(beyblade story) The Pawn

Poll: Good or no?

Awesome
40.00%
2
Good
20.00%
1
ok
0%
0
bad
0%
0
Horrifying
40.00%
2
Total: 100% 5 vote(s)
(Aug. 22, 2012  12:30 AM)Shirayuki Wrote: Soul eater's character

D: Well then, Neku, consider yourself lucky.
Chapter three is out. It's short because it is a continuation of the second chapter.
(Aug. 22, 2012  12:55 AM)Shirayuki Wrote: Chapter three is out. It's short because it is a continuation of the second chapter.

Why don't you just put that as Chapter 2 part 2? Instead of a seperate chapter?
(Aug. 22, 2012  1:02 AM)SoulEater57 Wrote:
(Aug. 22, 2012  12:55 AM)Shirayuki Wrote: Chapter three is out. It's short because it is a continuation of the second chapter.

Why don't you just put that as Chapter 2 part 2? Instead of a seperate chapter?
Every act is 3 chapters, that would make it two chapters wouldn't it?
(Aug. 22, 2012  1:04 AM)Shirayuki Wrote:
(Aug. 22, 2012  1:02 AM)SoulEater57 Wrote:
(Aug. 22, 2012  12:55 AM)Shirayuki Wrote: Chapter three is out. It's short because it is a continuation of the second chapter.

Why don't you just put that as Chapter 2 part 2? Instead of a seperate chapter?
Every act is 3 chapters, that would make it two chapters wouldn't it?

Yes, it would. Just in chapter 2, when you're about to end it, make a spoiler and put part 2 in it. That's what i'd do. XD
Anyways, that was just the prologue. soooo
(Aug. 22, 2012  1:06 AM)Shirayuki Wrote: Anyways, that was just the prologue. soooo

Just trying to help keep it more organized.
Its his own story, he can lay it out anyways he chooses.
(Aug. 22, 2012  1:09 AM)Insomniac Wrote: Its his own story, he can lay it out anyways he chooses.

I know, I just simply suggested it.
EDIT: deleted
Keep the good story up
(Aug. 21, 2012  10:39 PM)Shirayuki Wrote: He leaves the room. I get a vine and tie myself to the roof from my foot. When he came back I jumped down and yelled "BAAAAAAA"


Uhh ...

Nice story! Chapters and acts are coming along quite well Smile

PS: The story is back up (God's Pawn)
(Aug. 22, 2012  4:06 PM)Insomniac Wrote:
(Aug. 21, 2012  10:39 PM)Shirayuki Wrote: He leaves the room. I get a vine and tie myself to the roof from my foot. When he came back I jumped down and yelled "BAAAAAAA"


Uhh ...

Nice story! Chapters and acts are coming along quite well Smile

PS: The story is back up (God's Pawn)
Those 2 chapters are actually a reference to an anime. since only the letters B and A were left, why not yell it?