[Fan Fiction]  Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu

(Jul. 03, 2021  10:02 PM)LegendJustice Wrote:
(Jul. 03, 2021  9:58 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: 15) World Champions!! Heroic Valtryek!!

16) Teamwork!! Helios Blazebringer And Hyperion Flamebringer!!

17) Spryzen Vs Spryzen

18) Lord Of Darkness!! Vile Overlord!!

19) The Junior World Championships!!

20) Fiery Dragon!! Cinder Salamander!!

21) The Roaring Dragon!! Wicked Balkesh!!

I wish i had your talent

What do you mean?
(Jul. 03, 2021  10:13 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 03, 2021  10:02 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: I wish i had your talent

What do you mean?

Idk writing good chapters that people want to read
(Jul. 03, 2021  10:25 PM)LegendJustice Wrote:
(Jul. 03, 2021  10:13 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: What do you mean?

Idk writing good chapters that people want to read

You have a good fanfic mine is no better I can still get better so can you but if you want some tips here they are
(Jul. 03, 2021  10:33 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 03, 2021  10:25 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Idk writing good chapters that people want to read

You have a good fanfic mine is no better I can still get better so can you but if you want some tips here they are

Thanks dude I’m gonna post a chapter in 20-30 minutes this was really helpful
(Jul. 03, 2021  10:34 PM)LegendJustice Wrote:
(Jul. 03, 2021  10:33 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: You have a good fanfic mine is no better I can still get better so can you but if you want some tips here they are

Thanks dude I’m gonna post a chapter in 20-30 minutes this was really helpful

Np

Name: Valt Aoi

Age: 16

Bey: Heroic Valtryek AW3 High Variable'

(Just wanted to give Valt his Beyjitzu bio)
LegendJustice (this is expanding tip 5. And 7.) you could also show to someone that you believe in to rate it before you post the chapter, and also don't set a time limit for it like "daily upload" of "tomorrow":
1.Fancfics generally are hurt by daily uploads
2. Just say "tomorrow is going to be a new..." If you already finished it.
(Jul. 03, 2021  10:40 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: LegendJustice (this is expanding tip 5. And 7.) you could also show to someone that you believe in to rate it before you post the chapter, and also don't set a time limit for it like "daily upload" of "tomorrow":
1.Fancfics generally are hurt by daily uploads
2. Just say "tomorrow is going to be a new..." If you already finished it.

Okay Thanks
Chapter 15 is out!!
(Jul. 04, 2021  1:24 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 15 is out!!

This is great work
(Jul. 04, 2021  2:00 AM)LegendJustice Wrote:
(Jul. 04, 2021  1:24 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 15 is out!!

This is great work

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(Jul. 04, 2021  2:04 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 04, 2021  2:00 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: This is great work

Why thank you
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No problem now I have to go announce chapters on my fan fic
(Jul. 04, 2021  1:24 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 15 is out!!
awwwww poor percy i feel bad nice episode
(Jul. 04, 2021  3:07 AM)BladeKingX Wrote:
(Jul. 04, 2021  1:24 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 15 is out!!
awwwww poor percy i feel bad nice episode

Don't worry Percy will get over it
(Jul. 04, 2021  3:11 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 04, 2021  3:07 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: awwwww poor percy i feel bad nice episode

Don't worry Percy will get over it

oh nice
Shouldn’t pal be mad at Raina for breaking doomscyther???!!!!!!
(Jul. 04, 2021  3:39 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Shouldn’t pal be mad at Raina for breaking doomscyther???!!!!!!

Pam's a good person so although he was sad and mad that's why he kept it in for Raina
Is m
(Jul. 04, 2021  3:53 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 04, 2021  3:39 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Shouldn’t pal be mad at Raina for breaking doomscyther???!!!!!!

Pam's a good person so although he was sad and mad that's why he kept it in for Raina
If that was me I would go home and cry then I would come back and act like nothing happened
(Jul. 04, 2021  4:05 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Is m
(Jul. 04, 2021  3:53 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Pam's a good person so although he was sad and mad that's why he kept it in for Raina
If that was me I would go home and cry then I would come back and act like nothing happened

if that was me i would try to keep it in
Chapter 16 is coming hot!!
(Jul. 04, 2021  4:59 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 16 is coming hot!!

wow this is really late! great job tho
(Jul. 04, 2021  4:59 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 16 is coming hot!!
Dreamworks. . . sounds familiar.
About the Chapter, nice

About the next chapter: Sprizen vs Sprizen
(Jul. 04, 2021  4:59 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 16 is coming hot!!

Awesome!
(Jul. 04, 2021  1:07 PM)NamanSpryzen Wrote:
(Jul. 04, 2021  4:59 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 16 is coming hot!!

Awesome!

lol i overslept, nice job
(Jul. 04, 2021  11:36 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:
(Jul. 04, 2021  4:59 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 16 is coming hot!!
Dreamworks. . . sounds familiar.
About the Chapter, nice

About the next chapter: Sprizen vs Sprizen

Evil Spryzen vs original

Beyjitzu shall go on a break till next Sunday so bid far well (For now) Don't worry @Hollowmind8 I'll make Dynachi interesting
(Jul. 04, 2021  4:04 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 04, 2021  11:36 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Dreamworks. . . sounds familiar.
About the Chapter, nice

About the next chapter: Sprizen vs Sprizen

Evil Spryzen vs original

Beyjitzu shall go on a break till next Sunday so bid far well (For now) Don't worry Hollowmind8 I'll make Dynachi interesting
Now I fell bad, probably it doesn't stick because I didn't saw it becoming what it is, you know?