Writing Battles-You Must Read The Rules and Post Here to Make a Battle!

Sparta · Jun. 24, 2011 5:19 PM

The graphics battle idea has spread like wildfire, and many people as I type are submitting entries and new contests. I really wanted to enter, but I have no artistic talent whatsoever. So then it hit me "Graphics battle? What about a writing battle?"

In a WBO writing battle, participants will decide on a scene or event, and will have to write a short paragraph or 2 describing the specified scene or event.

The rules:

1. Each battle must have its' own thread, and participants cannot vote

2. battles will be won by the most amount of votes for an entry.

3. Each battle cannot involve more than 10 people, as more would get messy

4. Each battle must specify in the opening post what the challenge is, and the entries.

5. Voters will vote in the thread (duh)

6. Participants cannot post the entries

7. When the entries are posted, usernames will not be given. They will be labeled by the entry number.

Discuss and decide on battles in this thread.

As an aside note, Deikailo, I'd really like to challenge you Joyful_2

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Sparta · Jun. 24, 2011 8:17 PM

Oh, no one likes the idea? Well, I tried...

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RAW · Jun. 24, 2011 8:44 PM

Hmmm......I don't mind making a challenge.....A BOY WALKING THROUGH A FOREST

Who accepts?

TeeHee

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Sparta · Jun. 24, 2011 8:55 PM

(Jun. 24, 2011 8:44 PM)RAW Wrote: Hmmm......I don't mind making a challenge.....A BOY WALKING THROUGH A FOREST

Who accepts?

TeeHee

.....no offense or anything, but that's a little lame Tired

Then again, it's something. I accept.

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it's about how hard you can get hit, and keep moving forward"
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Temporal · Jun. 24, 2011 9:01 PM

Hah. I made a thread like this on my site yesterday before I deleted the forums. Hrm... I want to take on someone. I'll write anything. I don't like setting terms, so if anyone has a battle that interests me, I'm in.

Katsuya · Jun. 24, 2011 9:23 PM

I Guess I'm in it will help me practice for my Story.

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Faylerosa · Jun. 24, 2011 9:35 PM

I love writing, behind game design, my passion is writing. I will enter soon.

Temporal · Jun. 24, 2011 9:51 PM

So? Who's got a challenge for me! In fact, how about this:
Challenge:
Thirteen year-old boy comes into terms with moving to a new town, but can't because he's afraid to try anything that's outside of his comfort zone, which is non-existent.

3 days to finish
Whoever gets to ten votes first.
At least 4 paragraphs
Grammar counts
Spelling counts

Sparta · Jun. 24, 2011 10:13 PM

(Jun. 24, 2011 9:51 PM)Megablader9 Wrote: So? Who's got a challenge for me! In fact, how about this:
Challenge:
Thirteen year-old boy comes into terms with moving to a new town, but can't because he's afraid to try anything that's outside of his comfort zone, which is non-existent.

3 days to finish
Whoever gets to ten votes first.
At least 4 paragraphs
Grammar counts
Spelling counts

That's a little complex. Try to make it more general so the competitors have more places to go with it.

"Life isn't about how hard you can hit;
it's about how hard you can get hit, and keep moving forward"
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Temporal · Jun. 24, 2011 10:29 PM

Ah, my bad. If anyone wants to come up with something, say so. I tend to lean towards complicated plots.

Sparta · Jun. 24, 2011 10:38 PM

(Jun. 24, 2011 10:29 PM)Megablader9 Wrote: Ah, my bad. If anyone wants to come up with something, say so. I tend to lean towards complicated plots.

How about you just shorten it to "Person just moved-how does he feel? 1st person perspective ONLY"???

"Life isn't about how hard you can hit;
it's about how hard you can get hit, and keep moving forward"
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CyberBlader27 · Jun. 26, 2011 10:15 AM

How about a writing battle about a blader-boy who is abducted by aliens?
-Describe condition before abduction briefly
-Boy is entrusted with a special Beyblade (you choose)
-Boy has a brief beybattle
-Cliffhanger End

CONDITIONS:
-First Person
-5 Paragraphs or less
-Dialouge aloud (not counted as own paragraph)

Just a thought.

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Person:"Brad, sign my launcher! Brad, sign everything I own!"
BeyBrad:"Did you see me sign that kid's shoe? He was like 'BRAD, CAN U SIGHN MAH SHOO?!' and I was like 'Yeeeaaahhh... ?'
CyberBlader27: Cant believe I missed Beyblade Crusade 2011... :( LMAO Quotes:

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Part of the day:

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BD145 (Boost Disk 145)
* Weight: 8 grams

BD145 shares a similar trait with its partner Hell, in that, like Hell is one of the widest Metal Wheels ever released, BD145 is the widest Track ever. This Track is unique both because of its width and also its ability to change modes. Changing modes is similar to how it is done with SW145, however this time, instead of removing the changeable part from the bottom and flipping it, it is removed from the top and then flipped. BD145 has two modes:

* Normal Mode

In Normal Mode the "Boost Disk" sits lower on the Track, which causes most Beyblades to scrape the Beystadium floor easily due to the three downward facing protrusions. However, when using a taller Bottom such as RF, this tendency is lessened somewhat, and the wide diameter of BD145, while it is not able to necessarily provide Smash Attack, it assists in "pushing" the opposing Beyblade out of the Beystadium.

* Boost Mode

Boost Mode works exclusively in combination with Hell. The three upward facing protrusions on BD145 go past the bottom of the Metal Wheel into the gaps of Hell itself and unlike Normal Mode, there is absolutely no space between the Metal Wheel and Boost Disk. This mode has proven to be incredibly effective in Stamina, Defense, and even Attack customizations.
Use in Attack Customizations

Somewhat surprisingly, BD145 found use in Attack customizations such as MF Lightning L-Drago BD145LRF. The increased diameter allowed by BD145 makes it easier to strike the opposing Beyblade, and in combination with the high Smash Attack of Lightning L-Drago and the speed of LRF, this combination is deadly.
Use in Defense Customizations

BD145 is the heaviest Track available, and that along with the fact that it almost completely nullifies low Attackers makes it one of the best Defense Tracks available. It can be used in the custom MF-H Basalt Kerbecs BD145CS/MB.
Use in Balance Customization

Along with having great Stamina, the combo MF Hell Bull/Kerbecs BD145CS (Boost Mode) also has good Defense against Attackers which will be partially neutralized by both the wide, plastic "Boost Disk", and the rubber surrounding the sharp tip of CS.

Thank you Beywiki!

Kujikato · Jun. 26, 2011 12:40 PM

CyberBlader27, I accept, lets go

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Sparta · Jun. 26, 2011 3:30 PM

(Jun. 26, 2011 10:15 AM)CyberBlader27 Wrote: How about a writing battle about a blader-boy who is abducted by aliens?
-Describe condition before abduction briefly
-Boy is entrusted with a special Beyblade (you choose)
-Boy has a brief beybattle
-Cliffhanger End

CONDITIONS:
-First Person
-5 Paragraphs or less
-Dialouge aloud (not counted as own paragraph)

Just a thought.

Woah, that's still a little complex. No one will know what you're talking about. How about you describe an alien abduction, just in general? No beys or complicated twists.

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it's about how hard you can get hit, and keep moving forward"
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Kujikato · Jun. 26, 2011 3:47 PM

what?! no using beyblades in the stories?!

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Sparta · Jun. 26, 2011 3:48 PM

(Jun. 26, 2011 3:47 PM)Izuma Inzori Wrote: what?! no using beyblades in the stories?!

Only if that's part of the scene. But an alien abduction with beys? That's a little far-fetched, if you ask me...

"Life isn't about how hard you can hit;
it's about how hard you can get hit, and keep moving forward"
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CyberBlader27 · Jun. 26, 2011 3:49 PM

Fine Sparta... I saw this topic and that was a random idea that my head just spat out...
But I'm glad it was accepted! Cute

Then denied to be beyful... Unhappy

So... 'Alien Abduction Writing Battle' ?

(Jun. 26, 2011 3:47 PM)Izuma Inzori Wrote: what?! no using beyblades in the stories?!

If the aliens capture the boy using beys. TEEHEE!

Making the thread/topic/whatever now!

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Spoiler (Click to View)

Person:"Brad, sign my launcher! Brad, sign everything I own!"
BeyBrad:"Did you see me sign that kid's shoe? He was like 'BRAD, CAN U SIGHN MAH SHOO?!' and I was like 'Yeeeaaahhh... ?'
CyberBlader27: Cant believe I missed Beyblade Crusade 2011... :( LMAO Quotes:

Spoiler (Click to View)

Part of the day:

Spoiler (Click to View)

BD145 (Boost Disk 145)
* Weight: 8 grams

BD145 shares a similar trait with its partner Hell, in that, like Hell is one of the widest Metal Wheels ever released, BD145 is the widest Track ever. This Track is unique both because of its width and also its ability to change modes. Changing modes is similar to how it is done with SW145, however this time, instead of removing the changeable part from the bottom and flipping it, it is removed from the top and then flipped. BD145 has two modes:

* Normal Mode

In Normal Mode the "Boost Disk" sits lower on the Track, which causes most Beyblades to scrape the Beystadium floor easily due to the three downward facing protrusions. However, when using a taller Bottom such as RF, this tendency is lessened somewhat, and the wide diameter of BD145, while it is not able to necessarily provide Smash Attack, it assists in "pushing" the opposing Beyblade out of the Beystadium.

* Boost Mode

Boost Mode works exclusively in combination with Hell. The three upward facing protrusions on BD145 go past the bottom of the Metal Wheel into the gaps of Hell itself and unlike Normal Mode, there is absolutely no space between the Metal Wheel and Boost Disk. This mode has proven to be incredibly effective in Stamina, Defense, and even Attack customizations.
Use in Attack Customizations

Somewhat surprisingly, BD145 found use in Attack customizations such as MF Lightning L-Drago BD145LRF. The increased diameter allowed by BD145 makes it easier to strike the opposing Beyblade, and in combination with the high Smash Attack of Lightning L-Drago and the speed of LRF, this combination is deadly.
Use in Defense Customizations

BD145 is the heaviest Track available, and that along with the fact that it almost completely nullifies low Attackers makes it one of the best Defense Tracks available. It can be used in the custom MF-H Basalt Kerbecs BD145CS/MB.
Use in Balance Customization

Along with having great Stamina, the combo MF Hell Bull/Kerbecs BD145CS (Boost Mode) also has good Defense against Attackers which will be partially neutralized by both the wide, plastic "Boost Disk", and the rubber surrounding the sharp tip of CS.

Thank you Beywiki!

Sparta · Jun. 26, 2011 4:15 PM

(Jun. 26, 2011 3:49 PM)CyberBlader27 Wrote: Fine Sparta... I saw this topic and that was a random idea that my head just spat out...
But I'm glad it was accepted!
Then denied to be beyful...
So... 'Alien Abduction Writing Battle' ?

(Jun. 26, 2011 3:47 PM)Izuma Inzori Wrote: what?! no using beyblades in the stories?!

If the aliens capture the boy using beys. TEEHEE!
Making the thread/topic/whatever now!

Ok. Since I wont be in this competition, I'll make the thread and host the battle.

"Life isn't about how hard you can hit;
it's about how hard you can get hit, and keep moving forward"
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CyberBlader27 · Jun. 26, 2011 4:18 PM

Oop, I already made the thread, but when people finish, the stories will be sent to you I guess...
That okay?

Sorry, I'm bad with hosting battles...

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Spoiler (Click to View)

Person:"Brad, sign my launcher! Brad, sign everything I own!"
BeyBrad:"Did you see me sign that kid's shoe? He was like 'BRAD, CAN U SIGHN MAH SHOO?!' and I was like 'Yeeeaaahhh... ?'
CyberBlader27: Cant believe I missed Beyblade Crusade 2011... :( LMAO Quotes:

Spoiler (Click to View)

Part of the day:

Spoiler (Click to View)

BD145 (Boost Disk 145)
* Weight: 8 grams

BD145 shares a similar trait with its partner Hell, in that, like Hell is one of the widest Metal Wheels ever released, BD145 is the widest Track ever. This Track is unique both because of its width and also its ability to change modes. Changing modes is similar to how it is done with SW145, however this time, instead of removing the changeable part from the bottom and flipping it, it is removed from the top and then flipped. BD145 has two modes:

* Normal Mode

In Normal Mode the "Boost Disk" sits lower on the Track, which causes most Beyblades to scrape the Beystadium floor easily due to the three downward facing protrusions. However, when using a taller Bottom such as RF, this tendency is lessened somewhat, and the wide diameter of BD145, while it is not able to necessarily provide Smash Attack, it assists in "pushing" the opposing Beyblade out of the Beystadium.

* Boost Mode

Boost Mode works exclusively in combination with Hell. The three upward facing protrusions on BD145 go past the bottom of the Metal Wheel into the gaps of Hell itself and unlike Normal Mode, there is absolutely no space between the Metal Wheel and Boost Disk. This mode has proven to be incredibly effective in Stamina, Defense, and even Attack customizations.
Use in Attack Customizations

Somewhat surprisingly, BD145 found use in Attack customizations such as MF Lightning L-Drago BD145LRF. The increased diameter allowed by BD145 makes it easier to strike the opposing Beyblade, and in combination with the high Smash Attack of Lightning L-Drago and the speed of LRF, this combination is deadly.
Use in Defense Customizations

BD145 is the heaviest Track available, and that along with the fact that it almost completely nullifies low Attackers makes it one of the best Defense Tracks available. It can be used in the custom MF-H Basalt Kerbecs BD145CS/MB.
Use in Balance Customization

Along with having great Stamina, the combo MF Hell Bull/Kerbecs BD145CS (Boost Mode) also has good Defense against Attackers which will be partially neutralized by both the wide, plastic "Boost Disk", and the rubber surrounding the sharp tip of CS.

Thank you Beywiki!

Sparta · Jun. 28, 2011 4:29 PM

Made some changes to the rules. Also, if you want to make a battle you HAVE to post in this thread first. You can't just go out and make one, it has to be approved first!

"Life isn't about how hard you can hit;
it's about how hard you can get hit, and keep moving forward"
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Doesn't Matter · Jun. 28, 2011 8:40 PM

Can you accept my YGO battle?

Rules-
4-5 paragraphs
First to 15 votes
8 participants
Entries end Jully 11
No specific scenario

Also, can the starter enter?

Join the team,
Get the Userbar,
Pwn other teams.

Sparta · Jun. 28, 2011 8:42 PM

(Jun. 28, 2011 8:40 PM)Doesnt Matter Wrote: Can you accept my YGO battle?

Rules-
1-2 paragraphs
First to 15 votes
10 participants
Entries end Jully 11
YGO based.

Also, can the starter enter? YES

Now you can make the thread.

"Life isn't about how hard you can hit;
it's about how hard you can get hit, and keep moving forward"
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Doesn't Matter · Jun. 28, 2011 11:49 PM

Thanks for helping me out with that! 1-2 long paragraphs, like 7-8 sentences, right?

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NoodooSoup · Jun. 29, 2011 2:47 AM

Instead of doing the basic "Entry 1", "Entry 2" format, why not color coat each different entry, so when you see them all, it'll be way easier to distinguish and it won't look like a huge wall of text. Like this:

And so I wrote a story and I was assigned the color blue.

And then I wrote a story, submitted it for a contest, and was given the color red.

"Yeah we're all going the same way down. I'm just trying to write it all down." - The Airborne Toxic Event

TenshouTsubasa · Jun. 29, 2011 10:36 AM

How about Describing a beyblade?

Rules:
Not less than 100 words
ONLY describing Galaxy Pegasis
15 participants
hand your work at 10th July

Let the wings of hope spread to the whole world!

New story :
http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Yoku-s-s...ary-Hereos