Hey guys, this is my story about beyblade, I hope you like it.
I'm not quitting, by the way, even if the world explodes while I'm trying to write a chapter
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Prologue
The age of the Vulcan is upon us, be ready, because you play a part it's story. That's all Xavier remembered from his dream last night, that deep dark voice, talking about the age of the Vulcan. It sent chills down his back. He thought that the evil bey, the Vulcan, was destroyed long ago, when the bey of good, Parsagos defeated it. But, according to Xavier's dream that was not the case.
He also remembered images in his dream. They were only there for half a second, but they were there none the less. He saw Vulcan dealing deathly blows to Parsagos, and Parsagos was not coping well. Every time Vulcan hit Parsados, it was as if if a vulcan had trapped Parsados in it's jaws and powerfully thrusted Parsados forward. After a few powerful blows by Vulcan, Parsados stopped spinning. Then Parsados was just lying there, like a useless piece of scrap metal, his fusion wheel all cut up and it's energy wring cracked.
Xavier had been having these dreams for exactly two days, and it was starting to
freak him out. He wanted to tell people, but he thought they would think he was
crazy. He was ready to bet his life though, that his dreams meant something.
Xavier glance at his clock. It read 7:30 am. He quickly got dressed, and went to
school.
Chapter 1:
Xavier sighs as he steps onto the onto the bus and sees the seat by his best friend, Jason, was taken up. Typical thought Xavier. This bus was always too small, even for the small town Xavier lived in, Coma village. As Xavier looked up and down the bus, he saw a two seater with one person in it and sat down. The bus sped off. Nothing happened at Xavier's school today. The day seemed to go on for a week though, but he thought that was because of what he was going to do today. Xavier was going to the beypark today to train.
"Three two one, let it RIP!" Xavier and Jason had arrived at the beypark. It had been a long bus ride, but Xavier and Jason arrived just before nightfall. Jason, as always, was eager to get a rematch against Xavier. "Me and my Winged Vulture are going to crush you!" Jason shouted at Xavier playfully. "Not if Winged Pegasus crushes you first!" Xavier replied. As Xavier said the name of his bey aloud, he couldn't help thinking about it. Xavier and Jason's beys both had an unknown spin track and tip. The spin track and tip from Xavier's bey was the same spin track and tip from Jason's bey. Xavier thought this strange, for Parsados and Vulcan both had unknown spin tracks and tips.
Xavier and Jason picked their stadium and got started. "Three two one, let it RIP!" Xavier and Jason shouted in unison. Vulture and Pegasus clashed feircly, sending sparks erupting in the stadium! "Go Pegasus, rapis assault!" Xaviern shouted! Pegsus began dealing rapid blows to Vulture, and Vulture started slowing down. Xavier glances at Jason, and saw an evil glint in Jason's eyes. "Jason, arebyou ok?" Xavier questioned nervously. "I will not LOSE!"Jason shouted! Then, for a split second, Jason's eyes turned red. "I will not lose, I will not lose, I will not LOSE!" Jason shouted! Then Vulture dealt a powerful blow to Pegasus, and Pegasus was sent flying out of the stadium. A few seconds went by, then Jason said in a shaky voice, " I d-don,t know what h-happened there." Then Jason ran off into the night.
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