[Fan Fiction]  Beyblade Burst SK Drive/Cyber Force

(Dec. 21, 2022  9:27 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Dec. 21, 2022  9:00 PM)Bey100 Wrote: I saw your request to join your beyfics discord server but I don’t have the app and I have to be 17 and over (I’m 14) so I can’t, but I subscribed to thread so I will be on look out for new ep

Uh… it’s 13+ lol.  But if you don’t want to that’s fine
Hey man I decided to make my own fanfic any tips?
Hey man so if you go to my Bey100’s fan fiction thread you’ll realize that I’m making my own fanfic so I was hoping you could give some tips on how to make it the best it can be.
My first episode of my fanfic is out can you please rate it?
Sorry for the lack of writing people! Haven’t really felt like it lately but I’ll try working on something soon if I have the time.

(Jan. 02, 2023  12:22 AM)Bey100 Wrote: My first episode of my fanfic is out can you please rate it?

I don’t really rate fanfics anymore since I don’t really write that often but please don’t fill my thread with begs for me to rate your fanfiction. If I feel like it I’ll rate it but it’s kinda annoying
(Jan. 19, 2023  5:00 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Sorry for the lack of writing people! Haven’t really felt like it lately but I’ll try working on something soon if I have the time.

(Jan. 02, 2023  12:22 AM)Bey100 Wrote: My first episode of my fanfic is out can you please rate it?

I don’t really rate fanfics anymore since I don’t really write that often but please don’t fill my thread with begs for me to rate your fanfiction. If I feel like it I’ll rate it but it’s kinda annoying
My bad that was a while ago
After 2 Months of almost no writing here I am again and we going to change things up. My Main Writing is going to be on Wattpad but if needed for some younger readers here you can ask if I can put the chapter below the link. SK Drive is still going to be on here as I have already gotten too far to actually be able to edit it. Next Season will be the BU Series Dax and other will have evolved into BU Beyblades and it’ll be a pretty banger season if i do say so myself. Cyber Force is already up on wattpad with the first chapter and for the covers it’ll either be a Random Beyblade Burst Anime scene or it’ll be one of my drawings (Tryna scare away readers fr fr) anyways that’ll be happening and I also made a New Wattpad Account as I was dissatisfied with my old one. I’ll try having an SK Drive Chapter up this weekend and maybe also get a Cyber Force Chapter in if we are lucky and I will try improving the battles and my writing in general making it more interesting. I’m excited to see what’s going to be in store for the future of my writing and your support is going to be very helpful.

https://www.wattpad.com/user/Daizoriya
Chapter 2 of Cyber Force is now out!
https://www.wattpad.com/1325539476-beybl...rnado-that

If your interested in joining my Fanfiction Server link is here https://discord.gg/pXStvvddsh
Omg Unseen is actually consistently writing nowadays this is crazy. (Just because I am an Organizer doesn't mean I can't pursue writing guys c'mon.)
Chapter 3 of Cyber Force is now out! Pay me now: https://www.wattpad.com/1332523464-beybl...gma-sulfur
I'm going to be honest idk if I even am going to make a chapter next week but maybe the week after or just whenever I feel like it don't got a schedule or nothin.
I'm not dead you are. Wake up and read Cyber Force Chapter 3 https://www.wattpad.com/1334983657-beybl...passion-vs

(May. 22, 2023  1:15 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I'm not dead you are. Wake up and read Cyber Force Chapter 3 https://www.wattpad.com/1334983657-beybl...passion-vs

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I mean, you're not wrong.
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Chapter itself it is nice, it has the Unseen vibe. Pei sounds less and less human each chapter (bet he's a robot). Battles are nice too. 
Pei's X% thing is a little weird, but it's a way of showing clearly how much effort he is putting ig. Just feels weird that he knows the percentages, but it's nothing major.
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Soul Skip is an interesting move, gives me lightning launch vibes (the speedy valkyrie movie from s1 anime), Pelios does hit very hard with it, so a drawback wouldn't hurt. Like maybe if he goes to fast Pelios just climbs the ridge and hits the stadium walls, physics and etc. And the drawbacks could scale up as he puts more and more power idk (suffering from success essentially)
(May. 22, 2023  11:03 PM)Hollowmind13 Wrote:
(May. 22, 2023  1:15 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I'm not dead you are. Wake up and read Cyber Force Chapter 3 https://www.wattpad.com/1334983657-beybl...passion-vs

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I mean, you're not wrong.
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Chapter itself it is nice, it has the Unseen vibe. Pei sounds less and less human each chapter (bet he's a robot). Battles are nice too. 
Pei's X% thing is a little weird, but it's a way of showing clearly how much effort he is putting ig. Just feels weird that he knows the percentages, but it's nothing major.
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Soul Skip is an interesting move, gives me lightning launch vibes (the speedy valkyrie movie from s1 anime), Pelios does hit very hard with it, so a drawback wouldn't hurt. Like maybe if he goes to fast Pelios just climbs the ridge and hits the stadium walls, physics and etc. And the drawbacks could scale up as he puts more and more power idk (suffering from success essentially)

So like Soul Skip is basically a version of True Flash Shoot but faster that it’s very hard to notice which is why I used the terms disappear and reappear it’s kind of like when you’ve got a Rubber Flat speeding around the stadium but a bit faster than that so you can’t really see it but it’s moving pretty fast. I don’t know if you picked up on it I might’ve been because I didn’t do the best job saying it but the reason Pei lost the second battle is because for a couple crucial seconds of Soul Skip he lost his composure making the impact recoil of Pelios so there’s that.

Yeah Pei is getting some emotion now and maybe later on in the series I’ll go on and explain why he doesn’t express himself as much as others do. (Time to ask Chatgpt for a backstory) and when the WBBA Junior Program Arc begins then Pei’s battles will finally get a little harder and make him need to actually improve as he’s only battled a few bladers before in the past such as Ichidou, Atsushi, and some other unnamed that might be named later.

I don’t know if there will be a character contest for this one because nowadays the WBO doesn’t seem very interested in those but I’m going to have to struggle with the thing I suck at the most which is introducing a lot of characters at once and make it so it isn’t cluttered.

Thanks for your words, Hollow! I always appreciate your opinions and your thoughts for the chapters! I definitely need to start writing more but I will release Chapter 5 this weekend so look out for that.
It's been a while since I made anything. I might try transferring all the SK Drive Chapters to wattpad but that would take a long time so maybe later in the week if I get bored. Sorry for leaving for so long. I've made some new stuff for Beyblade X called Unseen X. If you're interested give it a read or if not then I don't really care either way.

https://www.wattpad.com/story/345861214-...x-unseen-x

First Three Chapters should be there. I may continue SK Drive if I feel like it but so far I don't think so and might just focus on this and Cyber Force.
Hey so it’s kinda been a while since I wrote something Beyblade Related. Ima try maybe doing that soon but I’m also working on other projects. I feel like Burst is kinda boring and I don’t want to devote my time to balancing two fanfics along with the project so I’ll be working on Beyblade X: Cyber Xtreme (Yes I renamed it) so sadly I will not be continuing Cyber Force but maybe if I feel like it I will decide to continue it if I have the time. Know that I kinda know how X works now, I should definitely be dishing out more chapters. This will be Peak Beyblade Fanfic, definitely better than my other ones. Maybe should roughly have about 3 Seasons if I feel like it? But yeah, hopefully y’all still here and wanna stick around for another fanfic.

So far the combos of shown Beys in the series
Dragon Blaze 4-60 LRF (Low Rubber Flat)
9Tailed Fox 6-90 PR (Point Rubber)
Thunder Kerunos 4-80 LRB (Low Rubber Ball)
The main gimmicks of this series is probably how drivers will change their main attributes and what they’re made of (Ex Rubber, Metal, or Pom)

Chapter 3: Beyblade Muscles!! Train, Haruto!!!
ベイブレードマッスル!!トレイン、ハルト!!!
Chapter 4: immovable Wall?! Bulwark Barrier!!!
動かない壁?!防壁バリア!!!
Chapter 5: Earn my Respect!! Yuji Vs Haruto!!!
私の尊敬を得る!!ユウジ対ハルト!!!
Chapter 6: Calm before the Storm!! Kerunos Thunder!!!
嵐の前に落ち着いて!!ケルノス・サンダー!!!
I will be rewriting the series cause I’m not really happy with where it’s going not but like luckily I wasn’t really that far progressed.
Main Characters
(Main Character): Kazetsu Miyamoto/Leviath Storm 2-50 FR (Flat Rubber)
(Tritagonist) Yuji Kobayashi/Raijin Bolt 5-70 PM (Pom Mace)
(Tritagonist) Chiyo Estrella/ Gyuki Fume 6-80 Funnel

This Story will have a totally different approach than the last with more lore and intense battles. I’ll write the first chapter up and probably have it maybe by Sunday and then give the story summary

Story will be called Beyblade Xtreme Storm
Xtreme Storm has been finished!! Check out the First Chapter
https://www.wattpad.com/1399520519-beybl...r-1-xtreme
(Nov. 21, 2023  5:18 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Xtreme Storm has been finished!! Check out the First Chapter
https://www.wattpad.com/1399520519-beybl...r-1-xtreme

mfb when
(Nov. 21, 2023  8:47 PM)Cindercast Wrote:
(Nov. 21, 2023  5:18 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Xtreme Storm has been finished!! Check out the First Chapter
https://www.wattpad.com/1399520519-beybl...r-1-xtreme

mfb when

Bro done found me out 😭

https://www.wattpad.com/1399773906-beybl...ou-want-to Yooooo I’m on a rolll! Chapter 2 is out!!
(Nov. 21, 2023  11:08 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Nov. 21, 2023  8:47 PM)Cindercast Wrote: mfb when

Bro done found me out 😭

https://www.wattpad.com/1399773906-beybl...ou-want-to Yooooo I’m on a rolll! Chapter 2 is out!!

Aliso solos
Sorry for no updates in a while! I’ll be sure to update the week after Christmas!
Something will drop this week. I will also be making a Wattpad Version and just a Version that will be posted on the WBO! Just get ready for it!
Chapter 3 after years 😭😭
I know I’ve kinda already done this but I’m kinda unsatisfied with my X Story currently. I’m going to hit the Reboot Button on this one folks. The next one I work on will probably be more action and creative. I’ll try having it up soon.