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(BeyWheelz Story) The Legend of Legendary (Chap 5 add){Now taking Character Request} - MasterBlader-X - Aug. 10, 2012

Hey Guys i decided to make a beywheelz story just for the fun of it, and since i'm a good anime drawer i'll have a comic book to go with, but i'm not making any promises.

Prolouge
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6

Tell me what you think.

If you wanna send a Character Request this is what you have to put:
Name:
BeyWheel:
The way they look:
The way the wheel look:
The way they act:
Special move:


RE: (BeyWheelz Story) The Legend of Legendary (Chap 1 add) - DrPepsidew - Aug. 10, 2012

Grammar needs a double check, and there's a lot of repitition. And there's a lot of small mistakes. Otherwise, S'ok


RE: (BeyWheelz Story) The Legend of Legendary (Chap 1 add) - Dual - Aug. 10, 2012

Cool. Another Beywheelz story! Grammar needs to be brushed up a bit though.Also, make your text more like this-
"Hi." Said Bob.
"Hi." Said Mike.
It will make it less of a block text. Otherwise, great story!"


RE: (BeyWheelz Story) The Legend of Legendary (Chap 2 add) - MasterBlader-X - Aug. 13, 2012

Thamks for the help Beyniac, but this is the only way i know how to type a story.Unhappy


RE: (BeyWheelz Story) The Legend of Legendary (Chap 3 add) - Eternal-E - Aug. 14, 2012

Are you writing it backwards? You wrote epilogue where it shouldve been prolouge.


RE: (BeyWheelz Story) The Legend of Legendary (Chap 3 add) - MasterBlader-X - Aug. 14, 2012

Sorry i got them mixed upTongue_out


RE: (BeyWheelz Story) The Legend of Legendary (Chap 5 add){Now taking Character Request} - MysteryMaster23 - Aug. 16, 2012

I have a character request.

Name : Max Kyoro
BeyWheel : Storm Wing Gryph
The way he acts : Friendly
The way he looks : The wears read shorts with a yellow short covered by a read jacket with yellow outlines.He
wears a red cap on his head. He is blonde. Has Read eyes. Wears read and white shoes.


RE: (BeyWheelz Story) The Legend of Legendary (Chap 5 add){Now taking Character Request} - MasterBlader-X - Aug. 17, 2012

Okay he'll be in the next or after next chapter


RE: (BeyWheelz Story) The Legend of Legendary (Chap 5 add){Now taking Character Request} - MysteryMaster23 - Aug. 17, 2012

Thank You ?