Hello guys, I'm planning to make a story about the year between Super/Cho Z and GT. I'll get the first chapter up as soon as I can, but I shall be taking fan made characters in the meantime. Please give me a detailed description on personality, the beyblade, and its special moves. Let's do this thing!
Beyblade Burst Mid ZGT (FAN MADE)
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(Aug. 01, 2019 10:54 PM)Valtryek Aoi Wrote: Hello guys, I'm planning to make a story about the year between Super/Cho Z and GT. I'll get the first chapter up as soon as I can, but I shall be taking fan made characters in the meantime. Please give me a detailed description on personality, the beyblade, and its special moves. Let's do this thing!
I’m fairly sure that you know Roan. Right?
(Aug. 01, 2019 10:58 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote:(Aug. 01, 2019 10:54 PM)Valtryek Aoi Wrote: Hello guys, I'm planning to make a story about the year between Super/Cho Z and GT. I'll get the first chapter up as soon as I can, but I shall be taking fan made characters in the meantime. Please give me a detailed description on personality, the beyblade, and its special moves. Let's do this thing!
I’m fairly sure that you know Roan. Right?
Yup, I've seen him 'round these parts
Episode 1: The Leopard's SERIOUS Upgrade!
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Its cool to see a script format story! Its quite rare, and sometimes fun to read
yo add my character Kanniu
Kanniu's Bey: Dimensional Kopano
Kanniu's Personality: he's a ruthless blader when he gets super serious and doesn't care about anything or anyone during then it's almost as if he's corrupted and accepted his corrupted state. When he's not super Serious he can still be a jerk.
Special Moves: Dimensional Switch! Dimensional Switch is a lot like what we've seen with heaven pegasus' switch places move, Dimensional Wormhole! dimensional Wormhole allows Kopano to open up small wormholes and travel through them to appear and disappear on the stadium and if lucky enough if the opponent goes through one then it could mean a ring out for the opponent, Dimensional Blackhole! Dimensional Blackhole is exactly as the name implies Kopano goes to the center of the stadium and spins faster than normal and continues to speed up until it creates a black hole to suck in its opponents causing massive damage.
Ultimate Move: Dimensional Break!! When Dimensional Break is used Kopano creates a wormhole that goes real high above the stadium and enters it falling down fast impacting the opponent hard enough to burst or break apart.
Kanniu's Bey: Dimensional Kopano
Kanniu's Personality: he's a ruthless blader when he gets super serious and doesn't care about anything or anyone during then it's almost as if he's corrupted and accepted his corrupted state. When he's not super Serious he can still be a jerk.
Special Moves: Dimensional Switch! Dimensional Switch is a lot like what we've seen with heaven pegasus' switch places move, Dimensional Wormhole! dimensional Wormhole allows Kopano to open up small wormholes and travel through them to appear and disappear on the stadium and if lucky enough if the opponent goes through one then it could mean a ring out for the opponent, Dimensional Blackhole! Dimensional Blackhole is exactly as the name implies Kopano goes to the center of the stadium and spins faster than normal and continues to speed up until it creates a black hole to suck in its opponents causing massive damage.
Ultimate Move: Dimensional Break!! When Dimensional Break is used Kopano creates a wormhole that goes real high above the stadium and enters it falling down fast impacting the opponent hard enough to burst or break apart.
(Aug. 02, 2019 12:31 AM)HakaishinLDrago Wrote: yo add my character Kanniu
Kanniu's Bey: Dimensional Kopano
Kanniu's Personality: he's a ruthless blader when he gets super serious and doesn't care about anything or anyone during then it's almost as if he's corrupted and accepted his corrupted state. When he's not super Serious he can still be a jerk.
Special Moves: Dimensional Switch! Dimensional Switch is a lot like what we've seen with heaven pegasus' switch places move, Dimensional Wormhole! dimensional Wormhole allows Kopano to open up small wormholes and travel through them to appear and disappear on the stadium and if lucky enough if the opponent goes through one then it could mean a ring out for the opponent, Dimensional Blackhole! Dimensional Blackhole is exactly as the name implies Kopano goes to the center of the stadium and spins faster than normal and continues to speed up until it creates a black hole to suck in its opponents causing massive damage.
Ultimate Move: Dimensional Break!! When Dimensional Break is used Kopano creates a wormhole that goes real high above the stadium and enters it falling down fast impacting the opponent hard enough to burst or break apart.
Thank you; I'm totally going to use this!
What's the combo for you bey?
(Aug. 02, 2019 12:34 AM)Valtryek Aoi Wrote:(Aug. 02, 2019 12:31 AM)HakaishinLDrago Wrote: yo add my character Kanniu
Kanniu's Bey: Dimensional Kopano
Kanniu's Personality: he's a ruthless blader when he gets super serious and doesn't care about anything or anyone during then it's almost as if he's corrupted and accepted his corrupted state. When he's not super Serious he can still be a jerk.
Special Moves: Dimensional Switch! Dimensional Switch is a lot like what we've seen with heaven pegasus' switch places move, Dimensional Wormhole! dimensional Wormhole allows Kopano to open up small wormholes and travel through them to appear and disappear on the stadium and if lucky enough if the opponent goes through one then it could mean a ring out for the opponent, Dimensional Blackhole! Dimensional Blackhole is exactly as the name implies Kopano goes to the center of the stadium and spins faster than normal and continues to speed up until it creates a black hole to suck in its opponents causing massive damage.
Ultimate Move: Dimensional Break!! When Dimensional Break is used Kopano creates a wormhole that goes real high above the stadium and enters it falling down fast impacting the opponent hard enough to burst or break apart.
Thank you; I'm totally going to use this!
What's the combo for you bey?
Dimensional Kopano Hakai Godspeed' (Hakai has a lot of metal for more attack power and Godspeed' is like ultimate reboot mixed with Evolution Image below of Godspeed':
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Okuji Kettei (Kettei means determination in Japanese)
Alpha Odysseys
Okuji is an ambitious new blader who wants to start at the top, and learn from the best. He is a little bit impatient, But is good at making new friends. He makes cheesy jokes all the time. His beyblade is a balance type with 7 dash meteor xtend. His layer gimmick is he can flip over his main contact points and choose whether to make it soft rubber for attack or slick plastic for defense/stamina. Okuji wears vintage t-shirts with shorts and sneakers.
Alpha Odysseys
Okuji is an ambitious new blader who wants to start at the top, and learn from the best. He is a little bit impatient, But is good at making new friends. He makes cheesy jokes all the time. His beyblade is a balance type with 7 dash meteor xtend. His layer gimmick is he can flip over his main contact points and choose whether to make it soft rubber for attack or slick plastic for defense/stamina. Okuji wears vintage t-shirts with shorts and sneakers.
Episode 2: An Inspiring Burst and the Crystalized Defender
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Isn’t Fubuki only 12?
(Aug. 05, 2019 12:14 AM)Valtryek Aoi Wrote: Episode 2: An Inspiring Burst and the Crystalized Defender
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Crystal Aether 10 Rainbow
Crystal Aether - A Super Z layer that has a very round shape with four main contact points (they are metal). Can switch modes to extend the blades for more attack power or keep them less exposed for defense and the destabilization of its opponents. Mainly a clear white color with a metal diamond on the center that has light blue eyes.
10 - 10 except its painted red, yellow, and orange.
Rainbow - A ball shaped driver that works like a Unite with rubber around the base (it's still shaped like a ball, no outer ring or anything). A flat launch for calm movement or a tilted launch for more intense movement and friction for more power. The stem is green, the rubber on the ball is blue, and the plastic in the middle of the ball is purple.
Sorry, this description is way too late.
Episode 3: Jealousy as a Poison! Petrifying Medusa!
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Sorry for the serious lack of episodes, I've just started high school
Episode 4: The Power of Petrifying Stone and the Will of Victory!
Episode 4: The Power of Petrifying Stone and the Will of Victory!
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Episode 5: The Amazing Return of the Veterans!
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Nice! Is this too late?
Name: Cyrus
Personality: Similar to Phi, I guess. Filled with dark energy.
Bey: Rupture Chimera
Attack type, Counterclockwise spin
Parts : Rupture Chimera Tear Collide
Layer Gimmick: After 2 clicks, massive points of recoil will extend outward further unbalancing the bey but very powerful
Disc Gimmick: Fused with layer, like Nightmare Longinus / Luinor
Driver: When hit, will arc around, gain a speed boost, and chase after the opponent.
P.S. Tear is disc frame.
Special moves:
Chimera Wrath: Layer and disc gimmick have now both activated. Extremely high chance to burst opponent, but since Cyrus is evil, chance to break opponent.
Arc Counter: Driver's gimmick activates and after being struck with a heavy blow Chimera moves in for a fearsome attack.
Final Rupture: If opponent is still hanging on, Chimera swoops in at an angle and does a fearsome uppercut, having gigantic chance to burst opponent.
Name: Cyrus
Personality: Similar to Phi, I guess. Filled with dark energy.
Bey: Rupture Chimera
Attack type, Counterclockwise spin
Parts : Rupture Chimera Tear Collide
Layer Gimmick: After 2 clicks, massive points of recoil will extend outward further unbalancing the bey but very powerful
Disc Gimmick: Fused with layer, like Nightmare Longinus / Luinor
Driver: When hit, will arc around, gain a speed boost, and chase after the opponent.
P.S. Tear is disc frame.
Special moves:
Chimera Wrath: Layer and disc gimmick have now both activated. Extremely high chance to burst opponent, but since Cyrus is evil, chance to break opponent.
Arc Counter: Driver's gimmick activates and after being struck with a heavy blow Chimera moves in for a fearsome attack.
Final Rupture: If opponent is still hanging on, Chimera swoops in at an angle and does a fearsome uppercut, having gigantic chance to burst opponent.
(Aug. 27, 2019 12:33 AM)X-Wing Wrote: Nice! Is this too late?
Name: Cyrus
Personality: Similar to Phi, I guess. Filled with dark energy.
Bey: Rupture Chimera
Attack type, Counterclockwise spin
Parts : Rupture Chimera Tear Collide
Layer Gimmick: After 2 clicks, massive points of recoil will extend outward further unbalancing the bey but very powerful
Disc Gimmick: Fused with layer, like Nightmare Longinus / Luinor
Driver: When hit, will arc around, gain a speed boost, and chase after the opponent.
P.S. Tear is disc frame.
Special moves:
Chimera Wrath: Layer and disc gimmick have now both activated. Extremely high chance to burst opponent, but since Cyrus is evil, chance to break opponent.
Arc Counter: Driver's gimmick activates and after being struck with a heavy blow Chimera moves in for a fearsome attack.
Final Rupture: If opponent is still hanging on, Chimera swoops in at an angle and does a fearsome uppercut, having gigantic chance to burst opponent.
I will try to fit this in like I am doing for Roan
(Aug. 27, 2019 12:47 AM)Valtryek Aoi Wrote:Alright thx(Aug. 27, 2019 12:33 AM)X-Wing Wrote: Nice! Is this too late?
Name: Cyrus
Personality: Similar to Phi, I guess. Filled with dark energy.
Bey: Rupture Chimera
Attack type, Counterclockwise spin
Parts : Rupture Chimera Tear Collide
Layer Gimmick: After 2 clicks, massive points of recoil will extend outward further unbalancing the bey but very powerful
Disc Gimmick: Fused with layer, like Nightmare Longinus / Luinor
Driver: When hit, will arc around, gain a speed boost, and chase after the opponent.
P.S. Tear is disc frame.
Special moves:
Chimera Wrath: Layer and disc gimmick have now both activated. Extremely high chance to burst opponent, but since Cyrus is evil, chance to break opponent.
Arc Counter: Driver's gimmick activates and after being struck with a heavy blow Chimera moves in for a fearsome attack.
Final Rupture: If opponent is still hanging on, Chimera swoops in at an angle and does a fearsome uppercut, having gigantic chance to burst opponent.
I will try to fit this in like I am doing for Roan
I am trying a different writing format for this episode and it will probably stay like this for the rest of the series.
Episode 6: The Horrifying Scythe Stirkes!
Everyone turned their heads towards Daigo Kuragami who stepped up to the stadium looking for his opponent. "I'll gladly take you on!" says Cuza happily. "You won't be defeating me so easily now that I have Space Chronos!" Daigo smirked, "you forgot that I also have an upgrade. Reaper Deathscyther!"
They both square up in their launch positions. Daigo notices that Cuza has set all of Space Chronos's modes to stamina. "He going to draw the battle out be tightroping, eh? Too bad, that won't work out for him!" Anton (the BC Sol referee) steps up to the plate. "Ready, set!" he cries. As a collective group everyone says "3, 2, 1, GO SHOOT!"
Chronos flies towards the outer edge in its perfectly circular stamina mode and jumps onto the stadium wall, doing its tightrope technique like a boss. "It's going just as I planned!" Daigo thought as Deathscyther races towards the wall. "Quadruple Crusher!" Daigo yelled. Deathscyther hits the stadium wall with both of its double hitting scythes, causing Chronos to fall down into the stadium. Cuza starts to lose his composure but rallies quickly. "Stardust Field!" Cuza cried. Chronos's round layer created a powerful wind current. Deathscyther dashes towards Chronos, but is pushes back several times. It then falls on its specialized Crown driver and speeds up. "CROWN CRASH!" Daigo shouts with all he's got. Deathscyther knock Chronos out of the stadium for an Over Finish.
Everyone starts in shock including Cuza, while Daigo looks tired from all the energy he put in it and he smiles. "Yes!" he exclaims happily. A second after he said that, the door opened and there he was. "FREE DE LA HOYA!" everyone yells. "I heard the power of Reaper Deathscyther and Space Chronos all the way from the forest. I really want to battle you Daigo Kurogami." Free says while pointing at him, "What about me!?" Cuza growls angrily. "Wait your turn," Free says calmly. "Did he really just say that?" Shasa says.
Free and Daigo square up, preparing for battle. "I have to watch out for the power that those four scythes hold," Free thinks to himself. "I'm going to turn that to my advantage with a slow motion burst!" Anton steps up to the plate. "Ready, set!" he cries. As a collective group everyone says "3, 2, 1, GO SHOOT!" Fafnir comes of the launcher very slowly while Deathscyther blasts off as if it were going for the moon. "CROWN CRASH!" Daigp shouts. Deathscyther grinds on the Crown driver and takes off towards Fafnir. Fafnir absorbs the massive impact with its rubber, allowing it to gain so much speed the rubber retracted. "Looks like your plan failed," Free says with a bit of a grin. "It hasn't yet," Daigo states. Fafnir blasts of the wall, gaining serious speed for its GEIST SPIN attack. The 12 disk's sharp blades create a wind disturbance cutting through Fafnir's signature move. As Deathscyther hits Fafnir, its Absorb driver is pushed down. "ABSORB BREAK!" Free calls. Fafnir's untamable speed rockets towards Deathscyther. "Take it head on. Use QUADRUPLE CRUSHER!" Daigo shouts. The two beys collide with massive energy. Purple energy on Daigo's side and yellow energy on Free's side. Once the light disperses the two beys fly out of the stadium and burst simultaneously.
Everyone is in even more shock that Daigo just tied with Free, but Free just smiles. "I was right. You and your bey have a true resonance." Free says praising Daigo. "You should go back to AS GALUS and show everyone your new power. With that, I'll have to watch out for you even more closely. I'll have to watch both of you. actually," Free says pointing at both Daigo and Cuza. All three of them smile. "We'll settle the score another day!" they all exclaim at the same time.
Episode 7: Whatever Happened to the Dead Gran?
After the amazing title match where Aiga claimed victory, the members of the Dead Gran have now become more popular being a powerful team in the world focused on fun battles. As new recruits join them, someone from the shadows watches in disgust for his lack of understanding. Will he take them all out? Who's this new recruit? Will this change the course of Dead Gran and the world of beyblade?
Find out on Sunday (September 8th, hopefully)
Episode 6: The Horrifying Scythe Stirkes!
Everyone turned their heads towards Daigo Kuragami who stepped up to the stadium looking for his opponent. "I'll gladly take you on!" says Cuza happily. "You won't be defeating me so easily now that I have Space Chronos!" Daigo smirked, "you forgot that I also have an upgrade. Reaper Deathscyther!"
They both square up in their launch positions. Daigo notices that Cuza has set all of Space Chronos's modes to stamina. "He going to draw the battle out be tightroping, eh? Too bad, that won't work out for him!" Anton (the BC Sol referee) steps up to the plate. "Ready, set!" he cries. As a collective group everyone says "3, 2, 1, GO SHOOT!"
Chronos flies towards the outer edge in its perfectly circular stamina mode and jumps onto the stadium wall, doing its tightrope technique like a boss. "It's going just as I planned!" Daigo thought as Deathscyther races towards the wall. "Quadruple Crusher!" Daigo yelled. Deathscyther hits the stadium wall with both of its double hitting scythes, causing Chronos to fall down into the stadium. Cuza starts to lose his composure but rallies quickly. "Stardust Field!" Cuza cried. Chronos's round layer created a powerful wind current. Deathscyther dashes towards Chronos, but is pushes back several times. It then falls on its specialized Crown driver and speeds up. "CROWN CRASH!" Daigo shouts with all he's got. Deathscyther knock Chronos out of the stadium for an Over Finish.
Everyone starts in shock including Cuza, while Daigo looks tired from all the energy he put in it and he smiles. "Yes!" he exclaims happily. A second after he said that, the door opened and there he was. "FREE DE LA HOYA!" everyone yells. "I heard the power of Reaper Deathscyther and Space Chronos all the way from the forest. I really want to battle you Daigo Kurogami." Free says while pointing at him, "What about me!?" Cuza growls angrily. "Wait your turn," Free says calmly. "Did he really just say that?" Shasa says.
Free and Daigo square up, preparing for battle. "I have to watch out for the power that those four scythes hold," Free thinks to himself. "I'm going to turn that to my advantage with a slow motion burst!" Anton steps up to the plate. "Ready, set!" he cries. As a collective group everyone says "3, 2, 1, GO SHOOT!" Fafnir comes of the launcher very slowly while Deathscyther blasts off as if it were going for the moon. "CROWN CRASH!" Daigp shouts. Deathscyther grinds on the Crown driver and takes off towards Fafnir. Fafnir absorbs the massive impact with its rubber, allowing it to gain so much speed the rubber retracted. "Looks like your plan failed," Free says with a bit of a grin. "It hasn't yet," Daigo states. Fafnir blasts of the wall, gaining serious speed for its GEIST SPIN attack. The 12 disk's sharp blades create a wind disturbance cutting through Fafnir's signature move. As Deathscyther hits Fafnir, its Absorb driver is pushed down. "ABSORB BREAK!" Free calls. Fafnir's untamable speed rockets towards Deathscyther. "Take it head on. Use QUADRUPLE CRUSHER!" Daigo shouts. The two beys collide with massive energy. Purple energy on Daigo's side and yellow energy on Free's side. Once the light disperses the two beys fly out of the stadium and burst simultaneously.
Everyone is in even more shock that Daigo just tied with Free, but Free just smiles. "I was right. You and your bey have a true resonance." Free says praising Daigo. "You should go back to AS GALUS and show everyone your new power. With that, I'll have to watch out for you even more closely. I'll have to watch both of you. actually," Free says pointing at both Daigo and Cuza. All three of them smile. "We'll settle the score another day!" they all exclaim at the same time.
Episode 7: Whatever Happened to the Dead Gran?
After the amazing title match where Aiga claimed victory, the members of the Dead Gran have now become more popular being a powerful team in the world focused on fun battles. As new recruits join them, someone from the shadows watches in disgust for his lack of understanding. Will he take them all out? Who's this new recruit? Will this change the course of Dead Gran and the world of beyblade?
Find out on Sunday (September 8th, hopefully)
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Rai Ghasp
Owns Revolution Ghost 00'Spine Control: Revolution Ghost is a balance type with different armours like Phoenix and 2 burst stopper. Control is a Xtend+ mixed with Dimension with 6 modes: Attack, Barrage, Defence, Hold, Spin, and Last
Wears black Nike React Shoes, has a white hoodie, and has a calm attitude. Doesn't listen to trash-talk
Moves: Revolution Whip: Uses it Attack armour and slashes it with it blades
Control Break: Uses it's Tip in the lowest mode to scrape the outside and gain a speed boost
Ghost Defence: Uses defence armour and block all incoming attacks from the opponent
Ghost Spin: Aimlessly spin slowly and spin steals off the opponent. Can use any mode on the driver for this
Barrage Launch: Uses Barrage mode on driver and unleashes some powerful attacks
Hold: Uses Hold Mode and doesn't let anything take the centre
Hope my character gets in!
Also these are the armours for Revolution Ghost: Speed, Barrage, Spin, Hold and Flash
Combo abbreviation: rV 00'Sp Ctl
Rai Ghasp
Owns Revolution Ghost 00'Spine Control: Revolution Ghost is a balance type with different armours like Phoenix and 2 burst stopper. Control is a Xtend+ mixed with Dimension with 6 modes: Attack, Barrage, Defence, Hold, Spin, and Last
Wears black Nike React Shoes, has a white hoodie, and has a calm attitude. Doesn't listen to trash-talk
Moves: Revolution Whip: Uses it Attack armour and slashes it with it blades
Control Break: Uses it's Tip in the lowest mode to scrape the outside and gain a speed boost
Ghost Defence: Uses defence armour and block all incoming attacks from the opponent
Ghost Spin: Aimlessly spin slowly and spin steals off the opponent. Can use any mode on the driver for this
Barrage Launch: Uses Barrage mode on driver and unleashes some powerful attacks
Hold: Uses Hold Mode and doesn't let anything take the centre
Hope my character gets in!
Also these are the armours for Revolution Ghost: Speed, Barrage, Spin, Hold and Flash
Combo abbreviation: rV 00'Sp Ctl
I have only one request
BRING LUI SHIROSAGI BACK.
BRING LUI SHIROSAGI BACK.