Boom! The first of my articles on HMS and Plastics Sets.

Contents
Dragoon MS Blue Dragon Version
Gaia Dragoon MS Yellow Dragon Version
Driger MS White Tiger Version
Wyvern DJ
Tornado Balance Stadium
HMS Double Shooter (Blue)
HMS Double Shooter (Silver)

General Info
This set was the first release of the Tornado Balance Stadium. It was later released on it's own as one of the earliest releases of the HMS series. This set is the only way to obtain the original version of Wyvern DJ, from Takara.

Gallery
Pictures from websites to be used.

Overall
This set includes has some highly useful pieces for the HMS system with Dragoon MS being essential for HMS attack combos and the Tornado Balance one of the most used stadiums of the HMS period. However the other pieces of the set have almost no uses competitively and Gaia Dragoon MS and Driger MS are easy to find. This set is incredibly rare and nearly impossible to find, and a few of the parts inside are rarely found elsewhere as well. If you are able to find one you should definitely purchase it.

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Hmm very good draft, Ultra! Oh as for picture's, Maybe you can convince JR_Tiger to take some picture's? He's got the full set in completely Mint condition!

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Thanks. I'd noticed that he does. It won't really make much difference which one we use. I've got some from 2 sites both of which are good quality. I'll let Kei decide though.

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It was later released on it's as one of the earliest releases of the HMS series

Do you mean this: It was released later on, as it is one of the earliest releases of the HMS series.
Your current sentence doesn't make much sense, at least to me.

This set was also the only way from Takara in which to obtain the original version of Wyvern DJ.

It would sound better like this: This set is the only way to obtain the original version of Wyvern DJ, from Takara.


Fixed, except for the bolded sentence. The sentence was too confusing, you definitely need some commas in it.

This set includes extremely useful parts for the HMS system. Dragoon MS is essential for HMS attack customizations and the Tornado Balance Stadium is one of the most used of the HMS period. However, the other pieces of the set have almost no use competitively. Also, Gaia Dragoon MS and Driger MS are very common. This set is now almost impossible to find only coming around incredible rarely with the individual pieces from it being just as rare. If you are able to find one you should definitely purchase it.

What bothers me is you didn't use a single comma in your article. I know it is short, but commas are essential. You should probably also reword the last sentence.

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For the first one I missed out a word which screws it up. I fail to understand what you find confusing about the bolded sentence. Yes it does need commas, I wrote it in about 20 minutes and didn't check it. I'll make all these edits tomorrow.

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Yeah the bolded sentence isn't too well written.

I'd change it to this:
"This set is incredibly rare and nearly impossible to find. The parts inside are rarely found elsewhere as well."

Though I'm not really fond of the word choices in that sentence, I just rearranged them and split it into two sentences that are easier to take in. I'd also change the last sentence, as Imperial suggested already.

Boom! The first of my articles on HMS and Plastics Sets.

Contents
Dragoon MS (Blue)
Gaia Dragoon MS (Yellow)
Driger MS (White)
Wyvern DJ
Tornado Balance Stadium
HMS Double Shooter (Blue)
HMS Double Shooter (Silver)

General Info
This set was the first release of the Tornado Balance Stadium. It was later released on it's own as one of the earliest releases of the HMS series. This set is the only way to obtain the original version of Wyvern DJ, from Takara.

Gallery
Pictures from websites to be used.

Overall
This set includes has some highly useful pieces for the HMS system with Dragoon MS being essential for HMS attack combos and the Tornado Balance one of the most used stadiums of the HMS period. However the other pieces of the set have almost no uses competitively and Gaia Dragoon MS and Driger MS are easy to find. This set is incredibly rare and nearly impossible to find, and a few of the parts inside are rarely found elsewhere as well. If you are able to find one you should definitely purchase it.

I've made a few edits. This is good to go now.

What picture(s) do you have?

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Found the official names of the recolours:

Dragoon MS Blue Dragon Ver.
Gaia Dragoon MS Yellow Dragon Ver.
Driger MS White Tiger Ver.

Also the article is up. The reason there's no pics is cause Kei was going to do that bit.

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It still has a couple of errors, though.

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Boom! The first of my articles on HMS and Plastics Sets.

Contents
Dragoon MS Blue Dragon Version
Gaia Dragoon MS Yellow Dragon Version
Driger MS White Tiger Version
Wyvern DJ
Tornado Balance Stadium
HMS Double Shooter (Blue)
HMS Double Shooter (Silver)

General Info
This set was the first release of the Tornado Balance Stadium. It was later released on its own as one of the earliest releases of the HMS series. This set is the only way to obtain the original version of Wyvern DJ, from Takara.

Gallery
Pictures from websites to be used.

Overall
This set includes some highly useful parts for the HMS system: Dragoon MS is essential for HMS attack combos and the Tornado Balance is one of the most used stadiums of the HMS period. However, the other contents of this set have almost no use competitively. Also, Gaia Dragoon MS and Driger MS are very easy to find, reducing the need for this set. This set is incredibly rare and nearly impossible to find, and a few of the parts inside are rarely found elsewhere. If you are able to find one you should definitely purchase it.

I also changed some wording, to make it sound better.

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Kei edited it and said it was good to go so I put it up.

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But if it still has errors and can be improved, ex. it's should be its, the article should be edited.

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One issue with your version there Imperial, despite the fact they are common, Gaia Dragoon MS and Driger MS do not reduce the need for this set, as it comes with other uncommon/useful beyblades and a very hard to find stadium, and they're also recolours so they are more valuable than the starter set ones that are everywhere

Other than the "reducing the need for this set" bit, I'd think you could make your modifications to the beywiki article, as your version reads much better and you haven't changed anything factual (again, toher than the reducing the need part, just lop that off )

Also go check my updated griffolyon draft, seeing as you do a much better job than me and microsoft's combined spelling and grammar checking powers. When you have time, of course

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Yeah, I was looking for something good to put after that, so I thought something common isn't too good, right? I'll change that and edit the article. I'll check out your draft as well.

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What? Don't change the article if you have no idea what you're talking about! The summary was the perfect truth!

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It seems someone here needs a reminder that unauthorized and unverified edits to Beywiki warrant reprimand.

I undid his changes.

Let me make this perfectly clear, while I'm at it: If you are making edits to a wiki article that have not been verified by people or at least agreed upon by staff members, you will have your edits undone and you will be warned. There is a reason we have an "Errors on the Beywiki" thread, and why we get Kei's approval before posting things.

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Some manner of Octopus.

Let me make this perfectly clear, while I'm at it: If you are making edits to a wiki article that have not been verified by people or at least agreed upon by staff members, you will have your edits undone and you will be warned. There is a reason we have an "Errors on the Beywiki" thread, and why we get Kei's approval before posting things.

Yeah ... if you're making any sort of significant change to an article (ie. not fixing a spelling mistake, re-wording a poorly written sentence, or updating combo suggestions), it should be posted in the article's thread (or "Errors on the Wiki" thread) first.

Anyways, I've gone ahead and added images to the article. I also re-worded the end of the Overall section slightly.

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Yo guys, that was my bad: his changes were merely grammatical and I saw no problem with that. I didn't think there was any issue making grammatical fixes to beywiki, as long as someone has a good grasp of it, which imperial does. He didn't alter any facts and made the edits based on my advice, so if anyone deserves a warning here, it's me.

However, hazel, did you even look at his edits before reverting them? They were entirely grammatical fixes, which, as Kei just pointed out, is perfectly okay.
He didn't change the meaning of the article at all.

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I did check his edits before reverting them, yes. I wasn't sure to what extent we allowed editing without permission, essentially. I will be happy to undo the warning if what he did was, in fact, permitted.

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Some manner of Octopus.

As I said, I looked over his changes and figured there was no reason to not just add them (given it takes ages to get things approved and it was, again, merely semantic), so if it was too big, he did it on my advice, and the warning should be changed appropriately, though, I still don't see how it was necessary.

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th!nkBlargh|H-Code Product List

I was looking at the wrong ones when I originally composed that post, haha. The edited version reflects what actually took place, though.

The warning was technically still for unauthorized edits to the Beywiki, but as I said before, I am perfectly fine with revoking it.

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Some manner of Octopus.