: 3!2!1! Let it rip!!

Drake: Dragoon! Send Valtryek Flying!!

(Dragoon's Blades shines)

Drake: Breeze Hurricane!!

(Dragoon unleashed a tornado)

Valt: Rush Launch!

(Dragoon and Valtryek hits each other again and again)

Valt (surrounds himself with his aura): Finish this, Valtryek!!

(Valtryek appears piercing through the aura)

(Valtryek hits Dragoon which stops the tornado)

Valt: Alright! We got this!

Drake (Unleashes his aura): Dragoon!!

(Dragoon appears scorching through his aura)

Valt: Turbo Valtryek Whip!!

(Valtryek's blades begins to shine)

Drake: Ultra Viking Crash!!

(Dragoon's extended blades begins to shine)

(Dragoon and Valtryek clashes each other which creates a huge explosion and sparks on the Stadium)

Drake: Knock it out!!

(Dragoon's eyes shines and he pushes Valtryek's turbo blades and sends it flying)

Valt (looks at Valtryek): Valtrye-

(Valtryek Bursts mid-air)

Drake (jumps): We did it!!

Valt (Looks at Drake): (He's got a great bond with his bey..)

Valt: It was a nice battle, I had so much fun!

Drake: Me too. Now I think I can even beat Aiden...

(Haruka came running at Drake with a tab on her hand)

Drake: What's the matter?

Haruka: It's that guy... He challenged you!

(Drake looks at the tab)

Drake: It's Ben!

Ben: Drake Kazeryu... You've got me impressed. Your match with Phi was brilliant. Only few people can impress me...

Ben (Shows his bey): Consider yourself lucky, Drake. Baldur is more excited than me to take you on.

Drake: He upgraded his bey too..?

[To Be Continued]

nice episode!!

"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

LegendJustice · Jul. 27, 2021 5:25 PM

Nice episode

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

Kiryu Kazuma · Jul. 27, 2021 6:22 PM

Viking Dragoon's special moves (Upgraded)

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GenesisBlader · Jul. 27, 2021 6:24 PM

(Jul. 27, 2021 6:22 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Viking Dragoon's special moves (Upgraded)

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Breeze Hurricane: With the help of the extended wings and improved balance of this bey, it can create Tornado.

Ultra Viking Crash: Improved version of Viking Crash.

Viking Upper: The Wind weight makes the blades more upper, So it can send beys flying.

Wind Whip: Improved version of Viking Whip.

cool beans

"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

Kiryu Kazuma · Jul. 29, 2021 12:38 PM

The Next Bey (Hint):

RA .Tr We Ag' -Sw/Si

Hollowmind13 · Jul. 29, 2021 1:47 PM

(Jul. 29, 2021 12:38 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: The Next Bey (Hint):

RA .Tr We Ag' -Sw/Si

Ares is evolving, nice (I doubt It is Ashura/Ashindra)

Rank 0th means I'm better than 1st

Kiryu Kazuma · Jul. 29, 2021 1:58 PM

(Jul. 29, 2021 1:47 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:
(Jul. 29, 2021 12:38 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: The Next Bey (Hint):

RA .Tr We Ag' -Sw/Si
Ares is evolving, nice (I doubt It is Ashura/Ashindra)

It's Achilles.... and I bet you know what Tr means

I’ve changed the episodes titles

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Demon Belial · Jul. 29, 2021 4:50 PM

(Jul. 29, 2021 12:38 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: The Next Bey (Hint):

RA .Tr We Ag' -Sw/Si

Tr is turbo and the other one is Sword and second migjt be shield. I dont have any idea of the othel two

GenesisBlader · Jul. 29, 2021 5:02 PM

ag' might be aegus'

"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

LegendJustice · Jul. 29, 2021 5:08 PM

Tr is Turbo and RA is like Raper?

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

Kiryu Kazuma · Jul. 29, 2021 5:17 PM

It's Reign Achilles .Turbo Wield Augment' -Sword/Shield

GenesisBlader · Jul. 29, 2021 5:20 PM

(Jul. 29, 2021 5:17 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: It's Reign Achilles .Turbo Wield Augment' -Sword/Shield

dang i was so off i dont even wanna talk about it

"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

LegendJustice · Jul. 29, 2021 5:22 PM

I was long from right...

"From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

Kiryu Kazuma · Jul. 30, 2021 1:43 PM

I will post Chapter 13 Tomorrow. (It will be the longest and best chapter).

Demon Belial · Jul. 30, 2021 3:47 PM

Looking frwrd to it