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name:Kobe K. Ulinzi
beyblade: basalt "xuan wu"(dark green orso) bd145r2f
age:15
gender:male
special move: turtle distortion,normal ver.: instead of just going in circles it ticks in the middle of the stadium.
bio:a pretty energetic guy who smiles and taunts most of the time but can get iritated quickly
face: genbull
normal bey
clear wheel:N/A or dark green
fusion wheel: nothing special
track and bottom: black and dark green

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i will keep this in my subscribes thanks for writing its pretty good

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i will keep this in my subscribes thanks for writing its pretty good

Ty, I try my best. Thanks for reading it. I've never done a story before so I'm nervous it will turn out bad. One of the reasons I'm not including things that might offend people in real life besides the fact offending people is wrong, it that could ruin my whole story, and everyone will hate it and hate me :l

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all i can say is try not to rush most starting writers try to introduce alot of concepts and characters to fast,this is a story not a film and it needs to be well paced. so make sure to include multiple sentences of dialogue and description to help balance out the action

if you master pacing you will be a great writer

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Name:Ace yamakiro
gender:male
age:13
beyoaring phoenix
attribute:fire and wind
special moves:Wind crushing wing,Soaring combustion
Screcrt move:Blazing twin wing burage
bio: Ace is a average boy with a twist he loves to image daydream take walks but that changes at night he changes to an brave ace at blading that will burn his opponent if they mess with him or his friends
Bey design:
metal wheel first layer of 4d Wings on two sides
main metal:Red flames in coated on the metal
clear wheel red flame wings
spintrack:T125 but its red
Tip:CS blue

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Name:Ace yamakiro
gender:male
age:13
beyoaring phoenix
attribute:fire and wind
special moves:Wind crushing wing,Soaring combustion
Screcrt move:Blazing twin wing burage
bio: Ace is a average boy with a twist he loves to image daydream take walks but that changes at night he changes to an brave ace at blading that will burn his opponent if they mess with him or his friends
Bey design:
metal wheel first layer of 4d Wings on two sides
main metal:Red flames in coated on the metal
clear wheel red flame wings
spintrack:T125 but its red
Tip:CS blue

That was a great request. I will add you. Our characters will find the rest of team Flame universe tommorow when I finish chapter 4. I am going to go to sleep for now though, so it'll have to wait till tommorow

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Name:Ace yamakiro
gender:male
age:13
appearance:grey misty hair with red in the back Blue jacket red shirt blue pants black combat boots with a sky soaring blue eyes but flaming hot bey spirit
beyoaring phoenix
attribute:fire and wind
special moves:Wind crushing wing,Soaring combustion
Screcrt move:Blazing twin wing burage
bio: Ace is a average boy with a twist he loves to image daydream take walks but that changes at night he changes to an brave ace at blading that will burn his opponent if they mess with him or his friends
faceboltoaring red phoenix with blue background
Bey design:
metal wheel first layer of 4d Wings on two sides
main metal:Red flames in coated on the metal
clear wheel red flame wings
spintrack:T125 but its red
Tip:CS blue

That was a great request. I will add you. Our characters will find the rest of team Flame universe tommorow when I finish chapter 4. I am going to go to sleep for now though, so it'll have to wait till tommorow

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I'm going to sleep. I will reply to any thing posted here tommorow. Read the unfinished chapter 4 while you wait.

ok thanks your so awesome. And nite bro I can't wait

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Name:Ace yamakiro
gender:male
age:13
beyoaring phoenix
attribute:fire and wind
special moves:Wind crushing wing,Soaring combustion
Screcrt move:Blazing twin wing burage
bio: Ace is a average boy with a twist he loves to image daydream take walks but that changes at night he changes to an brave ace at blading that will burn his opponent if they mess with him or his friends
faceboltoaring red phoenix with blue background
Bey design:
metal wheel first layer of 4d Wings on two sides
main metal:Red flames in coated on the metal
clear wheel red flame wings
spintrack:T125 but its red
Tip:CS blue

That was a great request. I will add you. Our characters will find the rest of team Flame universe tommorow when I finish chapter 4. I am going to go to sleep for now though, so it'll have to wait till tommorow

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I'm going to sleep. I will reply to any thing posted here tommorow. Read the unfinished chapter 4 while you wait.

ok thanks your so awesome. And nite bro I can't wait

Night and ty. Secretly, I based this story off of my actual bey blade career- for example Twisted Leon B is my actual partner beyblade. Tommorow I will have to edit my story before adding more things to it but I will get to you. Thanks for all of the positive comments It really inspires me to write more.

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Not a secret anymore.

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Harmony Kagamine Len Stats

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6* Light: Harmony Kagamine Len -Spheres:
1. Medulla Gem
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6* Light: Holy Light Atro-Spheres:
1. Refined Gem
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6* Light: Divine Light Alyut -Spheres:
1. Medulla Gem
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6* Fire: Inferno Claw Zegar -Spheres:
1. Medulla Gem
2. Champion Axe
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5* Water: Divine Prince Arius -Spheres:
1. Steeple Rose

ZA WARUDO! TOKI WA TOMARE! SOSHITE TOKI WA UGOKI DESU! WRYYYYYYYYYYYY! KONO DIO DA!

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In the magical world of college, everything is Scantron.

Not a secret anymore.

true but Its for the story no one knows in the story bro.

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I can work on the story now. Go an add you in Kai

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Namehonen Drago
Gender:female
Age:15
Beyblade:Claw Drago AD145LRF
Element:Fire (and speed)
Bio: Shonen is sister of Ace, she's quiet and shy so she likes to cover her face with a black pullover. She's nice and likes to battle fairly. In battles she loves to keep on attacking her opponents bey. But when people mess with her and be mean to her, she launches Drago at them and the bey scratches them up as if they were in a cat fight.
Drago's Special Moves: Lightning Claw, Flaming Surge. Ultimate Moves: Volcano Claw, Volcano Surge
Special things about Shonen: She's a fire bender and a ninja!

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Credit for sig goes to "L"!
Wolf's Rain Quotes

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Dying or getting killed isn’t something unnatural. Living aimlessly without a purpose is.
Kiba
That's not your true form. Why do you hide yourself?
Kiba
Everyone's gonna die. It's a natural part of life. But if life has no purpose, you're dead already.
Kiba

My rap by earthwolf1404

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Her attacks are like diamond to the flesh
She's already seen all the HTTYD movies
And Ryukiba is her address,
In a Texas town, no bey part envy

But every blader's like Synchrome, Metal Face, Stallin' on Tornado Ridge,
Giga Flats, Spin Steal , trashin' the whole stadium,
She don't care, She's chillin' with Ryuga in her dreams.
But Blader's like Cristal Wheel, Tall Track, Wear Tempo like a timepiece.
4-D, Zero-G, Byakkus and Garudas.
She don't care, She's made a different Top Tier.

And You'll never beat Ryukiba (-kiba).
She's got Ryuga's Dragon Blood,
That kind of Power just ain't for us.
Her Beyblade style's all the buzz.
She will be your ruler (ruler),
You can call her Fishy
And baby She rules, She rules, She rules, She rules.
To beat her is a fantasy.


My friends and I—we've cracked the code.
We count our dollars on the train to the party.
And everyone who knows us knows that we're fine with this,
We didn't come for money.

But every blader's like Synchrome, Metal Face, Stallin' on Tornado Ridge,
Giga Flats, Spin Steal , trashin' the whole stadium,
She don't care, She's chillin' with Ryuga in her dreams.
But Blader's like Cristal Wheel, Tall Track, Wear Tempo like a timepiece.
4-D, Zero-G, Byakkus and Garudas.
She don't care, She's made a different Top Tier.


And we'll never beat Ryukiba (-kiba).
She's got Ryuga's Dragon Blood,
That kind of power just ain't for us.
Her Beyblade style's all the buzz.
She will be your ruler (ruler),
You can call her Fishy
And baby She rules, She rules, She rules, She rules.
To beat her is a fantasy.

Ooh ooh oh, Ooh ooh oh
She's stonger than you'll ever be,
The one and only Dragon queen.
Ooh ooh oh, Ooh ooh oh
Was born L-drago's lair
To be the best is her affair.

And we'll never beat Ryukiba (-kiba).
She's got Ryuga's Dragon Blood,
That kind of power just ain't for us.
Her Beyblade style's all the buzz
She will be your ruler (ruler),
You can call her Fishy
And baby She rules, She rules, She rules, She rules.
To beat her is a fantasy.

Chapter 4 done

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Awesome I wonder who is gonna win

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Awesome I wonder who is gonna win

Me too , I'm writing the story but I don't even know who is going to win to tell the truth. I sort of decide that as I write :l or just let my keyboard paint the picture for me.

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special move: turtle distortion, zero ver.: bey speeds up and circles around the edge causing gravity to to distort and makes all light beys lose traction to be hit later. normal ver.: instead of just going in coircles it ticks in the middle of the stadium.

The zero g version. I swear I have heard it before <_< ( Chapter 2 ), but hey that makes me think, can we turn the zero-g version into your actual special move? Because I like that move being just like my grand exlaivion. It is rival potential.

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Name: RagerBlade
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Beyblade: Duo Cygnus SA165WD
Element: Fire
Special Move: Blazing Solar Tornado (Stamina Mode), Final Inferno Attack (Attack Mode), Mode Change (Both), Speed Blaze Attack (Both)
Bio: Normal Kid who plays beyblade. He is here to help.
Bey Description: It is Stamina, but it is feirce in attack mode.

Special Moves Description
Blazing Solar Tornado (A tornado)
Final Inferno Attack (When the bey is getting weak it uses all its stamina to have a fierce attack)
Mode Change (Changes between Attack and Stamina Mode)
Speed Blaze Attack (A series of Barrage attacks, but the bey seems invisible)

Because of the other chapters being so short, I am going to be working on chapter 5 for a while. And Rager, you can count on your beyblade being in the story for sure. I don't want to add many spoilers, so i wont say which team, but it will be on a team that is rivaled against ours.

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so the european team members are supposed to be the antagonists.

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so the european team members are supposed to be the antagonists.

Idk what that word means but I assume it means bad guys. The team itself isn't bad at all, it's mostly just because they have a messed up leader :l Don't worry though, that problem will be settled.

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yeah thats what it means you should look up writing terms just to sound more pro. annd it can add pacing to a story to use some long words

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I just noticed, all of the other beys on my team have fire atributes, then mine is souley based on water and ice :l How is that gonna work rofl

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I just noticed, all of the other beys on my team have fire atributes, then mine is souley based on water and ice :l How is that gonna work rofl

Your character's unique! he's the leader and has different type of element

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Wolf's Rain Quotes

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Dying or getting killed isn’t something unnatural. Living aimlessly without a purpose is.
Kiba
That's not your true form. Why do you hide yourself?
Kiba
Everyone's gonna die. It's a natural part of life. But if life has no purpose, you're dead already.
Kiba

My rap by earthwolf1404

Spoiler (Click to View)

Her attacks are like diamond to the flesh
She's already seen all the HTTYD movies
And Ryukiba is her address,
In a Texas town, no bey part envy

But every blader's like Synchrome, Metal Face, Stallin' on Tornado Ridge,
Giga Flats, Spin Steal , trashin' the whole stadium,
She don't care, She's chillin' with Ryuga in her dreams.
But Blader's like Cristal Wheel, Tall Track, Wear Tempo like a timepiece.
4-D, Zero-G, Byakkus and Garudas.
She don't care, She's made a different Top Tier.

And You'll never beat Ryukiba (-kiba).
She's got Ryuga's Dragon Blood,
That kind of Power just ain't for us.
Her Beyblade style's all the buzz.
She will be your ruler (ruler),
You can call her Fishy
And baby She rules, She rules, She rules, She rules.
To beat her is a fantasy.


My friends and I—we've cracked the code.
We count our dollars on the train to the party.
And everyone who knows us knows that we're fine with this,
We didn't come for money.

But every blader's like Synchrome, Metal Face, Stallin' on Tornado Ridge,
Giga Flats, Spin Steal , trashin' the whole stadium,
She don't care, She's chillin' with Ryuga in her dreams.
But Blader's like Cristal Wheel, Tall Track, Wear Tempo like a timepiece.
4-D, Zero-G, Byakkus and Garudas.
She don't care, She's made a different Top Tier.


And we'll never beat Ryukiba (-kiba).
She's got Ryuga's Dragon Blood,
That kind of power just ain't for us.
Her Beyblade style's all the buzz.
She will be your ruler (ruler),
You can call her Fishy
And baby She rules, She rules, She rules, She rules.
To beat her is a fantasy.

Ooh ooh oh, Ooh ooh oh
She's stonger than you'll ever be,
The one and only Dragon queen.
Ooh ooh oh, Ooh ooh oh
Was born L-drago's lair
To be the best is her affair.

And we'll never beat Ryukiba (-kiba).
She's got Ryuga's Dragon Blood,
That kind of power just ain't for us.
Her Beyblade style's all the buzz
She will be your ruler (ruler),
You can call her Fishy
And baby She rules, She rules, She rules, She rules.
To beat her is a fantasy.

I just noticed, all of the other beys on my team have fire atributes, then mine is souley based on water and ice :l How is that gonna work rofl

Your character's unique! he's the leader and has different type of element

Yeah he is isn't he I love that water thing. I don't know why, but I just don't like fire :l It's just not for me. Yes ik it's weird to say that with the signature I have but still :I

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I'm wind and fire

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I'm wind and fire

Yeah. Still part fire though :I

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I am uploading 1 eight of chapter 5 for starters so you guys can read what is going on in the story :l

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