Chapter One:

"LET IT RIP!", yells Drake. Drake is a thirteen year old beyblader, who, unfortunately, does not have a very good beyblade. As he watches his beyblade get dominated by Ashton's, Drake's smile turns into a face of disappointment. Ashton is thirteen as well, and has been Drake's best friend since they were six. "Once again, my Libra comes out on top.", Ashton says with a grin. Ashton's beyblade is Rock Libra T125F and has an unbeaten record against Drake's Dark Capricorne H145FS. "That's not very surprising..", says Drake. "It's only like the eighty-fifth time..." "Sorry man, I can't help it that you have a sucky bey.", says Ashton, now feeling ashamed of himself for rubbing it in. "Why don't you come and cheer me on at the Bey-Dome for today's tournament?" "Sure, I guess it will be pretty fun.", Drake says, cheering up a little. As they enter the Bey-Dome, both of their faces shine with happiness. "Battle in New York!", is written on a gigantic banner hanging from the ceiling. "Well, I'll go and sign in.", says Ashton as he walks into the locker room. Drake heads over to the bleachers and finds a seat. "GRRRRRUMBLE", goes Drake's stomach. "The Bey-Dome has such overpriced food..", Drake thinks to himself, "Maybe I can go to the corner store down the block and come back in time for Ashton's battle.." Drake leaves the Bey-Dome and starts walking down the sidewalk until he spots a shadowy figure dash around a corner of an alley-way, followed by a, *CLANK* That sound seemed very familiar to Drake. So he slowly steps into the alley until he sees a a small figure laying on the ground. Now he knows what it was that made the sound, a beyblade. [END OF CHAPTER ONE]

Tell me what you'll think.

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Good bro.Try to make it scan a little more.Are you making character requests?

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Signature was too large. Read the rules.

I'll go ahead and start accepting character requests.
Format
Name:
Beyblade:
Special Move:
Personality:
Clothing:

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Name:Boogeyman
Beybladehadow Worm 80 SC(rew)
Dark Move(Hope we can have that)own to hell:A huge hole opens in the ground and sucks in the opponent forever.
Personalityvil, creepy, a freak, scary, sadistic
Clothing:His skin is crimson red, he wears black trousers.

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Signature was too large. Read the rules.

Name:Boogeyman
Beybladehadow Worm 80 SC(rew)
Dark Move(Hope we can have that)own to hell:A huge hole opens in the ground and sucks in the opponent forever.
Personalityvil, creepy, a freak, scary, sadistic
Clothing:His skin is crimson red, he wears black trousers.

don't you think that is a little over the top?

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Agreed. Anywho, here's my idea of an attack-type character

Name: Zane
Beyblade: Attack-Type Vulcan Odinox 85MXF (MXF = Metal Xtreme Flat)
Special Move: Gungnir Piercing Strike (Bey unleashes a deadly rapid-fire upper attack on the opposing top)
Personality: Serious, calm, good sportsman, doesn't like Lux very much
Clothing: black jumpsuit with red armor plating.

Let me know if I was the one god-modding, okay?

EDIT (1:55 PM): I added something to Zane
EDIT (7/30/11 3:15 PM): I'm adding another thing to Zane's profile

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"It is written among the limitless constellations of the celestial heavens, and in the depths of the emerald seas, and upon every grain of sand in the vast deserts, that the world which we see is an outed and visible dream of an inward and invisible reality." - Opening narration, The Thief and the Cobbler (original workprint)

nice character :D
he will be included in Chapter Three.

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thanks.

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"It is written among the limitless constellations of the celestial heavens, and in the depths of the emerald seas, and upon every grain of sand in the vast deserts, that the world which we see is an outed and visible dream of an inward and invisible reality." - Opening narration, The Thief and the Cobbler (original workprint)

Name:Boogeyman
Beybladehadow Worm 80 SC(rew)
Dark Move(Hope we can have that)own to hell:A huge hole opens in the ground and sucks in the opponent forever.
Personalityvil, creepy, a freak, scary, sadistic
Clothing:His skin is crimson red, he wears black trousers.

don't you think that is a little over the top?

Personally, no.But your the writer
=( oh well

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Signature was too large. Read the rules.

I'm sorry

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Its ok

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Signature was too large. Read the rules.

nice name

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click it i dare you

ok i hav a character
Name: Lux
Beyblade: Sythe horosues D: D
Special Move: dark Sythe slash
Personality:often interfering in a middle of a battle when his opponents stamina is low however when challenged he distracts his opponents by pointing out the flaws off ther bey before attacking
over personality persuasive and cruel
Clothing: a dark robe with gold colored shoulder pads like damien harts

ok i hav a character
Name: Lux
Beyblade: Sythe horosues D: D
Special Move: dark Sythe slash
Personality:often interfering in a middle of a battle when his opponents stamina is low however when challenged he distracts his opponents by pointing out the flaws off ther bey before attacking
over personality persuasive and cruel
Clothing: a dark robe with gold colored shoulder pads like damien harts

accepted

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your character will also be included in Chapter Three.

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chapter two is coming tonight.

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make that tomorrow morning..

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Name:Cameron

Beybladevil Scorpio 100FH

Appearanceolid black jacket with no sleeves black jeans wallet with chain coming out of pocket vans shoes and black beanie with light brown hair

And he's bad/evil

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Special move poison destruction Scorpio attacks with great force flipping the bey and breaking it personality: he's a bully who defeated bladers with great force but can be a little nice

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"I do what ever it takes to win"

- Bruiser33

Name:Cameron

Beybladevil Scorpio 100FH

FH? You mean HF?

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Name:Cameron

Beybladevil Scorpio 100FH

FH? You mean HF?

yeah sorry

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"I do what ever it takes to win"

- Bruiser33

i just lost Chapter Two...

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That's a bummer, dude!

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"It is written among the limitless constellations of the celestial heavens, and in the depths of the emerald seas, and upon every grain of sand in the vast deserts, that the world which we see is an outed and visible dream of an inward and invisible reality." - Opening narration, The Thief and the Cobbler (original workprint)

some people say that taking character request is a bad idea, but if you can handle it then cool, good job on the story

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I like hms, how bout you?
Watch my vids on youtube. channel: Drakio1000

drago: i know right :/
drakio: thanks :D
Evil scorpio: its ok, your character will also be in Chapter Three. and that's the last character that will be in C3, any others that I except will be in C4 unless I say it's not.

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Chapter Two:

"Unbelievable", was the first and only word that could came out of Drake's mouth once he picked up the beyblade. It had parts that Drake had never seen, or even heard about before. There was a manual laying just five feet away from where this beyblade had dropped, it explained everything that Drake would need to know about the beyblade. First comes the metal wheel, Blaze. This metal wheel was much like the Storm metal wheel, but it was thicker and more curved inward than the Storm metal wheel. Then there's the spin track, TF110. TF110 stands for Triple Flames 110. This spin track has three flame-like protrusions that extend from the base of a 110 height spin track. Along with these, there is CF, Coat Flat. It's exactly like Coat Sharp, except that it's..well...flatter.This allowed for a much quicker, stronger, and simply better performance tip. The clear wheel doesn't have very much going on though, but it does have similar height to Escolpio. To finish off these great parts, there is the face bolt. The face bolt has a base color of red, and on top off that, orange flames. Then, reaching out from the flames, there are two black arms that seem to be reaching out towards you, and, below those arms, is APLO, also written in black. The letters APLO is the abbreviated form of the word Apollo. This beyblade is Blaze Apollo TF110CF. "I have to try this thing out!", Drake thinks to himself as he starts running towards his house. Then, halfway to his house, he finally remembers why he was at the Bey Dome, Ashton is competing in the tournament! "He is going to surely forgive me, he's got to after he sees Apollo!", Drake convinces himself. Once Drake gets to his house he rips his launcher out of his pocket and hurries to his stadium that he has located in the backyard. "3, 2, 1, LET IT RIP!", Drake launches Apollo, immediately sending him zooming around the stadium at a speed that Drake had never witnessed. "Blaze Apollo, people are going to remember that name!"

I'm soooo sorry for how late this is, school started, soooo ya

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