(beyblade story) The Pawn - Cookie Bouquets - Aug. 21, 2012
Act 1: prologue
Chapter 1: Introductions
Hi, I'm Manna, some people call me a slacker, but they obviously don't get it. I concentrate on more beyblade than school. I go to Fumizaki High, and I am in class 2b. People are jealous about my look and power.
(time for the actual story)
I race for the pillar known as "School." I race by stores, roads and other stuff around the city. When I get into the building, I race up to the 3rd floor and the second room on it. I charge through the door.
"Yes! Right on time," I think out loud.
One of the students stands up.
"You appear to be 30 minutes late," He explains, "An all time record for you."
"What do you mean?" I reply.
I look over to the right and see my teacher sitting there at her desk. I silently walk to my desk. I sit and wait all 7 hours of school. After the last bell rings, I race out of the school and run across the beypark. The beypark is essentially a sign with the words "beypark" written in red. But past that sign is a sea of plastic stadiums.
I walk over to a group of kids.
"Yo guys," I say.
The chubby one turns around and says, "Hey guys, look, it's Manna, queen of beyblade!"
"I'm not that good," I shoot back,
"Yeah you are!" He replies, "As a matter of fact, we all want to battle you, all at once."
"Alright then," I remark.
I quickly pull out my bey, Blitz Aries 90R2F, and my white and blue colored grip.
I attached my bey and we all launch.
My Aries catapulted around the stadium to the point that the stadium started moving
"Aries, Attack the green colored bey!" I command my bey.
Aries races towards the bey, his bey dodged, but my Aries rebounded off the wall and hit the bey causing his bey to launch out of the stadium.
"What?" The tall kid says.
He was completely phased by what maneuver I pulled off.
"Aries, spin around the stadium!" I yell.
Aries spins around the stadium till it starts to shake. The force of my bey caused the light bey to move into the path of Aries. Aries smashed into the track of his bey that the bottom half of his bey broke off.
I look over to a tree and see a shadow of a man. I shake it off as nothing at start concentrating on the battle. I raise my hand in an epic motion to command my bey to ramp up a wall and attack the last bey from above. Aries flew into the air. When he came down, he split the stadium into pieces. There was plastic everywhere. But I personally didn't care.
When I was walking home, I saw a note laid out on the doorstep. I pick it up and read it. It tells me to meet him at the library tomorrow at 7PM. Chapter 2: A battle in knowledge! part 1
In the morning I head to the library. When I enter the building I don't see the usual books on shelves, I only see plants and a table swirling in a new dimension. I see a man around the same age as me, he has black hair, a black coat that reaches down to his legs, and a tux under.
"Why hello there," He says.
"Uhh, hi?" I reply nervously.
"Welcome to my world, I manipulate everything in this room," He remarks calmly.
He generates a rose with no thorns.
"See?" He asks.
He throws the rose at me. I catch it and look at it. It is indeed a real rose.
"I wish to battle, a battle about taking souls," He explains.
I pull out my grip and bey and ready them.
"Not a beybattle, but more of a battle of knowledge," He says, "The rules are, there is a piece of paper on that paper, there is the alphabet. You have 60 seconds to say a word that begins with that letter. When after the minute a letter disappears starting from Z. That letter is now forbidden. You cannot involve that letter in any other words," He explains.
"Okay, I except," I reply.
"The time has started," He shoots back.
(Manna starts. The bold is Manna)
"I'll start, Zero!" I say
"Zexal"
"Zen"
A full minute has passed. The letter Z is now forbidden
"You"
"yes"
"Your"
"Yen"
"Yak"
The letter y is now forbidden Chapter 3: A battle in knowledge! part 2
Hours past and we were getting to the last letters, ABC are left.
"Alright, I'll pause the game," He says.
"Go ahead," I reply.
He leaves the room. I get a vine and tie myself to the roof from my foot. When he came back I jumped down and yelled "BAAAAAAA"
He turned around and started laughing uncontrollably, He noticed that he broke many rules. I untied the vine and fell to the floor.
He turned into a small red orb. I took it and left the library. As I walk past the stream I threw the orb into it. I don't want to remember this battle. As I walk towards an intersection, a blue aura flies towards me and stuns me. I faint. The next day, I wake up at my house, still in my school uniform. I look at my bey and notice it has aura flowing out of the metal wheel. I shake it off and walk to school. Act 2: The first tournament
Chapter 4: Arise, Blitz Aries!
FACT: For who plays beyblade, will surpass the first gangster stone
For once, I actually make it to school. Everybody is crowding around one desk. So I walk towards it. I see a piece of paper, taped onto the desk that says beyblade tournament tomorrow. I hope I will come. After three hours or so it was English class. I hate this class. I excuse myself and walk to the balcony. I look down as I am phased by the blue lights going down on the ground. The lights started getting closer and closer until I started hearing roars and screeches. When the aura finally appeared in front of me it started aiming for the bey in my pocket. I dropped the bey onto the ground and the aura swooped for it. and raised it into the air. A flash of light blinded me for 3 seconds. when I got my sight back. I saw my bey wasn't the old rusty Blitz aries, but it became a new shiny blitz. The bey dropped onto the ground and I picked it up.
After the period ended, i went back to class, still phased about what happened I enter the class and realized school was already out, so I went to the beypark again. I notice people are practicing for the tournament so I pick one random opponent and start a battle.
"Three!"
"Two!"
"One!"
"Go.... Shoot!!" We yell.
My Aries shook the stadium to the extent that his bey was rebounding off of walls.
"Aries! Attack!" I command.
Aries started glowing and started grinding away metal from my opponents bey.
"What?" He asks confusingly.
Lets see if this works.
"Aries! horn smash!" I scream at the top of my lungs.
My bey's aura started shinning brighter and brighter. In an instant the stadium wasn't a stadium, it was trash. His bey was scrap metal, and my bey reigned victorious.
The next day.
I head towards the place designated on the paper. When I get there, I see a group of bladers.
RE: (beyblade story) The pawn - sarabscientist - Aug. 21, 2012
So its a girl?
RE: (beyblade story) The pawn - Cookie Bouquets - Aug. 21, 2012
(Aug. 21, 2012 10:44 PM)Insomniac Wrote: So its a girl?
Really, I didn't know?
yes
as a matter of fact, most of my protagonists are females. Weird right?
RE: (beyblade story) The pawn - sarabscientist - Aug. 21, 2012
(Aug. 21, 2012 10:45 PM)Shirayuki Wrote: as a matter of fact, most of my protagonists are females. Weird right?
Nope, more like typical
I hope you like my vote
RE: (beyblade story) The pawn - Cookie Bouquets - Aug. 21, 2012
(Aug. 21, 2012 10:47 PM)Insomniac Wrote: (Aug. 21, 2012 10:45 PM)Shirayuki Wrote: as a matter of fact, most of my protagonists are females. Weird right?
Nope, more like typical
I hope you like my vote Yes! more views for me!
RE: (beyblade story) The Pawn - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Aug. 21, 2012
Pretty good! I like it.
[Edit] Nice vote, Insomniac. XD
RE: (beyblade story) The Pawn - Cookie Bouquets - Aug. 21, 2012
(Aug. 21, 2012 11:27 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: Pretty good! I like it.
[Edit] Nice vote, Insomniac. XD
Hah, I actually plan to keep writing this story.
RE: (beyblade story) The Pawn - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Aug. 21, 2012
(Aug. 21, 2012 11:34 PM)Shirayuki Wrote: (Aug. 21, 2012 11:27 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: Pretty good! I like it.
[Edit] Nice vote, Insomniac. XD
Hah, I actually plan to keep writing this story.
Nice! I'll be sure to read.
(I usually don't read other storys... Surprisingly. XD)
RE: (beyblade story) The Pawn - sarabscientist - Aug. 21, 2012
Oh, I just realized that the title is similar to the other story we had "God's Pawn"! Hopefully this will follow in its footsteps? XD
RE: (beyblade story) The Pawn - Cookie Bouquets - Aug. 21, 2012
(Aug. 21, 2012 11:40 PM)Insomniac Wrote: Oh, I just realized that the title is similar to the other story we had "God's Pawn"! Hopefully this will follow in its footsteps? XD What the actual hell is God's pawn?
RE: (beyblade story) The Pawn - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Aug. 21, 2012
(Aug. 21, 2012 11:40 PM)Shirayuki Wrote: (Aug. 21, 2012 11:40 PM)Insomniac Wrote: Oh, I just realized that the title is similar to the other story we had "God's Pawn"! Hopefully this will follow in its footsteps? XD What the actual hell is God's pawn?
It's a beyblade story by someone on here. Forgot who though... Maybe it was Fakir's Duck?... Ugh I dunno. :\
RE: (beyblade story) The Pawn - sarabscientist - Aug. 21, 2012
(Aug. 21, 2012 11:40 PM)Shirayuki Wrote: (Aug. 21, 2012 11:40 PM)Insomniac Wrote: Oh, I just realized that the title is similar to the other story we had "God's Pawn"! Hopefully this will follow in its footsteps? XD What the actual hell is God's pawn?
It used to be a story on here, one of the best that I have ever read! But unfortunately, the author removed the story from the thread ...
http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-God-s-Pawn-WIP-Fantasy-Novel?highlight=pawn
(Aug. 21, 2012 11:42 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: It's a beyblade story by someone on here. Forgot who though... Maybe it was Fakir's Duck?... Ugh I dunno. :\
Nope, it had absolutely nothing to do with Beyblade. And Duck doesn't write these kinds of stories, she's a bubbly girl.
RE: (beyblade story) The Pawn - Cookie Bouquets - Aug. 21, 2012
(Aug. 21, 2012 11:43 PM)Insomniac Wrote: (Aug. 21, 2012 11:40 PM)Shirayuki Wrote: (Aug. 21, 2012 11:40 PM)Insomniac Wrote: Oh, I just realized that the title is similar to the other story we had "God's Pawn"! Hopefully this will follow in its footsteps? XD What the actual hell is God's pawn?
It used to be a story on here, one of the best that I have ever read! But unfortunately, the author removed the story from the thread ...
http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-God-s-Pawn-WIP-Fantasy-Novel?highlight=pawn
Well, carp XDD
RE: (beyblade story) The Pawn - BeatFox - Aug. 21, 2012
im goin to keep reading this are you accepting character requests or no
RE: (beyblade story) The Pawn - Cookie Bouquets - Aug. 21, 2012
(Aug. 21, 2012 11:46 PM)BeatFox Wrote: im goin to keep reading this are you accepting character requests or no I only need 3 for the first team tournament.
RE: (beyblade story) The Pawn - BeatFox - Aug. 21, 2012
so you do or dont need characters
RE: (beyblade story) The Pawn - Cookie Bouquets - Aug. 21, 2012
I said I needed 3
Name:
Gender:
Bey:
Description:
Appearance:
RE: (beyblade story) The Pawn - BeatFox - Aug. 22, 2012
Name:Yarotobi
Gender:male
Bey:Thunder Striker GB145 JB
Description and appearance : He is good at sports and science, he has a fasination with thunder, he has blond hair blue eyes,wheres a white tee with a yellow jacket, He will challenge anyone even if he thinks they could beat him,he is protective of his friends
RE: (beyblade story) The Pawn - sarabscientist - Aug. 22, 2012
Can Neku make an appearance in this, pwease?
RE: (beyblade story) The Pawn - Cookie Bouquets - Aug. 22, 2012
(Aug. 22, 2012 12:20 AM)Insomniac Wrote: Can Neku make an appearance in this, pwease? Sure why not?
RE: (beyblade story) The Pawn - sarabscientist - Aug. 22, 2012
How about Joshua and Neku battle :3
RE: (beyblade story) The Pawn - SoulEater57 - Aug. 22, 2012
Name: Jin
Gender:Male
Beyhantom Hades W145MF
Description: Is a 14 year old male, who was born and raised in an ancient village, but decided to come to a different town to see how others live.
Appearance: Black hair, blue eyes, a Black T-Shirt with a white skull on it, and Jean shorts. Black shoes.
RE: (beyblade story) The Pawn - Cookie Bouquets - Aug. 22, 2012
I have my choices set. no more requests
RE: (beyblade story) The Pawn - sarabscientist - Aug. 22, 2012
So who are the three? Is SoulEater's character in or Joshua?
RE: (beyblade story) The Pawn - Cookie Bouquets - Aug. 22, 2012
Soul eater's character
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