World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.

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Hey guys this story 13+ so if you find something offensive, i apologize ahea
d of time. The grammar and spelling is fixed by wraith

Day 1, Cuba

As we landed from our aircraft, we looked at the location we are to do Recon in. The thick jungle of Cuba. Me and my team mates in TFB has been on missions nonstop since the Great Fall. What is the Great Fall you say? There were 3 scientists that were doing experiments on new titanium Beys...supposedly indestructible...but they made a mistake of going too far. Mad with curiosity they mixed titanium metal with highly explosive hydrogen atoms and nuclear mixture. Once the hydrogen atom smashes into the the titanium soaked with nuclear mixture, it exploded with violence. It turned half of the state of Colorado into a nuclear wasteland. The casualties were
beyond beliefs. Not to mention it killed my buddy that was discharged back to the states. The 3 scientist were killed, but Intel told us that they got the nuclear mixture from Russia, we were stationed there for 6 months. Until Intel told us that the supplier moved to China into hiding. But Intel was wrong again. Now they told us that the supplier moved to the deep jungle of Cuba, which is where we are now. We are not told of the supplier's name....we only got one piece of info...
"You will know when you see the cold murderous red eyes of death"said ???(the Intel's
name was censored for security reasons).
We are now in the east side of the jungle, supposedly the supplier was in hiding in the west, so we got a hell of a walk to do! As we walk through this place, we saw beys broken in half, blood soaked all over them.
"Hey Meat, I'm picking up a bad vibe about this place.....something seems not right" I said.
"I think the heat went to your head Tru-.... I mean Archer, it's just a jungle. There's nothing to be scared of. Fine I'll hold your hand on the way OK?"
I smiled and slapped him
"Haha shut the hell up meat, you're right it's all in my head"
We walked through the moist jungle for 3 hours straight, we decided to rest for the
night. We set up camp and fell asleep as soon as our backs hit the ground. I
decided to stay up and look at the stars, I looked at the cluster of stars and
remembered my bud that was killed in the fall, Custer. I remembered his bey was
storm demon. I wandered in my mind for a good 5 minutes,and fell asleep.Until
something woke me up.

*rustle rustle rustle*


Day 2, Cuba

"Who is it?!" I yelled out.
*rustle rustle*
I grabbed my my BeyGun, loaded it and cocked it back. I was ready for action! In my head I was wondering if my Bey, Blade Guardian could protect me from this threat. In a flash of a second, a dark shadow jumped out.
"Goooooo Shooootttttttttt!" yelled out the mysterious shadow.
I hesitated. I then launched my Blade Guardian.
"Goooooo Shoootttttttttttt!"I yelled at the top of my lungs; squeezing the trigger on the gun .
"Go Blade Guardian"
As I looked at the opposing bey, I looked forward to find the shadow was not there
"come out and fight, you coward!" I screamed furiously.
*cling clang clang clang ching ching* The battle woke up my fellow mates.
"Archer! I got your back.....Goooooooo Shoooooooooooooot; go Rock Gargoyle!"
The opposing bey was pushed back, but it still did not give up.
"Come on! Final attack! Valkyrie Slash!" I yelled. My bey sped up and it's spin got
faster, just one dash at the enemy bey, it broke in pieces and flew to a tree. Suddenly we heard a thud. It was a corpse!
"I'm guessing this is the shadow"I said breathing heavily.
I picked up the corpse and turned it over. There was a huge hole which where the pieces of his bey flew into. I pulled down his hood and found out..........it was a girl?
She looked half dead, but she was still breathing. She had long hair with a mysterious collar over her neck. I was tempted to touch it but I don't want more trouble than it is now. We took her in our camp and mended her wound. Meat looked like this is the first time he saw a girl. The light in our tent filled our minds with thoughts of security. We laid down the girl in our tent, and watched her.
"Hey Arch , she's hot, huh?!" said Meat, his eyes filled with lust.
"Shut up meat, that's how your girlfriend dumped you in the first place" I snapped back.
"Excuse me captain, we got a transmission from Intel" One of the TFB soldiers said.

To be continued......



Day 3, Cuba
"Sir , we got a transmission from Storm Base Pegasus"
"Coming...and Meat, stay here and watch over the girl" I commanded.
There was a grin on Meat's face.
"And keep your hands where it is Meat, if I see you touch this girl, I will demote your a** back to citizen"
I walked in the dark tent, where our tech was.
"Data, fill me in"
"Yes sir, We got a transmission from Storm Base that there was nuclear activity in Brazil. Task Force Eagle was assigned there, who knows what happened to them" Data murmured
"Hmm...in Brazil?" I thought really hard.
"Was there any other information?" I asked.
"Well, Intel said we got 3 days to finish this task, and will be assigned to Brazil" Data said in despair.
"Great, when I said I wanted to go to South America i meant meeting hot girls not doing missions" I complained.
"Well, sir...When you are a soldier, you are like a sword for the government. They will use you if necessary" Data said.
"True, We are dogs" I said.
"Well, thanks for the Intel Da-..." BOOM! BOOM! BOOM!
"What was that?" Data yelled
I opened up the tent and saw what was my tent but now turned into flames
"MEAT!!!! MEAT!!!!" I yelled out. I ran to the tent engulfed in flames" Data! I need a fire extinguisher!"
My men and I grabbed extinguishers and started blasting away. The flame was beginning to die down. We searched the tent to see what was Meat's body was now a charred corpse. We saw in his hand something circular. One thought came into my mind. The collar on the girl's neck.
"Data, what do you think?" I asked.
"Well, It seems the start of the explosion was right in Meat's hand" Data informed.
"What? If it was the cause for the explosion, then how can it be whole?" I questioned Data.
"Well, Let me bring this to the lab" Data said.
"OK, I'll search the remainders" I said, thinking if a tent with high tech stuff count as a lab.
I walked through the ashes. Looking at the corpse of the girl and Meat's was unbearable. I walked to Meat's body and searched in his belt. I found his Rock Gorilla and his BeyGun, or what's left of it. I took my shirt and wiped off the ashes away from the Facebolt. I stuffed the Bey in my pocket and off to the lab. Sleep deprived, I managed to go through Data's lab without touching any chemicals.
"So...What's the info" I said leaning against Data.
"Well, it seems the collar was made out of Titanium....and a bit of some unknown mixture.
I checked it's properties and it matched of what is a nuclear substance." Data informed.
I smiled but was scarred on the inside.
"I'm guessing our friend is nearby Data" I said in amusement.
I walked out the tent and yelled " MEN! LET'S GO KICK SOME CUBAN A**!"
"YEAH!!!"
We all grabbed our guns and left.

Day 4, Cuba
As we left camp, I thought of why I joined this task force in the first place. There was no benefit being in here. All there is was death and suffering. As we walked to our destination set earlier by Data, i kept thinking as i walked not noticing how my men was doing. I snapped back into reality looking the enviroment around me. My men were whispering about something, i wouldn't be surprise if it was about me.
"Data, how long until we get there" I asked
"Well we are 4 miles west of our camp, we got 2 more miles to go sir" Data answered
"good, PICK UP THE PACE MEN!" I ordered
"Sir yes sir" The men yelled with spirit
"Sergeant Pierce, front and center" I ordered one of my men
The sergeant ran up to me as fast as he can, and stood up straight as straight as he can and said" Yes sir"
"Sergeant, Do you know think you can handle a mission alone with half of the team" I asked
"Um, Sir?" Pierce puzzled
"ARE YOU DEAF SERGEANT, GIVE ME AN ANSWER!" I yelled out
"Um, Sir yes sir" the Sergeant answered in fear
" Take Fixer, Screw, Rod, and Data" I ordered
"But sir, isn't Data your advisor, you know next to Meat" He said
"Are you questioning me Sergeant?" I asked
"Sir no sir" he said
"alright, you will take them to the right quadrant of the Alledged supplier warehouse" I ordered
"Yes sir, I will start now" He answered
"ALRIGHT DROID, PORK, RECON, AND STRIKE, FOLLOW ME" I yelled out
The men split up to me and Pierce and went our way. Why would i split up you ask? We will hit them on both sides. The size of this warehouse is massive based on our recon. We will clear both sides and meet in the middle. I put Pierce up in charge because he has been showing alot of leadership, and I will put him to the test.
we finally reached the warehouse.
"Recon, info" I ordered
"4 bey turrets on each sides, laser system is activated, and it seems to be guards all over this place" Recon informed
"Strike, Recon, Scopes up" I ordered
"yes sir" they both said
They put up their Bey Sniper and adjusted their sights.
"Strike, 2nd guard 5 clicks to the right" Recon said
"Ok" Strike answered
One moment of silent

Thunk...

Day 5, Cuba
Thunk...
Strike's bey flew straight to the guard, hitting him in the chest.
"Nice" Recon said
"Thanks, Hey first guard just realized that his buddy is decapitated" Strike replied
"I got this" Recon said. He adjusted his sights and locked on. Then...
Thunk!
"Tango down" He said. The bey returning to him
"Good, you two stay here, and the rest FOLLOW ME" I ordered. We walked cautiously around the perimeter. We walked into trouble a couple of times, but Recon and Strike saved our a**es with their beys. We finally took down the guards. Recon and Strike came out of the shadows and regrouped with us.
"Ok Droid, Breach and clear" I ordered
"Yes sir, Pork, other door" Droid said
"Ok" Pork answered. At one moment silent. Not one thing was making a sound, just the sounds of the crickets. Then....
BOOOM!
"GO GO GO!" I yelled
"TE TOCA A TI" a Cuban soldier screamed out
"GOO SHOOOT" I yelled " Go Blade Guardian" Droid, Pork, Recon, and Strike were already battling.
"Gooo Dark Spider" Droid yelled " Spider Web!" The bey suddenly became faster, i charged up. The energy of it created a form of a spider. The spider shot out a web, and the enemy bey was stuck, standing still.
"Thanks Droid, Im gonna kill steal you now" Pork said "Wild Boar, Husk Throw!" The Spin track of Wild Boar glow into a yellow color. It charges at the enemy bey and uppercutted it. Breaking the bey into pieces
" It's my turn boys" I yelled "GO VALKYRIE SLASH" My bey charges at the opposing bey, passes it by a couple of times then my bey stopped. The opposing bey seems to be whole. I snapped, and the opposing bey bursted out in pieces.
" It's your turn Cuban man" I said "goo attack Guardian!" The bey flew to the soldier cutting him multiple times. There was no decapitation, no blood on the soldier.
"Urghh" The soldier moaned and he dropped dead. We enjoyed a moment of peace, walking around the warehouse finding capsules, BIG capsules of a liquid.
" I could sure use Data right now" I said.
"CAPTAIN COME IN COME IN!" my radio said blasted into my ear.
"Pierce?" I asked
" We need back up captain, Screw and Rod is dead. We only have Me, Data, and Fixer"
"Where is your location Sergeant?!" I asked
"AHHH!! URGHHHH" Pierce yelled. I heard a drop. We ran as fast as we can throught the ware house not finding anyone
"this warehouse must be 30 square miles" I complained. For 15 minutes straight we heard nothing from Pierce.
"Captain, Captain!" Data yelled out on the radio
"Data? where's Pierce?!" I asked
"He took a bey to the head, his Splinter Demon is also destroyed" Data said
"I hear Clinging, are you in a battle?" I asked
"Yes, it's me and Fixer trying to fight back" He said
"ser difícil de eliminar!!!" A cuban man yelled
"NEVER!!!" Data yelled. Then static.....

Day 6, Cuba
"DATA!!, DAMN IT F***!" I screamed
"Sir, I picked up the signal from Data's radio, it appears that he is in the 3rd quadrant of the warehouse" Droid informed me
"LET'S GO MEN" I yelled
"We are going into some deep sh*t" Recon said
"Recon, switch your gun to assault mode, we won't be needing our scope for this" Strike said
"Ok, lets go" I said
We ran as fast as we can to the location, passing by bodies after bodies. We finally stopped at where Data was. We saw Pierce's body. His head had a hole on it, Screw and Rod was also dead. Then we heard clinging.
"There's a battle going on sir" Recon said
"Let's check it out" I ordered
There we saw Data fighting a Cuban soldier. We saw his rank on his arm. A Captain. At first I thought Data was a dead man, but i had faith in him
"Come On DATA!" Pork yelled
"Gooooo Sho-" Droid yelled
"NO!, this is his fight" I interupted
"What? you're just going to leave him there?" Droid asked
"Don't you see the turrets Corporal? It will shoot if we interrupt, don't make this harder than it is. It's a battle to death. One leaves, One stays"
*Clang , Cling , CLANK!!!! SCREEECCH*
"ahhh that screeching noise" Strike yelled covering his ears with his dirty hands
"It's the beys, they are trying to push each other" I yelled
" Estos es!" The Cuban Captain said
"What?" Pork said
"It means this is it...." I said in a dreadful tone
"Ataque especial! Tajo de pantera!" The cuban man yelled
"It means special attack, panther slash" I said fearing for the worse. The Bey of the enemy, Dark Panther rushed up to Data's Cyber Android and hit him with amazing force, the energy was so concentrated on one bey alone that it made a figures of a panther and a robot fighting. The panther figure opened it's claws and slashed.
*Cling*
Cyber Android flew away.
" Cyber Android, GET BACK UP" Data said" I can't do this captain!"
"Data! It doesn't matter how the dog fight, it's the fight in the dog!" I yelled(BTW this quote was from Dwight Eisenhower, The former President and General)
"FINAL ATTACK!!!!, BEAM BLAST!" Data yelled
The bey pushed with great force, the figure of the android suddenly took out a cannon.
"CHARGE UP ANDROID!" He yelled. The beam was to it's max, and it released
*BAMM! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH!* The beam was so bright it blinded us.
"GOOOOOOOO ANDROID!"
The bey pushed, and it finally broke the panther's energy. The opposing bey broke into little pieces first, and distenegrating because of such concentrated energy.
"NOW!!!, ATTACK ANDROID" Data screamed
The bey rushed to the Cuban Captain's limbs, breaking them and finally finished with blunt hit to head. He was dead. Data grabbed his bey and walked back to us. There was a distinct sound. Like a emergency broadcast channel alert. A holographic screen popped up, with a Latino looking man in it.
"Well, Well, Well, looks like the oh so powerful U.S sent these trashes to us" The Cuban man said with a heavy accent
"Hey these "trashes" defeated all of your "great Cuban forces".." I insulted him
"Well, Maybe you should die with them! in 1 hour this place will blow up...and I will be long gone!" He threatened us. He picked up a tank full of a green liquid.
"Hasta la vista baby!" He laughed in madness.
Then the screen disappeared.
"Lock down activated" A computer voice said. A big counter popped up and counted down. 59:59 minutes left. Doors started to locked up. Pork tried to use his bey to opened it up with force
"It's useless Pork" I said " we better start running

Day 7, Cuba
"Damn it" I said looking around for possible exits. The gates and doors were locked, we were stuck in a room the size of a gym. We all tried to break the door open, but it did not work. 30 minutes have passed and no progress
"We are going to die man, DIE!!" Pork yelled.
"Get a grip Sergeant!, If we are going down at least we are going down knowing we kicked some a**" I said.
"Data, anything?" I asked. Data holding his laptop trying to figure out if there is a way out. 15 minutes left.
"Well men, it's been an honor to serve you" I said in grief, one drop of tears on my cheek.
"I'll see you men on the other side" Recon said saluting. We all saluted. 10 minutes left. We all put our heads together and put our arms on each other's shoulders waiting for our doom.
*BAM!*
Debris flying all over. We looked up and found a light. It was an airship? It turned and we looked close. IT WAS FIXER!
"Fixer, YOU SON OF A B****" I yelled laughing at the same time
"I escaped when Data was fighting the cuban man" He said
"What? you left me?" Data said in disbelief
"We got 5 minutes left guys, let's go" Droid said. Ropes was sent down for us. We grabbed our dead teammates and climbed up. We were in the airship. I looked back and saw the General.
"GENERAL ON BOARD, TEN HUT!" I yelled. We all saluted.
"Good work boys, did you capture any samples" He said
"Got it here sir" Data said holding a small tube.
He held it up and took a good look at it.
"Well, I ain't no tech, I use these babies right here" The general said showing his muscle"I ain't using no brains to kick some a**"
"We are safe from the explosions General" the pilot informed
"Good, let's go back to Storm Base Aquario, it's taco night there!" He said
I smiled knowing that the mission was over.

Day 1, Intermission
It's been a week since the end of our mission. We have went to dozens of funerals. Looking at now single mothers, childrens without their fathers, and even orphans. It has been painful watching my team mates being buried into the ground, knowing they will never come back. Their Bey were buried with them. Now Task Force Blade was seperated, back into their hometowns the soldiers were now resting. That mission was only one week but it seems like a whole life time. I was at my town. Fountain Valley. I enjoyed waking up to the sun beaming down my face. Breathing in fresh air, instead of breathing in ashes, and smoke. It was like heaven. No fighting, no deaths, no violence. It seemed like everything was in harmony. I walked to one of my favorite places. The Beystadium. There we battle for sports sake, not to kill anyone. I walked up to the bar in the giant stadium and ordered one of my favorite drinks.
"Hey Jack, Nice to see you, one bottle of coke please" I asked
"Hey, Nice to see you again Truong(that's my name)" Jack said in excitement
"Yeah, the team is taking a break from fighting for a while, I'm just here to look at rookies battling" I answered
*sigh*"You know, I'm sick of wars man. All of the fighting around the world, it's make me sick of watching the news. All of the breaking news are now reports of the War." Jack murmured
"well without us you guys would be long gone" I said
"that's true, you know what? for this whole month, all of your drinks are on me Truong" He said smiling
"Really? Aw thanks man!" I exclaimed. I grabbed my bottle of coke and head to the seats. As I sat down the Blader DJ popped up
"HEEEEELLLLOOO , FELLOW BLADERSSS, Today we have an exciting match up for you ladies and gentlemen" Blader DJ yelled " today we have a match up with a small town blader, Scott!!!!!!!!, and on the other side of the beystadium, a terror for all bladers, a nightmare even for the military, MAC NICKELSON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
A small kid stood on the other side of the stadium, and a HUGE man stood on the opposing side. The kid looked frightened, but determined. This is a battle recreating the scene of David and Goliath. How will this turn out?
"Ready Bladers? 3....2......1" Blader DJ YELLED
"GOOOOO SHOOOT" both blader yelled
"Goo! Burn Gryphon!" The kid yelled
Burn Gryphon fired up charging at the enemy bey
"hmm.... This is weak sauce. GOOO DARK GOLIATH!" Mac yelled
The two beys charged at each other finally making contact. Dark Goliath was pushing Burn Gryphon to the edge. The kid looks frustrated. Then his bey burned with will power pushing back Dark Goliath to the center.
" WHAT? HOW DARE YOU" Mac yelled
" GOOOO BURN GRYPHON" The kid yelled. Burn Gryphon fired up once again knocked Dark Goliath up in the air.
"NO!" Mac screamed. Dark Goliath was saved by one of the blocks that was set up on the stadiums.
"URGH!!!, GO DARK GOLIATH SPECIAL ATTACK, BRUTE SMASH!" Mac yelled. Dark Goliath rose from from the bey holding a giant hamer. It swung down on Burn Gryphon
"NOOOO Gryphon" The kid screamed. The smash broke Burn Gryphon's balance making him wobble.
"Get back up Gryphon" He yelled "THAT'S IT SPECIAL ATTACK, BURN TALONS" Burn Gryphon rose up and flew as high as it can. Diving down with its sharp talons. The talons burn up and finally slashed Goliath on the face. Dark Goliath was knocked out.
"NOOOOOOOOOO" Mac kneeled down and cried
"THAT'S IT, WE HAVE OUR WINNER" Blader DJ yelled" Say what's your name again kid?"
"My name is......" *BOOM*

Day 1 Intermission part 2
Jet fighters flying over us, explosions going off every 5 seconds
"What the hell, is going on?" I asked
I ran to the bar looking for Jack.
"Jack! What's going on?" I asked
"Look" Jack said. He turns on his plasma screen and turned to the news
"Breaking news, war has touched US Soil, citizens be warned. Go to your nearest airport for pick up to the safe zone. Bring an ID, and your belongings." The reporter said in alert
"Damn it, it's only the first week and there is already fighting"
"So? What are you going to do?" Jack asked
"You got a gun on you?" I asked
"HAHA, ALWAYS!" Jack laughed. He walked to the display of drinks, and pushed it in. A whole gallery of guns popped. " So? which one do you want?" I grabbed the dual blade guns.
"Wait, Isn't your only Bey Blade Guardian?" Jack asked
"Well, During the break i thought i should make another one for back up, so I made Sentinel Guardian." I replied grabbing out both of my beys. I loaded up the gun and start moving with Jack
" First we gotta get all of the civilians out!" I ordered
"Yea, Let's start by Gate 39" Jack said
We ran throughout the stadium, clearing out civilians. After 1 hour of chaos we finally finished checking the stadium for the 3rd time.
"Seems good, Let's get outta here" Jack said
*WOOOOSH*
Wind blowing through the stadium, the Jet Fighters are packing in heavy Beys now. At one moment the stadium was whole but then....BOOM!
One bomb has dropped on the east wing of the stadium, which was where we were.
"Urghh, Are you ok Jack?" I asked
"Yea... just debris that's messing with me" Jack answered
"help" a distant voice said. Me and Jack looked at each other. And ran to where we thought we heard the voice
It was a girl about 13 or 12
"Help" She moaned in pain
"Hey Jack help me get this wall of of her" I ordered
We finally managed to get it off.
"Can you walk?" I asked
"URGHH!" The girl screamed
"Her spinal cord is messed up Truong" Jack said
"Well I guess i have to carry her then" I said
I grabbed her and put her on my shoulders and ran to the emergency exit. When we finally got there we saw paramedics, police, the national guards, marines, and what i think is some special forces team. One thing caught my eye. Data? I ran toward him as fast as i can and grabbed him by the shoulders.
"Data? is that you?" i asked. He looked surprised
"Captain present, TEN HUT!" Data yelled saluting me
"At ease soldiers" I said
"What brings you here Data?" Data said
"Well sir, I was at home in good old Utah, when I heard the phone ring. It was the general. He needed me to go to California which was where the hot spot was.
"Fill me in Data" I ordered
"Well it seems like enemy soldiers are coming in by air, dropping off soldiers in each town." He said
"Do you where these soldiers are from" I asked
" Well it seems like they are Russian soldiers with a mix of militia from the South Americas" He answered
"Alright so where would we start" I said
"Not so fast soldier" a familiar voice said. I turned around and saw the General
"GENERAL PRESENT, TEN HUT" Data yelled
"At ease!" The general said
"Wow, Data, you're good at this" I laughed
"It's my thing" He said
"Well, seems like our good old Fountain Valley seems to be swarmed with enemy soldiers" the general said" We will need a 15 man team, to sneak through enemy's defenses and destroy their mortar fires.
"Permission to lead the mission SIR!" I said immediately
"Well, aren't you an eager man" general said "very well, Truong, you shall take the name Archer and lead the 15 man team" I saluted and turned around.
"Alright, Data You will be my right hand man" i said" I need 5 marines in here, 3 national guards and 5 spec ops" Men started to rush toward me, but some backed off, afraid of losing their lives.
"Alright 20 minutes until missions starts" I said
"YES SIR!" They all yelled
"You're not going anywhere with those 2 dinosaurs in your holsters" Data said
"HEY!" Jack said
"HAHA, alright what you got Data" I ordered. Data pulled up a truck and opened the back. It was a haven for guns. I grabbed 2 bey guns the newest models and a sniper beygun.
"Alright breaks over gentlemen, let's go kick some a**" I yelled
"Hey I'll come too and the girl is in the paramedics care now" Jack said
"No Jack, you got a family go to your family now before more of them comes, leave this to us dogs" I said in a noble tone
We all left and went toward the aircraft

Day 1, Welcome to the USA
Flying through the smoky atmosphere, we are arriving at mile square park. The name describes it all. A square that is a mile on each side. Due to its size russian soldiers are hiding in its deep tunnels leading to the sewer. The sewer probably leads to every single major streets.
"Damn it, too much infantry for us to take" One marine said
"Remember your mission, Private? We are to SNEAK behind enemy lines not to confront them" I said
"We are landing at our designated location sir" The pilot informed us. The aircraft landed and all of us got out. "Good luck sir". The pilot saluted and left.
"I know this place like the back of my hand" I said proudly
"Well sir, no time for memories, we gotta get behind enemy lines as fast as we can" Data said
"Come on let's go" I said. We set off in mile square park. The park was filled with trees, and a great lake. There was a main road that goes through the park for cars. We tried to stay clear of that road just in case. The enemy has blocked the east side of mile square park, leaving us to find another way.
"Well, sir what do we do" said one spec ops
"Let's go to the same way they did, the sewers" I said. They didn't really say anything, but i know my men did not like this idea. I led them to one of the tunnels, it's about 15 feet long, not that big, but is useful to go through out the city. I walked through the tunnel with a flash light. I touched the walls slightly and it suddenly took me back. It was 2010, my first love was found here. Not too romantic but she was a shy one. I clenched my hands into fists. Remembering her, she takes me to a special place, and if i stare too long i probably break down and cry( lyric in Sweet child o mine).
"Sir" A frilly voice said, then the voice got deeper, deeper and louder, and more manly. Finally what i thought was a woman's hand but it was Data's hand.
"We need to start going in the sewers now" Data said.
I shook my head and ordered "alright men, let's go"
We went into the sewers with flashlights on. The stench was horrible the men looked like they were crying. Then the sewers looked bright, next thing i new i was on a sidewalk holding my first love's hand. We were walking, then we crossed the street. At one moment i was the happiest man on earth, then....*Crash* I saw her covered in blood, the car the hit her drove away. I was in shock, not saying anything. The car almost hit me. I was covered in blood, when i tried desperately to revive her. The street went dark again, darker, darker, and the stench went back. Finally i was at where i was in the sewers.

Day 2, Welcome to the USA
Damn it, i can't get her out of my head! As i blink it takes me back...then back to reality
"Sir, are you ok?" Data asked
"Huh? yea" I answered. My vision in a blur
"Sir, you better get yourself together...or else you are going to get your balls shot off" Data said. We walked through the tunnel finally going onto the main street. I haven't had any flash back yet.
"Data , recon!" i ordered
"well sir, we have a toll road...seems to be enemy tanks coming in, about 20 units of infantry!" Data informed
"****!" I said " Marine you, yea you!, come here! do you have communication on you?
"Y-Y-Yes s-s-sir" he said in fear
"What's wrong corporal?" I asked
"M-My family sir, D-Damn soldiers got to my hometown" He said
"Get your self together soldier, you're in war! you are protecting your country from invasion, do you get that?" I said in a hushed voice
"Sir!" He answered. I took out my sniper bey gun. Cocked it and knew my objective
"What are you doing sir? It's too risky!" Data yelled
"I know what im doing Data" I answered. I steadied my breath, and squeezed the trigger
*thunk*
Blade Guardian flew to the soldier in the toll booth and punctured him, the man dropped.
"One down, Data take up the other rifle and take out the other one" I ordered
*thunk thunk thunk thunk*
The soldiers dropped like flies.
"Continue on the to booths we will need their uniforms, the rest of you cover fire when we order you, 3 of you come with me and Data!" I said. We took the soldiers body and hid them, aha this is when my russian comes in
"Как дела" the russian soldier asked(How are you)
"Хорошо" I answered(I am fine)
"сигарета" he asked (cigarette?)
"Да, уверенный"I said(Yea , Sure). We took our smoke, and I blew out my smoke
"You are not russian" The soldier said. He took out his beygun and aimed at me.
"FIRE BOYS GIVE THEM HELL!" I yelled. It was chaos beys flying all over blood splatters

To be continued....
I think it's a pretty cool story about beyblades.
XD thank you, I'll put in day 2 tmr I wanna see how many people are interested to read this story
pretty cool.but ask yourself do people acturlly g that far for a couple of kids spinning tops?
yea if they kick butt they do!
Well in this world everything is about beyBlade..... So yea
This sorta reminds me of BeyHunters story....
(Oct. 17, 2010  7:03 PM)Pyro Wrote: [ -> ]This sorta reminds me of BeyHunters story....

Thats what i was thinking, Leones war right.
Well the names and location was based on modern warfare 2 and call of duty black ops
Pyro I have to disagree. It may be similar(war and beyblade) but we got two different things going on
anyone want me to post up day 3?
Good work. Apart from some spelling and grammar mistakes, that is (PM me if you want them fixed. It's my forte, after all). I have to disagree with Pyro and UnLeAsHeD though, because Leone's war is about a guy with a Bey who fights normally, and this is Fatal BeyBattling. A lot of difference. And day three would be great.
im preety sure they go to brazil instead of cuba
Post up to part 17!!! Epic story, I LOVE it!!!!
Awesome.
alright since you guys love it so much I WIL!!!
YAY!!! thank you, mesorangerxx!!!! I can't get enough!!!
i posted it up
Btw guys I will post up each day when I am free which will be 7:00 pm to 10:00pm, hope u enjoyed day 3 and day 4 will be even better!
Its Great!!
thank you!!! So sad about meat's death...
(Oct. 17, 2010  7:08 AM)mesorangerxx Wrote: [ -> ]I walked out the tent and yelled" Men! LET'S GO KICK SOME CUBAN a**"
My best friend is Cuban........
Nice story thou lol
Hey guys enjoy my story and please feel free to put feedback...and Ill try to get drawings of beys ..etc in here

It seems like it was yesterday when I finished special operations camp. I thought joining task force blade would mean action, glory, excitement, but what I got was hell!

Day 1, Cuba

As we landed from our aircraft, we looked at the location we are to do Recon in. The thick jungle of Cuba. Me and my team mates in TFB has been on missions nonstop since the Great Fall. What is the Great Fall you say? There were 3 scientists that were doing experiments on new titanium Beys...supposedly indestructible...but they made a mistake of going too far. Mad with curiosity they mixed titanium metal with highly explosive hydrogen atoms and nuclear mixture. Once the hydrogen atom smashes into the the titanium soaked with nuclear mixture, it exploded with violence. It turned half of the state of Colorado into a nuclear wasteland. The casualties were
beyond beliefs. Not to mention it killed my buddy that was discharged back to the states. The 3 scientist were killed, but Intel told us that they got the nuclear mixture from Russia, we were stationed there for 6 months. Until Intel told us that the supplier moved to China into hiding. But Intel was wrong again. Now they told us that the supplier moved to the deep jungle of Cuba, which is where we are now. We are not told of the supplier's name....we only got one piece of info...
"You will know when you see the cold murderous red eyes of death"said ???(the Intel's
name was censored for security reasons).
We are now in the east side of the jungle, supposedly the supplier was in hiding in the west, so we got a hell of a walk to do! As we walk through this place, we saw beys broken in half, blood soaked all over them.
"Hey Meat, I'm picking up a bad vibe about this place.....something seems not right" I said.
"I think the heat went to your head Tru-.... I mean Archer, it's just a jungle. There's nothing to be scared of. Fine I'll hold your hand on the way OK?"
I smiled and slapped him
"Haha shut the hell up meat, you're right it's all in my head"
We walked through the moist jungle for 3 hours straight, we decided to rest for the
night. We set up camp and fell asleep as soon as our backs hit the ground. I
decided to stay up and look at the stars, I looked at the cluster of stars and
remembered my bud that was killed in the fall, Custer. I remembered his bey was
storm demon. I wandered in my mind for a good 5 minutes,and fell asleep.Until
something woke me up.

*rustle rustle rustle*


Day 2, Cuba

"Who is it?!" I yelled out.
*rustle rustle*
I grabbed my my BeyGun, loaded it and cocked it back. I was ready for action! In my head I was wondering if my Bey, Blade Guardian could protect me from this threat. In a flash of a second, a dark shadow jumped out.
"Goooooo Shooootttttttttt!" yelled out the mysterious shadow.
I hesitated. I then launched my Blade Guardian.
"Goooooo Shoootttttttttttt!"I yelled at the top of my lungs; squeezing the trigger on the gun .
"Go Blade Guardian"
As I looked at the opposing bey, I looked forward to find the shadow was not there
"come out and fight, you coward!" I screamed furiously.
*cling clang clang clang ching ching* The battle woke up my fellow mates.
"Archer! I got your back.....Goooooooo Shoooooooooooooot; go Rock Gargoyle!"
The opposing bey was pushed back, but it still did not give up.
"Come on! Final attack! Valkyrie Slash!" I yelled. My bey sped up and it's spin got
faster, just one dash at the enemy bey, it broke in pieces and flew to a tree. Suddenly we heard a thud. It was a corpse!
"I'm guessing this is the shadow"I said breathing heavily.
I picked up the corpse and turned it over. There was a huge hole which where the pieces of his bey flew into. I pulled down his hood and found out..........it was a girl?
She looked half dead, but she was still breathing. She had long hair with a mysterious collar over her neck. I was tempted to touch it but I don't want more trouble than it is now. We took her in our camp and mended her wound. Meat looked like this is the first time he saw a girl. The light in our tent filled our minds with thoughts of security. We laid down the girl in our tent, and watched her.
"Hey Arch , she's hot, huh?!" said Meat, his eyes filled with lust.
"Shut up meat, that's how your girlfriend dumped you in the first place" I snapped back.
"Excuse me captain, we got a transmission from Intel" One of the TFB soldiers said.

To be continued......



Day 3, Cuba
"Sir , we got a transmission from Storm Base Pegasus"
"Coming...and Meat, stay here and watch over the girl" I commanded.
There was a grin on Meat's face.
"And keep your hands where it is Meat, if I see you touch this girl, I will demote your a** back to citizen"
I walked in the dark tent, where our tech was.
"Data, fill me in"
"Yes sir, We got a transmission from Storm Base that there was nuclear activity in Brazil. Task Force Eagle was assigned there, who knows what happened to them" Data murmured
"Hmm...in Brazil?" I thought really hard.
"Was there any other information?" I asked.
"Well, Intel said we got 3 days to finish this task, and will be assigned to Brazil" Data said in despair.
"Great, when I said I wanted to go to South America i meant meeting hot girls not doing missions" I complained.
"Well, sir...When you are a soldier, you are like a sword for the government. They will use you if necessary" Data said.
"True, We are dogs" I said.
"Well, thanks for the Intel Da-..." BOOM! BOOM! BOOM!
"What was that?" Data yelled
I opened up the tent and saw what was my tent but now turned into flames
"MEAT!!!! MEAT!!!!" I yelled out. I ran to the tent engulfed in flames" Data! I need a fire extinguisher!"
My men and I grabbed extinguishers and started blasting away. The flame was beginning to die down. We searched the tent to see what was Meat's body was now a charred corpse. We saw in his hand something circular. One thought came into my mind. The collar on the girl's neck.
"Data, what do you think?" I asked.
"Well, It seems the start of the explosion was right in Meat's hand" Data informed.
"What? If it was the cause for the explosion, then how can it be whole?" I questioned Data.
"Well, Let me bring this to the lab" Data said.
"OK, I'll search the remainders" I said, thinking if a tent with high tech stuff count as a lab.
I walked through the ashes. Looking at the corpse of the girl and Meat's was unbearable. I walked to Meat's body and searched in his belt. I found his Rock Gorilla and his BeyGun, or what's left of it. I took my shirt and wiped off the ashes away from the Facebolt. I stuffed the Bey in my pocket and off to the lab. Sleep deprived, I managed to go through Data's lab without touching any chemicals.
"So...What's the info" I said leaning against Data.
"Well, it seems the collar was made out of Titanium....and a bit of some unknown mixture.
I checked it's properties and it matched of what is a nuclear substance." Data informed.
I smiled but was scarred on the inside.
"I'm guessing our friend is nearby Data" I said in amusement.
I walked out the tent and yelled " MEN! LET'S GO KICK SOME CUBAN A**!"
"YEAH!!!"
We all grabbed our guns and left.

Fixed.
cool
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Gonna write day 4 and will post up the drawings of blade guardian rock gorilla the collar and the beygun
O wait nvm I can't put up pt4 because my sis is using it right now
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