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BeyStory: Into The Furnace GIVEAWAY IN PROGRESS IN OP

Poll: Do you like this story?

I LOVED IT
61.11%
22
It was good
22.22%
8
meh
11.11%
4
story, what story
5.56%
2
Total: 100% 36 vote(s)
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May. 17, 2011  4:10 PM
 
chapter 4 is out now for anyone who didn't get the message
May. 17, 2011  4:29 PM
 
WOOT you used my bey GrinGrinGrinGrin anyway here is my thought of a king's bey

Name:King yuri
Beyblade:Magma knight 220 EWD
Special Move:Magma sword air slash.
Personality:Royal,wants people to do thing he should do,Gets scared of most things.
Bey explantion:
Facebolt:sword in middle with ice covering top of the sword and fire at the end of it.rock from both left and right
clearwheel:red with crown on the sides.
Metal wheel:Fairly similiar to gravity but has more "spikes" pointing up
Spin track:220,A height similliar to 230
bottomEeeWDEeextreme Wide drum/defense
May. 17, 2011  6:52 PM
 
(May. 08, 2011  7:22 PM)Jak and Daxter Wrote: Name:Kadel
Beyblade:Blind Kalzor 80 XtremeHoleFlat
Special move:Invisible Strike
Personaity:Cool,Creative but not that good in Beybladeing(he lost 70% of his BeyBattles(Good Guy))
Age:15
Gender:Male

and if you have any more Story Ideas you can PM me and i can help you

Bling Razor instead of blind kalzor ( at firs it was a writing error but it sounds good XD )
May. 17, 2011  6:59 PM
 
(May. 17, 2011  6:52 PM)sonicsora123 Wrote:
(May. 08, 2011  7:22 PM)Jak and Daxter Wrote: Name:Kadel
Beyblade:Blind Kalzor 80 XtremeHoleFlat
Special move:Invisible Strike
Personaity:Cool,Creative but not that good in Beybladeing(he lost 70% of his BeyBattles(Good Guy))
Age:15
Gender:Male

and if you have any more Story Ideas you can PM me and i can help you

Bling Razor instead of blind kalzor ( at firs it was a writing error but it sounds good XD )

Writing Error?
May. 17, 2011  8:17 PM
 
(May. 17, 2011  6:59 PM)Jak and Daxter Wrote:
(May. 17, 2011  6:52 PM)sonicsora123 Wrote:
(May. 08, 2011  7:22 PM)Jak and Daxter Wrote: Name:Kadel
Beyblade:Blind Kalzor 80 XtremeHoleFlat
Special move:Invisible Strike
Personaity:Cool,Creative but not that good in Beybladeing(he lost 70% of his BeyBattles(Good Guy))
Age:15
Gender:Male

and if you have any more Story Ideas you can PM me and i can help you

Bling Razor instead of blind kalzor ( at firs it was a writing error but it sounds good XD )

Writing Error?

writing error, spelling mistake, Word crashing
call it what you want
May. 18, 2011  2:14 AM
 
(May. 17, 2011  7:04 AM)sonicsora123 Wrote: can i change fang tiger to velocity tiger
yeah well i need the other pieces of tiger as well
oh and do you want me to pm you when i release a new chapter

you already did pm me and also umm when is my character getting added, well velocity is kind of stupid can you just leave it fang tiger, and anywayz i put the other pieces
May. 18, 2011  4:44 PM
 
(May. 18, 2011  2:14 AM)Fang.Leone Wrote:
(May. 17, 2011  7:04 AM)sonicsora123 Wrote: can i change fang tiger to velocity tiger
yeah well i need the other pieces of tiger as well
oh and do you want me to pm you when i release a new chapter

you already did pm me and also umm when is my character getting added, well velocity is kind of stupid can you just leave it fang tiger, and anywayz i put the other pieces

kk your character is probably in chapter 8 but he battles me in chapter 9 or 10
sorry i have alot of requests
anyway i need a bey thats dangerous like a gun
May. 18, 2011  5:44 PM
 
(May. 17, 2011  8:17 PM)sonicsora123 Wrote:
(May. 17, 2011  6:59 PM)Jak and Daxter Wrote:
(May. 17, 2011  6:52 PM)sonicsora123 Wrote:
(May. 08, 2011  7:22 PM)Jak and Daxter Wrote: Name:Kadel
Beyblade:Blind Kalzor 80 XtremeHoleFlat
Special move:Invisible Strike
Personaity:Cool,Creative but not that good in Beybladeing(he lost 70% of his BeyBattles(Good Guy))
Age:15
Gender:Male

and if you have any more Story Ideas you can PM me and i can help you

Bling Razor instead of blind kalzor ( at firs it was a writing error but it sounds good XD )

Writing Error?

writing error, spelling mistake, Word crashing
call it what you want

with writing error i meant what was the Wr.Error:\
May. 18, 2011  6:22 PM
 
oh
errrrmmmm
well the 1st name was Bland Kalzor but now its Bling Razzor
May. 18, 2011  6:27 PM
 
wtf!?
what are you talking about Bland i written Blind
and bling Razzor is ok
May. 19, 2011  7:55 AM
 
i mean your idea was bland XD
your characers in chapter 6
May. 19, 2011  7:01 PM
 
ah ok,and anyway which of the ''King Beys''are you going to Use?Smile
May. 20, 2011  4:54 PM
 
(May. 19, 2011  7:01 PM)Jak and Daxter Wrote: ah ok,and anyway which of the ''King Beys''are you going to Use?Smile

I WAS JUST KIDDING
anyway your king bey was really good so yeah but i will also use the dark knight idea
May. 20, 2011  5:03 PM
 
when is chapter 5 going to come out?
May. 21, 2011  7:44 AM
 
(May. 20, 2011  5:03 PM)Jak and Daxter Wrote: when is chapter 5 going to come out?

today
May. 22, 2011  4:06 PM
 
(May. 21, 2011  7:44 AM)sonicsora123 Wrote:
(May. 20, 2011  5:03 PM)Jak and Daxter Wrote: when is chapter 5 going to come out?

today

and when is chapter 6 out?
May. 23, 2011  7:10 AM
 
errrm later today or tommorow
May. 23, 2011  7:17 PM
 
wow i must admit CH. 6 was the best of the rest if you ask me(not because one of my Guys is in there)
May. 24, 2011  12:30 AM
 
(May. 23, 2011  7:17 PM)Jak and Daxter Wrote: wow i must admit CH. 6 was the best of the rest if you ask me(not because one of my Guys is in there)

yes dude agree with you it's a nice part of the story
May. 24, 2011  6:52 PM
 
(May. 24, 2011  12:30 AM)bladeruler Wrote:
(May. 23, 2011  7:17 PM)Jak and Daxter Wrote: wow i must admit CH. 6 was the best of the rest if you ask me(not because one of my Guys is in there)

yes dude agree with you it's a nice part of the story

what do you like about it. the bey description or the battle or the opening or is it [insert what you liked here]
May. 24, 2011  8:05 PM
 
(May. 24, 2011  6:52 PM)sonicsora123 Wrote:
(May. 24, 2011  12:30 AM)bladeruler Wrote:
(May. 23, 2011  7:17 PM)Jak and Daxter Wrote: wow i must admit CH. 6 was the best of the rest if you ask me(not because one of my Guys is in there)

yes dude agree with you it's a nice part of the story

what do you like about it. the bey description or the battle or the opening or is it [insert what you liked here]

I like the opening and the BattleEee
May. 27, 2011  6:53 AM
 
post your predictions about whats gonna happen
May. 29, 2011  5:39 PM
 
Name:zane
BeybladeConfusedniper giros
Special Move:burning shot
Personality:furious in battles
Bey Explanation:Facebolt:gun with ammo around the gun
Clear wheel:Black and has little ammo picture in the left and right side
Metal wheel:very fat metal wheel similar to basalt horogium
spin track:165
tip:UWD/S(Ultimate wide defense/stamina)
Character Description:After alot of time in beybattles,zane realizes the black hole.....He wants to stop it.But instead the cold fire invites him to their group.....He trains there and he was given orders to destroy a guy named demarko.........

a wolfurious bey
Name:gordo
BeybladeGrineath alphena
Special Move:fury wolf death bite!
PersonalityConfusedtrong.But serious (not in mood for any fun)
Bey Explanation: facebolt wolf face...
clearwheel white
metalwheel:Fang like around all the metalwheel
spintrack:75
tip:XHSF(Xtreme hole semiflate
May. 30, 2011  7:05 PM
 
(May. 29, 2011  5:39 PM)Poison pegasus Wrote: Name:zane
BeybladeConfusedniper giros
Special Move:burning shot
Personality:furious in battles
Bey Explanation:Facebolt:gun with ammo around the gun
Clear wheel:Black and has little ammo picture in the left and right side
Metal wheel:very fat metal wheel similar to basalt horogium
spin track:165
tip:UWD/S(Ultimate wide defense/stamina)
Character Description:After alot of time in beybattles,zane realizes the black hole.....He wants to stop it.But instead the cold fire invites him to their group.....He trains there and he was given orders to destroy a guy named demarko.........

a wolfurious bey
Name:gordo
BeybladeGrineath alphena
Special Move:fury wolf death bite!
PersonalityConfusedtrong.But serious (not in mood for any fun)
Bey Explanation: facebolt wolf face...
clearwheel white
metalwheel:Fang like around all the metalwheel
spintrack:75
tip:XHSF(Xtreme hole semiflate

Perfect. but can i make XHSF just XSF or something and UWD/S just UWD
May. 30, 2011  7:59 PM
 
Name:Justin Clark
Bey blade:Ice Naixoos 145EA BS
Special MoveConfusedtriking Crystal.Naixoos metal wheel will turn into ice and it will start striking in random places and its last strike will try to flip the opponents bey over to make it stop spinning
Personality:Quiet,Helpful,And will always stand up for a friend when needed
Bey Explanation: (explain every piece)145EA RS (145Eternal Attack and then its Round Spike. The spin track 145EA is kinda like ED except the 3 things are pointed spikes and RS has a whole bunch of spikes on the sides .Ice Is some what like storm except the normal storm stuff is switched with ice crystals and there's a very small gap between them and in between the gaps are small crystals sticking out .
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