Hmm, not bad. I like what you’re trying to do with Ben, but the change feels a bit sudden for me? If that’s the intended effect, then you’re doing it well, and that asde, the chapter is overall neat, especially with your improvement in writing. Nice.

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I'll definitely put something here soon.
Probably.
Maybe?
Naaaaah.

I really like Ben’s character, and the fact that he has all the gears. I am really excited to see all the characters interact with the other OCs.

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Yes, no, maybe? ¯\_(•,•)_/¯

Three bladed beys are the best.

Light Sawashiro (Sovereign Lucifer)

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Light Sawashiro (A.K.A The Morning Star)


Height: 5'6


Age: 15


Role: Antagonist


Appearance: He's fair-skinned and has unsettled and unstylled brown hair, with bangs long enough to reach his eyes when his hair is let down, his eyes are purple in color and wears a white sweatshirt with purple borders on the sleeves and a purple 'L' Symbol on the middle, and a Crimson Coat, pair of black jeans with stitched-in patches and jet black boots.


Bey: Sovereign Lucifer .11 Fallen Rebel - Dazzle


Kiwami Core: Lucifer, the fallen angel. (Clockwise Defence Type) The eyes of Luicfer are red and the core pattern is purple (Like the blue part in Spriggan core from DB). The core depicts Lucifer's Head and it's claws, the head is purple and the claws are red.


Kiwami Blade: Sovereign, The three Blades have a zig-zage shape divided into three layers. When the lock of the bey advances, additional three blades appears from the gaps, when they come in contact with the opposing bey, it re-locks itself, making the bey sort-of unburstable. Color Scheme of the blade is Black, the three blades are purple and the additional blades are red.


Neo Disc: Fallen, It features six blades with an upper shape which makes the opposing come in contact with the layer. (The disc is painted in Purple color)


Driver: Rebel, The Driver has two modes, first one is Defence Mode: It has a metal ball used to claim the center and hold on to it. Second one: Counter Mode: It has a rubber ball used to bounce on the stadium landing on to Opposing Beys and can also hold on to the center. (The Color Scheme of the driver is Dark Blue and the rubber ball is red in color)


Kiwami Weight: 11, A perfectly circular shape weight used to improve LAD and OWD.


Kiwami Armor: Dazzle, It increases the defense by focusing the center of gravity at six opposite points.



Note: I didn't add personality because it will lead to spoilers.

Hmm, not bad. I like what you’re trying to do with Ben, but the change feels a bit sudden for me? If that’s the intended effect, then you’re doing it well, and that asde, the chapter is overall neat, especially with your improvement in writing. Nice.

I really like Ben’s character, and the fact that he has all the gears. I am really excited to see all the characters interact with the other OCs.

I'm glad you guys like Ben, I wanted to make him interesting, but Kiryu made him better!

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The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

Light Sawashiro (Sovereign Lucifer)

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Height: 5'6


Age: 15


Role: Antagonist


Appearance: He's fair-skinned and has unsettled and unstylled brown hair, with bangs long enough to reach his eyes when his hair is let down, his eyes are purple in color and wears a white sweatshirt with purple borders on the sleeves and a purple 'L' Symbol on the middle, and a Crimson Coat, pair of black jeans with stitched-in patches and jet black boots.


Bey: Sovereign Lucifer .11 Fallen Rebel - Dazzle


Kiwami Core: Lucifer, the fallen angel. (Clockwise Defence Type) The eyes of Luicfer are red and the core pattern is purple (Like the blue part in Spriggan core from DB). The core depicts Lucifer's Head and it's claws, the head is purple and the claws are red.


Kiwami Blade: Sovereign, The three Blades have a zig-zage shape divided into three layers. When the lock of the bey advances, additional three blades appears from the gaps, when they come in contact with the opposing bey, it re-locks itself, making the bey sort-of unburstable. Color Scheme of the blade is Black, the three blades are purple and the additional blades are red.


Neo Disc: Fallen, It features six blades with an upper shape which makes the opposing come in contact with the layer. (The disc is painted in Purple color)


Driver: Rebel, The Driver has two modes, first one is Defence Mode: It has a metal ball used to claim the center and hold on to it. Second one: Counter Mode: It has a rubber ball used to bounce on the stadium landing on to Opposing Beys and can also hold on to the center. (The Color Scheme of the driver is Dark Blue and the rubber ball is red in color)


Kiwami Weight: 11, A perfectly circular shape weight used to improve LAD and OWD.


Kiwami Armor: Dazzle, It increases the defense by focusing the center of gravity at six opposite points.



Note: I didn't add personality because it will lead to spoilers.

nice! can't wait for him to be added! 😏👌

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"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

Light Sawashiro (Sovereign Lucifer)

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Height: 5'6


Age: 15


Role: Antagonist


Appearance: He's fair-skinned and has unsettled and unstylled brown hair, with bangs long enough to reach his eyes when his hair is let down, his eyes are purple in color and wears a white sweatshirt with purple borders on the sleeves and a purple 'L' Symbol on the middle, and a Crimson Coat, pair of black jeans with stitched-in patches and jet black boots.


Bey: Sovereign Lucifer .11 Fallen Rebel - Dazzle


Kiwami Core: Lucifer, the fallen angel. (Clockwise Defence Type) The eyes of Luicfer are red and the core pattern is purple (Like the blue part in Spriggan core from DB). The core depicts Lucifer's Head and it's claws, the head is purple and the claws are red.


Kiwami Blade: Sovereign, The three Blades have a zig-zage shape divided into three layers. When the lock of the bey advances, additional three blades appears from the gaps, when they come in contact with the opposing bey, it re-locks itself, making the bey sort-of unburstable. Color Scheme of the blade is Black, the three blades are purple and the additional blades are red.


Neo Disc: Fallen, It features six blades with an upper shape which makes the opposing come in contact with the layer. (The disc is painted in Purple color)


Driver: Rebel, The Driver has two modes, first one is Defence Mode: It has a metal ball used to claim the center and hold on to it. Second one: Counter Mode: It has a rubber ball used to bounce on the stadium landing on to Opposing Beys and can also hold on to the center. (The Color Scheme of the driver is Dark Blue and the rubber ball is red in color)


Kiwami Weight: 11, A perfectly circular shape weight used to improve LAD and OWD.


Kiwami Armor: Dazzle, It increases the defense by focusing the center of gravity at six opposite points.



Note: I didn't add personality because it will lead to spoilers.

The bey parts names match very well with the bey motif (Fallen, Rebel, I assume the blade also matches). And bonus points for making a non-barrier gimmick.

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Rank 0th means I'm better than 1st

Bonus Fact: Ichiban Aoi: Aviate Icarus (Protagonist) and Light Sawashiro: Sovereign Lucifer (Antagonist)

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This is how the first arc will work,

The Battle Ship will reach three destinations for battles.

1) Spain

2) Onigashima Island

3) America.

Plus some chapter titles

Spoiler (Click to View)

Chapter 6: Furious Blow! Noble Spear!

Chapter 7: The Golden Dragon!

Chapter 8: The Max Organization and Hyperion!

Chapter 9: Duel at the Onigashima Island!

Chapter 10: Pallete Feathers! Iris Mayura!

Chapter 11: Crimson Axe! Mortal Spriggan!

Fiona Dela Hoya (Magenta Fafnir)

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Gender: Female


Also Known as:

Magenta Star

The Number 1 Blader


Age: 13


Height: 5'2


Occupation: 

Blader

Captain of BC Sol

Member of the Kiwami Three


Appearance: She's a young teen with light yellow eyes, her hair is spiked and very long messy pink hair with a yellow streak running through it (Similar to Free's hair but more longer that it reaches her neck). She wears a plain pink sweatshirt and a yellow leather jacket, having an upside down dragon shaped "F" at the top right of her jacket, she also wears a blue skirt and black leggings. And dark blue shoes with red strips and white soles.


Personality: She's quite hard working and don't see any potential in the bladers who're careless or losses frequently, She is in a search for a blader capable of awakening the true strength of Fafnir. She's very obsessed with Fafnir and loves it the most than any other bey. When she gets serious in battles, her eyes glows pinkish yellow.


Resonance: Her aura appears as a bright Magenta and Yellow gradient color. When she's serious in battles, her eyes glows pinkish yellow and her aura becomes more magenta in color than yellow.


Bey: Magenta Fafnir .9 Drain Everything -Exert


Kiwami Core: Fafnir, The Golden Dragon. It's a left-spinning Kiwami Core, features a Golden Dragon who is grabbing a red orb with it's claws. The core pattern is in pink.


Kiwami Blade: Magenta, It has 3 golden dragon heads fused with rubber (Rubber's color scheme is Magenta), The rubber blades doesn't have any gap between them, and can be awakened by getting enough hits by oppossing beys to make a complete hole between the blades that will increase the spin steal potential of the bey. (The blade is completely made up of rubber except the dragon heads and the shape is different than Vanish, the shape of blades are more like spear shaped, like Geist Fafnir)


Neo Disc: Drain, It's a rubber mounted disc with 8 free-spinning blades, Against Right spin Beys, the rubber mounted disk absorbs the spin. Against Left spin Beys, the rubber blades deflects the attack by it's free-spinning ability. (Basically a reverse Jet Ring made up into a Disk)


Driver: Everything, The driver is a evolved version of Nothing/Absorb driver, It features a spring loaded sharp metal tip surrounded by a free-spinning rubber ring. The spring loaded tip has two purposes, One is to prevent knock outs from the opposing beys and the second is that when the metal tip is fully depressed, the center sharp metal tip is retracted and the rubber ring is locked in place, creating a hollow flat rubber tip with aggressive movement akin to Ambush.


Kiwami Weight: 9, The armor features 9 blades in a semi-circular shape which increases LAD and OWD.


Kiwami Armor: Exert, It also features three rubber blades alligning with the Blade and can also help absorbing spin when used in lower mode. (Just like Screw Trident)

And I forgot to tell about the color scheme of these beys

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Aviate Icarus, The Avaite Blade's main color scheme is white, the stickers on the four blades has a red lightning sign with rainbow outlines. (Signifying Achilles and Dragon) The Core has a Warrior with a helmet in the middle with two wings design (Just like DB Valkyrie Core) and core pattern is light blue (Signifying Valkyrie)

The Amaze Driver's color scheme is light blue. (The move, Amaze Strike signifies Hyperion and Helios plus the metal portion made signifies Belial and Dragon)


Gloom Wendigo, The Gloom Blade's main color scheme is black, the blades being purple. The Core signifies a Demon head with two goat-like horns, weilding a axe and the core pattern is pink.


Noble Centaur, The Noble Blade's main color scheme is Gray, the blades being gold. The Core signifies a Golden Warrior with a helmet looking at left direction and has only one white eye. The core pattern is white.

The Clutch disk's rubber part is red in color and the Ambush driver's color scheme is gray with black rubber.

Plus I'm gonna try my best to post Chapter 5 today (Or tomorrow).

Fiona Dela Hoya (Magenta Fafnir)

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Gender: Female


Also Known as:

Magenta Star

The Number 1 Blader


Age: 13


Height: 5'2


Occupation: 

Blader

Captain of BC Sol

Member of the Kiwami Three


Appearance: She's a young teen with light yellow eyes, her hair is spiked and very long messy pink hair with a yellow streak running through it (Similar to Free's hair but more longer that it reaches her neck). She wears a plain pink sweatshirt and a yellow leather jacket, having an upside down dragon shaped "F" at the top right of her jacket, she also wears a blue skirt and black leggings. And dark blue shoes with red strips and white soles.


Personality: She's quite hard working and don't see any potential in the bladers who're careless or losses frequently, She is in a search for a blader capable of awakening the true strength of Fafnir. She's very obsessed with Fafnir and loves it the most than any other bey. When she gets serious in battles, her eyes glows pinkish yellow.


Resonance: Her aura appears as a bright Magenta and Yellow gradient color. When she's serious in battles, her eyes glows pinkish yellow and her aura becomes more magenta in color than yellow.


Bey: Magenta Fafnir .9 Drain Everything -Exert


Kiwami Core: Fafnir, The Golden Dragon. It's a left-spinning Kiwami Core, features a Golden Dragon who is grabbing a red orb with it's claws. The core pattern is in pink.


Kiwami Blade: Magenta, It has 3 golden dragon heads fused with rubber (Rubber's color scheme is Magenta), The rubber blades doesn't have any gap between them, and can be awakened by getting enough hits by oppossing beys to make a complete hole between the blades that will increase the spin steal potential of the bey. (The blade is completely made up of rubber except the dragon heads and the shape is different than Vanish, the shape of blades are more like spear shaped, like Geist Fafnir)


Neo Disc: Drain, It's a rubber mounted disc with 8 free-spinning blades, Against Right spin Beys, the rubber mounted disk absorbs the spin. Against Left spin Beys, the rubber blades deflects the attack by it's free-spinning ability. (Basically a reverse Jet Ring made up into a Disk)


Driver: Everything, The driver is a evolved version of Nothing/Absorb driver, It features a spring loaded sharp metal tip surrounded by a free-spinning rubber ring. The spring loaded tip has two purposes, One is to prevent knock outs from the opposing beys and the second is that when the metal tip is fully depressed, the center sharp metal tip is retracted and the rubber ring is locked in place, creating a hollow flat rubber tip with aggressive movement akin to Ambush.


Kiwami Weight: 9, The armor features 9 blades in a semi-circular shape which increases LAD and OWD.


Kiwami Armor: Exert, It also features three rubber blades alligning with the Blade and can also help absorbing spin when used in lower mode. (Just like Screw Trident)

And I forgot to tell about the color scheme of these beys

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Aviate Icarus, The Avaite Blade's main color scheme is white, the stickers on the four blades has a red lightning sign with rainbow outlines. (Signifying Achilles and Dragon) The Core has a Warrior with a helmet in the middle with two wings design (Just like DB Valkyrie Core) and core pattern is light blue (Signifying Valkyrie)

The Amaze Driver's color scheme is light blue. (The move, Amaze Strike signifies Hyperion and Helios plus the metal portion made signifies Belial and Dragon)


Gloom Wendigo, The Gloom Blade's main color scheme is black, the blades being purple. The Core signifies a Demon head with two goat-like horns, weilding a axe and the core pattern is pink.


Noble Centaur, The Noble Blade's main color scheme is Gray, the blades being gold. The Core signifies a Golden Warrior with a helmet looking at left direction and has only one white eye. The core pattern is white.

The Clutch disk's rubber part is red in color and the Ambush driver's color scheme is gray with black rubber.

Plus I'm gonna try my best to post Chapter 6 today (Or tomorrow).

Nice, and I'd say that drain resembles more Ratchet.

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Rank 0th means I'm better than 1st

Everything Driver? Lmao, that's a funny one. I'm fairly interested in Fiona's character now, looking forward to when she debuts.

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I'll definitely put something here soon.
Probably.
Maybe?
Naaaaah.

Bonus Fact: Ichiban Aoi: Aviate Icarus (Protagonist) and Light Sawashiro: Sovereign Lucifer (Antagonist)

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This is how the first arc will work,

The Battle Ship will reach three destinations for battles.

1) Spain

2) Onigashima Island

3) America.

Plus some chapter titles

Spoiler (Click to View)

Chapter 6: Furious Blow! Noble Spear!

Chapter 7: The Golden Dragon!

Chapter 8: The Max Organization and Hyperion!

Chapter 9: Duel at the Onigashima Island!

Chapter 10: Pallete Feathers! Iris Mayura!

Chapter 11: Crimson Axe! Mortal Spriggan!

Hold up, is my man Griffin about to show up? (Hyped by the Episode titles) 😏😏😏

Bonus Fact: Ichiban Aoi: Aviate Icarus (Protagonist) and Light Sawashiro: Sovereign Lucifer (Antagonist)

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This is how the first arc will work,

The Battle Ship will reach three destinations for battles.

1) Spain

2) Onigashima Island

3) America.

Plus some chapter titles

Spoiler (Click to View)

Chapter 6: Furious Blow! Noble Spear!

Chapter 7: The Golden Dragon!

Chapter 8: The Max Organization and Hyperion!

Chapter 9: Duel at the Onigashima Island!

Chapter 10: Pallete Feathers! Iris Mayura!

Chapter 11: Crimson Axe! Mortal Spriggan!

Hold up, is my man Griffin about to show up? (Hyped by the Episode titles) 😏😏😏

Yup, he's going to show up in Chapter 8.

Uhhhh idk if the character thing is still going, can I put an entry in?

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Uhhhh idk if the character thing is still going, can I put an entry in?

Yeah, you still can.

Uhhhh idk if the character thing is still going, can I put an entry in?

Yeah, you still can.

Okey dokey


Name: Mordred Glass

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Relation to past characters: is Ashtem’s son. Was abandoned when the snake pit was legally dismantled a few years after db. Gwyn found him years later, taught him for a year, then gave him to train with Xander and Xavier(now a king). Xavier adopted him, making him a while gwyn named him an aruthurian name as he thought of him as a brother.

Bey: Blitzen drive ou raze (limit break, and the avatar is the reindeer)

Appearance: Black hair, a white camo hoodie, and red ripped jeans. One of his eyes is black, and the other red. He has a pair of green earrings as well. He’s mid height as well. He has sharp teeth like lui or Xander.

Personality: incredible and extreme apathy. He hates his dad. He’s also very good at helping Xavier with politics, as his calm and uncaring nature allows him to assess situations well. When his dad is involved or he gets like really mad(justifiably, not like he dropped his ice cream), his black eye turns red, his resonance hits hits max, his personality shifts to become more cold, but present as well. Like mob from mob psycho.

Skills: gwyn taught him a lot, and he’s at masters level in most subjects, but bachelors and PhD in some. He’s also incredibly strong. Like lifting frees Boulder with one hand strong. He also trains xaviers military, along with Xander and other people. When fully released, his resonance can shatter concrete.

Bey:

Color scheme: red, white, gold, and green

Blitzen: sort of a heavier, more balanced lucifer II, with the rubber lock as well. Is right spin

Drive: an electric part. It’s like king with 7 blades. When  it’s halfway to bursting, the ring spins faster than the bey. This dramatically raises attack(obviously), burst resistance(this makes the ring essentially free spin) and defense again spin equalization(though the other bey will gain energy, the energy will be taken from the ring, not the base)

Ou: Ou

Raze: destroy with a rubber driver and a small plastic tip in the middle

Moves:

Explosive burst: a powerful attack out of nowhere, brought on by the raze driver. This can also be used as an evasion.

Limit break: drive: blitzen activates its limit break, sending enemies flying.

Phase burst: blitzen uses raze to quickly move behind an enemy, giving the illusion that it went directly through. Blitzen then uses its drive ability to attack its opponent while they are moving away from each other, sending an enemy away and not giving them room for a counter.

Drive shield: drive prarries attacks with incredible power.

Absolute drive: dread vertical on steroids


Xmas star: almost like valts winged launch, but its trail makes a star. Anything which crosses the star gets hit with an an incredibly strong attack. The longer it is prolonged, the more powerful the attack is

Nicholas: can only be used at full resonance.no one but mordred knows what this move looks like. Everyone who witnesses it gets knocked unconscious, and all cameras at destroyed. The stadium and area around it always obliterated. The opponents bey is either shattered, melted, or it has disappeared.





Uhm idk if this is good, but whatever lol

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emotional DaMAgE

Yeah, you still can.

Okey dokey


Name: Mordred Glass

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Relation to past characters: is Ashtem’s son. Was abandoned when the snake pit was legally dismantled a few years after db. Gwyn found him years later, taught him for a year, then gave him to train with Xander and Xavier(now a king). Xavier adopted him, making him a while gwyn named him an aruthurian name as he thought of him as a brother.

Bey: Blitzen drive ou raze (limit break, and the avatar is the reindeer)

Appearance: Black hair, a white camo hoodie, and red ripped jeans. One of his eyes is black, and the other red. He has a pair of green earrings as well. He’s mid height as well. He has sharp teeth like lui or Xander.

Personality: incredible and extreme apathy. He hates his dad. He’s also very good at helping Xavier with politics, as his calm and uncaring nature allows him to assess situations well. When his dad is involved or he gets like really mad(justifiably, not like he dropped his ice cream), his black eye turns red, his resonance hits hits max, his personality shifts to become more cold, but present as well. Like mob from mob psycho.

Skills: gwyn taught him a lot, and he’s at masters level in most subjects, but bachelors and PhD in some. He’s also incredibly strong. Like lifting frees Boulder with one hand strong. He also trains xaviers military, along with Xander and other people. When fully released, his resonance can shatter concrete.

Bey:

Color scheme: red, white, gold, and green

Blitzen: sort of a heavier, more balanced lucifer II, with the rubber lock as well. Is right spin

Drive: an electric part. It’s like king with 7 blades. When  it’s halfway to bursting, the ring spins faster than the bey. This dramatically raises attack(obviously), burst resistance(this makes the ring essentially free spin) and defense again spin equalization(though the other bey will gain energy, the energy will be taken from the ring, not the base)

Ou: Ou

Raze: destroy with a rubber driver and a small plastic tip in the middle

Moves:

Explosive burst: a powerful attack out of nowhere, brought on by the raze driver. This can also be used as an evasion.

Limit break: drive: blitzen activates its limit break, sending enemies flying.

Phase burst: blitzen uses raze to quickly move behind an enemy, giving the illusion that it went directly through. Blitzen then uses its drive ability to attack its opponent while they are moving away from each other, sending an enemy away and not giving them room for a counter.

Drive shield: drive prarries attacks with incredible power.

Absolute drive: dread vertical on steroids


Xmas star: almost like valts winged launch, but its trail makes a star. Anything which crosses the star gets hit with an an incredibly strong attack. The longer it is prolonged, the more powerful the attack is

Nicholas: can only be used at full resonance.no one but mordred knows what this move looks like. Everyone who witnesses it gets knocked unconscious, and all cameras at destroyed. The stadium and area around it always obliterated. The opponents bey is either shattered, melted, or it has disappeared.





Uhm idk if this is good, but whatever lol

Actually.... I was planning something else with Ashtem and it's limit break system right? You must use Kiwami System. Plus this bey is too op (If this bey is in this fic, then antagonist's role would make no sense). Sorry but I cannot accept this entry. You can edit it though.

Okey dokey


Name: Mordred Glass

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Relation to past characters: is Ashtem’s son. Was abandoned when the snake pit was legally dismantled a few years after db. Gwyn found him years later, taught him for a year, then gave him to train with Xander and Xavier(now a king). Xavier adopted him, making him a while gwyn named him an aruthurian name as he thought of him as a brother.

Bey: Blitzen drive ou raze (limit break, and the avatar is the reindeer)

Appearance: Black hair, a white camo hoodie, and red ripped jeans. One of his eyes is black, and the other red. He has a pair of green earrings as well. He’s mid height as well. He has sharp teeth like lui or Xander.

Personality: incredible and extreme apathy. He hates his dad. He’s also very good at helping Xavier with politics, as his calm and uncaring nature allows him to assess situations well. When his dad is involved or he gets like really mad(justifiably, not like he dropped his ice cream), his black eye turns red, his resonance hits hits max, his personality shifts to become more cold, but present as well. Like mob from mob psycho.

Skills: gwyn taught him a lot, and he’s at masters level in most subjects, but bachelors and PhD in some. He’s also incredibly strong. Like lifting frees Boulder with one hand strong. He also trains xaviers military, along with Xander and other people. When fully released, his resonance can shatter concrete.

Bey:

Color scheme: red, white, gold, and green

Blitzen: sort of a heavier, more balanced lucifer II, with the rubber lock as well. Is right spin

Drive: an electric part. It’s like king with 7 blades. When  it’s halfway to bursting, the ring spins faster than the bey. This dramatically raises attack(obviously), burst resistance(this makes the ring essentially free spin) and defense again spin equalization(though the other bey will gain energy, the energy will be taken from the ring, not the base)

Ou: Ou

Raze: destroy with a rubber driver and a small plastic tip in the middle

Moves:

Explosive burst: a powerful attack out of nowhere, brought on by the raze driver. This can also be used as an evasion.

Limit break: drive: blitzen activates its limit break, sending enemies flying.

Phase burst: blitzen uses raze to quickly move behind an enemy, giving the illusion that it went directly through. Blitzen then uses its drive ability to attack its opponent while they are moving away from each other, sending an enemy away and not giving them room for a counter.

Drive shield: drive prarries attacks with incredible power.

Absolute drive: dread vertical on steroids


Xmas star: almost like valts winged launch, but its trail makes a star. Anything which crosses the star gets hit with an an incredibly strong attack. The longer it is prolonged, the more powerful the attack is

Nicholas: can only be used at full resonance.no one but mordred knows what this move looks like. Everyone who witnesses it gets knocked unconscious, and all cameras at destroyed. The stadium and area around it always obliterated. The opponents bey is either shattered, melted, or it has disappeared.





Uhm idk if this is good, but whatever lol

Actually.... I was planning something else with Ashtem and it's limit break system right? You must use Kiwami System. Plus this bey is too op (If this bey is in this fic, then antagonist's role would make no sense). Sorry but I cannot accept this entry. You can edit it though.

Welp can’t say I’m surprised, I made this guy’s bey as a protagonist for another series that was meant to have mfb level power scaling. Tbh, I’m content with just reading it lol, though I’m still a bit confused about the system

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Kiryu Kazuma I summon you, so uhh... Is there any Wyvern/Deathscyther already? just to know.

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Rank 0th means I'm better than 1st

Hmmm is Jinnius taken?

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   "From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

Kiryu Kazuma I summon you, so uhh... Is there any Wyvern/Deathscyther already? just to know.

Nope there isn't. (And you can use Achilles if you want to, cuz GenesisBlader chose Hyperion instead of Achilles).

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Actually.... I was planning something else with Ashtem and it's limit break system right? You must use Kiwami System. Plus this bey is too op (If this bey is in this fic, then antagonist's role would make no sense). Sorry but I cannot accept this entry. You can edit it though.

Welp can’t say I’m surprised, I made this guy’s bey as a protagonist for another series that was meant to have mfb level power scaling. Tbh, I’m content with just reading it lol, though I’m still a bit confused about the system

Check out the first post. I've explained it there.

Kiryu Kazuma I summon you, so uhh... Is there any Wyvern/Deathscyther already? just to know.

Nope there isn't. (And you can use Achilles if you want to, cuz GenesisBlader chose Hyperion instead of Achilles).

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Welp can’t say I’m surprised, I made this guy’s bey as a protagonist for another series that was meant to have mfb level power scaling. Tbh, I’m content with just reading it lol, though I’m still a bit confused about the system

Check out the first post. I've explained it there.

I tried that


I’m sry but it didn’t work lol

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I'll let you choose the moves. But I can add them if you want. (edit: I updated it)

Character:

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Name: William Kazami
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Appearance: Dark brown hair with purple on the end. Green eyes. Glasses (It's not a stereotype I promise). Purple T-shirt, on the middle it has a golden camera lens with the text "Smile! You're being watched" Under it on "INFORMALO11 BT" font. Green jeans. purple shoes. 
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Personality - [font="Open Sans", openreg, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Psychology: [/font]Realistic and Factual.
Self-discipline: Tactful and Worries excessively.
Lifestyle: Law-abiding, Risk-taker (if worth it) and Down-to-earth.
Social attitude: Lacks social skills and sarcastic.
Honesty and Honour: Values knowledge and very loyal.
Emotional Capacity: Struggles to register emotions and indifferent.

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Bey:

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Wyvern - A right spin Kiwami Core. It is a purple core that features a green circle on the middle with a dragon around it, its body surronds the green circle, with its head and tail poking out from the center. It also has green eyes, a golden detail on the tail and is spitting fire.
.Teeth position: 1 Tall tooth, 1 Medium and 2 weak.
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Tungsten (Tn) - It's a Kiwami weight made entirely of Tungsten. Due to Tungsten density, it is harder to knock out.
Color: same as Terrraria tungsten
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Twister - A right spin, defense type blade. It features 8 purple blades, 4 of which features soft rubber. When the armor is inside, the blades are fixed, that way it can spin steal against opposite spin or maybe even burst opponents. When the armor is outside, the blades free spin, that way it can deflect attacks better and become immune to spin steal.
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Kiwami Armor - Wind: Wind is a average weight armor and features rubber around it and is only compatible with some Kiwami beys, including Twister Wyvern. When put outside, It gives the blade some rubber. When put inside, it makes friction with the disc tabs, improving burst resistance. Color: same as Terraria tungsten, with purple rubber.
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Neo Disc - either Π or π : π is a Kiwami disc with average weight. It shape is similar to Ring if it went downwards. It supports high and low mode. It also improves LAD a little bit.
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Driver - Exact: Exact features a sharp tip (Like awakened Just) and a outer ring around it, akin to it's precessor Just. Unlike Just, the free-spinning ring has rubber. In theory, when it makes contact with the stadium, it would reduce stamina loss, increase LAD and make the bey more stationary. The sharp tip is made out of metal to minimize stamina loss and to not wear down with the stock combo.
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Overall performance - With Armor out: Can absorb attacks and can't spin equalize. Smashing is its weakness and it can burst if you do it right.
- With armor in: Can spin equalize/steal and can't absorb attacks as good as armor out. It has improved burst resistance, but you can try outspin it (if you have enough stamina) or hit from above when Exact tilts, making it lose more balance.
- Any mode: It has good stamina, ok LAD (less than Zone+Z), Incredible KO resistance and ok-to-good balance.

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Rank 0th means I'm better than 1st

OK so it's a sparking bey? (Should I evolve it later?)

Nah it’s a DB bey it’s gonna evolve to a Kawimi bey tho

trying to figure out how 2b fits on a db bey

Nah it’s a DB bey it’s gonna evolve to a Kawimi bey tho

trying to figure out how 2b fits on a db bey

I edited it to a Kawmi bey

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   "From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably

trying to figure out how 2b fits on a db bey

I edited it to a Kawmi bey

oh