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This, I think is far better then my Dragoon V Draft..
http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Draciel-...ave-a-look?

This one is nearly done. Search before you post a draft next time.

As for commenting on your draft:

The descriptions are very unprofessional. The wording especially. You also don't describe the what the parts look like. To be frank your draft is quite bad.
I'll just edit the draciel's draft
(Aug. 06, 2014  8:18 AM)Ultra Wrote: [ -> ]http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Draciel-...ave-a-look?

This one is nearly done. Search before you post a draft next time.

As for commenting on your draft:

The descriptions are very unprofessional. The wording especially. You also don't describe the what the parts look like. To be frank your draft is quite bad.

I don't really see the reasoning for descriptions of parts, but I guess I can do what a picture does better.
Because that's the way beywiki has always done it. Why change that now just because you don't like it. A beywiki page is supposed to a complete summary of a beyblade. How is it a summary without a description of what the thing looks like? Also some article don't have pictures or may have substandard ones. However it's irrelevant because the existing draft is basically done.
(Aug. 06, 2014  4:49 PM)Neo Wrote: [ -> ]
(Aug. 06, 2014  8:18 AM)Ultra Wrote: [ -> ]http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Draciel-...ave-a-look?

This one is nearly done. Search before you post a draft next time.

As for commenting on your draft:

The descriptions are very unprofessional. The wording especially. You also don't describe the what the parts look like. To be frank your draft is quite bad.

I don't really see the reasoning for descriptions of parts, but I guess I can do what a picture does better.

Well not every picture can show some of the finer details, and also it helps you better explain why a piece works the way it does. Ie wolborg ms looks very aggressive, but in reality it is a really constrained wheel due to other parts of the design. If you are going to make a wiki page explain everything, regardless of if you think you need to or not.