(beyblade story) The Pawn
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Chapter three is out. It's short because it is a continuation of the second chapter.
(Aug. 22, 2012 1:02 AM)SoulEater57 Wrote:Every act is 3 chapters, that would make it two chapters wouldn't it?(Aug. 22, 2012 12:55 AM)Shirayuki Wrote: Chapter three is out. It's short because it is a continuation of the second chapter.
Why don't you just put that as Chapter 2 part 2? Instead of a seperate chapter?
(Aug. 22, 2012 1:04 AM)Shirayuki Wrote:(Aug. 22, 2012 1:02 AM)SoulEater57 Wrote:Every act is 3 chapters, that would make it two chapters wouldn't it?(Aug. 22, 2012 12:55 AM)Shirayuki Wrote: Chapter three is out. It's short because it is a continuation of the second chapter.
Why don't you just put that as Chapter 2 part 2? Instead of a seperate chapter?
Yes, it would. Just in chapter 2, when you're about to end it, make a spoiler and put part 2 in it. That's what i'd do. XD
Anyways, that was just the prologue. soooo
Its his own story, he can lay it out anyways he chooses.
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Keep the good story up
(Aug. 22, 2012 4:06 PM)Insomniac Wrote:Those 2 chapters are actually a reference to an anime. since only the letters B and A were left, why not yell it?(Aug. 21, 2012 10:39 PM)Shirayuki Wrote: He leaves the room. I get a vine and tie myself to the roof from my foot. When he came back I jumped down and yelled "BAAAAAAA"
Uhh ...
Nice story! Chapters and acts are coming along quite well
PS: The story is back up (God's Pawn)