A spirited fighter.

Poll: Do you like this?

Yes, amazing!
61.11%
11
Good, but needs improvements.
33.33%
6
No, this sucks.
5.56%
1
Not that good, needs improvements.
0%
0
Total: 100% 18 vote(s)
The character is right in front of you! Just some small adjustments....
Add me or else.... I know where you live, [censored] Boys Dorms, [censored] [censored]. So THERE!
chapter 5 final part has really some wrong spelling.....better fix that......

and awesome chapter 6!
Whoops didnt know that.......and can i have another request?
Cool chapter!
going to place this story in my sig,along with some stories.....
Name:Tenji Okana
Bey: Cyber Libra BT125 ES
BT125(Tornado type 2 12.5 milimetres) is like T125 except bigger and with free spinning wings
Apperance: Like Tobio(capt.capri) just black with black hair
Personality:ecstatic and friendly
Special move: Cybernetic Shockwave -its like when libra does his special move but the ground looks like a computer network
Hope you like it Joyful_3
it sounds really awesome
Here's a character:
Name: Gale

Beyblade: Tornado Wolf

Appearence: Black hair, black shirt with a wolf on it and an overshirt that is army-green with a black hood. black cargo shorts and black and green VANS skateboarding shoes.

Personality: hot-headed and wild, VERY unpredictable, likes to skateboard and beyblade

Beyblade discription: black Wolf clear wheel with green design stickers, storm fusion wheel but it has the defense of earth, attack of storm, and stamina of earth, it has a green C145 spin track that also acts like Rock Aries's eternal defense spin track and a black wide ball performance tip

Special Move: 1st special move: nightmare tornado, 2nd special move: delta wind hurricane, 3rd special move: cyclone's claw


Cyberpegasis98: i'm sorry if any of my moves are like yours but my theme is wind and that was the best i could do, i am open to alternative suggestion though
(Mar. 03, 2011  3:20 PM)Korinzu Wrote: Actually,the next chapter might be up in a day or two.Unhappy

NOOOOOOOOO!!!Pinching_eyes_2
its because of my awesome character isnt it
i might post my character request as soon as i can get on my laptop, am on my phone atm, btw dude, impressive story
lol where do i come in?
weirdly,I think this chapter is like kingdom hearts.....