XwailingX's new story: The Wailing Scourge

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Ok, so I decided to give up on my old story (Can someone close that?)
Anyway... Chapter 1!
I tried to struggle... Trying to escape death's grip,I braced myself... Thinking it's the end of everything... When someone,or something,grasped my hand...
Let me tell you my story... My name is Kairo Nageki,and this all started one morning...

Ring! The bell rang in my dormitory, "Ah! I'm late!" I jumped off my bed,brushing my dormmates aside. "Kairo! Calm down! It's still five in the morning."
"So what was with the bell?"
"False Alarm."
This is my best friend, Eric Cortez. We met when both of us were still new students here in the Xigor Academy.
Let me tell you something about our school,the unique thing about it is that there is a sub-class all
about beyblades,the thing is,we only have it on Wednesday.
Anyway,I was already awake so I just went and took a shower.
One by one,my dormmates woke up, I'll just introduce them to you.
There was me,Kairo Nageki
Eric Cortez,my best friend
Lio Raquel, one of them annoying bullies that fail to make friends
Kesha Setser,one of those cute girls that I like
Fez Reymond,a British exchange student
Jin Naito,the school's heartthrob
Fuji Kabuto,the smartest guy in my dorm
Kaz Yukino,the school's sports captain

And each of them has their respective beys:
Scourge Castor 130XF for me
Sentinel Pollux 145WD for Eric
Break Orion 140SF for Lio
Sakura Corvus 105SD for Kesha
Raid Fenrir 85F for Fez
Aerial Raptor UW145CS for Jin
And Final Leone F135W2D

I went to the school with Eric like always, "Hey,it's Wednesday!"
"Time for beyblade 101 huh?" I replied, "You brought Pollux?"
"Are you kidding me? I never let it out of my sight!"
The school bell rang,and we began to sprint to school

"Good Morning Class, Good thing none of you are late today,since it's beyblade class."
We started the class,but halfway through the hour, I noticed a Tourney advertisement,so I told Eric and we decided to join.
After school time,we walked towards the Grande Dome.... Which is the place where the tournament is taking place.
"Yeah! My first bey tourney!" Eric almost leapt through the sky, "Pollux will own them all!"
"Don't get your hopes up... Remember,I'm there." I laughed
"Yeah I know." He laughed in unison
We registered, and set up our gear.
"The first battle will be a tag team qualifying match! And it's between--"
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Wait for part 2!
And no,I'm not taking characters At the moment.

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