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Mar. 23, 2011  7:03 AM
 
From reading stories around the forum, I decided to make my first beyblade story. I AM ACCEPTING CHARACTER REQUESTS!

One Saturday morning.....
"Big bro.....Big bro wake up!!!!" said ???. "Uh..Come on Sato. It is Saturday. Can't I just sleep in peace?" said ???. "But Shuu, I thought you were going to BeyPark!" said Sato. From hearing this, Shuu hurriedly put on his clothes. "Gah! I can't find my Kinetic Tiger!" said Shuu. Shuu heard his little brother Sato sigh. "Big bro! Here's your bey!" said Sato.
"Thanks!" said Shuu while running towards the door. "Bye Big Bro! Have fun!" Sato shouted. Shuu waved goodbye to Sato too. Now in BeyPark, Shuu sits on a park bench thinking about the day he got Kinetic Tiger. It was 3 years ago... "Shuu! Shuu!" said Shuu's father. "Coming!" Shuu shouted. "Why father? Why did you call me?" asked Shuu.
"Come closer." said Shuu's father. Shuu came closer and his dad was holding something in his hand. "Shuu ,my company has been working on a new line of toys called Beyblades" said Shuu's father excitedly while giving Shuu the beyblade his dad was holding. "Starting today, this beyblade, Kinetic Tiger, will be your partner. Treat it nicely." said Shuu's father.
After that day, Shuu trained hard everyday with his new partner. But one day....when he got home from training..... "Father! Where are you going?" asked Shuu. "I'm sorry Shuu but I can't tell you" said Shuu's father. "But I'll tell you this I won't be back very soon." "Father! Where are you going?" cried Shuu. Shuu's dad opened the door and said: "I promise I will be back son! Just promise me you will continue training ok?".
"I promise Father!!!!" shouted Shuu. That was the last time he ever saw his father though. But he remembered his last words and that was to train hard and he did exactly the same. He trained for 3 years and now he is the champion of the city.
"Father...I hope you are proud of me.." said Shuu to himself. He got up from the chair and walked towards the BeyStadium. He saw a white stadium and a kid waiting for an opponent. "Hey kid! Mind if I join you?" asked Shuu. "Sure thing." said the kid. "Ok! Lets do this Kinetic Tiger" said Shuu. "3..2..1..Go Shoot!" shouted Shuu and the kid. The kid's bey was Typhoon Turtle. Turtle and Tiger was rapidly striking each other. "Lets finish this Tiger! Go! Kinetic Shredder!" shouted Shuu. "Go Turtle! Finish it with Final Blast!" shouted the kid. The two beys clashed fiercely causing a huge explosion. When the smoke cleared, both Shuu and the kid's beys were not spinning. It was a tie. "I never had a battle so intense before!" exclaimed Shuu. "What's your name kid?" asked Shuu "My name is Hiroki! Hiroki Miyamoto! Nice to meet you!" said Hiroki "Nice to meet you too. I'm Shuu Fujimoto! You're a good blader! I hope we can be good friends" said Shuu. "You too Shuu! You are a great blader! There is a tournament tomorrow! Wanna come?" asked Hiroki. "Sure! I'll come! What time is it? asked Shuu "Same time! Bye Shuu!" shouted Hiroki. "Bye! See you tomorrow" shouted Shuu while waving goodbye to his new friend.
Mar. 23, 2011  10:36 AM
 
Character Info:
Shuu Fujimoto

Kinetic Tiger 90RSF

Bey Description: The facebolt depicts a tiger. The clear wheel is green and has a design that shows the fangs of a tiger. The Kinetic fusion wheel is like the Rock fusion wheel but the edges are spiked.

Special Move: Kinetic Shredder- Kinetic Dragon will charge towards the opponent's bey and then Kinetic Dragon, using the spikes on the metal wheel, will shred the opposing bey's metal wheel causing a lot of damage and loss of spin.

Character Description: Shuu always wears a chinese-styled black jacket with a yellow japanese-styled shirt. He also wears a wristband on his right hand. (The wristband is heavy.) His pants are black jogging pants and his shoes are yellow with blue stripes. His hair is like Super Saiyan Goku's hair only black with some streaks of yellow. He is generous and overconfident in his abilities but is a great blader to back it up.
Character Info:
Hiroki Miyamoto

Typhoon Turtle 85R2F

Bey Description: The facebolt depicts a turtle. The clear wheel is aqua and has a design that shows the shell of a turtle. The Typhoon is left-spin metal wheel and has a shape useful for attack. It has no recoil. It also has spikes.

Special Move: Final Blast - Typhoon Turtle will charge towards the opponent's bey in full speed and hit it with full power causing a massive explosion.

Character Description:Hiroki always wears a blue jacket and a yellow-japanese styled shirt. He wears grey jogging pants and white sneakers with red lines. His hair is like Yugi's hair but a little bit shorter and is color black. His personality is like Ginga's and has an alter ego whose personality is like Sasuke. He is kind and confident in his skills.
Mar. 23, 2011  12:10 PM
 
Nice story so far kinda like mine but yeeeaah lol
Here you go a character ^^
Name:Wolf
Bey: Metalic Wolfaien C145ST (ST=Sharp Tip) Stamina
Move: Metal Pounce - Bey charges at you using the claws it has to become longer starts to pounce on the other bey still it bounces (Stadium Out) or lose spin.
Personality: Has Red hair with some black hair to, Wears Blue jacket Black pants Black shoes. He doesn't talk to much. He only cares to beybattle friends family. He is overconfident most of the time. He is kind till you make him mad then he goes berserk and gets a new move ...
Berserk (only when mad use this) Metalic Upper Slash - bey leans forward to hit the spin track lifts bey in the air and jumps up to slash the bey with its extended claws.
Mar. 23, 2011  12:24 PM
 
Thanks! He will be in the next chapter when more people sends requests. Anyway your character will get a sure spot in the next chapter.
Mar. 23, 2011  1:27 PM
 
Here's a character.
Name: Dr.Rasa
Bey: Assault Fox B130XRF (Burn 130 Extreme Rubber Flat)
Moves: Interceptor- Assault Fox splits into two, revealing two beys. Firefight- B130 ignites, setting everywhere it goes on fire.
Look: Usually wears a long,thin black windbreaker along with cargo pants. He usually wears aviator sunglasses wherever he goes.
Side: Evil
Mar. 23, 2011  1:33 PM
 
Nice one!

Name:kazu terekuna
bey:ultimate pegasis ed145rf
bey description:the metal wheel looks like storm,but instead of three wings,it has four.the color is gold,with a writting "ultimate"on each wing
personality:kazu is very loving to his bey.he cleans,keep,and fix his bey.he really is a nice person.
Oh moves:gattyaki tornado(bey jumps in the air and performs gattyaki,but with tornados)
Mar. 23, 2011  2:30 PM
 
Ok! Here is Chapter 2...
When Shuu was walking home he heard a loud scream "Big bro!! Help me!!!" "That must be Sato" though Shuu.
Shuu ran towards their house fast and there he saw the house destroyed. "What happened Sato?" asked Shuu
"*sniff* *sniff* B...B...Big Bro!! There was a man who attacked me." cried Sato "He said his name was Dr. Rasa and he wore a long,thin black windbreaker along with cargo pants." "Good thing this kid showed up in time"
"*breathe* *breathe* Whew! That was one strong blader!" said a voice. The shadow of the kid came closer to Shuu. "Who are you? Name's Shuu Fujimoto. Well...Anyway thanks for saving my bro" said Shuu gratefully. "My name is Wolf. Nice to meet you Shuu." said Wolf. After helping Sato calm down, they talked about this Dr. Rasa's Bey. "From what I know that Bey should be Assault Fox B130XRF" said Wolf. "Yeah! It was pretty strong too." commented Sato. Shuu thought to himself "What does this Rasa guy have with us? Causing so much destruction with a bey...Wolf's Bey must be a pretty strong one too...." "Say....Wolf, can I have a look at your bey?" asked Shuu "Sure thing!" said Wolf. While Sato and Wolf were chatting about what happened, Shuu examined Wolf's bey. "Hmm....By the looks of it, it seems like a Metalic Wolfaien C145ST to me" Shuu thought.
"Here you go Wolf!" said Shuu while giving Wolf his Metalic Wolfaien. "I've decided Wolf! I want to battle you!" said Shuu happily. "Sure! I've also been thinking about it too" Wolf said. "I can be your referee if you guys want." suggested Sato. "Okay!" the other two said. The three of them walked to BeyPark. When they got there, they found a vacant BeyStadium, "Just in time!" exclaimed Shuu. "Alright! Let the battle begin!" shouted Sato.
"3...2...1...Go Shoot!!!" Wolf and Shuu launched their Beys. "Go Tiger!" "Go Wolfaien!" Kinetic Tiger and Metalic Wolfaien clashed fiercely. "Go Wolfaien! Circle the stadium!" ordered Wolf. Wolfaien is now circling the stadium. "Wolfaien stop! Now go Metal Pounce!" shouted Wolf. Wolfaien charge towards Tiger fast. "Gah! I gotta think fast." thought Shuu. An idea popped up in Shuu's brain. "Aha! Go Tiger! Kinetic Shredder!" shouted Shuu. The two Beys use their special moves then clashed so hard that it caused an massive explosion. When the smoke cleared..."*cough* *cough* Did I win?" asked Shuu. Shuu and Wolf looked at the stadium and saw Wolf spinning but Tiger isn't. "Well I guess you won Wolf!" said Shuu. "You're pretty good too Shuu!" exclaimed Wolf. "Nice battle you guys." said Sato. It was getting dark. "Umm..Wolf, can I ask you something?" asked Shuu. "Sure!" said Wolf. "Umm..Since our house is destroyed and completely useless..Can we spend the night at your house?" asked Shuu shyly. "Sure why not!" answered Wolf. "Yay! Me and Big bro has a place to spend the night." said Sato happily. The trio walked to Wolf's house and spent the night there. They were talking about Beyblade and the thing they like. After that day, Wolf, Shuu and Sato knew each other better.
(Mar. 23, 2011  1:33 PM)bigbangpegasis9 Wrote: Nice one!

Name:kazu terekuna
bey:ultimate pegasis ed145rf
bey description:the metal wheel looks like storm,but instead of three wings,it has four.the color is gold,with a writting "ultimate"on each wing
personality:kazu is very loving to his bey.he cleans,keep,and fix his bey.he really is a nice person.
Oh moves:gattyaki tornado(bey jumps in the air and performs gattyaki,but with tornados)
Oh I'm sorry bigbangpegasis9 when I checked back in this thread I got another request so I decided to do chapter 2 im sorry I will put your character in the next chapter. Oh and do you mind if I make the move Hurricane Gattyaki? If you do mind its okay i'll just put Gattyaki Tornado
Mar. 23, 2011  2:53 PM
 
name-venkash hitwari
bey- mighty galaxy dranzer
bey description-looks like ray unicorn wheel and had red colour and metal flat tip and low spin track.
venkash description- army t-shirt andis a captain of world best bladers team and handsome .he had army t-shirt,jeans pant with beyblade holder and belt with dranzor symbol and red cap with hand bands on two sides and finger bands.
special moves-blazing gigs,fire and water boosters watertyphoon,typhoon with whole power of galaxy.
side-hero as captain formed with shuu and wolf and others.
Mar. 23, 2011  10:38 PM
 
Character: Curtis Joe, The Leader of the Canadian WBBA Representative Team "ShadowKlan"
Bey: Revenge Nemesis XT140EXF (Extreme Typhoon 140 Eternal Extreme Flat)
Special Attack/Move: Vengeance OverDrive

Description: Curtis always has a New Era Cap on either backwards or wearing it front/normal (in battle, when he wears the cap forward it means Nemesis is in a stamina/calm form - when he twists the cap back he flies into a rage and Nemesis goes into attack form and obliterates the other Blader's bey)
Always wearing a black jacket (either a leather skin-tight one, or a black vested hoodie), Skinny Jeans, and Skate Shoes
His Bey Spirit is VERY strong matching Gingka's - he has a long history with Revenge Nemesis like Gingka has with his beloved Pegasis

Revenge Nemesis has two clear wheels (this is going to be a 4D Bey) one underneath that holds the upper one in place because the upper clear wheel moves in a fan-like fashion (free spinning) so that if a bey tries to attack from above, the clear wheel's blades would slice it up or create strong winds higher so the other bey would be blown away. The Metal Wheel has an outer ring of long blades stretching out like a spiders arms going out or a starfish's legs curling out. The inner Metal Wheel stays stationary because the other metal is free spinning. The spin track (Extreme Typhoon 140) is made up of many sharp blades that push wind up when spinning, making the upper clear wheel spin even faster. The tip would be EXF - Eternal Extreme Flat (making it a defense/stamina AND Attack Bey) Oh yeah, the whole bey is pretty much clear - the "metal" wheel being made up of strong crystals and everything else clear as in to camouflage in with the stadium, until the "Revenge" strikes the other bey and it's all over for the other Blader.

I dont know where curtis will fit in but I just want to see him in a cool storyline Smile Im really anxious to see how this whole story will fit together
Character: Mattias Joe (brother of Curtis)
Beyblade: Tempest Leviathan VF135WHF (Vacuum Force 135 Wide Hole Flat)
Special Attack: Behemoth Tsunami Extermination

Mattias is the younger brother of Curtis - and instead of being close to his brother they are rivals. Always competing against each other at every match (with Curtis usually ending up as the victor). Both of their Beys, Nemesis and Leviathan, are legendary - they discovered them while they were hiking in the Himalayas. They had been camping in a cave and they saw murals of Beyblades. They got curious and started chipping away carefully at the stones trying to free some of the anciant paintings from the walls to take back with them as souvenirs of their trip. Instead, after chipping away, some of the stones fell out, revealing words that they could understand: "Legendary Beys. Only wield if powerful enough or strong enough willpower." Of course Mattias and Curtis took their pick. There were 4 More (Titan Kronos, Hunger Typhon, Illusion Calypso, and Crescent Artemis). They brough back all the legendary Beys so their closest friends who Bladed could feel the power - of course, none of the others could match Nemesis' or Leviathan's power but they were still more powerful than any other beys on the planet. Curtis' mission was to set out for the origin of the legendary Beys - Mattias went the opposite direction and started competing for his own selfish reason. Curtis and his friends (who had the 4 other beys) found out that the 6 Legendary beys had fallen from the sky and got embedded in the Himalayas for millions of years. They went to Dr Rasa to examine the new Beys. Dr Rasa explained that the Beys weren't ready for battle and had to be modified from their old form - Mattias had already been there so Dr Rasa already knew how to update the ancient beys to modern, ultimate form. After the modifications, the Beys were unstoppable - 2 layers of metal intertwined with 2 clear wheels - Nemesis had a 2-part spin track making it superior.
From that moment on Curtis and his friends battled on in Canada until finally making it to the top as the best team in Canada. TEAM SHADOWKLAN WAS BORN!
Mar. 23, 2011  11:39 PM
 
Dr Rasa is the manager of team ShadowKlan - kinda of like Doji was to Ryugo or how Dr. Zigguratt is to the Starbreakers

so Yeah I guess for this story ShadowKlan is on Dr Rasa's (the bad) side

hey I have an idea or suggestion (u dont have to take it) Mattias could team up with Sato, Shuu and Wolf (maybe make their OWN beyblade team!) against his brother, Dr Rasa and Team ShadowKlan Grin
THIS IS GOING TO BE THE SICKEST STORY EVER - ID PRINT IT OUT AND READ IT OVER N OVER
Mar. 24, 2011  4:46 AM
 
Thanks for the character requests everyone they will all be in this chapter
Here is Chapter 3: Part 1 ... (Note: Chapter 3 will be split in to two parts this and the other one later because it might be too long)

Shuu, Sato and Wolf got up early this morning. The trio put on their clothes and ate breakfast.
"Say..Shuu..Where are we going today?" asked Wolf. "Yeah Big bro! Where are we going?" asked Sato.
"We are going to BeyPark! There a huge tournament there today!" said Shuu excitedly. "Woohoo! My first tournament! Can I join Shuu?" asked Wolf. "Sure! Why not! You're a good Blader! I'm sure you'll do well!" answered Shuu. And with that decided, the trio walked to BeyPark.....

"Hey Shuu! Shuu! Over here!" shouted a familiar voice. "Hey Hiroki!" shouted Shuu. "Who is that person Shuu?" asked Wolf. " "Oh yeah! I forgot to introduce you to Hiroki Miyamoto. He is a Blader I battled yesterday here in BeyPark too." answered Shuu. "Hi Hiroki! Nice to meet 'ya! I'm Wolf! I'm also Shuu's friend!" greeted Wolf. "And I'm Sato Fujimoto! Shuu's little brother! Nice to meet you Hiroki!." said Sato. "Nice to meet you too Wolf and Sato! I hope we can all be good friends!" said Hiroki.

"Now it's time to start the tournament! 3...2...1...Go Shoot!" announced Blader DJ. Now everyone including Hiroki, Shuu and Wolf looked at their respective blocks. "Okay guys I'm in Block A!" said Shuu. "I'm in Block D said Hiroki. "Well..I'm in Block C." said Wolf "Okay guys! Let's go to our respective blocks." ordered Shuu.
"Block A Bladers get ready!" announced Blader DJ. After a lot of battles..."The winner of the A Block is.....Shuu Fujimoto!!!" annouced Blader DJ. "Now that we have a winner for Block A, Block B Bladers get ready!!" said Blader DJ. Shuu returned to the place where Sato, Wolf and Hiroki were. "Nice battles Shuu!" said Wolf. "Yeah! I knew you would totally dominate Block A." commented Hiroki. "Good job Big bro!" said Sato. "Thanks guys!" thanked Shuu. While the heroes were chatting, Blader DJ has announced the Block B winner. "The winner in Block B is.....Kazu Terekuna!" announced Blader DJ. "Hmm...So that's my opponent in the semifinals..." thought Shuu. "Bladers in Block C!! Get ready!" announced Blader DJ. "Guess it's my turn!" said Wolf. After a lot of battles....."We have a winner!!! Wolf!!" announced Blader DJ. Wolf also returned to the place where the gang was. "Good battles!" they all commented. "It's my turn!" said Hiroki. Again, after a lot of battles...."Hiroki is the winner!" announced Hiroki. "Well Wolf...I guess you and I will battle in the semifinals!" said Hiroki. "Yeah! Hope we have a good battle!" said Wolf. The semifinalists were decided.." So let me announce the semifinalists!!!!!!" shouted Blader DJ "On Block A is Shuu Fuijimoto!!" "On Block B.. Kazu Terekuna!!" "You two will be battling for a spot in the finals." "On Block C..Wolf!!" "On Block D...Hiroki Miyamoto!!" "You two will be battling for a spot in the finals." "Lets start with Shuu Fujimoto versus Kazu Terekuna!!" announced Blader DJ. "3...2...1...Go Shoot!!" Kinetic Tiger and Kazu's Bey was launched in the BeyStadium. Kinetic Tiger was attacking Kazu's Bey pretty strong. "Hahaha..You fell into my trap! Go Ultimate Pegasis! Gattyaki Tornado!!" shouted Kazu. Then suddenly huge tornadoes were swirling around the stadium. "Bwahaha! This is my ultimate defense! No one has ever got through my tornadoes!" Kazu exclaimed. "Oh yeah! Then I will be the first one to get through them!" shouted Shuu. "Hmm..What if.." thought Shuu. Yesterday.."Big bro! I heard this move called Dynamic Smash! It was used by a professional Blader in the World Tournament!" said Sato. "He said that in order to use this move, your Bey must be high up in the air so that when you dive down to your opponent's Bey you can inflict a lot of damage. The effect will either make the opponent's Bey lose a lot of spin or insta-KO it.
"Go Kinetic Tiger!! Jump up to the air by using the tornadoes!!" ordered Shuu. Kinetic Tiger was now high up in the air. "Find Ultimate Pegasis" ordered Shuu. Kinetic Tiger was searching the BeyStadium and finally saw Ultimate Pegasis. "Smash it Kinetic Tiger! Dynamic Smash!!!" said Shuu. Kinetic Tiger dived into the ground and hit Ultimate Pegasis hard causing it lose a lot of spin. "B..B..But how? How did you get through my tornadoes?" asked Kazu. "Lets finish this Kinetic Tiger!! Kinetic Shredder!!" said Shuu. Kinetic Tiger charged towards Ultimate Pegasis at full speed and knocked it out of the stadium. "And the winner is.....Shuu!!!" Blader DJ announced. "Good job Shuu!" said Wolf. "I guess it's me and Wolf's turn to battle!" said Hiroki.
(Mar. 24, 2011  4:46 AM)BeybladerPotter Wrote: Thanks for the character requests everyone they will all be in this chapter
Here is Chapter 3: Part 1 ... (Note: Chapter 3 will be split in to two parts this and the other one later because it might be too long)

Shuu, Sato and Wolf got up early this morning. The trio put on their clothes and ate breakfast.
"Say..Shuu..Where are we going today?" asked Wolf. "Yeah Big bro! Where are we going?" asked Sato.
"We are going to BeyPark! There a huge tournament there today!" said Shuu excitedly. "Woohoo! My first tournament! Can I join Shuu?" asked Wolf. "Sure! Why not! You're a good Blader! I'm sure you'll do well!" answered Shuu. And with that decided, the trio walked to BeyPark.....

"Hey Shuu! Shuu! Over here!" shouted a familiar voice. "Hey Hiroki!" shouted Shuu. "Who is that person Shuu?" asked Wolf. " "Oh yeah! I forgot to introduce you to Hiroki Miyamoto. He is a Blader I battled yesterday here in BeyPark too." answered Shuu. "Hi Hiroki! Nice to meet 'ya! I'm Wolf! I'm also Shuu's friend!" greeted Wolf. "And I'm Sato Fujimoto! Shuu's little brother! Nice to meet you Hiroki!." said Sato. "Nice to meet you too Wolf and Sato! I hope we can all be good friends!" said Hiroki.

"Now it's time to start the tournament! 3...2...1...Go Shoot!" announced Blader DJ. Now everyone including Hiroki, Shuu and Wolf looked at their respective blocks. "Okay guys I'm in Block A!" said Shuu. "I'm in Block D said Hiroki. "Well..I'm in Block C." said Wolf "Okay guys! Let's go to our respective blocks." ordered Shuu.
"Block A Bladers get ready!" announced Blader DJ. After a lot of battles..."The winner of the A Block is.....Shuu Fujimoto!!!" annouced Blader DJ. "Now that we have a winner for Block A, Block B Bladers get ready!!" said Blader DJ. Shuu returned to the place where Sato, Wolf and Hiroki were. "Nice battles Shuu!" said Wolf. "Yeah! I knew you would totally dominate Block A." commented Hiroki. "Good job Big bro!" said Sato. "Thanks guys!" thanked Shuu. While the heroes were chatting, Blader DJ has announced the Block B winner. "The winner in Block B is.....Kazu Terekuna!" announced Blader DJ. "Hmm...So that's my opponent in the semifinals..." thought Shuu. "Bladers in Block C!! Get ready!" announced Blader DJ. "Guess it's my turn!" said Wolf. After a lot of battles....."We have a winner!!! Wolf!!" announced Blader DJ. Wolf also returned to the place where the gang was. "Good battles!" they all commented. "It's my turn!" said Hiroki. Again, after a lot of battles...."Hiroki is the winner!" announced Hiroki. "Well Wolf...I guess you and I will battle in the semifinals!" said Hiroki. "Yeah! Hope we have a good battle!" said Wolf. The semifinalists were decided.." So let me announce the semifinalists!!!!!!" shouted Blader DJ "On Block A is Shuu Fuijimoto!!" "On Block B.. Kazu Terekuna!!" "You two will be battling for a spot in the finals." "On Block C..Wolf!!" "On Block D...Hiroki Miyamoto!!" "You two will be battling for a spot in the finals." "Lets start with Shuu Fujimoto versus Kazu Terekuna!!" announced Blader DJ. "3...2...1...Go Shoot!!" Kinetic Tiger and Kazu's Bey was launched in the BeyStadium. Kinetic Tiger was attacking Kazu's Bey pretty strong. "Hahaha..You fell into my trap! Go Ultimate Pegasis! Gattyaki Tornado!!" shouted Kazu. Then suddenly huge tornadoes were swirling around the stadium. "Bwahaha! This is my ultimate defense! No one has ever got through my tornadoes!" Kazu exclaimed. "Oh yeah! Then I will be the first one to get through them!" shouted Shuu. "Hmm..What if.." thought Shuu. Yesterday.."Big bro! I heard this move called Dynamic Smash! It was used by a professional Blader in the World Tournament!" said Sato. "He said that in order to use this move, your Bey must be high up in the air so that when you dive down to your opponent's Bey you can inflict a lot of damage. The effect will either make the opponent's Bey lose a lot of spin or insta-KO it.
"Go Kinetic Tiger!! Jump up to the air by using the tornadoes!!" ordered Shuu. Kinetic Tiger was now high up in the air. "Find Ultimate Pegasis" ordered Shuu. Kinetic Tiger was searching the BeyStadium and finally saw Ultimate Pegasis. "Smash it Kinetic Tiger! Dynamic Smash!!!" said Shuu. Kinetic Tiger dived into the ground and hit Ultimate Pegasis hard causing it lose a lot of spin. "B..B..But how? How did you get through my tornadoes?" asked Kazu. "Lets finish this Kinetic Tiger!! Kinetic Shredder!!" said Shuu. Kinetic Tiger charged towards Ultimate Pegasis at full speed and knocked it out of the stadium. "And the winner is.....Shuu!!!" Blader DJ announced. "Good job Shuu!" said Wolf. "I guess it's me and Wolf's turn to battle!" said Hiroki.
Whew! That was long! Anyway check in later to read Chapter 3: Part 2
Mar. 24, 2011  7:58 AM
 
Here Chapter 3 Part 2:
"Hiroki Miyamoto and Wolf! Come to the BeyStadium!" announced Blader DJ.
"3...2...1...Go Shoot!!!" Wolf and Hiroki launched their Beys into the BeyStadium. Metalic Wolfaien and Typhoon Turtle clashed furiously in the stadium. "Go Wolfaien! Attack from the air!" shouted Wolf. Wolfaien jumped high up into the air and dived to the ground. Just when Wolfaien was about to hit Turtle, Hiroki commanded Turtle to dodge and Wolfaien hit the ground causing it lose some spin. "It's time to end this! Go Typhoon Turtle! Final Blast!!" shouted Hiroki. "Go Wolfaien! Metal Pounce!!" shouted Wolf. The two Beys use their special moves and *BOOM*! There was a huge explosion!!!! When the smoke cleared, they saw that neither of the beys were there instead they were at their respective owners. "It's a tie!!!!" announced Blader DJ "Wait!! We got a video in the camera! We'll check if we can determine which Bey went to their owners first!!!" said Blader DJ. After Blader DJ watched the video he announced that Typhoon Turtle went back to Hiroki first and declared that Wolf was the winner. "Now for the finals.....Wolf versus Shuu Fujimoto!!!!!!!!!!!" announced Blader DJ. "Hope we have a good match Shuu!" said Wolf. "I won't lose this time though!" said Shuu. "Oh yeah! We'll see about that!" said Wolf.
3...2...1...Go Shoot!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wolf and Shuu launched their Beys into the BeyStadium. "Go Kinetic Tiger!" "Go Metalic Wolfaien!" Both Beys clashed more furiously than the last time they battled. "Go Kinetic Shredder" shouted Shuu. "Go Metal Pounce" shouted Wolf. *Boom*! There was an explosion!! Wolf was taking advantage of this smoke. "Go Wolfaien! Circle the stadium!!" Because Wolfaien circled the stadium so fast, it caused a tornado to appear. But not just a tornado, it was black and smoky. It was very large. "Go Wolfaien! Use the tornado to jump high in the air!" "Wolfaien! Use Dynamic Smash!!" ordered Wolf. "Wha?! Why is Wolf using my strategy to defeat Kazu a while ago?!" thought Shuu. "Hmm........What if I use Hiroki's strategy a while ago then use Kinetic Shredder......."Just a fraction of a second before Wolfaien hit Tiger, Shuu ordered Tiger to dodge and Wolfaien hit the ground just like the battle with Hiroki and lost a lot of spin. "Go Kinetic Tiger!!! Kinetic Shredder!!!!" shouted Shuu. "Go Wolfaien! Metal Pounce" shouted Wolf. The two Beys clashed so hard that instead of an explosion it knocked each other to the left and right edge of the BeyStadium. The impact was so hard that it caused two big holes. Wolf wasn't spinning but Kinetic Tiger was slightly rotating. "And the winner is Shuu Fujimoto!!!" announced Blader DJ. Suddenly the enviroment was surrounded with smoke and black auras. "Go Revenge Nemesis! Vengeance OverDrive!" said ???. "Leave him alone Curtis" said ???. "Bwahahaha! See you soon Mattias!" said Curtis. "Curtis!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" shouted Mattias. "Thanks! Mattias.. That's your name right?" said Shuu. "Yup! Nice to meet you!" said Mattias. So the gang along with Mattias crashed at Wolf's house again. Mattias said that his brother Curtis was with Dr. Rasa. "They are called ShadowKlan and the reason I was there was because I'm finding strong Bladers so I can form a team and join the World Tournament and defeat the ShadowKlan!" said Mattias. The gang agreed to help Mattias and besides they have a grudge on Dr. Rasa for destroying their house. "A team needs 5 members" said Mattias.
"But we're only four!" said Hiroki (This is because Sato isn't a Blader. He will become the team's manager.)
"Well I guess we can start recruiting one more member tomorrow." said Shuu and Wolf.



(P.S Guys, please help me to think of a name for the team! First Team Name Entry will be the Team Name)
Mar. 24, 2011  8:04 AM
 
I dont mind if you change kazu's special move.
Mar. 24, 2011  8:11 AM
 
Ok I'll use that as an evolution move for kazu
Mar. 24, 2011  8:53 AM
 
AMAZING STORY MAN!!! thanks so much for usin the characters - IM ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!
This should be a novel one day: "The Beyblade World Tournament"
I bet it would be a BEST-SELLER at Chapters and other book stores!
Grin

-KoolCatCurtis-

Oh by the way, dude, I'm putting all the chapters together (all separated to their own pages) into a book/story on Microsoft Word! I'll do some artwork for each chapter because I looove sketching! When I make some really good pictures that would describe the characters/scenes perfectly, I'll scan them and then post them up on this thread or send them to you as another big thanks for a super awesome story!

-KoolCatCurtis-
Mar. 24, 2011  9:17 AM
 
KoolCatCurtis: Thnks Dude!
Mar. 25, 2011  1:03 AM
 
I have a character request:
NameTongue_outhantom
Bey:MF Haunting Phantom F135 IR2F
Gender:Boy
Side:Good or bad...doesnt reall matter to me as long as he's a main character.
Age:15
Type:Attack,Left spin
Bey Descripton:The face bolt says Phantom across and black surrounding the word.:The energy ring is black wth a little shade of dark purple there are P's on the left and right side of the energy ring with an oval in the middle of the ring and spikes surrounding the P's.The fusion wheel ,Haunting, is like pegasis energy ring with the wings only their stickin out of the side of the fusion wheel and there are 3 like the points of a triangle and in the gaps are little needles about 5 millimeters long sticking out too.The spin track ,F135, stands for fabric and it wobbles so when the opponent tries to attack the track they'll just fall over,but it's a mystery how it supports the fusion wheel,energy ring, and facebolt.The performance tip ,Ir2f,stands for invisibleR2f.If you take it off of the spintrack it becomes visible again.
Personality:Mysterious,dark,doesn't talk much,doesnt really use his full power,trustworthy until u make him mad,he's always cool and contained even when he loses,doesn't love any thing exept his family,friends,and bey.He knows karate and only battles strong opponents.
Looks like:He has black eyes,brown drooping hair like reiji over his right eye,he's about 5'11'',wears all black,black jordans,skinny jeans,black open sweatshirt with a black t-shirt,and black gloves that the UFC fighters wear.
Special Move(s):Haunting Soul StrikeTongue_outhantom's symbol flashes and Phantom's bit beast(Grim Reaper) comes out ans scrares the carp outta the opponent and just literally tears apart the other bey and it's spirit and the opponent has a nightmare that looks like his or her soul is being taken so it weakens them.If that doesn't work look at next move.
Absorbing MoveConfusedpirit stealerTongue_outhantom's eyes turn red and lifeless and his bey glows white and just steals spin and looks as if it's invisible and only Phantom can see the bey.
Mar. 25, 2011  6:12 AM
 
@C-Dub: He will be more fit as a bad guy and besides I need evil characters. He will be in Team ShadowKlan.
He won't be around for a while because the gang will fight them in the finals of the World tournament.
@ eveyone reading this: Don't make requests for a while because I'm currently working on chapter 4 with my editor.
Mar. 25, 2011  7:51 AM
 
So here is chapter 4 Part 1: (This chapter will be split into 3 parts because it will be awfully long.)

The gang woke up in a sunny morning. They ate breakfast and they started walking to the BeyPark. "There's a tournament at the BeyPark today. We might find a good Blader for our team!" said Hiroki. "Great! We'll have a member in no time!" said Shuu. "I really appreciate all your help guys!" thanked Mattias. When the gang reached BeyPark, the tournament was just already starting. "Well.. Let's just wait for the tournament to end." said Wolf. After a long time of waiting......
"We have a champion! Venkash Hitwari!!!" announced Blader DJ. "Well..I guess we've found our new member!" said Shuu. "Wait Shuu! Before we accept him as a member, we have to see if he is capable to be a new member of the team." said Mattias. "Okay fine. You test him though." said Shuu. Mattias walked towards Venkash and said: "Hey kid! I have a team and we need only one more member to be able to participate in the World Tournament." said Mattias. "After we saw you won this tournament, we considered you to be our final member. But first.." said Mattias while taking out his Beyblade gear. "You have to defeat me!" shouted Mattias. " "Well... I can't refuse a spot to battle against the whole world so....Bring It On!!!" said Venkash. 3...2...1...Go Shoot!! The Beys were launched into the stadium. "Hmm...this is the first time we'll see Mattias in battle." said Sato. "Yup!" commented Shuu. "...Venkash's Bey seems to be a M.Galaxy Dranzer." said Hiroki. "Yeah! But I can't seem to identify Mattias' Bey though." said Wolf. "Well its because it isn't just any Bey guys! Its a legendary Bey!" said Shuu.
Mar. 25, 2011  7:57 AM
 
awesome chapter!
Mar. 25, 2011  1:14 PM
 
Thnks Dude!
Mar. 26, 2011  3:59 AM
 
Part 2 of Chapter 4:
As Mattias sent Leviathan roaring into the stadium, Leviathan's spiral rotation had a hypnotic effect on him and suddenly he was seeing himself dig out Leviathan from the cave in the Himalayas. A Flashback! The image was really quite foggy.. is this what Leviathan's legendary power could do? Let him watch the past over? The image shifted to him and Curtis splitting paths - him going to the competitions and Curtis setting off as a lone wolf in search of the origin of the legendary Bey called Revenge Nemesis. The image then turned very dark and shrouded in black mist. Out of the darkness Curtis walked forth and gave him an evil sneer. "Hey Mattias. I'm using Nemesis' power to contact you through Leviathan. You can bet that your little team that your building will fail at the competition.. ShadowKlan will crush you... and there is nothing you can do... See you round.." Curtis gave one more small evil chuckle and then the image faded away.
When Mattias awoke from the "flashback" (which was more of a telepathic message from Curtis through Leviathan) his friends were crowded around him, worried looks on their faces. "Finally he's conscious - he's come to!" said Shuu - a worried tremble in his voice. "Guys.. what's wrong.." said Mattias a little shakily. "You've been passed out, unconscious, screaming and sweating like you've seen a ghost!" said Venkash, "You woke up when Leviathan went crazy and stadium outed itself. It was like it had a mind of its own.."
"I.. I think I have seen a ghost... and we've got to get this team together fast. From here on out, it's all practice if we are going to beat ShadowKlan in the Tournament - they have gotten very powerful. Oh, by the way, Venkash: You're on the team" "Thanks for having me!" said Venkash. They all waled to Wolf's house again. "We should be finding a HQ really soon." said Sato. "Yup! We really should!" said Wolf. They all slept peacefully dreaming about the World Tournament.

I would like to give a shoutout to KoolCatCurtis for doing Chapter 4 Part 2 for me!! Thanks a lot Dude!!
Mar. 26, 2011  6:20 AM
 
Anytime man! we're a team - and I do all I can to help! Grin
Mar. 27, 2011  10:39 AM
 
Thanks! Everyone who are reading this story. Without you, I don't have the inspiration to write! Anyway, thanks everyone!
Mar. 28, 2011  3:59 AM
 
Sorry! Been to a party today here's Chapter 4 Part 3!
The team woke up in a sunny morning. They ate breakfast and rode the bus to Ayami Forest.
"Well I guess we should start finding a HQ!" said Sato. "Ok! Lets start finding!" said Wolf. "Lets split up!" said Mattias. "Sato! You along with Hiroki and Wolf will stick together!" said Mattias. "While me, Venkash and Shuu will be searching over there." "Okay!" said Sato.

While Mattias' group was on the other side...Sato's group found a big old building in the center of the forest. "Hey! Wolf..Go to Mattias' group while we check this place out! I think we found our HQ!!" said Sato. Sato and Hiroki walked inside the building and to their surprise, that old building was a high-tech place. There was a supercomputer in the main room that shows the world map. There was also a huge BeyStadium in the first door. There was even also a repair room to repair damaged or broken Beys in the second door. And in the third and final door.....was a huge room with normal-sized BeyStadiums. The third room was complete with everything that you need to train. There is sample Beyblades which are launched by holograms. You can even battle against yourself. You can also battle against Bladers who you have battled with. The building was like a Beyblade heaven. "Hiroki...This place is magnificent!! We are lucky to have found this!!" said Sato. "Yup Sato! We sure are!" said Hiroki. When Wolf and the others arrived, Sato announced: "From this day on..This place will be our team headquarters!!!" The team was so happy that they was all shouting: "We've got a HQ! We've got a HQ!" After the team calmed down, Sato announced an important message. "Team...Today, we have found our HQ...And the future..We will win the World Tournament! Do you wanna win!!!" "Yes we do!" said the team. "If so, we shall commence training right away!" said Sato. The team went inside the third room. "Whoa!! Awesome!!" said Wolf. The team sat on one of the benches. "Big bro! You're up first." said Sato. "Ok!" said Shuu. "You will be battling with Venkash here!" "I hope we have a good battle Shuu!" said Venkash. "Yeah! I also hope to have a good battle with you!" said Shuu. "Okay! Lets do this!!" said Venkash. 3...2...1...Go Shoot!!!! The Beys were launched into the BeyStadium. "Go M. Galaxy Dranzer! Flame Uppercut!" ordered Venkash. Dranzer, using it's special move, threw Kinetic Tiger up into the air! "Haha! Good but not good enough!" said Shuu. "Go Kinetic Tiger! Dynamic Smash!!" said Shuu. Just when Kinetic Tiger was about to hit Dranzer...."Haha! You fell into my trap Shuu! I'm about to reveal my secret weapon..." said Venkash. "Go Dranzer! Sonic Dash!!" And as fast as lightning, Dranzer dodged Kinetic Tiger's attack. "Enough!!" said Sato. "I've seen your weaknesses." "Shuu, you have to work on your Bey's speed. If your Bey was a bit faster, it would have hit Dranzer before it dodged." "Okay! I'll work on that!" said Shuu. "And you Venkash...You have to work on your Bey's balance. When you unleashed your Flame Uppercut, the moment the move was over, Dranzer was losing balance." "Okay! I'll work on that too." said Venkash. "Next up..Wolf and Mattias!" said Sato.


Everyone you can make CHARACTER REQUESTS AGAIN BUT THEY WILL BE PUT ON THE WORLD TEAMS! REQUEST PLEASE!!! YOU CAN SPECIFY A TEAM IF YOU WANT TOO LIKE TEAM CHINA OR AFRICA! (JUST BE SURE IT IS NOT JAPAN THOUGH.)
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