WBO Writing Tournament Quarter Finals! Temporal vs. SDamon Cronus!

We're getting down to the last three rounds! So, here are the stories!
Entry 1
Entry 2
First to five wins, usual rules.
entry 2, pretty good idea and i like the start, even though entry 1 was good aswell
It seems as if this is the last Quarterfinals match. Vote!
Entry two did very well with putting the theme into use. Rather than interpreting it as loosing a beyblade match, the author chose to have him lose so many families that the main character comes to a decision.

Very well done, entry 2. I cast my vote there.
I vote for entry 2. Both entries are very well written, but I just happened to like entry two better. I really like the word choice of entry two also.
Entry 2.

I found some error in Entry 1- He wrote 'bladder' instead of 'blader'.
Entry 2 leads 4-0. Again, we may have a turnaround on our hands, it's happened before.
My battle?
Anyway, Maybe it is a 5-0 or a 4-5, but I doubt the last one will happen.
You know, I've also got to give it to entry 2. 1 was still pretty good, despite the bladders, entry 2 was better.
Game. Entry two was me. I have to say, SDC's entry was pretty good.
nice temporal, how many round left? cause when your tournament is done i'll post mine! also after that i'm planning on doing a beyblade design competition, want to help judge that too?