My new Beyblade Burst story! I will take character requests as long as they are descriptive. Character requests must have the character’s name, character’s appearance, character’s personality, beyblade name, beyblade gimmicks/special moves, and beyblade parts. You can add extra details.

Chapter One: Born from the Flames! Everlasting Phoenix!

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“Let it RIP!” Valt Aoi and Shu Kurenai were having a blast during the finals of the World Championships. The score was 2-2 and the tension was unbearable. Valt launched his bey, Wing Valkyrie as Shu launched his Imperial Spriggan. 11 year old Peter Endor was watching their battle on TV. He clutched in his hand his bey, Everlasting Phoenix. As he watched the intense battle on TV, he got more and more excited. Suddenly, Spriggan bursted Valkyrie with a strong attack!
“Oh! Spriggan smashes through Valkyrie for a BURST FINISH! Let’s hear it for our new World Champion, Shu Kurenai!”
“YES!” Peter heard his sister fangirling over Shu as he smiled at the camera.
“Shut up, Mary!” Peter had admired Shu since he placed 2nd in the International Blader’s Cup. He wanted to be like Shu, a calm Blader with strong skills.
“Let’s be just like Shu, okay Phoenix?” Peter decided he would practice with Phoenix for a bit at the park with his friend, Roan Jamieson.
At the park, there was a stadium with a brown-haired boy wearing a blue jacket.
“Hi Roan!” Roan was a nice friend. He loved battling with Peter, but usually won easily. Roan was known for being one of the best bladers in Peter’s town.
“Let’s battle! 3, 2, 1, let it rip!”
“Phoenix! Take the center!”
“Revenge! Attack Phoenix with all you’ve got!” Roan’s Destructor Revenge was an attack type. It could take out opponents with a single strike. It was about to do so against Phoenix.
“Revenge! Destructor Spiral!” Revenge circled around Phoenix while slowly closing in, its trail making a spiral as it gained speed. Revenge finally hit Phoenix, knocking Phoenix away from the center as Phoenix began to falter.
“Aaaaah! Phoenix! Hang on!” Peter’s determination caused Phoenix to glow as it suddenly gained a burst of speed as it’s tip retracted. It rushed straight through Revenge, bursting it.
“Woah! What was that? How did you do that? What do you call that move?”
Peter thought for a bit before saying, “I think I’ll call it Inferno Reborn Counter.”
“That’s a cool name! It has a nice ring to it.”
The two friends continued battling until the sky got dark, then said their farewells as they departed to go home.



NEXT CHAPTER: Reigning King! Aurum Midas!

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10 letter word.

My new Beyblade Burst story! I will take character requests as long as they are descriptive.

Valt and Shu, I'm done with new characters.

Gale Ishi (Ishi stands for will in Japanese)

Beyblade is Zen Griffin.

Balance type
10 proof
Merge dash

Gimmick: when halfway to bursting, POM (the stuff bearing is made of) slides in front of the contact points, making attacks slide off.

Personality: Gale is set on winning and will be disappointed in himself if he loses, but has fun hanging around friends. He wears baggy Jeans and oversized sports jerseys.

Layer design: contacts are made of overlapping plastic plates going around the layer.

My new Beyblade Burst story! I will take character requests as long as they are descriptive.

Roan’s manager: ROAN!
Roan: Why not.

I’m pretty sure that you have a pretty good idea Of Roan as he’s kinda popular In the WBO stories .

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Gale Ishi (Ishi stands for will in Japanese)

Beyblade is Zen Griffin.

Balance type
10 proof
Merge dash

Gimmick: when halfway to bursting, POM (the stuff bearing is made of) slides in front of the contact points, making attacks slide off.

Personality: Gale is set on winning and will be disappointed in himself if he loses, but has fun hanging around friends. He wears baggy Jeans and oversized sports jerseys.

Layer design: contacts are made of overlapping plastic plates going around the layer.

Can I make up some special moves?

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1st chapter coming out this week!

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10 letter word.

Gale Ishi (Ishi stands for will in Japanese)

Beyblade is Zen Griffin.

Balance type
10 proof
Merge dash

Gimmick: when halfway to bursting, POM (the stuff bearing is made of) slides in front of the contact points, making attacks slide off.

Personality: Gale is set on winning and will be disappointed in himself if he loses, but has fun hanging around friends. He wears baggy Jeans and oversized sports jerseys.

Layer design: contacts are made of overlapping plastic plates going around the layer.

Can I make up some special moves?

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1st chapter coming out this week!

Go ahead!

Name: Yuuta Togashi

Age: 16

Character design:

backgammon gambling online

Personality: Yuuta is somewhat laid back, though he is serious most of the time. He has a strong bond with his bey and talks to it sometimes. At random times he may shout something random like, "be enveloped in the flames of darkness and Dissapear!" Due to his Chuunibyou. He also uses a sword launcher.

Beyblade: Arc Leviathan. A ruthless attack type that has much of the same characteristics as Nightmare Linginus, only rightspin. It has two dragons on the outer edge of its layer with spring loaded contact points like G Valkyrie. It is mostly deep blue and black.

Special moves:

Storm Breaker
Leviathan's spring loaded dragons get pushed back when it hits another bey and shoot forwards into its opponent.


Typhoons Drift
Yuuta steps back from the stadium, and jumps towards it when launching. Because of this, Leviathan gains extra momentum and hits the stadium wall and begins drifting on its layer, causing it to create a tight flower pattern



You said descriptive so here it is XD

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"Do you want to live in this boring reality, or do you want to change it with me?"

- Yuuta Togashi aka Dark Flame Master from Chuunibyou episode 12

My new Beyblade Burst story! I will take character requests as long as they are descriptive.

Roan’s manager: ROAN!
Roan: Why not.

I’m pretty sure that you have a pretty good idea Of Roan as he’s kinda popular In the WBO stories .

Roan is everywhere. Roan is a god. Roan is popular enough to become a Beyblade

Jkjkjk, but I hope I see Roan in Dash’s story. Im also excited for his story in general

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Call me either Sands/Suns! That one female Beyblade fan

Pfp: Cedric from Arcaea by Nataslyn on Discord

[Status: Lurking]

My new Beyblade Burst story! I will take character requests as long as they are descriptive.

Roan’s manager: ROAN!
Roan: Why not.

I’m pretty sure that you have a pretty good idea Of Roan as he’s kinda popular In the WBO stories .

Roan should be rolling in money.

Roan is equivalent to Joshua Burns

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"Do you want to live in this boring reality, or do you want to change it with me?"

- Yuuta Togashi aka Dark Flame Master from Chuunibyou episode 12

Ooh, use a character from my OG story! Toko Olivia Heart! She uses Heaven Ouroboros 10Flight Friction!

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oh no i just woke up and two years have passed where am i what happened

use my character Kanniu! He uses his dual-spin Dimensional Leviathan Sting Godspeed' that can spin steal and has a metal gimmick (metal around the layer like L-Drago), burst stopper like the judgment base, and a rubber gimmick for the driver (Godspeed' is like evolution mixed with ultimate reboot)

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https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCzL8dVb...subscriber

use my character Kanniu! He uses his dual-spin Dimensional Leviathan Sting Godspeed' that can spin steal and has a metal gimmick (metal around the layer like longinus and spriggan requiem) and a rubber gimmick (Godspeed' is like evolution mixed with ultimate reboot)

Oi!! Leviathan!!

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"Do you want to live in this boring reality, or do you want to change it with me?"

- Yuuta Togashi aka Dark Flame Master from Chuunibyou episode 12

Rai Ghasp.

Owns Revolution Ghost. Balance Type dual spinning bey. Has different armour like Phoenix.

00': Heavier 00

Spine: Completely round rubber frame

driver: Control: Basiccally Upgraded Xtend+. (you can choose upgrades)

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Yeet.

The greatest story of all time didn’t start with ‘Once Upon a Time’ it started with ‘Welcome to the world of Beyblade’ instead


Sorry UltimateMaster for copying you

Roan’s manager: ROAN!
Roan: Why not.

I’m pretty sure that you have a pretty good idea Of Roan as he’s kinda popular In the WBO stories .

Roan should be rolling in money.

No, he should be ROAN in the money!

Roan should be rolling in money.

No, he should be ROAN in the money!

*shaking head*
Bad puns, bad puns.

Ooh, use a character from my OG story! Toko Olivia Heart! She uses Heaven Ouroboros 10Flight Friction!

Oh. I won’t put Toko in my story to prevent too much lovey-dovey stuff between them.

use my character Kanniu! He uses his dual-spin Dimensional Leviathan Sting Godspeed' that can spin steal and has a metal gimmick (metal around the layer like L-Drago), burst stopper like the judgment base, and a rubber gimmick for the driver (Godspeed' is like evolution mixed with ultimate reboot)

Can you give me like his personality and any special moves?

Roan’s manager: ROAN!
Roan: Why not.

I’m pretty sure that you have a pretty good idea Of Roan as he’s kinda popular In the WBO stories .

Roan is everywhere. Roan is a god. Roan is popular enough to become a Beyblade

Jkjkjk, but I hope I see Roan in Dash’s story. Im also excited for his story in general

Thanks!

Rai Ghasp.

Owns Revolution Ghost. Balance Type dual spinning bey. Has different armour like Phoenix.

00': Heavier 00

Spine: Completely round rubber frame

driver: Control: Basiccally Upgraded Xtend+. (you can choose upgrades)

Can you give me more details on the character?

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use my character Kanniu! He uses his dual-spin Dimensional Leviathan Sting Godspeed' that can spin steal and has a metal gimmick (metal around the layer like L-Drago), burst stopper like the judgment base, and a rubber gimmick for the driver (Godspeed' is like evolution mixed with ultimate reboot)

Sorry, Boigamer got Leviathan before you. Could you change the layer’s name?

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10 letter word.

Chapter 1 was great! Can’t wait for more!

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No, he should be ROAN in the money!

*shaking head*
Bad puns, bad puns.

Ooh, use a character from my OG story! Toko Olivia Heart! She uses Heaven Ouroboros 10Flight Friction!

Oh. I won’t put Toko in my story to prevent too much lovey-dovey stuff between them.

use my character Kanniu! He uses his dual-spin Dimensional Leviathan Sting Godspeed' that can spin steal and has a metal gimmick (metal around the layer like L-Drago), burst stopper like the judgment base, and a rubber gimmick for the driver (Godspeed' is like evolution mixed with ultimate reboot)

Can you give me like his personality and any special moves?

Roan is everywhere. Roan is a god. Roan is popular enough to become a Beyblade

Jkjkjk, but I hope I see Roan in Dash’s story. Im also excited for his story in general

Thanks!

Rai Ghasp.

Owns Revolution Ghost. Balance Type dual spinning bey. Has different armour like Phoenix.

00': Heavier 00

Spine: Completely round rubber frame

driver: Control: Basiccally Upgraded Xtend+. (you can choose upgrades)

Can you give me more details on the character?

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use my character Kanniu! He uses his dual-spin Dimensional Leviathan Sting Godspeed' that can spin steal and has a metal gimmick (metal around the layer like L-Drago), burst stopper like the judgment base, and a rubber gimmick for the driver (Godspeed' is like evolution mixed with ultimate reboot)

Sorry, Boigamer got Leviathan before you. Could you change the layer’s name?

Kanniu's Personality: he's a ruthless blader when he gets super serious and doesn't care about anything or anyone during then it's almost as if he's corrupted and accepted his corrupted state. When he's not super Serious he can still be a jerk.

Special Moves: Dimensional Switch! Dimensional Switch is a lot like what we've seen with heaven pegasus' switch places move, Dimensional Wormhole! dimensional Wormhole allows Kopano to open up small wormholes and travel through them to appear and disappear on the stadium and if lucky enough if the opponent goes through one then it could mean a ring out for the opponent, Dimensional Blackhole! Dimensional Blackhole is exactly as the name implies Kopano goes to the center of the stadium and spins faster than normal and continues to speed up until it creates a black hole to suck in its opponents causing massive damage.

Ultimate Move: Dimensional Break!! When Dimensional Break is used Kopano creates a wormhole that goes real high above the stadium and enters it falling down fast impacting the opponent hard enough to burst or break apart.

name change: Dimensional Kopano

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https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCzL8dVb...subscriber

This story seems pretty good so far!

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The greatest story of all time didn’t start with ‘Once Upon a Time’ it started with ‘Welcome to the world of Beyblade’ instead.

Oh yeah, my favorite thing in the world is Beyblade! (And writing)

Idk go to:https://www.shantihershenson.com/

*shaking head*
Bad puns, bad puns.

Oh. I won’t put Toko in my story to prevent too much lovey-dovey stuff between them.

Can you give me like his personality and any special moves?

Thanks!

Can you give me more details on the character?

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Sorry, Boigamer got Leviathan before you. Could you change the layer’s name?

Kanniu's Personality: he's a ruthless blader when he gets super serious and doesn't care about anything or anyone during then it's almost as if he's corrupted and accepted his corrupted state. When he's not super Serious he can still be a jerk.

Special Moves: Dimensional Switch! Dimensional Switch is a lot like what we've seen with heaven pegasus' switch places move, Dimensional Wormhole! dimensional Wormhole allows Kopano to open up small wormholes and travel through them to appear and disappear on the stadium and if lucky enough if the opponent goes through one then it could mean a ring out for the opponent, Dimensional Blackhole! Dimensional Blackhole is exactly as the name implies Kopano goes to the center of the stadium and spins faster than normal and continues to speed up until it creates a black hole to suck in its opponents causing massive damage.

Ultimate Move: Dimensional Break!! When Dimensional Break is used Kopano creates a wormhole that goes real high above the stadium and enters it falling down fast impacting the opponent hard enough to burst or break apart.

name change: Dimensional Kopano

I’ll add him to the story.

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This story seems pretty good so far!

Thanks!

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10 letter word.

Rai Ghasp

Personality: Quiet , calm blader. Doesn't listen to trash talk.

Moves: Ultimate Control Change: This is when The Control Driver scrapes and leaps into the air, and the force of the scrape allows it to change modes.
Ghost Defence: This is when he uses ghosts round shape to block any incoming attack.
Revolution Whip: This is when he uses an attack type like armour to deal a powerful blow like Achilles' Turbo Whip
Ultra Revolution Whip: This is when he uses all four blades on the attack armour: a bit like Penta Sabre

Ultimate: Ghost Drift: This is when Control scrapes and gains a massive power boost, allowing it to use Ultra Revolution Whip on any armour

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Yeet.

The greatest story of all time didn’t start with ‘Once Upon a Time’ it started with ‘Welcome to the world of Beyblade’ instead


Sorry UltimateMaster for copying you

Name: Cyrus

Personality: Similar to Phi, I guess. Filled with dark energy.

Bey: Rupture Chimera

Attack type, Counterclockwise spin

Parts : Rupture Chimera Tear Collide

Layer Gimmick: After 2 clicks, massive points of recoil will extend outward further unbalancing the bey but very powerful

Disc Gimmick: Fused with layer, like Nightmare Longinus / Luinor

Driver: When hit, will arc around, gain a speed boost, and chase after the opponent.

P.S. Tear is disc frame.


Special moves:

Chimera Wrath: Layer and disc gimmick have now both activated. Extremely high chance to burst opponent, but since Cyrus is evil, chance to break opponent.

Arc Counter: Driver's gimmick activates and after being struck with a heavy blow Chimera moves in for a fearsome attack.

Final Rupture: If opponent is still hanging on, Chimera swoops in at an angle and does a fearsome uppercut, having gigantic chance to burst opponent.

Name: Cyrus

Personality: Similar to Phi, I guess. Filled with dark energy.

Bey: Rupture Chimera

Attack type, Counterclockwise spin

Parts : Rupture Chimera Tear Collide

Layer Gimmick: After 2 clicks, massive points of recoil will extend outward further unbalancing the bey but very powerful

Disc Gimmick: Fused with layer, like Nightmare Longinus / Luinor

Driver: When hit, will arc around, gain a speed boost, and chase after the opponent.

P.S. Tear is disc frame.


Special moves:

Chimera Wrath: Layer and disc gimmick have now both activated. Extremely high chance to burst opponent, but since Cyrus is evil, chance to break opponent.

Arc Counter: Driver's gimmick activates and after being struck with a heavy blow Chimera moves in for a fearsome attack.

Final Rupture: If opponent is still hanging on, Chimera swoops in at an angle and does a fearsome uppercut, having gigantic chance to burst opponent.

Last name?

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10 letter word.

Name: Cyrus

Personality: Similar to Phi, I guess. Filled with dark energy.

Bey: Rupture Chimera

Attack type, Counterclockwise spin

Parts : Rupture Chimera Tear Collide

Layer Gimmick: After 2 clicks, massive points of recoil will extend outward further unbalancing the bey but very powerful

Disc Gimmick: Fused with layer, like Nightmare Longinus / Luinor

Driver: When hit, will arc around, gain a speed boost, and chase after the opponent.

P.S. Tear is disc frame.


Special moves:

Chimera Wrath: Layer and disc gimmick have now both activated. Extremely high chance to burst opponent, but since Cyrus is evil, chance to break opponent.

Arc Counter: Driver's gimmick activates and after being struck with a heavy blow Chimera moves in for a fearsome attack.

Final Rupture: If opponent is still hanging on, Chimera swoops in at an angle and does a fearsome uppercut, having gigantic chance to burst opponent.

Last name?

Like Phi no last name, antagonist

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Name: Cyrus

Personality: Similar to Phi, I guess. Filled with dark energy.

Bey: Rupture Chimera

Attack type, Counterclockwise spin

Parts : Rupture Chimera Tear Collide

Layer Gimmick: After 2 clicks, massive points of recoil will extend outward further unbalancing the bey but very powerful

Disc Gimmick: Fused with layer, like Nightmare Longinus / Luinor

Driver: When hit, will arc around, gain a speed boost, and chase after the opponent.

P.S. Tear is disc frame.


Special moves:

Chimera Wrath: Layer and disc gimmick have now both activated. Extremely high chance to burst opponent, but since Cyrus is evil, chance to break opponent.

Arc Counter: Driver's gimmick activates and after being struck with a heavy blow Chimera moves in for a fearsome attack.

Final Rupture: If opponent is still hanging on, Chimera swoops in at an angle and does a fearsome uppercut, having gigantic chance to burst opponent.

Last name?

Like Phi no last name, antagonist

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Is it good

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Hi i like Beyblade and Star Wars. My favorite ship is the Viscount-class Star Defender. 
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Last name?

Like Phi no last name, antagonist

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Last name?

Like Phi no last name, antagonist

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Is it good

Yeah. I’ll add him in.

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10 letter word.