Bey Series - The Four Pillars, Chapter 5 is up! Review Please!

Poll: How good is my story

Awesome
20.00%
3
Quite Good
33.33%
5
OK
33.33%
5
Bad
13.33%
2
Total: 100% 15 vote(s)
Lol! Yeah you are starting to sound like the main character!XD it's pretty cool!Smile
Ace is actually gonna lose. And then something really cool is gonna happen with jack. And ace ryu and jack, they're are all equally important.
Chapter 14 is up. I will only post on weekends from now on. Sorry guys. I'll try posting on weekdays, but it'll be very hard.
Chapter 14 was coolSmile the relationship between Ace and Ryu is.... Ok?, Can't wait for the next chapter! Ryu and Ace will destroy their opponents!XD
You will soon be able to read my story in the wbo weekly. This.means I wipp put the fall.on that thread, not this.
(Sep. 11, 2013  11:13 PM)jacolal Wrote: You will soon be able to read my story in the wbo weekly. This.means I wipp put the fall.on that thread, not this.

Sounds cool! Can't wait!Smile
I've decided that the nest chapter will be thelast one. Then ipp start the fall.
I have finished this story, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. What about you guys? To stay tuned to my next story, look on the WBO weekly. It is gonna be even more awesome!
Good finish but what happened to Ryu at the end?
Find out in the next story... OOOOOOOOO it's gonna be really interesting. She's gonna do the most awesome thing ever!
(Sep. 14, 2013  7:53 PM)XKai_DranzerX Wrote: The Suspense is killing me

Same here! I'm dying to know!XD
Well... I may be able to post the first chapter tomorrow. Be sure to look at it on the WBO weekly!
Oh yeah, I'm thinking of also posting it on this, so you can look at my story like normal, or on a magazine.
(Sep. 14, 2013  7:57 PM)jacolal Wrote: Well... I may be able to post the first chapter tomorrow. Be sure to look at it on the WBO weekly!

Awesome! cant wait!Smile
I'm pming you one thing, and only one. Tell me what you want to know, and I'll pm it to you. ace, I've already told you some stuff so sorry, not pming you.
(Sep. 14, 2013  8:08 PM)jacolal Wrote: I'm pming you one thing, and only one. Tell me what you want to know, and I'll pm it to you. ace, I've already told you some stuff so sorry, not pming you.

Ok sounds cool!Smile I'd like to know if Ryu's going to be ok when she gets out of the hospital?
Pm sent. I hope this answers your question. Tell me if I wasn't clear enough.
(Sep. 14, 2013  8:30 PM)jacolal Wrote: Pm sent. I hope this answers your question. Tell me if I wasn't clear enough.

It was clear!Smile thanks for not spoiling me that much!!Grin
Yeah... You gotta keep the suspense, or no-ones gonna read it.
Yeah!XD the suspense is killing me!XD
Any ideas or characters for the fall? I might need a coach.
Chapter 1 is up. I've called it something else. Hope you like it!