Hey this is SwiftShadow and I am back to writing ! I've been pretty sick for a while and in the hospital so I never really got to work on anything for a long time. I sort of lost my inspiration after a while, but then I got this idea during a physics class. It's a science fiction story that I am going to try and stick with until the end. I just got this idea a few days ago and it's still a little rough so I'll probably be making a lot of edits to what I've done so far. Please Comment and Criticize this so I can make it the best that it can be. I'll do my best to work hard on this and take your suggestions into account.

I'm hoping to have the first real chapter up in a few days but I thought I should post this now. Please give me feedback of what to improve on and what I should work on in the future.

Looking Back:

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We are all taught from a young age about how vast the world is. The Earth used to hold around seven billion people, and it is just a small chunk of what there truly is. There are still countless of planets and galaxies out there, and even though they may be out of our reach, they still exist. It's like canceling a hike so you don't have to face the storm that rages outside. Even if you don't o, the trail will still be there. There's always the potential of hiking it.

But what if there wasn't.

After being locked up, you never get used to the real world again. A world full of possibilities, opportunities, the hope that one day you'll wake up and the chaos will have ended. Instead you're trapped in a state where everything's an illusion.  Just one lie after another. You lie in that wasteland where you are the only person alive. You wish it would just go back to normal.

The law of conservation of energy states that energy can neither be created nor destroyed, only transferred from one object to another. Where one world has an infinite supply of this energy, the other has almost none.  Matter transforms itself to whatever you desire so that it can keep you clutched in it's iron claw. You go from a world that is vast and beautiful, to one where only your immediate surroundings actually exist.

Or maybe they don't exist at all. As a scientist, I question everything. But my mind has been to scarred to function anymore. The line defining reality is now a giant grey smudge on a torn piece of paper. I sit and stare at the ground in front of me until the ground begins to shimmer and I double over. Paranoia kicks in again as the world twists and turns and spits me out. One minute I'm in my house with my wife, the next in the machine with pipes pumping the hazy green fluid into my body, and lastly I'm back at the rubble staring at the bodies of my comrades. I close my eyes and glue them shut, hoping that the next time I open them, I'll finally be where I belong.

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Wow! Nice job! The wonders totally describe me!
And great job with the current plot. Very entertaining to read!

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