one word:wow
that is very good but a minor error in a sentence where you used a "u" instead of you in this sentence
"“As I told you I am able to control my bey’s energy which is all over here and the places nearby I used that energy to control your bey well I have started taking control on your bey since u entered the room and due to this the change in the flow of the energy you felt like there was someone there. As I fell that I have answered all of your questions. I would like to ask you that do you want to be a member of the Dark Nebula organization." and you forgot the quot marks at the end as well plus i believe there should be a comma in the sentience as well here: "“As I told you I am able to control my bey’s energy which is all over here and the places nearby
,I used that energy to control your bey well I have started taking control on your bey since u entered the room and due to this the change in the flow of the energy you felt like there was someone there. As I fell that I have answered all of your questions. I would like to ask you that do you want to be a member of the Dark Nebula organization." and a little grammar,about 10% of it overall great
Hue.