(BeyWheelz Story) The Legend of Legendary (Chap 5 add){Now taking Character Request}

Poll: How is the story?

Very creative, i really like it.
54.55%
6
It's good
27.27%
3
Needs more ZAM!!!
18.18%
2
Please close this Thread!!!!!!!
0%
0
Total: 100% 11 vote(s)
Hey Guys i decided to make a beywheelz story just for the fun of it, and since i'm a good anime drawer i'll have a comic book to go with, but i'm not making any promises.

Prolouge
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6

Tell me what you think.

If you wanna send a Character Request this is what you have to put:
Name:
BeyWheel:
The way they look:
The way the wheel look:
The way they act:
Special move:
Grammar needs a double check, and there's a lot of repitition. And there's a lot of small mistakes. Otherwise, S'ok
Cool. Another Beywheelz story! Grammar needs to be brushed up a bit though.Also, make your text more like this-
"Hi." Said Bob.
"Hi." Said Mike.
It will make it less of a block text. Otherwise, great story!"
Thamks for the help Beyniac, but this is the only way i know how to type a story.Unhappy
Are you writing it backwards? You wrote epilogue where it shouldve been prolouge.
Sorry i got them mixed upTongue_out
I have a character request.

Name : Max Kyoro
BeyWheel : Storm Wing Gryph
The way he acts : Friendly
The way he looks : The wears read shorts with a yellow short covered by a read jacket with yellow outlines.He
wears a red cap on his head. He is blonde. Has Read eyes. Wears read and white shoes.
Okay he'll be in the next or after next chapter
Thank You ?