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chapter 1: the beginning

"get him cyber!" shouted Michael,a young blader who managed to get into the europe national final
his opponent one of the strongest bladers, Drigger Gt, Michael was using Cyber Pegasis 100 HF Drigger was using death dragonosis TH170 ED
"go special move 1000 days of agony!" shouted drigger
the beyblade launch cyber into the air and hit it 1000 times making scratches that would never be repaired
"NO! CYBER!" shouted Michael in despair
cyber flung out the stadium and smashed onto the ground,he had lost, he let his beyblade down and it would never be repaired,the Blader DJ gave the trophy to Drigger. Michael was furious he wanted revenge he was also sad cyber was his first bey he battled with it ever since, just then the DJ came up to him and gave him a beyblade
"here for coming second" he said calmly
the beyblade was gravity perseus AD145 WD the beyblade lit up in his hand,he could tell this beyblade was good.

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chapter 2:Michael vs Matthew!

after the tournament Michael's friends tried to cheer him up
"you were pretty good out there" said blackstar
"yeah"said luck
"he didn't do good he done AMAZING! he got into the finals with an attack type!" said Matthew.
these guys were the hawks, Michael's team.

The hawks consisted of Michael,Matthew,Luck and BlackStar, You are probably thinking "why do the have weird names?" the reason is i dont know blackstars real name,Michael,the leader,was a skilled Blader,he was 11 years old and didn't give up without a fight,he had golden blonde hair,he was a great person to be friends with,but if you were his enemy that's a different story,his friend Matthew was the joker in the pack,he was cocky and sometimes very annoying he had brown hair,but he wore a hoodie most of time,Luck was really called Alexi but everyone called him Luck,he had blonde hair,he was very strong willed and enjoyed a laugh,BlackStar was someone who cheered you up when you were down,he had black hair,he was easily distracted,all together the hawks were a great bunch of people.

"Thanks guys "said Michael
"no problem" replied Matthew,"so do you want to test youre new bey out?"
“3!”
“2!”
“1!”
“Go SHOOT!”
Michael and Matthew launched the beys into the stadium (there were loads of stadiums around the city because of a meteor shower hit the city leaving loads of holes) Matthew was using earth Virgo X: D
"GO VIRGO"shouted Matthew
Matthew was an impatient boy who liked to get things over with
"SPECIAL MOVE VIRGO CYCLONE!!!"shouted Matthew
virgo circled around Perseus super fast
"lets see what you got GO PERSEUS!!!" said Michael
Perseus launched towards Virgo
"ha! you are committing suicide" said Matthew
mockingly but Perseus used a move similar to 1000 days of agony Perseus launched Virgo up into the air and smashed it back down Virgo stopped spinning but was undamaged,everyone was speechless
"wow" said Luck
"wow nice party trick!" said a familiar voice.

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chapter3:the eagles

"Callum!"said Michael grimly,"what are you doing here?"
Michael and Callum hated each other
"I live here" replied Callum
"what you live on the street?" joked Matthew
"SHUT IT! yoouu little freak HAHAHA!"bellowed Ryan.
Ryan was kind of like the psycho you find behind your bins,
"oh im the freak you son of a (bleep)!" replied Matthew fuiriosly
"now now theres no need for that language" said Callum
"what do you want this time?" asked Michael
. "a llittle thing i like to call bladebey"replied Callum
"ITS BEYBLADE YOU NOOB!!!" shouted everyone, but Callum and Ryan. "TYRON STOP LAUGHING NOW!!!!!!" shouted Callum,
"what ,its funny, you are such a noob" replied Tyron.
Tyron didnt always follow Callum,
"SHUTUP!"shouted Callum
"I think it is pronounced SHUT UP, you (bleeping bleep) "shouted Luck, "leave it ,fine we,ll battle" said Michael,getting out Perseus.
In a couple of minutes later they were ready to battle.
“3!”
“2!”
“1!”
“Go SHOOT!”
and they launched there beys into the stadium,Callum was using Killer Chimera 230 ES,
"GO PERSEUS!!!" shouted Michael
"GO CHIMERA!!!" shouted Callum
there was a massive explosion,when the smoke cleared, the eagles had disappeared,so had Perseus!
"omg the little scumbag took Perseus!" said BlackStar
"ive got to get him back."

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chapter 4: Michael vs the Eagles

Michael wanted Perseus back,but he had no beyblade suddenly an idea came. He could use his old beyblade,Cyber Pegasus.it was badly scratched but it would have to do,
"YOU'RE CRAZY!" shouted Matthew, "challenging all of the eagles with THAT!"
Michael ignored him........ as usual, Michael confronted the eagles
"oh look who it is Michael Idiot" mocked Callum
"its Elliott and you know it" said Michael with a bit of anger and a bit of fright,
"what are you doing here? ya mug "asked Tyron
"give me back Perseus" said Michael
"well if you beat us you can have your blade back"said Callum "HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! battle" laughed Ryan hysterically
"uuuummmm yeeaah,so lets go!" said Callum
“3!”
“2!”
“1!”
“Go SHOOT!”
Tyron was using Diablo Saggitario UW145 FS, Ryan was using L,Drago Destroy WA130 XF.
"Do your best cyber"said Michael
but cyber was getting beaten badly,then suddenly they heard a noise,
"GO SHOOT!!!!!"
it was the rest of the hawks Matthew with Virgo, Luck with Burn Aries C145 MS,Black Star with Fusion Phoenix H145 HF.
"VIRGO CYCLONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"shouted Matthew
Virgo circled around the stadium, Michael realized what he wanted
"GO CYBER!!!!!!" shouted Michael
cyber pushed l,drago and saggitario into Virgo knocking them out,Callum knew he was outnumbered
"fine you win" said Callum as he threw Perseus back

welcome back Perseus,welcome back

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chapter 5: an unexpected acquaintance

"GET READY FOR THE BEYBLADE WORLD CHAMPIONSHIPS!!!!!" blared the t.v
"beyblade world championships!?" said the hawks in amazement,
"I heard there doing a tournament for Britain's representatives " said BlackStar
"we are so gonna enter that!"said Michael.
"Not so fast"said Luck,"this is a tourney for teams of 5 and there's only 4 of us"
"aaaaawwwww!!!!"moaned the rest of the hawks
"it's back to skyrim for me" groaned Matthew
"isn't it obvious what we have to do!" said Michael,"get a fifth team member!".
Many hours later nobody had applied for the team,just as they were about to go home a mysterious hooded figure turned up
"i would like to join the group" she said
"name?"asked Michael
"I dont think that is relevant" she replied, "lets do my initiation test now" "okay what is your beyblade?"asked Matthew.
She showed her beyblade,it was Vulcan Houruseus 145D, Michael and the girl stood beside the stadium.
“3!”
“2!”
“1!”
“Go SHOOT!”
"GO HOURUSEUS!!!!!" shouted the girl
"GO PERSEUS!!!!!" shouted Michael.
There was a big explosion,the explosion blew off the girls hood
"MEGAN?!" shouted the hawks in amazement.
The reason they were shocked was Megan never played beyblade at all, she made fun of it.
"Are we battling or not? she asked,"VULCAN CANNON!!!"Megan shouted Houruseus imediatly shot loads of light bullets at Perseus,Perseus,of course,dodged them
"PERSEUS SWORD SMAAAAASH!!!!" commanded Michael
Perseus launched Houruseus into the air and smashed it back down,
"no Houruseus!" Megan screamed
Michael had won,
"you're a good blader" said Michael,"you're in!"

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chapter 6: special training

The hawks met at the bey pit (as usual)
"hi guys" said Michael
"hi" said the rest of the hawks
"ok theres five of us now but how are we gonna win this tournament?"
asked BlackStar
"train duh!"replied Matthew
"yeah but how genius?" asked BlackStar
"ask Michael,after all he is leader"said luck
"yeah but his training is just going on the beta stadiums and smashing jenga bricks" said Megan,"wait a minute where is he?"
turned out he was at the spike pit,a stadium with spikes in it was for bladers with ultimate skill and accuracy,for a noob it was sheer suicide,luckily Michael was no noob,Michael was going round quickly,dodging all of the spikes and then returning it into his hand,
"no Megan this is how we will train"said Michael "whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!"said the others in amazement
for the whole week the hawks trained hard,on Saturday the Representative tournament took place the hawks breezed through the first rounds easy, zoomed through the quarter finals and flew through the semi finals,now they were in the finals against none other than the eagles.now they had 2 more members Jack with Beat Lynx TH170WD and Ollie with Mercury Anubis 84R2F,get ready for the battle of the century the eagles vs the hawks!

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chapter 7:BlackStar vs Jack

"IT IS THE BRITAIN'S REPRESENTATIVE FINALS!!!,AND WHAT A MATCH WE HAVE FOR YOU!!" shouted the blade dj ,"THE HAWKS VS THE EAGLES!!!!,1ST BATTLE BLACKSTAR VS JACK!"
"dont worry its Jack,he's a noob"said Michael
"just because we have never seen him before,does not make him a noob,when you went in you're first tournament people thought you were a noob and you destroyed them"said Matthew
"good point"replied Michael, "wait where did everyone go?,ahh the mach started!"
“3!”
“2!”
“1!”
“Go SHOOT!”
"GO PHOENIX!!!!!"shouted BlackStar
"GO LYNX!!!!"shouted Jack,
Phoenix tried to attack but Lynx's track changed height and dodged it, "what how is that possible?!" asked BlackStar
"simple"said Megan"the track is TH170 it can change its height"
"oh yeah"said BlackStar
that one distraction was gonna cost him
"SPECIAL MOVE ONE MILLION SCRATCHES OF PAIN!"shouted Jack
that reminded Michael of his battle with drigger he shuddered,Lynx beat Phoenix horrifically
"no Phoenix!" exclaimed BlackStar,"sorry guys"
"it's okay we will win the rest of the battles" replied Michael
so now if they want to win they will make sure they dont lose two more times!

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chapter 8:Megan vs Ollie

"good luck"said Michael
and the rest of the hawks as Megan walked onto the arena.
“3!”
“2!”
“1!”
“Go SHOOT!”
"GO HOURUSEUS!!!!" shouted Megan
"GO ANUBIS!!!!" shouted Ollie
the clash of metal echoed through the stadium,
at the same time
Megan shouted "VULCAN CANNON!!!!!"
Ollie shouted "MERCURY CANNON!!!!!"
then they said
"hey that's my special move!"
Houruseus and Anubis made a massive explosion.Both beys were spinning like nothing happened
"now mystic zone!"shouted Megan
a major light enveloped Houruseus
"Anubis brave impact"shouted Ollie
Anubis charged into the massive beam of light coming from Houruseus,and Houruseus and Anubis stopped spinning
"LOOKS LIKE WE HAVE A TIE!"announced the blader dj
now the scores were eagles: 2 hawks:1.

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chapter 9: Luck vs Ryan

Luck was in the training room well..... training,he was unusually quiet,probably because if he lost the hawks would be out,he was against the beta stadium "go Aries" he said Aries launched itself towards the bey in the center,he had beat it ten other times,but he kept on training and training until he was called out,
"hehey my prey"said Ryan,"HAHAHAHAHA i made a rhyme"
“3!”
“2!”
“1!”
“Go SHOOT!”
"GO L DRAGO!!!!!!!!!" screamed Ryan
"GO ARIES!!!!!"shouted Luck
the battle was fierce Luck was trying his best,
"You think that puny little attacks like that are going to stop me? Think again little boy, your bey is hopeless and puny, just like you!"mocked Ryan
this reminded Luck of the time he battled the shroud,darkness enveloped Luck
"GO, BURN ARIES! COUNTER ROTATION!"he shouted at the top of his lungs
Michael and Matthew ran to stop him but Luck smashed them against the wall, Aries touched l drago and it exploded
"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA THIS IS MY TRUE POWER FEAR ME,FEAR ME!"shouted Luck
so evilly it would give you nightmares for about a year,just then Luck and Aries flew out the stadium knocking out everyone.Now Michael and co have to find Luck,the scores are now 2 all.

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chapter 10: the darkness part 1

The hawks and the eagles searched for Luck together (don’t ask me why they were working together) when Matthew began to complain, "Michael it’s raining cats and dogs we should go home.”
"Does anyone use that phrase anymore? Anyways, I’m not giving up” replied Michael.
"Just face the facts; we aren't going to find him!" Megan yelled.
"Look you guys can go back home but I’m not!" snapped Michael
"Even if we find him he's a psycho…" whispered Callum.
"Good thing you know how to handle one then." said Matthew.
"Are you looking for a fight?” said Tyron.
"So what if I am?” said Matthew pushing Tyron in the mud.
"Fighting is not going to solve anythin... you know what? Forget it, you guys just keep on fighting if you want." said Michael. Just then, out of nowhere, they heard a high-pitched hysterical laugh.
"That could be him!" said BlackStar
"How do you know it's not Ryan taking a carp?" Matthew laughed.
“Matthew, that isn't funny” Megan whispered.
"Remember the saying: ‘always look on the bright side of life’-oh wait, it’s you, never mind!" Matthew chuckled, and then Megan threw a punch at Matthew. With that, everyone decided they had enough, and a massive fight broke out, fists and feet and a tooth flying everywhere. After they ran out of energy to fight some more, and with nothing better to do, they began the search again.

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chapter 11:the darkness part 2
After the brawl Michael and co continued their search in the forest. Of course, tension was still high, so no one talked for a while. After a tense hour of searching, they heard rustiling in a bush, and a boy came out, shaking his ginger head. Michal looked down at him, and groaned, "Oh great that's just what we need, A HOBBIT!" Michal was beginning to get annoyed, since they had been searching for luck for hours on end and have yet to find him, and of course he was now faced with some strange kid.
"Oh har-de-har! That’s such a great joke!" The boy sighed, rolling his eyes. He held up his bey, and said “The name is Jay, not Hobbit, and this is my bey Thunder Lacerta.”
Michael looked at Jay some more, and said “So what? You want to battle? Well, we’re kinda in the middle of something here…”
“Oh well. I came here for a battle, and that’s what I’m going to get!” Jay yelled. Michael shrugged, and took out his bey.
“3!”
“2!”
“1!”
“Go SHOOT!”

Just as the battle began,
Jay smiled and yelled out, "Special Move! Thunder Scale Killer Shock!" Lacerta sent Perseus flying, and right before he was about to make the fatal blow, a bright glowing violet beam shattered Lacerta into many pieces
.it was Luck "well,well if it isn't the people dragging me down"he said"
Alexi im here to help you"said Michael calmly,
Luck launched his bey at Michael,Michael launched his back.
“3!”
“2!”
“1!”
“Go SHOOT!”

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chapter 12:the light vs the darkness

Michael was trying to avoid battling Luck, one of his closest friends in the world, but he knew it was inevitable.
"This isn't you Alexi, and you know it…” Michael said calmly, despite the fact no one called Luck Alexi.
“ARIES COUNTER ROTATION!!!" screamed Luck
Aries quickly changed spin directions, and began to assault Perseus.
“Nice try, but Perseus is in left mode so that isn’t anywhere near as effective as you hoped it would be.” said Michael, “So that failed, but I can’t fight you Alexi, not like this. Mate, remember the good times? Remember you're surprise birthday party? That was great, wasn’t it?"
"WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT?” Luck screamed at Michael.
“Luck, mate, you have overcome the darkness. You did it once, so you can do it again!” said Michael, hoping he would get through to Luck.
“I remember…” Luck whispered, and the millisecond he said that everyone faded into black, but he saw someone that looked just like him standing before him. But this being was nothing like him, since it was the dark version of Luck. "You don’t need them” said the shadowy apparition, “you could easily destroy them…"
"No they’re my friends!” Luck yelled at the dark version of himself.
"Oh, really? I heard them they wanted to leave you to DIE! They never wanted to see your face again!" the shadowy Luck cackled.
"YOU'RE LYING! I AM THE PERSON IN CONTROL, NOT YOU!" shouted Luck.
The shadowy luck chuckled, and said “Do you really think so? Because I say otherwise”
Luck lashed out at his dark reflection, and everything came back. The darkness that was in his body was flowing out, seeking a new host. Suddenly, Michael had an idea.
"Ryan, can L Drago consume any dark energy?" asked Michael.
"Yeah, why do you ask?" Ryan asked quizzically.
"Launch him!" shouted Michael. Ryan took the advice and launched L Drago into the battle, right in front of Aries. The dark energy was attracted to the bey for some unexplainable reason, and went into it. The darkness soon disappeared, and Luck fell to the ground, exhausted.
The next day, before the final battle began, Callum came up to Michael
"I need to talk to you” Callum said.
“What do you want?” Michael said, wondering what Callum wanted to say.
“We have withdrawn from the competition. After seeing you almost die for your teammate I decided you should represent Britain"
"Really? Thanks man!” Michael said, hints of joy leaking into his voice.
"It’s a small world isn't it? With plenty of bladers who have gigantic dreams, the world championships is not gonna be easy, and quite a challenge, but I think you can do it, seeing what you did yesterday.” said Callum
"Thanks…" said Michael, but Callum had already gone. Deep in his heart, Michael felt that he had made a sort of friendship with Callum, despite being enemies for so long.
“SO ON TO THE WORLD CHAMPIONSHIPS WE GO!” Michael shouted to the sky, with hopes of winning.

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chapter 13:the party
Michael woke up, rubbing his head trying to get rid of the headache that was stuck right behind his eyes. He opened his eyes, and found he was on a bouncy castle in the middle of a large field. "Holy carp!” Michael laughed, shaking his head, “I think that party got a little out of hand last night!” He looked around, and saw his teammates scattered across the field, groaning or sleeping.
He looked down at his watch, which had a little chocolate on it, obscuring his view of it. He licked it off, not caring how long it was there, and saw the time. "HOLY CARP!!!!" exclaimed Michael, as he ran to wake up everyone. He screamed at everyone “WAKE UP! WAKE UP AND GET UP!”
"What is it?" Matthew yawned, shaking his head. All the yelling woke the others up, and they were quickly greeted with a very loud response.
"WE ARE GONNA BE LATE SINCE ALL OF YOU SLEPT IN YOU CARP HEADS!!!!" shouted Michael.
"But if we're late we can’t get to the next tournament!" Matthew exclaimed, a little worry showing on his face.
"Will someone please punch him?” Michael asked, mad at Matthew for stating the obvious.
"With pleasure," replied Megan, as she delivered a fierce blow to Matthew’s ribs.
"We have to go now!" Michael yelled, beginning to panic.
"But if we go now, I won’t have time to do my hair!” Megan whined.
"So what? It’s just hair…" BlackStar shrugged.
"How will we get to the airport anyway? We’re so far away from anything…" asked Luck, which was the first time he talked since what everyone else called “The darkness”.
"I can help you with that," A man said, coming from behind the castle. "I am part of the WBBA, and I am your chauffer," he said, motioning to the limousine parked in the field.
Michael chuckled, and said “Sorry for the outbursts… guess we won’t be late after all!”
They got into the limo, and the man, who introduced himself as Jeremy, drove them toward the nearest airport. Before the group got on the plane, Michael asked Jeremy where they were flying to. Jeremy replied “You’re going to Bermuda.” Michael shrugged, and got on the plane.
Many hours later, they finally landed in the Bermuda airport. Everyone yawned, and grabbed their luggage from the overhead compartments. And, as soon as everyone got off, Michael heard a familiar voice say “Hey cuz!”

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chapter 14,blading runs in the Elliott blood

Michael looked at the short, curly haired boy before him, and immediately knew who the kid was. "Oh. Hello Matthew... long time, no see, huh?” Michael said, noting how much his little cousin has grown over the past few years.
"Hey cuz," Matthew E. smiled,
Matthew opened his mouth, about to ask why Michael said that to him, when Michael butted in, saying "Not you, my cousin over here, I haven’t seen him in years!”
Everyone else on the team had a look of astonishment on their face, and almost simultaneously yelled "YOU HAVE A COUSIN!!!!????"
"Of course I do, do you think I have no family?” Michael laughed at them.
“Well… yeah. We had no idea you had a family, especially one that lived in Bermuda…” Luck said.
“You guys are really stupid at times!" Michael chuckled. "So… are you in the Bermudan team?"
"Of course” replied Matthew E, showing his bey, which was a bright orange Rock Cancer CH120 FS. His teammates showed themselves to the Hawks, both of them smiling at them.
"Holy carp! We remember the two of you! It’s the Hobbit and that guy we beat in the qualifiers!" said Michael
"I AM NOT A HOBBIT YOU MORONS!" shouted Jay, the smile disappearing instantly and replaced with an angry frown.
Michael looked at the other person, and asked “And what, exactly, is your name?”
"The names’ss Blader S, and Jay is my brother," said the other Bermuda team member. Michael raised his eyebrows, wondering what kind of parent would name their kid that. Matthew E shrugged when Michael looked to him for an answer.
Jay held up his new bey, an Omega Dragonis 85XF. Blader S held up his Blitz Dragonis F: D. Matthew E then introduced the other members of the Bermuda team, Macaulay and Bradley. Bradelys bey was Grand Cetus T125RS, Macaulay's bey was Grand Cetus WD145RS "And together, we are the Bermuda Triangles!” they yelled in unison. Michael chucked, and whispered to everyone else “Wow, that’s one creative team name!”
“So cuz, it looks like we will have to battle against each other, huh?” Matthew E asked, smiling.
"Well, that’s if the rest of my team doesn’t dominate you before you get to battle!” replied Michael.

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chapter 15:the gremlins

Matthew E showed the hawks around Bermuda after the rest of his team, save for Macaulay, went to train somewhere else. He began asking plenty of questions, relating to life back home to his cousin. After a bit, he asked, "Did you guys have any trouble with the plane journey?"
"Well… now you come to mention it, the TV’s went down, and during the training session BlackStar and Luck were doing, their beyblades suddenly stopped spinning as soon as they launched, which was really weird.” replied Michael.
"Yeah, but don’t forget how Megan’s hair looked like she put a balloon in her hair, and now she looks like she got struck by lightning!" laughed Matthew
"SHUT YOUR UGLY LITTLE FACE OR I WILL SHOVE YOUR BEY AND YOUR LAUNCHER DOWN YOUR THROAT!" screamed Megan, who was in a mood worse than her usual agitated self.
"Jet lag, most likely" Luck whispered to Matthew E
"Yeah, she's tired so what happens? She gets grouchy" BlackStar added, chuckling.
"All that was probably caused by the magnetic field of the Bermuda triangle" Macaulay suggested, shrugging.
"Have you guys got a place to stay?” Matthew E asked, "Because you are welcome at my house you know."
"That sounds like a great idea…" Matthew said, a little nervous for some reason. "But we have a hotel! We don’t need to stay in your house, since Matthew booked the hotel… right, Matthew?" explained Michael
"Well about that..." stuttered Matthew, scratching his head.
"Oh Matthew! You complete idiot!" Michael groaned. He shook his head at Matthew, and said to his cousin, "Yes, we would be glad to stay at your house."
After Matthew E stopped showing everyone the streets of Bermuda and started showing the little back alleys, a group of teenagers confronted the Bermuda triangles. Matthew E, who of course is only 7 years old, hid behind Michael, shaking in fear.
"Oh look, it's little baby Matthew! Looks like he got a few friends, huh guys?" one of them chuckled. "HEY!" said Matthew, thinking they were talking about him.
BlackStar sighed, and whispered to Matthew, "They don’t know you, so why would they be talking to you?"
“Oh.” Matthew whispered, deflating.
"Leave my cousin alone! What do you have against him anyways?" said Michael, raising a fist about to strike.
"Who the heck are you? Don’t bother trying to defy us, since we are THE GREMLINS!!!" said the largest one, who then shoved Matthew E on to the floor. Michael stared at his cousin, lying on the ground, and his blood began to boil.
"Who are you? And what do you want with Matthew E?" asked Luck
“We’re the Gremlins, idiot!” One of them shouted, but the one who shoved Matthew E on the ground glared at him.
“My name is Dylan, and this is Ben and Marcus," Dylan said, gesturing to each of them.
Matthew E got up and whispered something to his enraged cousin, smiling. "What a good idea cuz!” Michael said, smiling. “My cousin and I cousin challenge you to a battle!” Michael shouted, pointing at Dylan.
“Fine. Ben, you’re going to battle with me.” Dylan said, rolling his eyes.
Megan whispered to BlackStar, “How does Michael get into these situations? He just keeps getting himself into trouble…”
BlackStar shrugged, and replied just as quietly, “Well, looks like he and Matthew E will have to battle Dylan and Ben now…”

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chapter 16:family

LAST TIME WE SAW MICHAEL HE GOT INTO A LITTLE BIT OF TROUBLE WITH THIS BULLY GANG CALLED THE GREMLINS,LETS SEE HOW THIS TURNS OUT!!!
"It seems to be an even match"said Luck
"for now"said BlackStar
"come on guys this is Michael we are talking about"said Megan,"no matter how many tough battles he is in he's pulled out okay"
"yeah but it's here and now, anyway he has lost once"replied Matthew
"to the world champion"added Luck.
"Will you guys shut up"snapped Michael,"we are kind of in the middle of something!"

Things weren't exactly okay though,Dylan and Ben were tough opponents
"you might want a moment to kiss your points goodbye HAHAHAHAHAHA!"Laughed Dylan
"do you think its time cuz?"asked Michael
"definatly"replied Matthew.e.
Then they did something crazy the started singing we are family,everyone was stunned "wha wwwha?"said a confused Dylan.
just as he was distracted,Michael and Matthew.e attacked but another bey landed, knocking out Perseus.
"Looks like it's just you Matt"explained Michael
"seems that way"said Matthew.e,"me against three teenagers,no pressure"
then an orange light enveloped Matthew.e then he shouted with confidence
"GO CANCER SPECIAL MOVE,CLAW SLASH!!!!"
And in one second all three beys stopped spinning and Dylan and his gang fled.After the battle Matthew.e asked
"what was that?"
Michael replied
"that dear cousin is the bladers spirit!"

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Chapter 17:Meet the Italians!

The Hawks and The Bermuda Triangles went off to get something to eat,but suddenly they heard a scream,but not a normal scream,but a scream of true fear and excruciating pain.
"What was that?!"asked Alexi
"i dont know but im going to find out"said Michael running
he saw The Gremlins on the flour unconscious and he saw a familiar face.
"Drigger"said Michael
"Michael,long time no see................old friend"replied Drigger GT.

If you remember from the first chapter Drigger GT had destroyed Michaels original beyblade:Cyber Pegasis,so obviously Michael wasn't exactly over the moon about seeing him.

"what are you doing here?"asked Michael
"Well me and my team decided to scope out the Bermudan and British teams"replied Drigger,"well we ARE the Italian team we are Pasta La Vista, these are my team members:Crown Clown,Jake,Flare and Max"
Crown Clown's bey was Screw fox 90MF, Jake's bey was Omega unicorno D: D,Flare's bey was flame virgo SW145 ES and Max's bey was Basalt Horogium GR125 FB.

Max started looking at Megan funny
"why is that boy staring at me?"she asked
"i think he has a crush on you"replied Luck
"HEY TAKE THIS YOU LITTLE CREEP"shouted Megan launching Houruseus at Max's head
Max just dodged it and launched his bey
"I think Megan has got herself into a battle"whispered Michael
"yeah who do you thinks going to win?"asked Matthew just as quietly
"I dont know but even if Megan loses she will beat him up"replied Michael,"lets just find out".

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chapter 18:Megan vs Max

"GO HOURUSEUS!"shouted Megan
"GO HOROGIUM!"shouted Max
Horogium hit Houruseus and Horogium started grinding Houruseus
"how is Horogium doing that?"asked Luck
"well i think it has something to do with the track"replied BlackStar," it seems the GR125 track grinds underneath the metal wheel as you can tell it causes horrible damage to the metal wheel and also decreases loads of spin;the thing is i have never seen this track before"
"my bey is like nothing you have ever seen before"said Max,"i grew up on the street barley managing to survive, my bey was the only thing to remember my parents by,SO I WILL WIN FOR THEM!"
Horogium launched itself at Houruseus and started grinding
"ok time to finish this you little creep"said Megan,"HOURUSEUS SPECIAL MOVE VULCAN CANNON!"
Houruseus launched light bullets at Horogium
"if you are using your special move i will use mine"said Max,"SPECIAL MOVE TICKING TIME BOMB!"
Horogium stated spinning so fast there was a small tornado surrounding it and it launched itself at Houruseus; one touch was all it took as soon as it hit Houruseus exploded,a couple of seconds later Horogium itself exploded
"well that explains the name"said Matthew

Later when Houruseus was repaired the Hawks got a pizza and devised a plan to defeat the Bermuda triangles but little did they now two tables away the Bermuda triangles were devising a plan to defeat THEM!

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Chapter 19:An unexpected tag battle

"HELLO BLADERS ALL AROUND THE WORLD!"announced the blader DJ,"THE FIRST MATCH OF THE BEYBLADE WORLD CHAMPIONSHIPS! IS ABOUT TO BEGIN!, OUR BERMUDAN REPRESENTATIVES: THE BERMUDA TRIANGLES WILL FACE THE BRITISH TEAM: THE CRUMPET LOVING HAWKS!"
"stereotypical carp head"muttered Michael,"and i hate crumpets"
"INSTEAD OF THE REGULAR ONE AGAINST ONE MATCH WE SHALL HAVE A TAG TEAM BATTLES, THEN THE LEADERS AND FINALLY ANOTHER TAG BATTLE!"continued the blader DJ
"me then"said Michael and Matthew
"HEY IM THE LEADER NOT YOU!"shouted Michael to Matthew
"NO I AM"shouted Matthew in reply to Michael
"just shut up both of you"said BlackStar,"this is how we shall do it me and Megan will go up first,then Michael and then Luck and Matthew then you,ok?"
"any objections?"asked Michael
"no not really"replied the rest of the hawks
"ok then we are up"said Megan

"EVERYONE GET READY THE FIRST MATCH IS ABOUT TO BEGIN! MACCAULY AND BRADELY VS BLACKSTAR AND MEGAN!"said the blader DJ
“3!”
“2!”
“1!”
“Go SHOOT!”
The beys zoomed into the staidium at extreme speed
"we are gonna crush you"said Maccauly
"WHAT DID YOU SAY WE ARE GONNA WIPE THAT SMUG LOOK RIGHT OF YOUR FACE!"shouted Megan angrily
"Megan calm down"said Blackstar,"we can win this easily we just have to believe in our bey"
"SPECIAL MOVE GRAND DEUCALION!"shouted Maccauly and Bradley in unison
water flooded in to the stadium rapidly
"FLY PHOENIX!"shouted BlackStar
Phoenix jumped in to the air BlackStar whispered something to Megan
"hmmmm good idea"she said,"HOURUSEUS SPECIAL MOVE MYSTIC SUN!"
a massive light burst out of Houruseus; evaporating the water
"NOOOOOOOOO!"shouted Maccauly
"HOW CAN OUR SPECIAL BE......... STOPPED?!"shouted Bradley
"NOW JOINT SPECIAL MOVE MYSTIC FIRE BLAST!"shouted BlackStar and Megan
Phoenix and Houruseus zoomed forward so fast they set on fire and destroyed the two Cetus beys
"AND THE WINNERS ARE BLACKSTAR AND MEGAN!"announced the blader DJ
"YES NICE ONE!"shouted The Hawks
now the world championships had begun.

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chapter 20:FAMILY FEUD
"YES GUYS YOU DID IT"congratulated Michael,Matthew and Luck
"well obviously it was because i had a great tag team partner"said BlackStar,smiling
Megan blushed a bright scarlet red(obviously you see what is gonna happen later in the story)
"oh please you did most of the work i just done what you said"she replied still blushing
"Michael are you ready?"asked Luck,"i mean are you ok with fighting your cousin?"
"yeah im fine with it" Michael replied getting up on the platform
he got out Perseus and attached it to his launcher,he saw his cousin on the other side of the stadium.

Michael had taught his cousin everything about beyblade,he taught him the 4 types of beys,the sliding shoot, customizing and most importantly he taught Matthew.e to believe in his bey,now everything that Michael taught him would be put to the test.

“3!”
“2!”
“1!”
“Go SHOOT!”
"GO CANCER!"Matthew.e shouted
"STAY STRONG PERSEUS!"Michael told his bey
the beys clashed violently,causing sparks to fly everywhere both beys started to lose spin then Perseus started spin-stealing from Cancer,causing Cancer to wobble
"NO CANCER DONT GIVE UP!"shouted Matthew.e
Cancer started glowing a bright orange and regained more than its original spin power causing a small tornado
"GO CANCER SPECIAL MOVE,CLAW SLASH!!!!"Matthew.e shouted with sheer determination
"GO PERSEUS SWORD SMASH"countered Michael
there was a GINORMOUS explosion as the smoke cleared one bey is left spinning and that bey was.............................Matthew.e's Cancer
"AND THE WINNER OF THIS ROUND IS MAAAAAATHEW.E!"announced the blader dj
"you did your best"comforted the hawks,smiling but Michael could tell they were disappointed in him
score:
the hawks:1
the bermuda triangles:1

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chapter 21:the twin dragons
Michael was feeling a bit down because he felt like he let his team down
"you did your best Perseus"he said,"that all that matters"
then Michael saw Luck training
"go Aries! special move horn throw!" Luck shouted
his bey launched towards Proto Nemesis (he was using the ultimate beyta stadium) but unfortunately Aries stopped spinning as soon as it touched nemesis.Then he heard the blader dj call out his and Matthews name.
"he Luck are you alright battling?"asked Michael,"i mean after the darkness and all"
"yeah that was ages ago man"Luck replied attaching Aries to his launcher
"HELLO BLADERS OF THE WORLD!"shouted the blader dj,"WELCOME TO THE FINAL MATCH OF THE FIRST MATCH OF THE WORLD CHAMPIONSHIPS,BLADER S AND JAY VS MATTHEW AND LUCK LET THE BATTLE BEGIN!"
“3!”
“2!”
“1!”
“Go SHOOT!”
"GO DRAGONIS!"shouted Blader S and Jay
"GO VIRGO!"shouted Matthew
"GO ARIES!"shouted Luck
"DRAGONIS ULTIMATE METEOR CRUSHER!"shouted Jay
"Dragonis mysterious star buster"said Blader S
Virgos X : D went into XHF mode and dodged the special moves,Aries on the other hand was getting battered by them
"GO SPECIAL MOVE VIRGO CYCLONE!"shouted Matthew
Virgo created a major tornado in the stadium,causing the two dragonis's to fly into the air,Luck then had an idea
"ARIES COUNTER ROTATION!"shouted Luck
"no"said Michael,"not again
Aries created a tornado spinning the opposite way of Virgos one as soon as the two dragonis's hit the two tornadoes,they stopped spinning.
"THE WINNERS OF THE 1ST MATCH OF THE BEYBLADE WORLD CHAMPIONSHIPS ARE THE HAWKS!"announced the blader dj.

Later Michael said his goodbyes to his cousin
"im gonna miss you cuz"said Michael
"right back at ya"replied Matthew.e
Michael hugged his cousin and got on to the plane
"battle you another day"said Matthew.e
"yeah"replied Michael,"you bet"
and with that the hawks got on to the plane to go to the next match of the world championships

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chapter 23:welcome to america
After many hours of flying The Hawks finally made it to there destination.
"welcome to america"said Michael
The Hawks looked at the landscape in front of them,there was GINORMOUS skyscrapers that looked like they touched the clouds,there were a ton of shops and fast food restaurants,The Hawks felt tiny compared to humongous city that surrounded them;it was a big change from there hometown in Britain and the small island of Bermuda
"WOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!"gasped The Hawks in amazement
"i wanna go shopping"
"i wanna go to the statue of liberty"
"i wanna go to the toilet"
"yes,yes we can do all that later but we need to think of a strategy"said Michael,"the american team are probably not gonna be easy".
But everyone had already gone,so Michael just caught up with them.After a long day of shopping and sight seeing The Hawks unpacked at the hotel
"wait we never found out about the American team"said Megan,"well done for not telling us Michael"
"I HAVE BEEN TELLING YOU THIS ALL DAY!"shouted Michael
"im joking"Megan replied,"you need to take a joke"
"you can talk"said Luck
"look the last thing we need is an argument"said BlackStar,"lets just unpack and then get dinner at the restaurant i hear the have cod,my favorite!"

After they had tea Michael,Matthew and Alexi went to bed feeling sick after having a gigantic ice cream eating contest,since everyone else had gone to bed BlackStar and Megan decided to go to bed too.

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chapter 24:an old acquaintance
The Hawks decided to train at the local beystadium,just then a beyblade landed into the stadium knocking out all the beys out
"huh? burn pegasus 100WD"said Michael in some sort of amazement,"i know that bey.................Daniel!"
The boy who launched the bey jumped down
"that's my name"replied Daniel,"dont wear it out"
Matthew,Luck and BlackStar looked excited they ran towards Daniel shouting stuff like
"Daniel!"
"long time no see"
"hey buddy whats up?"
"Michael who is that?"asked Megan
"he's Daniel"replied Michael,"he used to be part of The Hawks then he moved to America"
Michael didn't seem as excited as the others.He looked at Daniel like he was an enemy but he put on a fake smile and said
"Daniel i cant believe it how have you been?"
"great"replied Daniel,"what happened to Cyber?"
"oh it got destroyed nothing much"said Michael,"but now i have a great new one"
"lets battle then!"said Daniel enthusiastically
"oh you would like that wouldn't you YOU LITTLE TRAITOR!"shouted Michael angrily
"what do you mean?" Daniel asked
"you know what i mean"said Michael
"OH ARE YOU STILL ANNOYED ABOUT THAT DUDE YOU GOTTA LET GO OF THE PAST!"Daniel shouted
Daniel stormed off
"YOU LEAVING THE HAWKS WAS THE GREATEST THING THAT EVER HAPPENED TO US!"Michael shouted.
"why does Michael hate Daniel?"asked Megan
"its a long story"replied BlackStar.

Authors note: chapter 25 is why Michael hates Daniel
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chapter 25:the long story
The Hawks(original) were playing in the Bey park........as usual,all of them were cheering there beys on
"GO ARIES!"Luck shouted
"GO PHOENIX!"shouted BlackStar
"GO VIRGO!"Matthew shouted
"GO PEGASUS!"shouted Daniel
"GO CYBER!"Michael shouted
Cyber knocked out all the other beys
"YES I WIN!"shouted Michael
"hey guys i need to talk to you"said Daniel,"im moving".
The Hawks gasped
"MOVING? WHERE TO?"they asked
"America"Daniel replied
"well we're really gonna miss you"said Michael,"ugh i got to go have my dinner bye!"
"yeah i got to go do my homework"said Matthew
"i have to tidy my room"said Luck
"um i have to walk my dog" said BlackStar
"ok see ya"said Daniel
Michael and the others met at Michaels house
"ok guys we are gonna throw a MAJOR leaving party for him"said Michael.

after weeks of preparation the party was ready
"ok so i will call Daniel and you guys will hide"Michael explained 'bring'bring'
"hello"said Daniel
"Daniel meet us at the bey park"said Michael
Daniel came to a pitch black bey park than suddenly
"SURPRISE!"shouted The Hawks
"wow guys you held a surprise party for me?" said Daniel
Daniel saw a banner with a big line through the original message the original message was something like "HAPPY BIRTHDAY LUCK!"
the new message said "WE WILL MISS YOU DANIEL!"
Daniel looked at the hawks
"WHAT? we were low budget"said Michael
Daniel started laughing.At the end of the party Michael said to Daniel
"no matter where in the world you are you will still be part of The Hawks and you'd better write or else
Daniel laughed and said "yeah i will".
for the first few weeks The Hawks got frequent letters but as time pasted the letters came less and less and then they just stopped completely but one day The Hawks got a letter,it was a picture of Daniel with a new blading team behind it said "my new blading team "
"he has betrayed us"said Michael,throwing the letter in the bin.
And there you have it, that's why Michael hates Daniel.

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chapter 26: Mitch Kaizer
The Hawks decided to go to the skate park while they were there Megan asked BlackStar
"will Michael ever forgive Daniel?"
"hard to say"replied BlackStar,"he might one day, but one things for sure today is not that day"
this guy came up to The Hawks he was a bit taller than Michael he had crimson red hair,sapphire blue eyes that could look right through you (no not x ray vision sheesh!)
"hi"said the boy,"the names Mitch Kaizer and this is my bey claw panther!".
"this bey is extraordinary"said Blackstar," Claw is similar to Basalt, minus the chunk but is much thinner, it has small, thick claws protruding facing to the right, adding smash attack to this relativly defensive wheel. Panther is a clear wheel resembling Wolf,yeah wolf remember that?, exept is a dark blue and instead of wolf heads chasing each other, it is feline heads instead. MP150 is, essentially, a higer metal version of BD145, yet not nearly as wide and is hollow, decreasing the weight. MJB is a Metal Jog Ball producing more grip and rugged attack it AMAZING!"

Matthew had just got back from the bey combo shop (he found it while shopping with the others) he had a new bey Basalt Virgo 230 ES
"who wants to challenge ME and my upgraded bey?"Matthew asked
"I will"replied Mitch
"who invited Gingka Hagane here?"asked Matthew jokingly
"just battle me"said Mitch,a bit annoyed
"ok lets go!"said Matthew excitedly

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chapter 27:Matthew vs Mitch

“3!”
“2!”
“1!”
“Go SHOOT!”
"GO VIRGO!" shouted Matthew,cocky as ever
"go panther"said Mitch
"GO VIRGO CYCLONE!"Matthew shouted
Virgos cyclone move seemed way more aggressive than usual,but Mitch seemed pretty cool about it
"Daniel told me about this"Mitch said under his breath,"PANTHER SPECIAL MOVE MYSTERIOUS CLAWS OF DEATH!"
and in a flash the cyclone was gone and virgo had lost a lot of spin but then it got balance again
"you think i dont have a backup plan?"asked Matthew,"SPECIAL MOVE VIRGO HAMMER!"
then virgo tilted down so far the metal wheel was just millimeters away from the ground then it started turning around so fast it looked like one massive bey then when moved over Virgo to Panther,Panther got smashed into the wall stopping its rotation,Mathew had won
"YEAH! my bey is even better than before i will own everyone that come in my way great job Virgo"Matthew said happily
"well i must be going"said Mitch,"see ya"

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chapter 28:return of an old friend
The hawks were watching a movie at there hotel,when somebody knocked at the door
"who is it?"asked Megan
"dont they know we are about to watch scooby doo the movie"said Matthew
"ok,ok im answering it"snapped Michael
Michael was shocked at what he saw
"we need your help"said..................Callum
all of the eagles were there well almost all of them Ryan was missing
"wheres Ryan?"asked Blackstar
"well that's why we need your help well we need lucks help"replied Callum
"what do you want?"asked luck
"remember when Ryans l drago absorbed the darkness,well a couple of days ago it took him over"replied Tyron
"what can i do though?"asked Luck
"what did you do last time?"asked Callum
Luck tried to remember but he just couldn't,it was like there was a mental block trying to stop him remembering
"i....i cant remember"replied Luck

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Hmm pretty good, are you going to make more chapters?

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What am I doing again?

Hmm pretty good, are you going to make more chapters?

yeah

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good so far, can't wait to read more XD

This story.
It is terrible.
Terrible grammar, terrible plot...
And Y U NO USE PROPER PARAGRAPH FORAMT [/endrage]
and main character is typical marysue.
With no actual paragraph length.

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This story.
It is terrible.
Terrible grammar, terrible plot...
And Y U NO USE PROPER PARAGRAPH FORAMT [/endrage]
and main character is typical marysue.
With no actual paragraph length.

do you know what i want to be when i am older an author, its people like you who make people feel rubbish.

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~X~ : I'd advise you to be more tactful on your criticism. Positive criticisms work better most of the time.

Your stories are good.
Best of luck for the next.

~X~ : I'd advise you to be more tactful on your criticism. Positive criticisms work better most of the time.

Well, but he is correct. This story is really, really bad.

The lines stick together.
No real main plot.
Too short.
Wrong grammar usage.
That's deadly for a story.

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New story :
http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Yoku-s-s...ary-Hereos

I didn't say that he should not have criticized, nor that his critics wrong. I simply said, "be tactful"

~X~ : I'd advise you to be more tactful on your criticism. Positive criticisms work better most of the time.

Well, but he is correct. This story is really, really bad.

The lines stick together.
No real main plot.
Too short.
Wrong grammar usage.
That's deadly for a story.

thanks T_T

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you know what i am going to ignore you people who say this is bad, try and make a story yourself!,I thout people here would be more friendly

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Well, I have made a story here.
But in all seriousness, I'm trying to help you out.
No one wants another carpy story around here... So try to improve, and make sure you use the grammar (why am I still on this subject).
And I am sorry if I hurt your feelings... just try to make better plot, grammar, etc. And character development! Never forget that!

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~X

note:the hawks vs eagles battles they will be shorter chapters than before.

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if you have any ideas for this tell me and i will use them

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does anyone want to be in this story?

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Okay, so, there are a couple of problems with your story.

The main problems are bolded, and general suggestions are in red. Everything else is much more detailed, so please, if you can, read all of it

Formatting Problems:
Right off the bat, I noticed something off. Where are your capital letters? Not only that, but there are spelling mistakes galore. Writing your story in Microsoft Word and then copy-pasting it here would help loads, and it would (mostly) correct these problems. Another major problem: punctuation. Missing apostrophes, invisible commas, and nonexistent periods. The title of the story itself has an error (Blader's, with an apostrophe). Really, the only way to fix this is to get a better understanding of punctuation itself. It's really something you just have to know. Third problem; grammar. "You done pretty good" doesn't make sense at all (unless your character speaks with some sort of dialect of English, which I wouldn't recommend you do yet). The correct way would be, "You did well". Fixing this problem is a simple matter of paying more attention in grammar/English courses at school, because Word will rarely ever do the trick.

Story/Plot Problems:
The characters have no personality, or they're all just really bland people. Regardless, it's not good. Your main character's personality is key to the story. Will you make him a skilled, cocky, jerk? Or maybe the friendly jokester? Set one personality for each character, and stick to it. Things they say, their actions, their thoughts; these should all reflect on that one personality. To help with this, think about your friend. How do they act? Do they constantly try to make you laugh? Are they short-tempered? If so, think about how they would react to situations. Maybe your quiet, kindhearted friend would take a loss as nothing more than a loss. Maybe your athletic friend would boast at their victories. Reflect these things in your characters.

Please, consider these. And yes, I have written a story before, and have been since an early age. I bet with these you'll be improving at the speed of light!

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i hope i have corrected my mistakes,thank you for the feedback.

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BUMP!

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I wanna be in this story I wanna use Thunder Lacerta WA130ES

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With the special move Thunder Scale Killer Shock.It shoots the foe flying and Lacerta fiercely rams into the foe sideways with all of its might,causing the foes bey to snap in half,never to be repaired.I never EVER lose.

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I want to be a cool,and sexy person.(If it says carp I mean s e x y with no spaces)That is what I want my personality to be.

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I wanna be in this story I wanna use Thunder Lacerta WA130ES

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With the special move Thunder Scale Killer Shock.It shoots the foe flying and Lacerta fiercely rams into the foe sideways with all of its might,causing the foes bey to snap in half,never to be repaired.I never EVER lose.

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I want to be a cool,and sexy person.(If it says carp I mean s e x y with no spaces)That is what I want my personality to be.

you cant ALWAYS win nobodys that good

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Ok can I win MOST of the time not ALL of the time?

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I don't think you should accept that request.
Why?
It's a typical Mary-Sue.
If you do take it, take the name and bey, nothing else. Because then it's your character more then his and you can do whatever you want with him.

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~X

@ JayRoss899, LOL you couldnt be one of the main characters, it's too far in, and too be the things you want to, you've got to be a main character, so basicly, WRITE YOUR OWN FRICKIN' STORY

Can I be in it?
Can I have Blitz Dragonis F.
When you first meet my character can he say "The name's S, Blader-S"?
and can he act evil but he's kind in his heart.
(This is a requeast its your choice if you say yes or no)

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"Last night I lay in bed looking up at the stars in the sky and I thought to myself, where the heck is the ceiling."

Can I be in it?
Can I have Blitz Dragonis F.
When you first meet my character can he say "The name's S, Blader-S"?
and can he act evil but he's kind in his heart.
(This is a requeast its your choice if you say yes or no)

okay are you from the usa? if so you could be in the usa team

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