[Fan Fiction] Beyblade Burst: Blaze!

LEOBBG · Oct. 31, 2020 2:19 AM

(Oct. 31, 2020 2:18 AM)beykid44 Wrote: no its not pot

(Oct. 31, 2020 2:18 AM)LEOBBG Wrote: yep 99.999 present idiot

its not kit

WHO IS IT!!!

\("-o-)/ life sucks!

beykid44 · Oct. 31, 2020 2:20 AM

(Oct. 31, 2020 2:19 AM)LEOBBG Wrote:
(Oct. 31, 2020 2:18 AM)beykid44 Wrote: no its not pot

its not kit
WHO IS IT!!!

my man who owns cat beyblade got forgotten maaaaaaannnn he was the best character

EarthHelios · Oct. 31, 2020 2:21 AM

It is laban

LEOBBG · Oct. 31, 2020 2:22 AM

(Oct. 31, 2020 2:20 AM)beykid44 Wrote:
(Oct. 31, 2020 2:19 AM)LEOBBG Wrote: WHO IS IT!!!

my man who owns cat beyblade got forgotten maaaaaaannnn he was the best character

LABAN?

\("-o-)/ life sucks!

EarthHelios · Oct. 31, 2020 2:23 AM

Or it could be Ren Wu cause he owned a cat bey too

beykid44 · Oct. 31, 2020 2:23 AM

(Oct. 31, 2020 2:22 AM)LEOBBG Wrote:
(Oct. 31, 2020 2:20 AM)beykid44 Wrote: my man who owns cat beyblade got forgotten maaaaaaannnn he was the best character

LABAN?

you know what this fanfics cancelled lol

i shouldnt give xtra hints

AIGHT NEXT HINT: Yo Boss man

LEOBBG · Oct. 31, 2020 2:24 AM

(Oct. 31, 2020 2:23 AM)beykid44 Wrote:
(Oct. 31, 2020 2:22 AM)LEOBBG Wrote: LABAN?

you know what this fanfics cancelled lol

i shouldnt give xtra hints

AIGHT NEXT HINT: Yo Boss man

VALT!!!!!

\("-o-)/ life sucks!

beykid44 · Oct. 31, 2020 2:26 AM

(Oct. 31, 2020 2:24 AM)LEOBBG Wrote:
(Oct. 31, 2020 2:23 AM)beykid44 Wrote: you know what this fanfics cancelled lol

i shouldnt give xtra hints

AIGHT NEXT HINT: Yo Boss man
VALT!!!!!

ok actual hint now: I am the superior blader!

LEOBBG · Oct. 31, 2020 2:26 AM

(Oct. 31, 2020 2:26 AM)beykid44 Wrote:
(Oct. 31, 2020 2:24 AM)LEOBBG Wrote: VALT!!!!!

ok actual hint now: I am the superior blader!

GWYN!!!

\("-o-)/ life sucks!

beykid44 · Oct. 31, 2020 2:28 AM

(Oct. 31, 2020 2:26 AM)LEOBBG Wrote:
(Oct. 31, 2020 2:26 AM)beykid44 Wrote: ok actual hint now: I am the superior blader!

GWYN!!!

Wtf [comment deleted]

you aint see nothing g

EarthHelios · Oct. 31, 2020 2:36 AM

Hey its the mad mathmatician

beykid44 · Oct. 31, 2020 2:52 AM

Actul actual hint: Listen i can feel the victory

(Oct. 31, 2020 2:36 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: Hey its the mad mathmatician

BOI LOOK AT THIS HINT

The God of flames world spriggan!

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hope ya like it Smile

DeltaZakuro LEOBBG kai edits EarthHelios

EarthHelios · Oct. 31, 2020 4:23 AM

(Oct. 31, 2020 2:52 AM)beykid44 Wrote: Actul actual hint: Listen i can feel the victory

(Oct. 31, 2020 2:36 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: Hey its the mad mathmatician

BOI LOOK AT THIS HINT

The God of flames world spriggan!

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Sisco: W-w-WHAAAAAT

Delta: i didnt mean to break your bey i could help you evolve it.

Sisco: sure thanks.

Hanami: Next battle Valt aoi Vs shu kurenai Two legendary baders will battle it out!

Valt: (silent glare)

Shu: this will be a good battle valt.

Ref Ready SET! 3 2 1 GOOOOO SHOOOOT

Spriggan lands and takes the center

Shu (in mind) valt bey is an attack type ill use left spin to reduce recoil and use defence mode that'll work.

Valt: shoot he used my weakness, ALRIGHT SHU! TIME TO GIVE IT ALL IVE GOT BRAVE SWORD!

shu: WORLD SPIN NOW SPRIGGAN

Kai:woah this battle is epic my battle is next.

Maya: big bro i want valt to Win!

Mysterious blader: my sensei shall win!

Fubuki: LETS GO SHU!!

Valt *very vright and bue aura surrounds him* This is fun!

to be continued
hope ya like it

DeltaZakuro LEOBBG kai edits EarthHelios

It was awesome

beykid44 · Oct. 31, 2020 4:23 AM

Look at the hint tho EarthHelios

beykid44 · Nov. 01, 2020 11:25 PM

6Jupiter5 DeltaZakuro NamanSpryzen dis my fourth chapter

Unexpected outcome! valt vs shu!

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hope ya like it

6Jupiter5 · Nov. 01, 2020 11:33 PM

Watch the mysterious Blader be shun

beykid44 · Nov. 01, 2020 11:52 PM

(Nov. 01, 2020 11:33 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: Watch the mysterious Blader be shun

its very obvious i gave a hing in chapter two

its not shun

BeybladeManiac0 · Nov. 02, 2020 12:30 AM

Bey request:

Infinite Skeleton Mobius' 2B

Death Poltergeist Charge Metal' 3A

SacredXcalibur · Nov. 02, 2020 12:46 AM

Bey Request:

Cosmic Astraios Dimension' 2b

Astraios is the Greek Titan god of Stars and Planets

hi

6Jupiter5 · Nov. 02, 2020 6:15 AM

Is the mysterious Blader Amane?

TwistedWerewolf · Nov. 02, 2020 3:22 PM

bRuH it's LeAn/LaNe

hE sAiD mY mEnToR wIlL WiN

beykid44 · Nov. 11, 2020 12:18 AM

gg after thinking i have declared le winner of the bey contest

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consequences

SacredXcalibur · Nov. 11, 2020 12:58 AM

GG everyone!

hi

beykid44 · Nov. 11, 2020 1:12 AM

SacredXcalibur kai edits @XsabxmaniacX DeltaZakuro

secret blader! shun kurenai!

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tell me your opinions!

EarthHelios · Nov. 11, 2020 1:13 AM

(Nov. 11, 2020 1:12 AM)beykid44 Wrote: SacredXcalibur kai edits @XsabxmaniacX DeltaZakuro

secret blader! shun kurenai!

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Valt W-who are you why'd you do that?

kyoka: i really don't have time for weakling's like you

the next day: at bc sol

Kai: hey Free!

Blader who looks eriely close shu: What are you here for?

Kai:i'm here for free.

Shun well then you'll have to beat my maiden!
Kai:how bout it? by the way im the europe champ!
Shun who cares how stron you are ill beat you with universal maiden!

Free: guess i'll be the ref, bladers ready?

3 2 1 GOOO SHOOOT

Shun MAIDEN! TIME SHATTER!

Kai: what? how do you sha-

Shun END IT! UNIVERSAL ECLIPSE

Kai: WHAT! NOW SOLOMON POWER COUNTER!

the beys clash creating an explosion knocking kai into a walland bursting solomon

thats the end of vol 1 s1

tell me your opinions!

Kinda rushed. Grammar errors. I will give it a 7/10