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The Beyblade World Tournament!

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Apr. 04, 2011  3:29 AM
 
hey Im back and ready to start up with the story! can some one get me up to speed on whats happened so far???
Apr. 04, 2011  3:46 AM
 
They have been accepted as a World Team. They are named Team Overdrive. They found an awesome HQ.
EVERYONE! SORRY I KEPT ALL OF YOU WAITING. I AM CURRENTLY WRITING THE NEW CHAPTER. OH AND CLONETOS..I WAS REFERRING TO BEYFREAKERS' CHARACTERS. I NEED DETAILS ON THE MOVES BEYFREAKERS.
Apr. 04, 2011  11:59 AM
 
I have a character request!
Name: Nouwah (Say Nowvai)

Bey: Hydra Colossus GB105 (Gravity Ball 105) XMF (eXtreme Metal Flat)

Look Of the bey: just like l-drago destroy the plastic wheel is underneath the metal wheel
extremely much attack power hard to balance out and stadium out.
Very heavy for an attack type.

Face is like ldrago's but the face color is very light blue and the the normal head of ldrago is green
and with the fond of virgo stands on the face Hydra.

Plastic wheel looks like serpent plastic wheel but its light green

Metal wheel looks like the devil wheel ( from beyblade wii game and DS)
but its blue and way wider and higher.

The track looks like WA130 but there are 2 magnets inside that let the track spin Omni-Directonal

Tip looks like the one of Screw Capricorne but way wider.

Look of the blader: Talks very much very energetic but smart good in math red jacket with a blue tie and jogging pants brown down hanging hair
deep blue eyes has a string launcher with grip no beypointer

story behind the beyblade: He is Irish when he was 7 he was playing at a lake in less then a second he was pulled underwater by tentacles a liitle time later he was struggling for air then his eyes shut
when opened his eyes he was on dry land he thougth it was a daydream but next to him there a bey very slow spinning with the bitbeast of a almost dead hydra next to him he yelled Bison Balls! because he was scared.
since then he never ever go's back to any lake and since then he has a bey Hydra Colossus.

Age of the beyblader: 13
Gender: male
special moves of the bey: Hydra Dive the bey jumps up gets a green glow and dives right into an opponent.
Colossal Bite: uot of nowhere trhe hydra jump out and slam and bite the other bitbeast/bey
The Flow Of The Hydra: The bey spins very fast around the bey stadium creates giant waves that destroy the other bey.
The End
Apr. 10, 2011  4:14 AM
 
Hi everyone! I am back. I've been to HongKong. I'll be posting the chapter for a while.
Apr. 10, 2011  4:28 AM
 
(Apr. 10, 2011  4:14 AM)BeybladerPotter Wrote: Hi everyone! I am back. I've been to HongKong. I'll be posting the chapter for a while.

time for the Egg man to get some actiona dn the Walran to knock some people OUT!
Apr. 10, 2011  4:29 AM
 
yaa
Apr. 11, 2011  12:40 PM
 
Sorry for the wait!
Here is Chapter 8 Part 1!
(Oh and Beyfreakers, the world tournament is coming if you don't submit details about the attacks, they won't be in the story.) I NEED CHARACTERS! THERE IS NO TEAM THAT HAS 5 MEMBERS YET! PLEASE REQUEST! UNTIL THEN THERE WILL BE NO TOURNAMENT!

One week before the world tournament...
Sato annouced to the team...."Everyone! We've trained for weeks. We conquered our weaknesses and strengthen our skills. We mastered new abilities, techniques and strategies. But the most important of all...We now have TEAMWORK!"
"It is one week before the tournament..Use this time to rest and relax! Also pack your things. Everyone! See you all next week and...Good luck!"
The team went to their homes except for Shuu, Sato and Mattias who remained in the HQ.
Hiroki went fishing, one of his favorite hobbies. Wolf watched a baseball game. Venkash went to a temple to pray for the team. In fact, everyone was. During the week, they didn't think about Beyblades and the World Tournament so that they can rest their minds.

After one week....Team Overdrive gathered in the HQ. They went to the airport to take the airplane going to the gathering of the world teams.
After a 2-hour ride....

"Wow!!!! This place is BIG!!" shouted Shuu. "Yup! Let us head out to the coliseum!" said Sato. When they arrived, they saw teams all around the world. Team Egypt, Team America, Team Korea, Team Africa, Team China and Team Australia.
"Hm..They're not here..." said Mattias. "Who?" asked Hiroki. "Him of course!" growled Mattias.
"He is referring to Team ShadowKlan and his brother Curtis yo!" whispered Sato to Hiroki. "Oh..Sorry..It slipped off my mind." apologized Hiroki.
Then suddenly, a BOOM was heard inside the coliseum. All of the Bladers turned their attention to where the BOOM was heard. Then Blader DJ appeared from the place where the sound was heard.
"That was one heck of an entrance!" whispered Hiroki.
The crowd clapped loudly and cheered: "BEYBLADE! BEYBLADE! BEYBLADE!"
"Now that I'm here...I declare the world tournament.....OPEN!!!!!!!" shouted Blader DJ.
The crowd screamed so loud that it was ear-piercing.
"Now to announce the teams..." said Blader DJ.

End.
I can't really make Blader DJ announce the teams because he will announce the members too.
If Beyfreakers doesn't want to give attack descriptions..I'll make them as team members of the teams which will not be battling Team Overdrive. Teams that will be battling the teams that will battle Team Overdrive.
Pretty confusing eh?
Apr. 11, 2011  12:54 PM
 
what could be the turn out of this story?oh,and whats the team of the main char?team philipines?
Apr. 11, 2011  1:01 PM
 
Team Overdrive. Team Japan. I have decided to make it Japan because I really like to help Japan right now.
Apr. 11, 2011  2:40 PM
 
oh,nevermind
Apr. 11, 2011  3:03 PM
 
Mind adding some characters from my story into you story?
Apr. 12, 2011  12:31 AM
 
Characters for ShadowKlan
1st:Hakori Gamaro (Female)
BeyTongue_outoison Gasher C145WD(Defense,Right Spin)
Age:12
Character DescriptionConfusedtrong Blader very silly and funny
Special Move:Nuclear Iron Shell Defense
(The bey Becomes an immoveable wall unable to be hit by a stadium out like hit)

2nd Dr.Pyro (Male)
Bey:Flame Horuseus T125MS(Stamina,Right Spin)
Age:29
Character DescriptionConfusedtrong blader,very serious,father of Hakori and former pyrotecnics specialist
Special Move:Rainbow Falcon Destruction
(the bey stays in the center then creates a rainbow like spark effect until hitting the other bey out)

I HOPE THERE GOOD
Apr. 12, 2011  4:27 AM
 
Meteo LDrago: Sure!
@G.Cancer90R2F: Great help! Your characters are a great help for the world teams. You have submitted 3 characters. Smile. Thanks a lot!
EDIT: Four characters. My mistake.
Apr. 12, 2011  6:16 AM
 
can i please have my character in the story
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Apr. 12, 2011  6:42 AM
 
Ok. I already put.
EDIT: PLEASE I NEED CHARACTER REQUESTS! I NEED ONE MORE MEMBER FOR TEAM CHINA! SOMEONE REQUEST SO THAT I CAN START ON THE WORLD TOURNAMENT!
Apr. 13, 2011  12:51 AM
 
Ok here it is 4 team china
Name:Chi-Lou Young (Male)
Bey:Hyper Leone 90MF
Age:11
Character DescriptionConfusedtrong Blader but a litte slacker
Special Move:Hyper Lion Fang Slash
(A simple fast moving strike out of stadium)
Hope its good
O and thanx
Apr. 13, 2011  2:33 AM
 
hey! Im back dude!
send me up the outline and lets get goin on the chapters "lets call them Episodes from now on - sounds cooler!)
DUDE! my friend in Japan has pre-ordered me an L-Drago Destroy FConfused at his local Toys R Us for my BIRTHDAY ON MAY4TH!!! Grin Im turning 15!!! I CANT WAIT!!
Apr. 13, 2011  6:46 AM
 
@M.Cancer90RF: Thnks! I will be working on the "episodes" when i get back from my guitar lessons later.
KoolCatCurtis: Hi dude! Welcome back! Lets start this...
Apr. 13, 2011  6:52 AM
 
let's see what's the outcome of this...............
Apr. 13, 2011  11:34 AM
 
when youill post story.
Apr. 13, 2011  11:42 AM
 
Now...Just wait..Oh and guys, I will just create characters to supply missing spaces in the teams
Apr. 13, 2011  12:44 PM
 
“Episode” 8 Part 2 is here! Sorry for the wait guys!
“Now let me announce the team members!!!” shouted Blader DJ.
“Coming from the land of the rising sun (Japan) …...is Team Overdrive!! The members are Shuu Fujimoto, Hiroki Miyamoto, Mattias Joe, Wolf and Venkash Hitwari! Great job guys! Have rising results!”
“Coming from Canada…is Team ShadowKlan! Although they are not here, I will still announce their team members. The members are Curtis Joe, Phantom, Tazora, Hakori and Dr.Pyro! Gee, those are scary names!” announced Blader DJ.
“Coming from the hot desert…..is Team Pyramid (Egypt)! The members are William Eggbert, Yoshi, Andrew, Nouwah and Adam! Good luck to you guys! You have gone a long way to get here!”
“This team is from the U.S.A…..Team Starbreakers (America)!! The members are Kazu, Tyson, Drew, Bob and Emily! You have the support of your nation!
“This team is from China….Team Dragon (China)!!! The members are Chi-Lou Young, Dark Mage, Shao Pi, Blade and Nick! Hope you a dragon-tastic luck!”
After a while..Blader DJ has announced all the other teams.
“That is it for today! Rest and prepare for tomorrow because Battles start tomorrow!!!!” said Blader DJ.
The next day…..
The teams looked at which teams they will be battling with…
“Hmm…..Seems like we are going to battle with China the next day.”
Because they’re battle is still for tomorrow, they just watched the other teams battle. They watched to have a glimpse and have a strategy ready for the other teams.
After the day when they were about to sleep….
“Hmm….Team Pyramid won against Team Korea, Team ShadowKlan won against Team Africa.” Said Shuu.
“The only teams who haven’t battled yet is us, Team Starbreakers, Team China and Team Australia..” added Wolf.
The team slept peacefully..

Sorry if it is short, it is nighttime here and we are going out. My nanny makes me hurry up so yeah, wait till tomorrow!
Apr. 13, 2011  1:30 PM
 
ohhhh,lets see who will win this!
Apr. 13, 2011  1:45 PM
 
This story is awesome! Agree with Ventus... Cant wait for the next chapter.
Apr. 13, 2011  10:30 PM
 
dont worry its still G.cancer but i had a username change
Hey look i made 100th post
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