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The Beyblade Jackals (Taking Character Requests) - Byerg - Jul. 29, 2011
Chapter One:
"LET IT RIP!", yells Drake. Drake is a thirteen year old beyblader, who, unfortunately, does not have a very good beyblade. As he watches his beyblade get dominated by Ashton's, Drake's smile turns into a face of disappointment. Ashton is thirteen as well, and has been Drake's best friend since they were six. "Once again, my Libra comes out on top.", Ashton says with a grin. Ashton's beyblade is Rock Libra T125F and has an unbeaten record against Drake's Dark Capricorne H145FS. "That's not very surprising..", says Drake. "It's only like the eighty-fifth time..." "Sorry man, I can't help it that you have a sucky bey.", says Ashton, now feeling ashamed of himself for rubbing it in. "Why don't you come and cheer me on at the Bey-Dome for today's tournament?" "Sure, I guess it will be pretty fun.", Drake says, cheering up a little. As they enter the Bey-Dome, both of their faces shine with happiness. "Battle in New York!", is written on a gigantic banner hanging from the ceiling. "Well, I'll go and sign in.", says Ashton as he walks into the locker room. Drake heads over to the bleachers and finds a seat. "GRRRRRUMBLE", goes Drake's stomach. "The Bey-Dome has such overpriced food..", Drake thinks to himself, "Maybe I can go to the corner store down the block and come back in time for Ashton's battle.." Drake leaves the Bey-Dome and starts walking down the sidewalk until he spots a shadowy figure dash around a corner of an alley-way, followed by a, *CLANK* That sound seemed very familiar to Drake. So he slowly steps into the alley until he sees a a small figure laying on the ground. Now he knows what it was that made the sound, a beyblade. [END OF CHAPTER ONE]
Tell me what you'll think.
RE: The Beyblade Jackals - Sparx000 - Jul. 29, 2011
Good bro.Try to make it scan a little more.Are you making character requests?
RE: The Beyblade Jackals - Byerg - Jul. 29, 2011
I'll go ahead and start accepting character requests.
Format
Name:
Beyblade:
Special Move:
Personality:
Clothing:
RE: The Beyblade Jackals - Sparx000 - Jul. 29, 2011
Name:Boogeyman
Beyblade
hadow Worm 80 SC(rew)Dark Move(Hope we can have that)
own to hell:A huge hole opens in the ground and sucks in the opponent forever.Personality
vil, creepy, a freak, scary, sadisticClothing:His skin is crimson red, he wears black trousers.
RE: The Beyblade Jackals - Byerg - Jul. 29, 2011
(Jul. 29, 2011 7:17 PM)Nyan Cat Wrote: Name:Boogeyman
Beyblade
Dark Move(Hope we can have that)
Personality
Clothing:His skin is crimson red, he wears black trousers.
don't you think that is a little over the top?
RE: The Beyblade Jackals (Taking Character Requests) - T. L-Drago 9207 - Jul. 29, 2011
Agreed. Anywho, here's my idea of an attack-type character
Name: Zane
Beyblade: Attack-Type Vulcan Odinox 85MXF (MXF = Metal Xtreme Flat)
Special Move: Gungnir Piercing Strike (Bey unleashes a deadly rapid-fire upper attack on the opposing top)
Personality: Serious, calm, good sportsman, doesn't like Lux very much
Clothing: black jumpsuit with red armor plating.
Let me know if I was the one god-modding, okay?
EDIT (1:55 PM): I added something to Zane
EDIT (7/30/11 3:15 PM): I'm adding another thing to Zane's profile
RE: The Beyblade Jackals (Taking Character Requests) - Byerg - Jul. 29, 2011
nice character :D
he will be included in Chapter Three.
RE: The Beyblade Jackals (Taking Character Requests) - T. L-Drago 9207 - Jul. 29, 2011
thanks.
RE: The Beyblade Jackals - Sparx000 - Jul. 29, 2011
(Jul. 29, 2011 7:25 PM)BeyBladingFury Wrote:(Jul. 29, 2011 7:17 PM)Nyan Cat Wrote: Name:Boogeyman
Beyblade
Dark Move(Hope we can have that)
Personality
Clothing:His skin is crimson red, he wears black trousers.
don't you think that is a little over the top?
Personally, no.But your the writer
=( oh well
RE: The Beyblade Jackals (Taking Character Requests) - Byerg - Jul. 29, 2011
I'm sorry
RE: The Beyblade Jackals (Taking Character Requests) - Sparx000 - Jul. 29, 2011
Its ok
RE: The Beyblade Jackals (Taking Character Requests) - dark Warrior - Jul. 29, 2011
nice name
RE: The Beyblade Jackals (Taking Character Requests) - Hytyjin - Jul. 29, 2011
ok i hav a character
Name: Lux
Beyblade: Sythe horosues D: D
Special Move: dark Sythe slash
Personality:often interfering in a middle of a battle when his opponents stamina is low however when challenged he distracts his opponents by pointing out the flaws off ther bey before attacking
over personality persuasive and cruel
Clothing: a dark robe with gold colored shoulder pads like damien harts
RE: The Beyblade Jackals (Taking Character Requests) - Byerg - Jul. 29, 2011
(Jul. 29, 2011 8:13 PM)Beigoma Wrote: ok i hav a character
Name: Lux
Beyblade: Sythe horosues D: D
Special Move: dark Sythe slash
Personality:often interfering in a middle of a battle when his opponents stamina is low however when challenged he distracts his opponents by pointing out the flaws off ther bey before attacking
over personality persuasive and cruel
Clothing: a dark robe with gold colored shoulder pads like damien harts
accepted
RE: The Beyblade Jackals (Taking Character Requests) - Byerg - Jul. 30, 2011
your character will also be included in Chapter Three.
RE: The Beyblade Jackals (Taking Character Requests) - Byerg - Jul. 30, 2011
chapter two is coming tonight.
RE: The Beyblade Jackals (Taking Character Requests) - Byerg - Jul. 31, 2011
make that tomorrow morning..
RE: The Beyblade Jackals (Taking Character Requests) - Bruiser33 - Jul. 31, 2011
Name:Cameron
Beyblade
vil Scorpio 100FHAppearance
olid black jacket with no sleeves black jeans wallet with chain coming out of pocket vans shoes and black beanie with light brown hairAnd he's bad/evil
Special move poison destruction Scorpio attacks with great force flipping the bey and breaking it personality: he's a bully who defeated bladers with great force but can be a little nice
RE: The Beyblade Jackals (Taking Character Requests) - Byerg - Jul. 31, 2011
(Jul. 31, 2011 5:31 AM)Bruiser33 Wrote: Name:Cameron
Beyblade
FH? You mean HF?
RE: The Beyblade Jackals (Taking Character Requests) - Bruiser33 - Jul. 31, 2011
(Jul. 31, 2011 7:46 AM)BeyBladingFury Wrote:yeah sorry(Jul. 31, 2011 5:31 AM)Bruiser33 Wrote: Name:Cameron
Beyblade
FH? You mean HF?
RE: The Beyblade Jackals (Taking Character Requests) - Byerg - Jul. 31, 2011
i just lost Chapter Two...
RE: The Beyblade Jackals (Taking Character Requests) - T. L-Drago 9207 - Aug. 01, 2011
That's a bummer, dude!
RE: The Beyblade Jackals (Taking Character Requests) - drakio - Aug. 01, 2011
some people say that taking character request is a bad idea, but if you can handle it then cool, good job on the story
RE: The Beyblade Jackals (Taking Character Requests) - Byerg - Aug. 01, 2011
drago: i know right :/
drakio: thanks :D
Evil scorpio: its ok, your character will also be in Chapter Three. and that's the last character that will be in C3, any others that I except will be in C4 unless I say it's not.
RE: The Beyblade Jackals (Taking Character Requests) - Byerg - Aug. 05, 2011
Chapter Two:
"Unbelievable", was the first and only word that could came out of Drake's mouth once he picked up the beyblade. It had parts that Drake had never seen, or even heard about before. There was a manual laying just five feet away from where this beyblade had dropped, it explained everything that Drake would need to know about the beyblade. First comes the metal wheel, Blaze. This metal wheel was much like the Storm metal wheel, but it was thicker and more curved inward than the Storm metal wheel. Then there's the spin track, TF110. TF110 stands for Triple Flames 110. This spin track has three flame-like protrusions that extend from the base of a 110 height spin track. Along with these, there is CF, Coat Flat. It's exactly like Coat Sharp, except that it's..well...flatter.This allowed for a much quicker, stronger, and simply better performance tip. The clear wheel doesn't have very much going on though, but it does have similar height to Escolpio. To finish off these great parts, there is the face bolt. The face bolt has a base color of red, and on top off that, orange flames. Then, reaching out from the flames, there are two black arms that seem to be reaching out towards you, and, below those arms, is APLO, also written in black. The letters APLO is the abbreviated form of the word Apollo. This beyblade is Blaze Apollo TF110CF. "I have to try this thing out!", Drake thinks to himself as he starts running towards his house. Then, halfway to his house, he finally remembers why he was at the Bey Dome, Ashton is competing in the tournament! "He is going to surely forgive me, he's got to after he sees Apollo!", Drake convinces himself. Once Drake gets to his house he rips his launcher out of his pocket and hurries to his stadium that he has located in the backyard. "3, 2, 1, LET IT RIP!", Drake launches Apollo, immediately sending him zooming around the stadium at a speed that Drake had never witnessed. "Blaze Apollo, people are going to remember that name!"
I'm soooo sorry for how late this is, school started, soooo ya
