This story is so touching. It made my eyes water (honestly)! I can't wait to read more! You got a little gory, though, with mama's death. It kinda grossed me out.
Yoku's story: The Seven Legendary Hereos
Poll: What do you think?
Great! I like it! |
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18 |
Normally. |
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6 |
This thing is trash! |
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1 |
Total: | 100% | 25 vote(s) |