[Fan Fiction]  Beyblade Burst: Shining Legends/G Warriors (Episodes in first post)

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Once im through with Shining Legends, im thinking about doing a season 2.

If i end up going through with it, would you guys like to see Zaida as the MC or a new protagonist.


Im wide open for suggestions.
(Sep. 21, 2020  11:13 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Once im through with Shining Legends, im thinking about doing a season 2.

If i end up going through with it, would you guys like to see Zaida as the MC or a new protagonist.


Im wide open for suggestions.

how about a 10 year timeskip?
(Sep. 22, 2020  4:24 AM)daheavydl3 Wrote:
(Sep. 21, 2020  11:13 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Once im through with Shining Legends, im thinking about doing a season 2.

If i end up going through with it, would you guys like to see Zaida as the MC or a new protagonist.


Im wide open for suggestions.

how about a 10 year timeskip?
Interesting. Suggestion noted.
Episode 5A - Dragon Emperor! Ravage Longinus! Preview

With Shu defeated and Zaida's resonance increasing at a rapid pace, the next Legend to beat is Lui Shirasagijo. The White Tyrant shows no mercy even now.


Drafting for the episode has begun.
Preview
Full Episode Soon
I wanna make this Lui Arc a lot more detailed and more fun than the Shu Arc (which was a pain in the actual behind, because for me Shu is a hard character to write for, which explains why his Arc was a bit rushed).

I really want Lui's arc to be a cool one. Anybody got any suggestions.
If this fan fiction was using Sparking/Surge Logic then here are the Rankings of the Legendary Bladers

1. Valt
2. Aiga
3. Shu
4. Free
5. Lui
6. Drum
7. Sisco
8. Hikaru
9. Xhaka
10. Delta
11. Hyuga
12. Rantaro
13. Daina
14. Gwyn
15. Wakiya
16. Phi
17. Ken
18. Arthur
19. Kurtz
20. Zac
21. Boa
did Hyperion and now we're doing Helios


Layer: Beam Helios - has a round shape in 10 Blade form but a sharper and more aggressive in 5 Blade form. Motif is Helios, a sun god.

Disk: Convert

Driver: Zone'

User: Hikaru Asahi

Special Moves: Zone Counter, Beam Guard, Beam Strike, Twin Strike

First Appearance: Twin Suns! Helios And Hyperion!
(Sep. 24, 2020  7:51 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: I wanna make this Lui Arc a lot more detailed and more fun than the Shu Arc (which was a pain in the actual behind, because for me Shu is a hard character to write for, which explains why his Arc was a bit rushed).

I really want Lui's arc to be a cool one. Anybody got any suggestions.

Invasion!
Lui randomly invades a battle and says oh ho so you approach me instead of running away I beat shu and your next.
(Sep. 27, 2020  7:29 PM)SunBlader98 Wrote:
(Sep. 24, 2020  7:51 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: I wanna make this Lui Arc a lot more detailed and more fun than the Shu Arc (which was a pain in the actual behind, because for me Shu is a hard character to write for, which explains why his Arc was a bit rushed).

I really want Lui's arc to be a cool one. Anybody got any suggestions.

Invasion!

Not sure what that means. You mind explaining?
(Sep. 27, 2020  9:06 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Sep. 27, 2020  7:29 PM)SunBlader98 Wrote: Invasion!

Not sure what that means. You mind explaining?

Like how Lane invaded Lui vs Hyuga
(Sep. 27, 2020  10:01 PM)SunBlader98 Wrote:
(Sep. 27, 2020  9:06 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Not sure what that means. You mind explaining?

Like how Lane invaded Lui vs Hyuga
I want to keep everyone in-character for this story, Lui just doesn't seem like the guy to do something like that.

What I meant was something I can improve on in this arc, because I'm going all in with my writing from this point forward.
(OK REALLY THIS IS MY LAST POST)

since i wont be on WBO to post, i am active a bit more on Wattpad (i am taking a break from there too but i will be slightly more active there) and this story along with Beyblade Burst: Diamond and Beyblade Burst: Super Evolution is there too.

Prefix Name Origins Or Secret Meanings Part 1

Multi Zouwu - Zouwus usually have multi-colored fur.

Revolution Valkyrie - this is a reference to Valt saying "we're gonna start a beyblade revolution" in Sparking

Warrior Spriggan - Warriors sometimes use Axes as weapons, similar to how Spriggans avatar uses one as well.

Ravage Longinus - a reference to its aggressive contact points which it uses to "Ravage" the opponent.
Prefix Name Origins Or Secret Meanings Part 2

Burn Hyperion - Burn is a Sun reference, since the Suns intense heat can burn things alive if hot enough

Beam Helios - Beam comes from the word "Sunbeam" which fits Helios, who is the god of the sun.

Eclipse Vishnu - Vishnu ensures the order of the universe, and Eclipses usually happen in our universe.

Ultimate Dragon - a reference to its awakened form.
I kinda want to see Vallery Kamazoa vs lui or gwynn or maybe shun kurenai. She seems like a cool character keep up the good work DeltaZakuro
pretty exciting stuff coming, especially right around the 3rd arc of the series

also for those who didnt know, i have officially decided to bring what was once a Wattpad Exclusive story to WBO: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena. stay tuned on that as i update quite often for that series

(Sep. 30, 2020  11:42 PM)kai edits Wrote: I kinda want to see Vallery Kamazoa vs lui or gwynn or maybe shun kurenai. She seems like a cool character keep up the good work DeltaZakuro
Vallery will fully debut during Hikaru and Hyuga's arc, Gwyn appears in the arc after.

Lui is the next to appear once i start writing again and Shun is 100% likely not going to be in it
(Sep. 30, 2020  11:43 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: pretty exciting stuff coming, especially right around the 3rd arc of the series

also for those who didnt know, i have officially decided to bring what was once a Wattpad Exclusive story to WBO: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena. stay tuned on that as i update quite often for that series

(Sep. 30, 2020  11:42 PM)kai edits Wrote: I kinda want to see Vallery Kamazoa vs lui or gwynn or maybe shun kurenai. She seems like a cool character keep up the good work DeltaZakuro
Vallery will fully debut during Hikaru and Hyuga's arc, Gwyn appears in the arc after.

Lui is the next to appear once i start writing again and Shun is 100% likely not going to be in it
I know but shun vs [font="Source Sans Pro", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif]Vallery Kamazoa will be a match worth reading. I kinda want shun to face someone like her[/font]
since i am doing japanese names for this series, i want to list the names if they were dubbed in english (basically Hasbro's naming logic here so be ready for cringe)

Multi Zouwu 14 Xt+ -> Multi Zouyu

Revolution Valkyrie 0V Ul' - Royal Valtryek

Warrior Spriggan 0T Mr' - War Spryzen

Charge Fafnir 8'P Nt - Caress Fafnir

Ravage Longinus 13R Jl' - Ravage Luinor (no change pretty much)

Blast Hyperion St Xc' - Burning Hyperion

Beam Helios Cn Zn' - Beam Helios (No Change)

Gladius Achilles 11'D Xm+ - Gallant Achilles

Eclipse Vishnu Br εp - Evanesce Vishnu

Hex Satan Hr Ym - Hex Satomb (no change other than Satan to Satomb)

Ultimate Dragon Bl Ch' - Ultimate Dragon (no change)

Ronin Diabolos Vn' Rg - Ronin Devolos (no change other than Diabolos to Devolos)

Astral Genesis Hm - Astronomer Genesis

Supercell Ragnaruk Wh Et - Singe Roktavor

Pulse Wyvern Hr Om - Pulsing Wyvron

Phantom Deathscyther 13V Hn' - Phantoms Doomscizor

Brute Xcalibur M' Ir - Bash Xcalius

Thunder Zeus 4E Pl - Thundering Zeutron

Abyss Apocalypse 0D Ul' - Avail Apocalypse

Blaze Phoenix 10 Fr - Blaze Phoenix (no change)

Serpent Kukulcan 7U Hn' - Sage Khalzar

Guard Bahamut 00P At - Guard Balkesh (no change)

Styx Kerbeus 0G Yr - Siege Kerbeus

Black Hole Vishnu Br εp - Eternal Vishnu
(Oct. 07, 2020  11:49 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: since i am doing japanese names for this series, i want to list the names if they were dubbed in english (basically Hasbro's naming logic here so be ready for cringe)

Multi Zouwu 14 Xt+ -> Multi Zouyu

Revolution Valkyrie 0V Ul' - Royal Valtryek

Warrior Spriggan 0T Mr' - War Spryzen

Charge Fafnir 8'P Nt - Caress Fafnir

Ravage Longinus 13R Jl' - Ravage Luinor (no change pretty much)

Burn Hyperion St Xc' - Burning Hyperion

Beam Helios Cn Zn' - Beam Helios (No Change)

Gladius Achilles 11'D Xm+ - Gallant Achilles

Eclipse Vishnu Br εp - Evanesce Vishnu

Hex Satan Hr Ym - Hex Satomb (no change other than Satan to Satomb)

Ultimate Dragon Bl Ch' - Ultimate Dragon (no change)

Ronin Diabolos Vn' Rg - Ronin Devolos (no change other than Diabolos to Devolos)

Astral Genesis Hm - Astronomer Genesis

Supercell Ragnaruk Wh Et - Singe Roktavor

Pulse Wyvern Hr Om - Pulsing Wyvron

Phantom Deathscyther 13V Hn' - Phantoms Doomscizor

Brute Xcalibur M' Ir - Bash Xcalius

Thunder Zeus 4E Pl - Thundering Zeutron

Abyss Apocalypse 0D Ul' - Avail Apocalypse

Blaze Phoenix 10 Fr - Blaze Phoenix (no change)

Serpent Kukulcan 7U Hn' - Sage Khalzar

Guard Bahamut 00P At - Guard Balkesh (no change)

Styx Kerbeus 0G Yr - Siege Kerbeus

Black Hole Vishnu Br εp - Eternal Vishnu
ok
(Oct. 08, 2020  12:04 AM)LEOBBG Wrote:
(Oct. 07, 2020  11:49 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: since i am doing japanese names for this series, i want to list the names if they were dubbed in english (basically Hasbro's naming logic here so be ready for cringe)

Multi Zouwu 14 Xt+ -> Multi Zouyu

Revolution Valkyrie 0V Ul' - Royal Valtryek

Warrior Spriggan 0T Mr' - War Spryzen

Charge Fafnir 8'P Nt - Caress Fafnir

Ravage Longinus 13R Jl' - Ravage Luinor (no change pretty much)

Burn Hyperion St Xc' - Burning Hyperion

Beam Helios Cn Zn' - Beam Helios (No Change)

Gladius Achilles 11'D Xm+ - Gallant Achilles

Eclipse Vishnu Br εp - Evanesce Vishnu

Hex Satan Hr Ym - Hex Satomb (no change other than Satan to Satomb)

Ultimate Dragon Bl Ch' - Ultimate Dragon (no change)

Ronin Diabolos Vn' Rg - Ronin Devolos (no change other than Diabolos to Devolos)

Astral Genesis Hm - Astronomer Genesis

Supercell Ragnaruk Wh Et - Singe Roktavor

Pulse Wyvern Hr Om - Pulsing Wyvron

Phantom Deathscyther 13V Hn' - Phantoms Doomscizor

Brute Xcalibur M' Ir - Bash Xcalius

Thunder Zeus 4E Pl - Thundering Zeutron

Abyss Apocalypse 0D Ul' - Avail Apocalypse

Blaze Phoenix 10 Fr - Blaze Phoenix (no change)

Serpent Kukulcan 7U Hn' - Sage Khalzar

Guard Bahamut 00P At - Guard Balkesh (no change)

Styx Kerbeus 0G Yr - Siege Kerbeus

Black Hole Vishnu Br εp - Eternal Vishnu
ok
please refrain from making one worded posts. especially if its saying "ok" as that doesnt really contribute to the conversation.
Preview 2
full episode soon
(Oct. 07, 2020  11:49 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: since i am doing japanese names for this series, i want to list the names if they were dubbed in english (basically Hasbro's naming logic here so be ready for cringe)

Multi Zouwu 14 Xt+ -> Multi Zouyu

Revolution Valkyrie 0V Ul' - Royal Valtryek

Warrior Spriggan 0T Mr' - War Spryzen

Charge Fafnir 8'P Nt - Caress Fafnir

Ravage Longinus 13R Jl' - Ravage Luinor (no change pretty much)

Burn Hyperion St Xc' - Burning Hyperion

Beam Helios Cn Zn' - Beam Helios (No Change)

Gladius Achilles 11'D Xm+ - Gallant Achilles

Eclipse Vishnu Br εp - Evanesce Vishnu

Hex Satan Hr Ym - Hex Satomb (no change other than Satan to Satomb)

Ultimate Dragon Bl Ch' - Ultimate Dragon (no change)

Ronin Diabolos Vn' Rg - Ronin Devolos (no change other than Diabolos to Devolos)

Astral Genesis Hm - Astronomer Genesis

Supercell Ragnaruk Wh Et - Singe Roktavor

Pulse Wyvern Hr Om - Pulsing Wyvron

Phantom Deathscyther 13V Hn' - Phantoms Doomscizor

Brute Xcalibur M' Ir - Bash Xcalius

Thunder Zeus 4E Pl - Thundering Zeutron

Abyss Apocalypse 0D Ul' - Avail Apocalypse

Blaze Phoenix 10 Fr - Blaze Phoenix (no change)

Serpent Kukulcan 7U Hn' - Sage Khalzar

Guard Bahamut 00P At - Guard Balkesh (no change)

Styx Kerbeus 0G Yr - Siege Kerbeus

Black Hole Vishnu Br εp - Eternal Vishnu

The cringe is real
(Oct. 12, 2020  8:21 PM)The Blacknight Wrote:
(Oct. 07, 2020  11:49 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: since i am doing japanese names for this series, i want to list the names if they were dubbed in english (basically Hasbro's naming logic here so be ready for cringe)

Multi Zouwu 14 Xt+ -> Multi Zouyu

Revolution Valkyrie 0V Ul' - Royal Valtryek

Warrior Spriggan 0T Mr' - War Spryzen

Charge Fafnir 8'P Nt - Caress Fafnir

Ravage Longinus 13R Jl' - Ravage Luinor (no change pretty much)

Burn Hyperion St Xc' - Burning Hyperion

Beam Helios Cn Zn' - Beam Helios (No Change)

Gladius Achilles 11'D Xm+ - Gallant Achilles

Eclipse Vishnu Br εp - Evanesce Vishnu

Hex Satan Hr Ym - Hex Satomb (no change other than Satan to Satomb)

Ultimate Dragon Bl Ch' - Ultimate Dragon (no change)

Ronin Diabolos Vn' Rg - Ronin Devolos (no change other than Diabolos to Devolos)

Astral Genesis Hm - Astronomer Genesis

Supercell Ragnaruk Wh Et - Singe Roktavor

Pulse Wyvern Hr Om - Pulsing Wyvron

Phantom Deathscyther 13V Hn' - Phantoms Doomscizor

Brute Xcalibur M' Ir - Bash Xcalius

Thunder Zeus 4E Pl - Thundering Zeutron

Abyss Apocalypse 0D Ul' - Avail Apocalypse

Blaze Phoenix 10 Fr - Blaze Phoenix (no change)

Serpent Kukulcan 7U Hn' - Sage Khalzar

Guard Bahamut 00P At - Guard Balkesh (no change)

Styx Kerbeus 0G Yr - Siege Kerbeus

Black Hole Vishnu Br εp - Eternal Vishnu

The cringe is real
agreed.

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