ok day 4 is up knock urself out

Ok i posted up that concept art for Blade Guardian

Day 5 is up.. if anybody is reading...if not then ima stop posting up stories

Still reading, please read mine too though... Mine is called Beyblade: Twin Flare. I can't wait for day 6 though!

oh yea if you want it to keep going even if it's one person please say something so i can keep reading and sure i will read your story

Great! This is an awesome story so far! I feel kinda bad for poor Meat though... He got roasted...

he sure did...i was thinking about the casualties in the war, and i just wanna write it down

I take chemistry and *sorry to correct you* i believe based upon what i learned titanium and atomic hydrogen can not work together because the atomic hydrogen causes the titanium to become very weak and break easily. This is called Hydrogen Embrittlement

Edit: (i doubled checked) The embrittlement of of metal or alloy by atomic hydrogen involves the ingress of hydrogen into a component, an event that can seriously reduce the ductility and load-bearing capacity, cause cracking and catastrophic brittle failures at stresses below the yield stress of susceptible materials. Hydrogen embrittlement occurs in a number of forms but the common features are an applied tensile stress and hydrogen dissolved in the metal.
Examples of hydrogen embrittlement are cracking of weldments or hardened steels when exposed to conditions which inject hydrogen into the component. Presently this phenomenon is not completely understood and hydrogen embrittlement detection, in particular, seems to be one of the most difficult aspects of the problem. Hydrogen embrittlement does not affect all metallic materials equally. The most vulnerable are high-strength steels, titanium alloys and aluminum alloys.
http://www.corrosion-doctors.org/Forms-H...lement.htm

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It's a fiction story... So it doesn't rlly matter

Yes it does, if you want to be reputable, use correct information. Plus you might learn a thing or two.
GL.

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shout out 2 kai-v 2.

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well its to late now....the plot is set already

You can change the compound such as Iridium(strongest known metal), titanium combined with Tungsten Carbide
This would make an ultimate metal wheel for defense types

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haha beyblades are more dangerous than sniper rifles....

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Great! This is an awesome story so far! I feel kinda bad for poor Meat though... He got roasted...

haha meat got roasted... get it?

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"In many ways, the work of a critic is easy. We risk very little, yet enjoy a position over those who offer up their work and their selves to our judgment. We thrive on negative criticism, which is fun to write and to read. But the bitter truth we critics must face, is that in the grand scheme of things, the average piece of junk is probably more meaningful than our criticism designating it so. But there are times when a critic truly risks something, and that is in the discovery and defense of the new. The world is often unkind to new talent, new creations. The new needs friends. Last night, I experienced something new: an extraordinary meal from a singularly unexpected source. To say that both the meal and its maker have challenged my preconceptions about fine cooking is a gross understatement. They have rocked me to my core. In the past, I have made no secret of my disdain for Chef Gusteau's famous motto, "Anyone can cook." But I realize, only now do I truly understand what he meant. Not everyone can become a great artist; but a great artist can come from anywhere."

-Anton Ego/Peter O'Toole (1932-2013)

I disagree I would think a sniper rifle would be stronger because a sniper rifle is a long range precision rifle. In this story these beyguns seem to be like a modern pistol or sub auto. With the sniper rifle they would be able to pick off one of the soldiers before they can get close range and find you. May be interesting to add a Sniper Beygun

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PM for Pokemon Battles. Skype- bey_hunterRead Leone's War
I QUIT YU-Gi-OH, WILL BE SELLING CARDS SOON.

I disagree I would think a sniper rifle would be stronger because a sniper rifle is a long range precision rifle. In this story these beyguns seem to be like a modern pistol or sub auto. With the sniper rifle they would be able to pick off one of the soldiers before they can get close range and find you. May be interesting to add a Sniper Beygun

But my point is that beyblades seem to be more dangerous than just regular old bullets.

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"In many ways, the work of a critic is easy. We risk very little, yet enjoy a position over those who offer up their work and their selves to our judgment. We thrive on negative criticism, which is fun to write and to read. But the bitter truth we critics must face, is that in the grand scheme of things, the average piece of junk is probably more meaningful than our criticism designating it so. But there are times when a critic truly risks something, and that is in the discovery and defense of the new. The world is often unkind to new talent, new creations. The new needs friends. Last night, I experienced something new: an extraordinary meal from a singularly unexpected source. To say that both the meal and its maker have challenged my preconceptions about fine cooking is a gross understatement. They have rocked me to my core. In the past, I have made no secret of my disdain for Chef Gusteau's famous motto, "Anyone can cook." But I realize, only now do I truly understand what he meant. Not everyone can become a great artist; but a great artist can come from anywhere."

-Anton Ego/Peter O'Toole (1932-2013)

The sniper rifle shoot a bey that's what I mentioned in the story.n sorry for not posting up day 6 yet, because I'm busy today

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btw guys after tomorrow ima close up the poll....so start voting....right now leading choice is defense, and im posting up day 6 right now

Heh... told ya that your story would end up great, and have a lot of views!

day 7 is up

I guess one could say that Fixer is one lucky dude, 'cause 90% of the time, escaping doesn't help your buds...

yup i was thinking of letting fixer die but i felt sorry for the team so yea

Ok a new day is up

Ok! guys this might be my last post unless people start putting feedbacks so i know if they're still reading

Hey! I still read it! Please don't cancel!

ok but please put some feedback once in a while so i know people r reading

I still think the storyline is great, but maybe you could elaborate on the beys that aren't Archer's?