(BeyWheelz Story) The Legend of Legendary (Chap 5 add){Now taking Character Request} - MasterBlader-X - Aug. 10, 2012
Hey Guys i decided to make a beywheelz story just for the fun of it, and since i'm a good anime drawer i'll have a comic book to go with, but i'm not making any promises.
Prolouge
In a world where chaos rains over, there seems to be no hope. But on boy out of them all rises up to this evil and ripped it's masked off. He is Powerful. He is Awesome. He is Brave. He is.......Legendary. Chapter 1
"Hey grandpa can you tell us the story of Legendary?" ask the old man's grand children. "Oh yes. Now come in and clean up so i can tell you the story" said the old man. After the children got cleaned up they came into the den where the old man was sitting in his chair. "So are you ready for the story of Legendary?" he asked his grand children, and like every little kid on the face of the earth they shook their heads okay. "Well back before the Earth was finish being built, a great evil flew through the cosmos. The evil name was Dark Moon Dragoonius. Dark Moon Dragoonius was a really bad beywheel that hold the ultimate evil power known as the Dark Aura. But to balance the Universe of a good Energy was created. This energy also came in the form as a beywheel known as Light Star Dragoonius, and he hold the Light Aura. As time gone by plant life, animals, and people started appearing on the earth and Dark Moon Dragoonius didn't like that. Until he saw that there were people as evil as he was on Earth so he went down onto the growing planet and chosen a holder.
The holder of Dark Moon Dragoonius was known as the dark holder. As the Dark holder brought great distruction to the world, Light Star Dragoonius knew he had to do something. So just as Dark Moon Dragoonius chose a holder he went to the Earth and found one himself. When he found that person he was now known as Legendary. As Legendary and the Dark Holder fought Light and Dark Moon Dragoonius clashed in an epic battle. When it was over Light Star Dragoonius had defeated Dark Moon Draggonius and locked up Dark Moon Dragoonius forever. Or did they?
As Light Star Dragoonius was passed down from generation to generation, Dark Moon Dragonius was locked up in the Torterus ultimate fault. But out of all the holders only one ever got Light Moon Dragoonius true power to come out, and his name was Percy Monroe. Now this isn't your ordinary Blader. He was the 5 time Ultimate blader champion of the World. When i say he's strong. I mean he's CRAZY strong, and i knew him." said the old man. "What your was friends with Percy Monroe grandpa?" asked the old man's grand son Elite. "Yeah i....." the old man said before getting cut off "I need to go use it!!!!!!" Elite screamed in his Grandpa's ears. "Okay let's go/ We'll be back Kate. Just site still, and i'll start back telling the story when i come back. Chapter 2
"Okay do anyone need to go to the bathroom?" asked the old man. "No we're good!" the little kids said to him. "Well okay where were we? Oh yeah 5 year champ. He was a great friend who i wont ever see again. But we had so fun together. But start from when we met. It was a windy Autumn day. I was making runs for my and a wheel fell from the sky and hit me right in the head. I was really confused and hurt. After i picked up the orders i picked the wheel up that hit me. It had a weird looking white and blue dragon. the Bey wheel was really detailed. It's had spike coming of it with blue flames on it. It also had word written on it. LGH STR DAGIUS is what it said. I sat there thinking what do this mean. Then i remembered about the orders, and rode off on my bike.
"So what kinda of bey wheel are you?" i asked the bey, acting like it could talk. "I'm Light Star Dragoonius. Nice to meet you." the bey answered back. After hearing that i flipped of the bike. "What? No way Beys can't talk. It's just they can't" i said in fear. "Don't worry i'm not going to hurt you or anything." Light Star Dragoonius said to me. "You hurting me? As if." I told him. "Well when i fell on your head that hurt you right?" said Dragoonius. "Well your right. Hey i like you wanna be my new bey?" I asked him. "It will be my honor Legendary." Dragoonius answered back. "What do you mean Legendary? I'm not Legendary,I'm just a normal boy." I told Dragoonius. "Well i'll explain to you later, but right now we need to got to Council tower." said Dragoonius.
"Okay we're here. Why are we here anyway?" i asked Dragoonius. "Because you Legendary and the last one too, so your special, so just come on and i'll tell you everything." said Dragoonius. "Who are you?" said Master Mistress. "It's okay Master Mistress he's Legendary." said Dragoonius. "What him? Why him he's normal. He don't look special." said the Master Mistress. "Well i think he got what it takes to stop him once and for all." said Dragoonius. I couldn't take any more. I just exploded. "What are ya talking about!!!! Who do i have to beat? Whats going on?" I said in anger. "The boy got a big mouth alright. Are you shore Dragoonius?" asked the Master Mistress. "Look Mistress i know when i see a Legendary, and he is it. Now i believe he got what it takes to stop the Dark holder. Now if you don't think he can then find a holder for me, and i bet they all will not have the potental to hold me like this boy here do." said Dragoonius. "Okay. Max bring what ever his name is to the trainning room. Lets see what you got." said the Master Mistress. Chapter 3
"Hello. My name is Max Amber. I am the Head Trainer here in the Counil Tower. Whats you name?" Max asked me. "My name is Percy. Can you please tell me whats going on?" i asked him. "Well you the last Legendary Percy, and that's pretty important." Max told me. "Wait i thought that the Legendary and the Dark holder were just stories my mom would tell me when i go to sleep." I told Max. "Well thier not stories, and your the Legendary. And to top it off your the last one so you have to be ready for the fight at the end of this coming summer." Max told me. "Wait what fight?" I asked Max. "It's called the Grand Battle. It's when the last Legendary and the Dark Holder are locked in a great battle to decided the fate of space and time. You have to win Percy. Everything rides on this battle, so i have to train you with my Titian Force Hydrex." said Max. "Okay so i'm expose to use Dragoonius?" I asked, even though i already knew the. "Yeah so bring him out and lets have a battle." said Max.
"Okay Percy the first battle will be a Race Battle." said Max. "Okay so Dragoonius we have the upper hand." I told Dragoonius. "Remember Percy i'm one of the two most powerful things to ever be created so i'll have a big shockwave if you launch me, so be reeady." Dragoonius told me. "It's okay Dragoonius I can take it." i told her. "3,2,1, Let It Rip!!" Me and Max screamed. When i launched Dragoonius the shockwave was epic. It was like a hurricane went off when i launched him. I flew about 15 ft away from the stadium. Dragoonius quickly got to the other side of the track way before Hyderx did. But he jumped of the track and went out of control, bouncing everywhere. "Dragoonius stop!" i yelled at him. "I can't!!" he screamed. Me and Max ran all over the place trying not to get hit. "Some one please help!!" screamed Dragoonius. When the Master Mistress walked into the trainning room to see my progress. Dragoonius hit her right inthe forehead.
"Max whats the meaning of this!!!" screamed Mistress. "Sorry Master M. We were testing Percy's power. "You!! You little boy i know you weren't the Legendary. You can't ever be the legendary!!" she screamed at me and walked away. "Hey lady whats you problem?" i told her. "What did you say to me?" she asked me. "Whats your deal? Why your being so hard on me?" i asked her. "Because this is a serious matter. This the the year of distruction and the Legendary is the only one who can stop that, and your are not worthy of even looking at Dragoonius." she told me. "Well look here Master Mistress. If you like it or not i'm the Legendary and there's nothing you can do to stop that." i told here. "Well we'll see about that.' she said. As she walked away Max looked at me, shock his head, and walked away. "Oh and Percy Be here tommorow at 6:00am, for more trainning." he told me. "Okay Max see you later." i told him while walking out the main doors. Chapter 4
"So this is where i live Dragoonius. How do it look?" I asked him. "Wow is so.......so......so original." Dragoonius asnwered. "I know i told mom that we should..." i said before being empterupted by my parents. "Who are you talking to Pooky Bear?" my mom asked me. "MOM!!! My name is not Pooky Bear you know my nickname. And i was talking to my Beywheel Light Star Dragoonius." i told her. "I don't know why your father named you Perseus in the first place. We are not Greek, and did you say Light Star Dragoonius?" she told me. "Yeah i'm the Legendary." i told her. "What honey that's impossible. Legendary is not real and you know that." she told me. "But mom the Legendary is real and i'm him. Just ask Dragoonius he'll tell you." i tried to tell her. "Look if this little beywheel can talk i'll give you $300 dollars in cash." sha said. "Hello mam my name is Light Dragoonius. Nice to meet you." Dragoonius told her. "Wait did that....but...how?" she wondered. "Well i'll take my $300 dollars now." i told her. My mom didn't really say anything after that. She just fainted for 3 hours.
"Honey what happened?" momasked my after waking up. "Um you passed out after seeing Light Star Dragoonius, and you forgot to pay me my $300 dollars in cash." i told her. "Oh okay where's you father?" she asked. "Um he's at the Bey Coliseum doing what he always do." i answered her. "Well go tell him the news and when you come back get ready for dinner." she told me. "Yes mam." i answered. As i got on my bike to see mt father, i seen a boy not much older then me. He was tall, wearing a black shirt and black jean pants, with black dress shoes on. His hair was dark purple, and so was his eyes. He had a dark grin on his face as he steped up to me. "You there where are you going?" the dark dude asked me. 'Um i'm sorry do i know you?" asked him. "HA! HA! HA! You must not know who i am." he told me. "Sorry but i really don't care. I really need to go so may you please let me pass." i asked him politely. "No you may not past. If you bet me, Kento Jukaiya, The dark holder in a Stunt battle." Kento said to me. "What i knew i felt a dark power in you Kento. Now wheres Dark Moon Dragoonius?" asked Light Dragoonius. "Oh i see you Legendary huh? Well no matter i will destroy you and bring darkness to the universe a little early then i expected it. Lets get started." Kento said.
He pulled out Dark moon Dragoonius. It look so evil. It looked exactly like Light Dragoonius, but it was purple and black and the dragon on it had red eyes, as Light dragoonius had blue eyes. "So lets go 3,2,1!" Kento told me. 'Let it rip!!" i screamed out. This time when i launched Dragoonius the shockwave didn't move me at all. When the beys clashed for the first time, the earth shock like nothing i have ever seen. The beys were clashing each other made every tree of the 15 meter radius fell. "So this is the awesome power of the Grand Battle? I fells wonderful. Most grand indeed!!" he screamed to the skys. As Light Dragoonius and Dark Dragoonius clashed harder. Everyone came to see what was happening. "Whats going on?" one kid asked. "Is that Light and Dark Dragoonius over there?" another aksed. The whole park was completely destoyed. "Okay time to finish this. Special move Dark Moon Destruction!!" Kento said unleahing his special move. "No Dragoonius dodge it!" i commanded Dragoonius, but it was to late. Dark Dragoonius special move was frightning. Dark Dragoonius flew into the air and when it came down all i could see was a dark dragon falling on Light Dragoonius. "Keep spinning!!" i said to Light Dragoonius, but before Kento totally destroyed Dragoonius Titan Force Hydrex blocked Dark Dragoonius special move. Chapter 5
"What?" screamed Kento. "Percy get up and fight him!!" Max commanded me. "Come o Percy!!" the crowd shouted to me. 'Lets do this Dragoonius!!!" i shouted out. Light Dragoonius flew in to the air and a flash of white light filled the sky. A mighty dragon flew from out of the sky and headed for Dark Dragoonius. "Dark dragoonius special move Dark Moon Destruction!!" Kento told Dark Dragoonius. "Oh no you don't. I will not lose tonight! Light Dragoonius special move Light Star Creation!!!" i told Dragoonius. Dark and Light Dragoonius ran to each other faster then the speed of light. When they clashed they created a big flash of light to the point where you couldn't see anything. After the flash left Kento disappered. "Kento were are you?" i screamed out. "Percy it's okay you to will see each other again. And that battle was great, but look what you did to the Bey Coliseum." Max told me. "What wrong with it?" i asked him. "It's completely destroyed." he answered. I ran as fast as i could to get to the Coliseum. When i got there Max was right.
"Father!!! Father please answer me!!" i screamed, hoping he could hear me. Max caught up with me wondering what i was doing. "Help me Perseus." a faint noice said. I ran to the spot the noice came from and i saw some rocks moving. "Father? Father are you okay?" i asked my father who was wounded. "Son your the Legendary. My son the Legendary. i'm so proud of you Perseus, and never forget that." he told me slipping away. "Father? Father please don't leave me. Max! Max I need a Hospital." i said in sadness. "Percy it's to late. He's...." Max told me. "No father don't go." i said. I hugged Max in my sadness. I got up and walked to the middle of the ruins of the Colisem and looked at the moon. "No matter what Kento. I will defaet you. No matter what!!!" i screamed to the moon. "Percy They sent people to come get him. Lets go you can stay with me for the night." Max told me. "Good bye father. I will never forget what you told me." i said to my father. "You will regret this Kento.
As we walked to Max's house, i coldn't stop thinking about Kento and Dark Dragoonius. "I'm sorry for you lost Percy." Dragoonius told me. "It's okay Dragoonius." i told him. "I fell that it was my fault." Dragoonius said to me. "It's not your fault Dragoonius. How could you know this was going to happen." i told him. "Okay guys we're here. Ny home." Max told us. When i saw his house, i thought it'll be super normal. Instead it's a Mansion. When we walked in there was maids everywhere. "Sorry for the mess." he told us. ''What mess?'' i asked him. "I'll show you your room, but before that we should have some dinner." i told me. After the cheifs made the dinner we headed for the Kitchen which was a mile away from the Living room. "I hope you like Italian food." Max told me. "I never ate it, but my dad loves it." i told him. "Come on Percy. Stop beating yourself up about this. It wasn't your fault." He told me. ''I know but why i had to meet Kento?" i asked myself. Chapter 6
That night i had a dream of all the memories of my father. How we would go to the Pond of Accient Tears, and he'll tell me stories of back when he was my age. I remember the first bey battle i had. He was right there coaching me from the sidelines. How Proud he was of me. Then a fog started to form, and the memories faded away. A dark figure flew up into the sky. It was Dark Dragoonius with Kento riding him. "Wheres daddy know?" he said in a evil tone, then started laughing. "NO!!!" I screamed waking up Dragoonius. Which i don't know how a wheel sleep. "Percy just ignore it." he told me. "Wait you know what i dreamed of?" i asked him. "Yes. We are connected Percy." he told me. "Okay that's weird. Well i'm thrusty, so lets go to the kitchen and see if Max has any milk we can warm up." i told Dragoonius. As we walked to the Kitchen we started hearing noices. The noise was coming from the Kitchen. I loaded up Dragoonius, so we were ready for a fight. "Who's there? I have a bey wheel and i know how to use it!" i said to the thing inside the Kitchen. As we got closer to the Kitchen openning, I saw red eyes. As i poked my head into the Kitchen nothing was there. "Look Dragoonius no one is there. it's just our imginati....AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!" I screamed as someone patted my back.
"It's okay, it's okay it's just me." the red eyed boy said to me. He had blonde hair, wearing red and yellow clothing. 'My name is Max Kyoro, but you can call me Maxy. Max is my uncle. I'm staying with him for awhile. What's you name?" he asked me. I was still in shock, so i couldn't answer his question. "Granpa is that Uncle Maxy?" Kate asked. "Yeah." i told here. Now let's get back to the story. "My name is Percy Monroe. Your Uncle told me that i could stay here. Do you BeyWheel?" i asked him. "Yeah who don't" he replied. "Your up for a friendly battle?" i asked again. "Let's do this then." he answered. As we walked to the trainning room, I saw Max's sword collection on the walls. "We're here. This is where i train every day." Maxy told me. "You train here everyday?" I asked him. "Yeah it's not much, but it gets the trainning done." He told me.(sorry will finish later)
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RE: (BeyWheelz Story) The Legend of Legendary (Chap 1 add) - DrPepsidew - Aug. 10, 2012
Grammar needs a double check, and there's a lot of repitition. And there's a lot of small mistakes. Otherwise, S'ok
RE: (BeyWheelz Story) The Legend of Legendary (Chap 1 add) - Dual - Aug. 10, 2012
Cool. Another Beywheelz story! Grammar needs to be brushed up a bit though.Also, make your text more like this-
"Hi." Said Bob.
"Hi." Said Mike.
It will make it less of a block text. Otherwise, great story!"
RE: (BeyWheelz Story) The Legend of Legendary (Chap 2 add) - MasterBlader-X - Aug. 13, 2012
Thamks for the help Beyniac, but this is the only way i know how to type a story.
RE: (BeyWheelz Story) The Legend of Legendary (Chap 3 add) - Eternal-E - Aug. 14, 2012
Are you writing it backwards? You wrote epilogue where it shouldve been prolouge.
RE: (BeyWheelz Story) The Legend of Legendary (Chap 3 add) - MasterBlader-X - Aug. 14, 2012
Sorry i got them mixed up
RE: (BeyWheelz Story) The Legend of Legendary (Chap 5 add){Now taking Character Request} - MysteryMaster23 - Aug. 16, 2012
I have a character request.
Name : Max Kyoro
BeyWheel : Storm Wing Gryph
The way he acts : Friendly
The way he looks : The wears read shorts with a yellow short covered by a read jacket with yellow outlines.He
wears a red cap on his head. He is blonde. Has Read eyes. Wears read and white shoes.
RE: (BeyWheelz Story) The Legend of Legendary (Chap 5 add){Now taking Character Request} - MasterBlader-X - Aug. 17, 2012
Okay he'll be in the next or after next chapter
RE: (BeyWheelz Story) The Legend of Legendary (Chap 5 add){Now taking Character Request} - MysteryMaster23 - Aug. 17, 2012
Thank You ?
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