I saw your request to join your beyfics discord server but I don’t have the app and I have to be 17 and over (I’m 14) so I can’t, but I subscribed to thread so I will be on look out for new ep

Uh… it’s 13+ lol.  But if you don’t want to that’s fine

Hey man I decided to make my own fanfic any tips?

Hey man so if you go to my Bey100’s fan fiction thread you’ll realize that I’m making my own fanfic so I was hoping you could give some tips on how to make it the best it can be.

My first episode of my fanfic is out can you please rate it?

Sorry for the lack of writing people! Haven’t really felt like it lately but I’ll try working on something soon if I have the time.

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My first episode of my fanfic is out can you please rate it?

I don’t really rate fanfics anymore since I don’t really write that often but please don’t fill my thread with begs for me to rate your fanfiction. If I feel like it I’ll rate it but it’s kinda annoying

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The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

Sorry for the lack of writing people! Haven’t really felt like it lately but I’ll try working on something soon if I have the time.

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My first episode of my fanfic is out can you please rate it?

I don’t really rate fanfics anymore since I don’t really write that often but please don’t fill my thread with begs for me to rate your fanfiction. If I feel like it I’ll rate it but it’s kinda annoying

My bad that was a while ago

After 2 Months of almost no writing here I am again and we going to change things up. My Main Writing is going to be on Wattpad but if needed for some younger readers here you can ask if I can put the chapter below the link. SK Drive is still going to be on here as I have already gotten too far to actually be able to edit it. Next Season will be the BU Series Dax and other will have evolved into BU Beyblades and it’ll be a pretty banger season if i do say so myself. Cyber Force is already up on wattpad with the first chapter and for the covers it’ll either be a Random Beyblade Burst Anime scene or it’ll be one of my drawings (Tryna scare away readers fr fr) anyways that’ll be happening and I also made a New Wattpad Account as I was dissatisfied with my old one. I’ll try having an SK Drive Chapter up this weekend and maybe also get a Cyber Force Chapter in if we are lucky and I will try improving the battles and my writing in general making it more interesting. I’m excited to see what’s going to be in store for the future of my writing and your support is going to be very helpful.

https://www.wattpad.com/user/Daizoriya

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Chapter 2 of Cyber Force is now out!
https://www.wattpad.com/1325539476-beybl...rnado-that

If your interested in joining my Fanfiction Server link is here https://discord.gg/pXStvvddsh

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Omg Unseen is actually consistently writing nowadays this is crazy. (Just because I am an Organizer doesn't mean I can't pursue writing guys c'mon.)
Chapter 3 of Cyber Force is now out! Pay me now: https://www.wattpad.com/1332523464-beybl...gma-sulfur
I'm going to be honest idk if I even am going to make a chapter next week but maybe the week after or just whenever I feel like it don't got a schedule or nothin.

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I'm not dead you are. Wake up and read Cyber Force Chapter 3 https://www.wattpad.com/1334983657-beybl...passion-vs

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Soul Skip too Powerful? Ye prolly.

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I'm not dead you are. Wake up and read Cyber Force Chapter 3 https://www.wattpad.com/1334983657-beybl...passion-vs

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Soul Skip too Powerful? Ye prolly.

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I mean, you're not wrong.
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Chapter itself it is nice, it has the Unseen vibe. Pei sounds less and less human each chapter (bet he's a robot). Battles are nice too. 
Pei's X% thing is a little weird, but it's a way of showing clearly how much effort he is putting ig. Just feels weird that he knows the percentages, but it's nothing major.
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Soul Skip is an interesting move, gives me lightning launch vibes (the speedy valkyrie movie from s1 anime), Pelios does hit very hard with it, so a drawback wouldn't hurt. Like maybe if he goes to fast Pelios just climbs the ridge and hits the stadium walls, physics and etc. And the drawbacks could scale up as he puts more and more power idk (suffering from success essentially)

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I'm not dead you are. Wake up and read Cyber Force Chapter 3 https://www.wattpad.com/1334983657-beybl...passion-vs

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Soul Skip too Powerful? Ye prolly.

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I mean, you're not wrong.
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Chapter itself it is nice, it has the Unseen vibe. Pei sounds less and less human each chapter (bet he's a robot). Battles are nice too. 
Pei's X% thing is a little weird, but it's a way of showing clearly how much effort he is putting ig. Just feels weird that he knows the percentages, but it's nothing major.
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Soul Skip is an interesting move, gives me lightning launch vibes (the speedy valkyrie movie from s1 anime), Pelios does hit very hard with it, so a drawback wouldn't hurt. Like maybe if he goes to fast Pelios just climbs the ridge and hits the stadium walls, physics and etc. And the drawbacks could scale up as he puts more and more power idk (suffering from success essentially)

So like Soul Skip is basically a version of True Flash Shoot but faster that it’s very hard to notice which is why I used the terms disappear and reappear it’s kind of like when you’ve got a Rubber Flat speeding around the stadium but a bit faster than that so you can’t really see it but it’s moving pretty fast. I don’t know if you picked up on it I might’ve been because I didn’t do the best job saying it but the reason Pei lost the second battle is because for a couple crucial seconds of Soul Skip he lost his composure making the impact recoil of Pelios so there’s that.

Yeah Pei is getting some emotion now and maybe later on in the series I’ll go on and explain why he doesn’t express himself as much as others do. (Time to ask Chatgpt for a backstory) and when the WBBA Junior Program Arc begins then Pei’s battles will finally get a little harder and make him need to actually improve as he’s only battled a few bladers before in the past such as Ichidou, Atsushi, and some other unnamed that might be named later.

I don’t know if there will be a character contest for this one because nowadays the WBO doesn’t seem very interested in those but I’m going to have to struggle with the thing I suck at the most which is introducing a lot of characters at once and make it so it isn’t cluttered.

Thanks for your words, Hollow! I always appreciate your opinions and your thoughts for the chapters! I definitely need to start writing more but I will release Chapter 5 this weekend so look out for that.

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It's been a while since I made anything. I might try transferring all the SK Drive Chapters to wattpad but that would take a long time so maybe later in the week if I get bored. Sorry for leaving for so long. I've made some new stuff for Beyblade X called Unseen X. If you're interested give it a read or if not then I don't really care either way.

https://www.wattpad.com/story/345861214-...x-unseen-x

First Three Chapters should be there. I may continue SK Drive if I feel like it but so far I don't think so and might just focus on this and Cyber Force.

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Hey so it’s kinda been a while since I wrote something Beyblade Related. Ima try maybe doing that soon but I’m also working on other projects. I feel like Burst is kinda boring and I don’t want to devote my time to balancing two fanfics along with the project so I’ll be working on Beyblade X: Cyber Xtreme (Yes I renamed it) so sadly I will not be continuing Cyber Force but maybe if I feel like it I will decide to continue it if I have the time. Know that I kinda know how X works now, I should definitely be dishing out more chapters. This will be Peak Beyblade Fanfic, definitely better than my other ones. Maybe should roughly have about 3 Seasons if I feel like it? But yeah, hopefully y’all still here and wanna stick around for another fanfic.

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So far the combos of shown Beys in the series
Dragon Blaze 4-60 LRF (Low Rubber Flat)
9Tailed Fox 6-90 PR (Point Rubber)
Thunder Kerunos 4-80 LRB (Low Rubber Ball)
The main gimmicks of this series is probably how drivers will change their main attributes and what they’re made of (Ex Rubber, Metal, or Pom)

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Chapter 3: Beyblade Muscles!! Train, Haruto!!!
ベイブレードマッスル!!トレイン、ハルト！！！
Chapter 4: immovable Wall?! Bulwark Barrier!!!
動かない壁?!防壁バリア！！！
Chapter 5: Earn my Respect!! Yuji Vs Haruto!!!
私の尊敬を得る!!ユウジ対ハルト!!!
Chapter 6: Calm before the Storm!! Kerunos Thunder!!!
嵐の前に落ち着いて!!ケルノス・サンダー!!!

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I will be rewriting the series cause I’m not really happy with where it’s going not but like luckily I wasn’t really that far progressed.
Main Characters
(Main Character): Kazetsu Miyamoto/Leviath Storm 2-50 FR (Flat Rubber)
(Tritagonist) Yuji Kobayashi/Raijin Bolt 5-70 PM (Pom Mace)
(Tritagonist) Chiyo Estrella/ Gyuki Fume 6-80 Funnel

This Story will have a totally different approach than the last with more lore and intense battles. I’ll write the first chapter up and probably have it maybe by Sunday and then give the story summary

Story will be called Beyblade Xtreme Storm

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Xtreme Storm has been finished!! Check out the First Chapter
https://www.wattpad.com/1399520519-beybl...r-1-xtreme

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The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

Xtreme Storm has been finished!! Check out the First Chapter
https://www.wattpad.com/1399520519-beybl...r-1-xtreme

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"I think that past your great disasters, their victory stirs below your skin." // (Use Code: CINDER on BeysandBricks for 8% off!)

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✮ Player & Organizer for the Los Angeles County Beyblade community.
✮ Want to stay updated on LA County Events? Join the discord to learn more! -> discord.gg/mvsKWYSGUe

★ Formats Played: PLA, HMS, MFL, MFLZRG, LIMBO, M4D, MFB, MFB (RDFless), ZRG, BSC, BSL, HS, Hasbro Only (Burst), BGT, BST, BST (DB), BBX

Xtreme Storm has been finished!! Check out the First Chapter
https://www.wattpad.com/1399520519-beybl...r-1-xtreme

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Bro done found me out 😭

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https://www.wattpad.com/1399773906-beybl...ou-want-to Yooooo I’m on a rolll! Chapter 2 is out!!

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Bro done found me out 😭

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https://www.wattpad.com/1399773906-beybl...ou-want-to Yooooo I’m on a rolll! Chapter 2 is out!!

Aliso solos

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"I think that past your great disasters, their victory stirs below your skin." // (Use Code: CINDER on BeysandBricks for 8% off!)

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✮ Player & Organizer for the Los Angeles County Beyblade community.
✮ Want to stay updated on LA County Events? Join the discord to learn more! -> discord.gg/mvsKWYSGUe

★ Formats Played: PLA, HMS, MFL, MFLZRG, LIMBO, M4D, MFB, MFB (RDFless), ZRG, BSC, BSL, HS, Hasbro Only (Burst), BGT, BST, BST (DB), BBX

Sorry for no updates in a while! I’ll be sure to update the week after Christmas!

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Something will drop this week. I will also be making a Wattpad Version and just a Version that will be posted on the WBO! Just get ready for it!

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Chapter 3 after years 😭😭

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Beyblade Xtreme Storm Chapter 3: Xtreme Training!! Kazetsu and Kenji’s Paths Diverge!!
Kazetsu: Go Shoot!!

*Kazetsu pulls his winder out of his launcher causing his Beyblade to begin spinning flying off his launcher. Knight Shield 4-80 Taper would be speeding around the stadium along with Leviath Storm. Leviath Storm accelerates with his Star Flat Bit.*

Hikaru (Thoughts): He has began gaining more control over his launch… He’s a quick learner.

Ben: Go! Knight Shield!

Kazetsu: Go get it!

*Leviath Storm would begin accelerating out of control causing it to begin wobbling. Kazetsu would be shocked seeing this. Leviath Storm weaves towards the center where Knight Shield is hitting it hard sending it flying to the outer ridges of the stadium.*

Ben: Your Bey has Power! It’s impressive! However, sometimes, you’ll need speed to win!

*Knight Shield would retake the center as Ben grins. Leviath Storm would continue teetering around slamming Knight Shield back but it would just retake the center.*

Kazetsu: Tch..!

Hikaru (Thoughts): He’s focused on a more controlled launch. While gaining more control it good, he needs a more powerful shoot for speed to back that power up.

Ben: I’m about done with this! Knock it outta there!

*Knight Shield would intercept Leviath Storm’s attacks as both beys begin to clash. Sparks would fly as Leviath Storm pushes while Knight Shield pushes back. Both Beys would bounce off each other spinning extremely slowly. Leviath Storm would stop spinning before Knight Shield.*

Kazetsu: Tch…

Hikaru: And that’s Ben’s Win!

Ben: Yes! Another win!

Kazetsu: Let’s go again—

Hikaru: Kaze, Kaze, Kaze…

Kazetsu: Kaze?

Hikaru: You say you’ve never used a Bey before, correct?

Kazetsu: Well at the mall they’d have these public Beyblade Events where they let me borrow one. I couldn’t really win though…

Hikaru: Interesting. Leviath Storm is a Powerful Attack Type and is especially offensive with the Two Blades it has. However! You launch as if you’re using a Balance Type. You have some speed but focus on a more controlled launch.

Kazetsu: Mhm…

Hikaru: *Sighs* You don’t get it, do you?

Kazetsu: Shorter words please!

Hikaru: Leviath Storm hits hard. You don’t launch hard, you launch controlled. It can’t zoom fast enough.

Kazetsu: Oh! I get it now!

Ben: Idiot!

Kazetsu: Oi, who are you calling an idiot?!

Hikaru: Let’s calm down, shall we. Kaze, we need to start getting you into some training.

Kazetsu: It’s Kazetsu… and what training?

*Hikaru would grin as he’s walk over to the closed closet door and swing it open as weights, resistant bands, forearm trainers, and barbells would fall out of it.*

Hikaru: Weight Training! If your Bey and Launcher feel light, then it’ll be easier for you to launch with Raw Power!

Kazetsu: For real?! What’re we starting with—

*Hikaru would grab a huge vest and some arm bracelets and put them on Kazetsu. Kazetsu would get on one knee and struggle to get up.*

Kazetsu: Damn… These are heavy as hell!

Hikaru: Launch like that 100 Times.

Kazetsu: You’ve gotta be kidding me!!

Hikaru: Do them in sets of 10.

Kazetsu: Hikaru!!

Hikaru: Good luck, Kaze! Now, who wants to battle

*Kazetsu would grow a vein on his forehead as he attempts to get up but just falls back down. His face would scrunch up in anger.*

Kazetsu: Hikaru!!

~~In a Rival High School on the other side of the City~~

*Kenji would open the door as he would be met with a single person sitting around a bunch of stadiums. The man would grin as he gets up and walks towards Kenji.*

Kenji: Yo.

Isaac: Hey. I’m Issac. Aren’t you here to join the Club?

Kenji: Yeah.

Issac: Your School has a Beyblade Club too. Just join that one.

Kenji: That club is just a bunch of idiots having fun. I’m here to battle seriously.

Issac: *Grins* You don’t stand a chance against me.

Kenji: Kitsune Tails says different.

*Kenji would hold up his 6 Bladed Balance Type causing Issac’s eyebrow to raise. Issac would grin as he’d show off his 4 Bladed Defense Type.*

Issac: Galactic Phantom. Pleased to meet ya, Kitsune Tails!

Kenji (Thoughts): A Defense Type with 4 Rounded Points. These points make it harder to land a clean hit on the Bey. It uses 4-90 on Low Needle. If I want to win, I have to prioritize defense and stamina!

*Kenji would take out his launcher and walk towards the stadium. Issac would stand up and also attach his Bey to his launcher as he’s take out a headband and put it around his forehead.*

Kenji: Are you ready…?

Issac: Yup!

Kenji/Issac: 3! 2! 1! Go… Shoot!!

*Galactic Phantom and Kitsune Tails land on the stadium with a powerful slam. They would both speed towards the center as they begin clashing in the center.*

Kenji: Stay on the defensive, Kitsune Tails!

Issac: Galactic Phantom isn’t that weak.

*Galactic Phantom would slam into Kitsune Tails’ Ratchet sending it veering away. Kitsune Tails would slam into Galactic Phantom with heavy blows but none of them would take effect.*

Issac: Galactic Phantom is so short that it just makes direct contact with your Bey’s Ratchet! Your attacks are barely scratching me.

*Kenji would notice that Galactic Phantom would be making contact with Kitsune Tails’ Rachet. Kenji would grind his teeth.*

Kenji: Go for an Extreme Dash!

Issac: He’s mastered the Xtreme Dash already?

*Kitsune Tails’ would accelerate around the stadium catching onto the extreme line. Issac would recall Ekusu’s Extreme Dash, mentally comparing the Xtreme Dashes as Kitsune Tails’ would get redirected towards the center.*

Kenji: Go!

Issac: You won’t beat Galactic Phantom with a cheap imitation! Galactic Push!

*Galactic Phantom would intercept Kitsune Tails’ with its defensive contact point. It would be pushed back but just tilt backwards due to its Needle Bit. It would shoot back up, striking Kitsune Tails’ Ratchet bursting it.*

Kenji: W-What?!

Issac: I win with a Burst Finish.

Kenji: Burst Finish?

Issac: You’ve never heard of a Burst Finish?

Kenji: …

Issac: Basically, when a Bey is hit in its vital point, its Ratchet which keeps it together, it unhooks and the parts fly apart. That’s a Burst Finish.

Kenji: One more time… I want a rematch.

Issac: And why should I give you one?

Kenji: Because I can beat you. Just give me one more chance.

Issac: Alright, alright! I need the practice anyway.

~~Back at BeyClub~~

Kazetsu: Go Shoot!!

*Kazetsu would use a weighted string machine that he’d pull to replicate the pulling of his winder. The string would fly out as he pulls it and quickly retract back.*

Hikaru: Nice! You’re getting stronger!

Kazetsu: Fun and all but… When am I going to battle? I feel much stronger now!

Hikaru: Building strength doesn’t work like that… It builds overtime. You’re not going to get it overnight.

Kazetsu: For real? Then what’s the point?

Hikaru: So you can begin building muscle and strength!

*Kazetsu would frown as he continues doing reps of pulling weight. He would pull with both of his arms as Hikaru just smiles.*

Hikaru: Slowly but surely… He’s improving!

*Kazetsu would be sweating as he pulls the weights. He’d imagine himself battling alongside Leviath Storm pushing Kazetsu to push himself. Kazetsu would finish his set as he sits on the ground sweating.*

Hikaru: Okay! You’re ready for Beyblade Practice now!

Kazetsu: Finally!

Hikaru: Kaze, let’s do some basic launching drills.

Kazetsu: My name is Kazetsu!

Hikaru: Doesn’t Kaze just sound shorter and a bit cooler though?

Kazetsu: I mean… I guess…

Hikaru: Anyways! Show me your current launch!

Kazetsu: Fine, Fine!

*Kazetsu would pull out his Winder and hold onto his launcher attaching Leviath Storm. Kazetsu would grin as he’s attach his Bey to his launcher.*

Kazetsu: Go Shoot!!

*Leviath Storm would be launched at high speeds as it makes contact with the stadium floor with a thud and accelerates around the stadium. It would teeter and wobble but accelerating.*

Kazetsu: Tch…

Hikaru: You need more control. Your hands are shaking when you launch.

Kazetsu: With excitement!

Hikaru: Get in your launching position again.

*Kazetsu would get in his normal launching position as his hands begin to shake. Hikaru would hold his arms in place so they wouldn’t shake.*

Kazetsu/Hikaru: Go Shoot!!

*Leviath Storm would land on the stadium and begins accelerating. It would launch a barrage of attacks towards the center and be controlled.*

Kazetsu: Woah!

Hikaru: Yep! See what a controlled stable launch can do?

Kazetsu: Yeah! It’s so cool!

Hikaru: Just keep practicing, you’ll eventually get it. If you increase your strength by training, you’ll eventually gain mastery and power.

Kazetsu: Let’s keep practicing, Hikaru!

Hikaru: Okay, Kaze!

~~Back to where Kenji was Batting~~

*Kenji would fall to the ground sweating as his Bey would be sent flying beside his knee. Issac would laugh as he’d pick his Bey up and look down the on Kenji.*

Issac: Tuckered out after only twenty battles? You haven’t won yet, why are you giving up?

Kenji: Because victory is impossible… I can’t win.

Issac: If that’s what you want then get out of here.

*Kenji picks up his Bey and begins leaving as Issac mutters under his breath.*

Issac: Typical weak Bladers… Giving up when it gets rough.

Kenji: What the heck? What’s that supposed to mean?!

Issac: You’re weak with no drive to get stronger. You’ll never get on Pro Blader level.

Kenji: Never mind then! Let’s go again!

Issac: Oh?

Kenji: You’ll see the real power of Kitsune Tails. Just watch..!

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I know I’ve kinda already done this but I’m kinda unsatisfied with my X Story currently. I’m going to hit the Reboot Button on this one folks. The next one I work on will probably be more action and creative. I’ll try having it up soon.

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