[font="Sgy Open Sans", "Lucida Grande", Tahoma, Verdana, Arial, sans-serif]Chapter 1 : The Bust In of Hyde . Aiger : Hyah! Go , Turbo Achilles Whip! Shu : Go ! Turbo Spryzen Slash !Judge : A giant clash ——— what ?!?! Hyde : Hah Hah ! I see aiger Akabane , you got your self a new bey ! Well I will break that one too !Hah Hah!  Aiger : Oh yeah , Hyde ?   Turbo Achilles : Focus on the battle , Aiger ! Aiger : Oh sorry Achilles. Achilles!!!   Shu : Turbo Spryzen !!! Turbo Spryzen : ' clashed his axe into Achilles' sword and sheild ' Hyah! Judge/Refree : A Burst finsh for Turbo Spryzen! Shu Kurinai  is the winner ! The next day ..... Judge : Wowiee ! Yesterday was rough ! Hyde busting in , Shu wins ! Wait till part 2 folks  ![/font]

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Let it RIP! (Former) Leader of the SpryzenLightnings! A short story below!
“Sup Darkstalker”, said Peril.
“Sup”, replied Darkstalker. 
Darkstalker thought, Enchant Peril to obey me in 10 seconds. (If you didn’t know, Darkstalker was a animus dragon.) In ten seconds, Darkstalker whispered to Peril, “Go. Go kill everybody using the coronavirus. GO NOW!” She spread the virus all through Jade Mountain! Everyone was infected, but the Beyblade Warriors came! They gave antidotes! You can be a Beyblade Warrior by wearing masks, washing hands, and most, maintain social distance! Stop the spread of the virus, and let’s get rid of it!

This is really cool! Just a tip: You might want to format it a bit better. Like, break the lines of dialogue? Add chapter titles and a story name? Of course, these are just tips!

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The greatest story of all time didn’t start with ‘Once Upon a Time’ it started with ‘Welcome to the world of Beyblade’ instead.

Oh yeah, my favorite thing in the world is Beyblade! (And writing)

Idk go to:https://www.shantihershenson.com/

This is really cool! Just a tip: You might want to format it a bit better. Like, break the lines of dialogue? Add chapter titles and a story name? Of course, these are just tips!

Ok thanks ! I will edit once I get time !

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Let it RIP! (Former) Leader of the SpryzenLightnings! A short story below!
“Sup Darkstalker”, said Peril.
“Sup”, replied Darkstalker. 
Darkstalker thought, Enchant Peril to obey me in 10 seconds. (If you didn’t know, Darkstalker was a animus dragon.) In ten seconds, Darkstalker whispered to Peril, “Go. Go kill everybody using the coronavirus. GO NOW!” She spread the virus all through Jade Mountain! Everyone was infected, but the Beyblade Warriors came! They gave antidotes! You can be a Beyblade Warrior by wearing masks, washing hands, and most, maintain social distance! Stop the spread of the virus, and let’s get rid of it!

Nice 👍!!!!

i love it its very short but its great for it story but the format needs a little help other than that its great

Thanks for the tips you all !

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i love it its very short but its great for it story but the format needs a little help other than that its great

Please try to use pucuation , I cannot understand what you are saying . Remember, it’s just a tip .

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Let it RIP! (Former) Leader of the SpryzenLightnings! A short story below!
“Sup Darkstalker”, said Peril.
“Sup”, replied Darkstalker. 
Darkstalker thought, Enchant Peril to obey me in 10 seconds. (If you didn’t know, Darkstalker was a animus dragon.) In ten seconds, Darkstalker whispered to Peril, “Go. Go kill everybody using the coronavirus. GO NOW!” She spread the virus all through Jade Mountain! Everyone was infected, but the Beyblade Warriors came! They gave antidotes! You can be a Beyblade Warrior by wearing masks, washing hands, and most, maintain social distance! Stop the spread of the virus, and let’s get rid of it!

Thanks for the tips you all !

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i love it its very short but its great for it story but the format needs a little help other than that its great

Please try to use pucuation , I cannot understand what you are saying . Remember, it’s just a tip .

I like this a lot can't wait for part 2

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everyone check out my fan fiction story about how phi began to blade. im already done with part 1 and part 2
https://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-THE-BEY...-BEGGINING

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Blader for 8+years, CA Organizer, hoping to improve at the game and meet more people along the way. Let It Rip!

Thanks for the tips you all !

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Please try to use pucuation , I cannot understand what you are saying . Remember, it’s just a tip .

I like this a lot can't wait for part 2

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everyone check out my fan fiction story about how phi began to blade. im already done with part 1 and part 2
https://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-THE-BEY...-BEGGINING

Hello, PLEASE DON'T ADVERTISE UR THREAD IN ANOTHER PERSON'S THREAD. Thank you.

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My Beyblade YT Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC19Djxy...AjB2dVmtmw

My Gaming YT channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UChykjpD...NbEdH5zJAA

Thanks for the tips you all !

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Please try to use pucuation , I cannot understand what you are saying . Remember, it’s just a tip .

I like this a lot can't wait for part 2

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everyone check out my fan fiction story about how phi began to blade. im already done with part 1 and part 2
https://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-THE-BEY...-BEGGINING

You need to stop spamming threads with your stuff and stuff like that.
READ THE RULES

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Creator/owner of beyblade burst apocalypse.
Maiden will awaken and destroy genesis once more!
i have returned

I like this a lot can't wait for part 2

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everyone check out my fan fiction story about how phi began to blade. im already done with part 1 and part 2
https://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-THE-BEY...-BEGGINING

Hello, PLEASE DON'T ADVERTISE UR THREAD IN ANOTHER PERSON'S THREAD. Thank you.

It’s fine buddy .

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I like this a lot can't wait for part 2

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everyone check out my fan fiction story about how phi began to blade. im already done with part 1 and part 2
https://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-THE-BEY...-BEGGINING

You need to stop spamming threads with your stuff and stuff like that.
READ THE RULES

It’s a rule to not do this ??.

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Let it RIP! (Former) Leader of the SpryzenLightnings! A short story below!
“Sup Darkstalker”, said Peril.
“Sup”, replied Darkstalker. 
Darkstalker thought, Enchant Peril to obey me in 10 seconds. (If you didn’t know, Darkstalker was a animus dragon.) In ten seconds, Darkstalker whispered to Peril, “Go. Go kill everybody using the coronavirus. GO NOW!” She spread the virus all through Jade Mountain! Everyone was infected, but the Beyblade Warriors came! They gave antidotes! You can be a Beyblade Warrior by wearing masks, washing hands, and most, maintain social distance! Stop the spread of the virus, and let’s get rid of it!

Hello, PLEASE DON'T ADVERTISE UR THREAD IN ANOTHER PERSON'S THREAD. Thank you.

It’s fine buddy .

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You need to stop spamming threads with your stuff and stuff like that.
READ THE RULES

It’s a rule to not do this ??.

It's not fine. Because it's just not.

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My Beyblade YT Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC19Djxy...AjB2dVmtmw

My Gaming YT channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UChykjpD...NbEdH5zJAA

It’s fine buddy .

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It’s a rule to not do this ??.

It's not fine. Because it's just not.

I didn’t know that , sorry . It’s only been a month since I joined WBO.

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Let it RIP! (Former) Leader of the SpryzenLightnings! A short story below!
“Sup Darkstalker”, said Peril.
“Sup”, replied Darkstalker. 
Darkstalker thought, Enchant Peril to obey me in 10 seconds. (If you didn’t know, Darkstalker was a animus dragon.) In ten seconds, Darkstalker whispered to Peril, “Go. Go kill everybody using the coronavirus. GO NOW!” She spread the virus all through Jade Mountain! Everyone was infected, but the Beyblade Warriors came! They gave antidotes! You can be a Beyblade Warrior by wearing masks, washing hands, and most, maintain social distance! Stop the spread of the virus, and let’s get rid of it!

It's not fine. Because it's just not.

I didn’t know that , sorry . It’s only been a month since I joined WBO.

Ok.

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My Beyblade YT Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC19Djxy...AjB2dVmtmw

My Gaming YT channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UChykjpD...NbEdH5zJAA

nice! a quick and easy read, loved it!

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emotional DaMAgE

nice! a quick and easy read, loved it!

Thanks !!!

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Let it RIP! (Former) Leader of the SpryzenLightnings! A short story below!
“Sup Darkstalker”, said Peril.
“Sup”, replied Darkstalker. 
Darkstalker thought, Enchant Peril to obey me in 10 seconds. (If you didn’t know, Darkstalker was a animus dragon.) In ten seconds, Darkstalker whispered to Peril, “Go. Go kill everybody using the coronavirus. GO NOW!” She spread the virus all through Jade Mountain! Everyone was infected, but the Beyblade Warriors came! They gave antidotes! You can be a Beyblade Warrior by wearing masks, washing hands, and most, maintain social distance! Stop the spread of the virus, and let’s get rid of it!

i love it,it has great narrative and other things

i love it,it has great narrative and other things

There we go !!!! You are using punctuation!!!!

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nice! a quick and easy read, loved it!

Can I write about the virus 🦠 in the general discussion?

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Let it RIP! (Former) Leader of the SpryzenLightnings! A short story below!
“Sup Darkstalker”, said Peril.
“Sup”, replied Darkstalker. 
Darkstalker thought, Enchant Peril to obey me in 10 seconds. (If you didn’t know, Darkstalker was a animus dragon.) In ten seconds, Darkstalker whispered to Peril, “Go. Go kill everybody using the coronavirus. GO NOW!” She spread the virus all through Jade Mountain! Everyone was infected, but the Beyblade Warriors came! They gave antidotes! You can be a Beyblade Warrior by wearing masks, washing hands, and most, maintain social distance! Stop the spread of the virus, and let’s get rid of it!

But in the anime wasn't it phi who broke achillies?

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if your reading this you are getting curious

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ever heard the saying curiosity killed the cat?

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i wouldnt click the next spoiler

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why did you click it...

i love it,it has great narrative and other things

There we go !!!! You are using punctuation!!!!

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nice! a quick and easy read, loved it!

thanks since im on the team im gonna find a shu or spryzen pic is that k?
Can I write about the virus 🦠 in the general discussion?

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But in the anime wasn't it phi who broke achillies?

yeah but this is a fanfic. not the acual story, and i don't think it broke in the fanfic? correct me if im wrong

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consequences

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Yes phi broke z achillies in the anime

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Spoiler (Click to View)

if your reading this you are getting curious

Spoiler (Click to View)

ever heard the saying curiosity killed the cat?

Spoiler (Click to View)

i wouldnt click the next spoiler

Spoiler (Click to View)

why did you click it...

i love it,it has great narrative and other things

There we go !!!! You are using punctuation!!!!

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nice! a quick and easy read, loved it!

Can I write about the virus 🦠 in the general discussion?

how do you post threads,i think that what they're called. I want to find bladers where i live.

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consequences

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There we go !!!! You are using punctuation!!!!

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Can I write about the virus 🦠 in the general discussion?

how do you post threads,i think that what they're called. I want to find bladers where i live.

Go to home page , then click North America, or where you live

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Let it RIP! (Former) Leader of the SpryzenLightnings! A short story below!
“Sup Darkstalker”, said Peril.
“Sup”, replied Darkstalker. 
Darkstalker thought, Enchant Peril to obey me in 10 seconds. (If you didn’t know, Darkstalker was a animus dragon.) In ten seconds, Darkstalker whispered to Peril, “Go. Go kill everybody using the coronavirus. GO NOW!” She spread the virus all through Jade Mountain! Everyone was infected, but the Beyblade Warriors came! They gave antidotes! You can be a Beyblade Warrior by wearing masks, washing hands, and most, maintain social distance! Stop the spread of the virus, and let’s get rid of it!

But in the anime wasn't it phi who broke achillies?

I wanted to change it up

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Let it RIP! (Former) Leader of the SpryzenLightnings! A short story below!
“Sup Darkstalker”, said Peril.
“Sup”, replied Darkstalker. 
Darkstalker thought, Enchant Peril to obey me in 10 seconds. (If you didn’t know, Darkstalker was a animus dragon.) In ten seconds, Darkstalker whispered to Peril, “Go. Go kill everybody using the coronavirus. GO NOW!” She spread the virus all through Jade Mountain! Everyone was infected, but the Beyblade Warriors came! They gave antidotes! You can be a Beyblade Warrior by wearing masks, washing hands, and most, maintain social distance! Stop the spread of the virus, and let’s get rid of it!

oh ok that makes since

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Spoiler (Click to View)

if your reading this you are getting curious

Spoiler (Click to View)

ever heard the saying curiosity killed the cat?

Spoiler (Click to View)

i wouldnt click the next spoiler

Spoiler (Click to View)

why did you click it...

oh ok that makes since

So , you know the quote system right ? It’s after the ... symbol . Use that in future

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Let it RIP! (Former) Leader of the SpryzenLightnings! A short story below!
“Sup Darkstalker”, said Peril.
“Sup”, replied Darkstalker. 
Darkstalker thought, Enchant Peril to obey me in 10 seconds. (If you didn’t know, Darkstalker was a animus dragon.) In ten seconds, Darkstalker whispered to Peril, “Go. Go kill everybody using the coronavirus. GO NOW!” She spread the virus all through Jade Mountain! Everyone was infected, but the Beyblade Warriors came! They gave antidotes! You can be a Beyblade Warrior by wearing masks, washing hands, and most, maintain social distance! Stop the spread of the virus, and let’s get rid of it!