The Lifeless Blader [taking character requests](Sorry for the EXTREME lack of update)

Poll: how well is it so far

pretty good
88.24%
15
bad
11.76%
2
Total: 100% 17 vote(s)
Shall i provide the EVIL one?

Name: Shun Yoki

Personality: Very talkitive, like Deadpool, makes jokes to throw off opponent. He is crazier than Ryuga, and he glows grey and purple when powering up his bey.

Looks: He wears a black skinny hoody with purple embroidering of kerbecs. He wears a black fedora and dark blue jeans. His hairstyle is covered by his hat. but its just short hair. He has white colored eyes. And has a scar on his cheek from a duel with Uchi in his first encounter with him.

Bey: Diablo Kerbecs BD145 RSF. It moves very quickly with short bursts if speed. The faces of Diablo are all Greyish purple and the rest is grey.
Special Move: Kerbecs Outrage: Never ending attacks of very fast attacks. Over the Nexus: Flies high into the air and into the ozone layer, and comes down like a meteor.
i am ive just been caught up with school i am currently writing on a school computer right now chap 5 will be up some time tonight
almost finished chap five
I love this story joseph known you my whole ive life never seen you write like this
I see an Air Gear reference building up here, XD.
Spot on, you found me out! :p
(Nov. 20, 2012  9:39 PM)Hyda Wrote: Spot on, you found me out! :p

Watching it at this moment, haha.

Anyways, good luck with this story.

Favorite character: Agito/Akito/Lind.
Finally finished chap 7.
I like how this is going. Keep up the great writing.
Sorry I've been so busy so anyways heres chapter 8
Just convinced my friend to draw all the characters in my story can't wait to see how they turn out!
Thanks Joseph! I'm glad you used my character idea, and about going to the movies with you.. I will! can't wait Wink
Glad you like it!
So.. I guess I'll see you tomorrow.
I'm taking out "At the beypark" because really I don't even know what it's gonna turn into so until I figure that out I won't be putting it up in the OP.

EDIT: sorry for the double-post

Here's my character request!
Name: Austin Pritt
Description:always in a good mood, blonde, wears red jacket, wears sunglasses.
Personality: Funny/comedic no matter where he is, underestimates all opponents, will battle anyone with a bey, and is a all around jerk (except to his friends, and beyblades)
Beyblade: Phantom Orion
Beyblade special move: Hades revenge: Phantom Orion will zap itself around the arena so fast it looks like its teleporting, and while it zaps it makes a extremely loud NASCAR race car sound, and each zap weakens the foes attack, defense, or stamina depending on the foes type (stat weakened is the same as the beys type, for balanced beys it weakens all types) and then when the bey is ultimately weakened, it attacks with fire from the deepest part of the Underworld, the power of a meteor storm (the stadium would turn dark as night, but bright colors of the rainbow color the place with light just like if a meteor hit the stadium), lightning filled with 1 million volts of electricity, and water as cold as it can get without freezing. If by some miracle the foe can survive this attack (which is possible, but not likely) then the beys health, speed, stats, and condition will be restored to the way it was before the match, but if it gets knocked out, the bey may have serious injuries and the stadium might have a dent or two. ( WARNING:this should be only done in a stadium)
I like the story. Character goten Bey storm aquario 100hf/s special move claw attack, storm attack Age 15 He is 5,4 he has brown eyes black he trains with his friend melody and her storm sagittario 105 And her special move storm slash.
You should continue the story. Want c how it comes to be.
swords, beys, and air gear props to you for making a wonderful combo
This story is pretty good but what ever happened to this guy it says the last update was on April 27