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Poll: Do you like this?

I think I'm in love!
0%
0
It's great!
0%
0
It's Ok.
100.00%
1
This really needs work!
0%
0
I can't even look at this!
0%
0
Total: 100% 1 vote(s)
Hey this is SwiftShadow and I am back to writing Smile! I've been pretty sick for a while and in the hospital so I never really got to work on anything for a long time. I sort of lost my inspiration after a while, but then I got this idea during a physics class. It's a science fiction story that I am going to try and stick with until the end. I just got this idea a few days ago and it's still a little rough so I'll probably be making a lot of edits to what I've done so far. Please Comment and Criticize this so I can make it the best that it can be. I'll do my best to work hard on this and take your suggestions into account.

I'm hoping to have the first real chapter up in a few days but I thought I should post this now. Please give me feedback of what to improve on and what I should work on in the future.

Looking Back:
Wow! Nice job! The wonders totally describe me!
And great job with the current plot. Very entertaining to read!