This, I think is far better then my Dragoon V Draft..
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(Aug. 06, 2014 8:18 AM)Ultra Wrote: http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Draciel-...ave-a-look?
This one is nearly done. Search before you post a draft next time.
As for commenting on your draft:
The descriptions are very unprofessional. The wording especially. You also don't describe the what the parts look like. To be frank your draft is quite bad.
(Aug. 06, 2014 4:49 PM)Neo Wrote:(Aug. 06, 2014 8:18 AM)Ultra Wrote: http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Draciel-...ave-a-look?
This one is nearly done. Search before you post a draft next time.
As for commenting on your draft:
The descriptions are very unprofessional. The wording especially. You also don't describe the what the parts look like. To be frank your draft is quite bad.
I don't really see the reasoning for descriptions of parts, but I guess I can do what a picture does better.