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Draciel V Draft - Neo - Aug. 06, 2014
This, I think is far better then my Dragoon V Draft..
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RE: Draciel V Draft - Ultra - Aug. 06, 2014
http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Draciel-V-article-Kei-can-you-have-a-look?
This one is nearly done. Search before you post a draft next time.
As for commenting on your draft:
The descriptions are very unprofessional. The wording especially. You also don't describe the what the parts look like. To be frank your draft is quite bad.
RE: Draciel V Draft - Poseidon - Aug. 06, 2014
I'll just edit the draciel's draft
RE: Draciel V Draft - Neo - Aug. 06, 2014
(Aug. 06, 2014 8:18 AM)Ultra Wrote: http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Draciel-V-article-Kei-can-you-have-a-look?
This one is nearly done. Search before you post a draft next time.
As for commenting on your draft:
The descriptions are very unprofessional. The wording especially. You also don't describe the what the parts look like. To be frank your draft is quite bad.
I don't really see the reasoning for descriptions of parts, but I guess I can do what a picture does better.
RE: Draciel V Draft - Ultra - Aug. 06, 2014
Because that's the way beywiki has always done it. Why change that now just because you don't like it. A beywiki page is supposed to a complete summary of a beyblade. How is it a summary without a description of what the thing looks like? Also some article don't have pictures or may have substandard ones. However it's irrelevant because the existing draft is basically done.
RE: Draciel V Draft - FeedFear - Aug. 06, 2014
(Aug. 06, 2014 4:49 PM)Neo Wrote:(Aug. 06, 2014 8:18 AM)Ultra Wrote: http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Draciel-V-article-Kei-can-you-have-a-look?
This one is nearly done. Search before you post a draft next time.
As for commenting on your draft:
The descriptions are very unprofessional. The wording especially. You also don't describe the what the parts look like. To be frank your draft is quite bad.
I don't really see the reasoning for descriptions of parts, but I guess I can do what a picture does better.
Well not every picture can show some of the finer details, and also it helps you better explain why a piece works the way it does. Ie wolborg ms looks very aggressive, but in reality it is a really constrained wheel due to other parts of the design. If you are going to make a wiki page explain everything, regardless of if you think you need to or not.