[Fan Fiction] BEYBLADE BURST: FLARE!!!
There was this one guy in that era called Daichi. He was a total copycat and he kinda looks like Kirishima from Hero Academia
He is basically like Drum Koryu
Maybe you should add a character who likes to annoy people
(Oct. 29, 2020 8:47 PM)LEOBBG Wrote:(Oct. 29, 2020 8:46 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Maybe you should add a character who likes to annoy people
maybe...
(Oct. 29, 2020 8:46 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Maybe you should add a character who likes to annoy people
also i have so much time today im sending another chapter!
ok
(Oct. 29, 2020 10:05 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:(Oct. 29, 2020 10:04 PM)LEOBBG Wrote: it will be out soon so stay online for a bit
I stay online the whole time lol
ok my dude!
Chapter 9: Enter! Team Tournament!
At the outside of the stadium, ein 1 and the rest team blaze were walking inside to enter the tournament that starts in two days! “hey, do you know where are the team sign-ups are?” ein 1 said. “that way young man” a worker said. “say thanks ein…” aphmau whispered “NO!” both eins said and aphmau smacked them both on the face hard. “OK! OK! OK! WERE SORRY!” both eins said. While walking to the register “do you think were long lost twins?” ein 2 said. “maybe. We could check after registration…” when they get to registration… “hello, I need your team captain name, team name and number of people on your team to register for the tourney” another worker said. “um, yess. Team captain ein 1, um we are team blaze and we have 1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8 eight people on the team.” Ein 1 said. “ok well you almost broke the member limit so good thing you only had eight. Also a need team member names” the worker said. “ we have ein 1, ein 2, ryuzi, aphmau, zane, kawaii-chan, aaron and pierce.” Ein 1 said. “ok! Your team is in, have a nice day!” the worker said. “ok so know can we go to some where that will tell us if we are twins or not?” ein 2 asked “yes” ein 1 said. At the place the eins pricked there fingers and got told by a machine… “WERE TWINS!?” the eins said. “well apparently you both have similar genetic codes so you are twins in theory…” aphmau said. “well, now lets have a sleep over at my secret base/home” ein 1 said….
also guys do you dislike the short chapters, sry if you dont like them
EarthHelios its out btw
(Oct. 29, 2020 10:05 PM)LEOBBG Wrote:(Oct. 29, 2020 10:05 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: I stay online the whole time lol
ok my dude!
Chapter 9: Enter! Team Tournament!
At the outside of the stadium, ein 1 and the rest team blaze were walking inside to enter the tournament that starts in two days! “hey, do you know where are the team sign-ups are?” ein 1 said. “that way young man” a worker said. “say thanks ein…” aphmau whispered “NO!” both eins said and aphmau smacked them both on the face hard. “OK! OK! OK! WERE SORRY!” both eins said. While walking to the register “do you think were long lost twins?” ein 2 said. “maybe. We could check after registration…” when they get to registration… “hello, I need your team captain name, team name and number of people on your team to register for the tourney” another worker said. “um, yess. Team captain ein 1, um we are team blaze and we have 1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8 eight people on the team.” Ein 1 said. “ok well you almost broke the member limit so good thing you only had eight. Also a need team member names” the worker said. “ we have ein 1, ein 2, ryuzi, aphmau, zane, kawaii-chan, aaron and pierce.” Ein 1 said. “ok! Your team is in, have a nice day!” the worker said. “ok so know can we go to some where that will tell us if we are twins or not?” ein 2 asked “yes” ein 1 said. At the place the eins pricked there fingers and got told by a machine… “WERE TWINS!?” the eins said. “well apparently you both have similar genetic codes so you are twins in theory…” aphmau said. “well, now lets have a sleep over at my secret base/home” ein 1 said….
also guys do you dislike the short chapters, sry if you dont like them
EarthHelios its out btw
Omg lol the are twins!
The short chapters are awesome.
Also both eins got what they desrved.
(Oct. 29, 2020 11:09 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:(Oct. 29, 2020 10:05 PM)LEOBBG Wrote: ok my dude!
Chapter 9: Enter! Team Tournament!
At the outside of the stadium, ein 1 and the rest team blaze were walking inside to enter the tournament that starts in two days! “hey, do you know where are the team sign-ups are?” ein 1 said. “that way young man” a worker said. “say thanks ein…” aphmau whispered “NO!” both eins said and aphmau smacked them both on the face hard. “OK! OK! OK! WERE SORRY!” both eins said. While walking to the register “do you think were long lost twins?” ein 2 said. “maybe. We could check after registration…” when they get to registration… “hello, I need your team captain name, team name and number of people on your team to register for the tourney” another worker said. “um, yess. Team captain ein 1, um we are team blaze and we have 1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8 eight people on the team.” Ein 1 said. “ok well you almost broke the member limit so good thing you only had eight. Also a need team member names” the worker said. “ we have ein 1, ein 2, ryuzi, aphmau, zane, kawaii-chan, aaron and pierce.” Ein 1 said. “ok! Your team is in, have a nice day!” the worker said. “ok so know can we go to some where that will tell us if we are twins or not?” ein 2 asked “yes” ein 1 said. At the place the eins pricked there fingers and got told by a machine… “WERE TWINS!?” the eins said. “well apparently you both have similar genetic codes so you are twins in theory…” aphmau said. “well, now lets have a sleep over at my secret base/home” ein 1 said….
also guys do you dislike the short chapters, sry if you dont like them
EarthHelios its out btw
Omg lol the are twins!
The short chapters are awesome.
Also both eins got what they desrved.
lol
and cool! glad you like it!
(Oct. 29, 2020 11:10 PM)LEOBBG Wrote:(Oct. 29, 2020 11:09 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Omg lol the are twins!
The short chapters are awesome.
Also both eins got what they desrved.
lol
and cool! glad you like it!
RIght. Ryuzi has a tendency of when he sees cute girls he will whistle to them making them blush and they all giggle.
Man watch both eins both fight over who is the older one lol