The New Story Critic: Me!

lilphilyb · Feb. 02, 2020 3:38 AM

Hello everyone, ever since Dt2000 left and there was no story critic to rate your stories, the dark ages for Beyblade Fan fict was apon us. I have decided to take his place as story critic and end this dark age. Here is how this will work, you will have to tag me if you want to have your story rated. Like this,

Quote: I summon the story critic, lilphilyb!

After that I will read your story and rate it. I shall put these factors into perspective and grade you on it.

Character Development: How well have your chracters grown in the story so far?
Diologue: How well did you write your diologue?
Grammar: Did you use correct grammar? If so, how well?
Exciting moments: How gripping were the events in your story?
Chapter length: How long were your chapters? Bland stories have short chapters.
Story Juiciness: How much filler was in your story? Stories with lots of filler are usually bad.

Overall Score: This is the final score I give you.

Here are the Overall score ranking keys,

0-18 The story did not appeal to me at all.
19-30 The story appealed to me a very tiny bit.
31-45 The story appealed to me a little bit.
46-60 The story was good.
61-74 The story was great.
75-89 The story is amazing! Keep doing what you're doing!
90-100 The story is perfect! Keep up the great work!
100+ This story is not perfect, but beyond perfect! You are a Story master!

Don't let these scores keep you down though. Anyone can improve their works!

I may be busy on other stuff in life, but I will get to your works.

I swear there is no bias to my ratings.

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